airstep
09-17-2006, 05:46 AM
Story revision done
Please Read and review. thank you.
Well I would like to give FanFic another try. To be honest i have no idea what i should rate this story but i guess it doesn't really matter as you will probably read it regardless. although theres no swearing yet there are some violent parts in the beinging and a small reference to sexual content.
A.N. Parts of the story have been revised.
This story takes place three years naruto left konoha for training. much is unknown at this point about naruto since then.
Even if i said i did own Naruto, would anyone believe me?
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Chapter one:
Explosions could be heard all over Konoha. People running for their lives. The ninjas tried there best to repel the attacks to no avail. A single man wearing a black cloak with gold swirls covering both his body and face wearing a black bandana on his head with two platinum strips is the cause of the destruction. The ANBU have been totally wiped out. He didn’t care who he killed, ninjas, women, children, it didn’t matter to him.
He continues his rampage of destruction destroying building after building, killing at will. In his wake is fire, destruction, and blood filled streets. He walks calmly, not even flinching as hundreds of knifes fly at him. A large burst of red chakra repels the attacks. Without looking he kills his attackers instantly without mercy.
Now the man stands in front of Sakura. He stops. Sakura drops to her knees begging the man to spare her life. The man replies in a kind voice. “I won’t kill you just yet,” Then his voice changes into something daemonic “I want you to watch me destroy this pathetic village you call home and all of its people.” She trembles in fear. Feeling that fear in her he starts a sinister laugh and another burst of red chakra comes out of him. This burst however was not the same as before, it resembles a fox with nine tails and eyes filled with pure evil.
The man turns slowly and crouches down in front of her, she starts to back away in fear. The man starts to open the cloak to reveal his face. What Sakura saw petrified her making her unable to move an inch. He just smiled at her like nothing has happened. She hears a scream and realized it was her mother.
Sakura’s mother was running towards her and before her very eyes Naruto sliced the woman in half with a signal move. Blood sprayed everywhere filling the street, the walls and all over Sakura. None touched Naruto. He stands back up and calmly walks down the street not moving out of the way of the attacks as they were deflected by the red chakra.
She lifts her hand and looks at the blood on it, she wanted to scream but couldn’t. ‘This can’t be real. No it can’t. I don’t believe Naruto could do this. It...it has to be a dream...it has to.’
“Sakura, Sakura! Wake up.” a woman shouted. Sakura still screaming opens her eyes and sits up very quickly. “What’s wrong Sakura? I could hear you from out side.” Sakura looks into her mothers eyes and tears started to fall down her cheeks.
“Mom!” She screams then calmly says“Oh, it was just a bad dream.” tears still flowing down her cheeks. She lets out a huge sigh of relief. “What time is it?”
“Its almost ten thirty dear, why do you ask.” her mother replied.
“What! I’m going to be late for the chuunin exams, Ibiki is going to have my hide if I don’t get there on time. I’m suppose to help out.” she nearly shouted as she jumps out of bed and runs towards the shower half naked.
She turns on the hot water for the shower and undresses. She sticks her hand in the shower to see if its warm enough to enter. ‘Just right’ she thought as she steps in the shower. The warm water runs through her silk like pink hair making it glisten in the light, slowly runs down her smooth thin body cresting each and every curb of her. She felt very relaxed and a warm feeling deep down inside her. She rubs her body down with soap getting every inch and crevest of her body making sure she was complete clean. She suddenly felt very light headed when she was cleaning between her thighs then a sudden burst of pleasure erupted through out her body. She instantly stops what she was doing, 'this isn't me, I have self control. although that...no i can restrain myself i will not give in.'
She slow recollects her thoughts and starts thinking about the chuunin exam for a while until she remembers her dream. ‘Oh I’m just glad it was just a dream. I still can’t wonder why Naruto disappeared nearly five years ago after failing to bring Sasuke back alive. I don’t think he could forgive himself. He shouldn’t blame himself for that cause I know you wouldn’t kill him.’
Finishing with her shower she steps out grabbing a towel off the towel rack and wraps it around herself. She quickly dries her hair and body off and quickly ran back to her room to get dressed. She use to wear pink with white, but after Sasuke death and Naruto disappearance she started to wear dark blue jeans and a white tee shirt with an orange and black swirl on front and a red and white paddle symbol on back. She grabs her chuunin jacket and vest and puts them on while running out the door.
She quickly rushes out the door and runs down the street. She only manages to get half way down the street when she ran into someone causing her to fall down. “I am very sorry mister.” she said apologetically. She looks up to see a man wearing a black cloak with gold swirls and a black bandana with two platinum strips covering his head. She went into a daze not realizing that he had extended his hand towards her.
She has a flashback from her dream. She could hear screams and cries for help. Destruction every where and standing in the middle of it all was a man very much like the one in front of her. “Miss? Are you ok miss?” came a very gentle and caring voice.
She snaps back to reality “I’m sorry, I guessed I must have fallen harder then I thought.” She extends her hand to meet his. He pulls her up to her feet when she realizes that two other people are dressed exactly like the person that helped her up. The three cloaked men start walking towards the first exam. “Sir, I didn’t get your...” before she could complete her sentence the men disappeared out of sight. ‘Huh that is strange’ she thinking to herself. She quickly starts running towards where the chuuni examiners for the first exam are waiting. ‘Hue, made it just in time.’
“Alright gents. Its time to start the first exam.” Ibiki shouted into the room. Everyone stood up and disappeared in a cloud of white smoke and reappeared in the exam room. Everyone snapped to attention expect one group crouching in the corner. It was that man Sakura ran into earlier. “Quite down you punks!” was the first words out of Ibiki once in the exam room. The examiners all took there seats around the walls of the classroom.
All of the participants all drew numbers. Sakura was looking at the man sitting in the corner. His two companion stood up and walked to grab there numbers and slowly took there seats while the one remaining man stayed still.. ‘He hasn’t even moved yet.’ Ibiki thought
“You in the corner come up here and take a number” Ibiki shouted. All the man did was raise his hand up into the air with a piece of paper showing a number on it. ‘What...when did he...’ he was shocked but didn’t allow it to surface to his face. “Very well take your se...” but before he could finished his sentence the mysterious man was already in his seat. He hasn’t seen that kind of speed since Itachi, no its even faster. Its as fast if not faster then Yondaime, the forth Hokage.
Ibiki starts to talk to the group of misfits about the exam. Sakura couldn’t keep her eyes off of the mystery man. Ibiki then started to hand out the test. Once he finished handing them out he explained the rules of the test and the point system. After explaining it all he announced that the test may being.
She continues to watch the three men ‘They hasn’t even moved a muscle since the test began and time is almost up. I’m sure they know the test has started, don’t they?’ Sakura thought. “Time is up. I can see that many of you have returned so I’m going to change it up a little. I’m going to ask the final question to only those who has at least six out of ten or more questions correct,” Everyone looked shocked
People lined up and handed there paper to Ibiki. “Four out of 10, you fail.” he read aloud. Then her number along with two other number were called. They were told to leave. “Seven out of ten, good. Next!”
The last three men in the black and gold cloak are next in line. When it was finally they turn their papers to Ibiki “your joking right, the seal isn’t even been broken, you fail”
The man spoke up “Why don’t you open it and make sure.” he said in a low monotone voice.
He opened the test paper and looked completely stunned which caught the attention of everyone in the room. “Ten out of Ten, a perfect paper!” He grabbed the last two and said “You all got ten out of ten.”
Ibiki stayed silent for a few seconds then announced “Everyone please take a seat. Will the examiners please come with me.” Suddenly Ibiki and the examiners disappeared in a puff of smoke. Everyone in the room took a step back from the man.
The leader of the unknown team could feel the fear in each and everyone of them. He could hear some people starting to whisper about them. He enjoyed this very much. ‘They all fear us, I wonder if I should tell them my real identity.’
Minutes later all the chuunis returned. “Ok, everyone shut up. We may begin the last question.” Ibiki stated looking very stern. “This will be a multiply choice question. You are an a four man team with a mission to infiltrate an enemy country and retrieve secret scrolls about there attack plans. Your team consist long range fighter, one that excels in scouting, one that has mastered close combat and your self. Now before I tell you the answers you must make a choice weather to accept this mission or decline it before you choose where to place your team.”
Someone shouts out “What do you mean weather we should choose it or not.”
“Your only answer is to accept or decline, you decline your team will fail this exam but you will be allowed to return. If you accept and answer the question wrong you will not only fail the exam but will never be allowed to return to the chuunin exam.” Ibiki stated firmly to everyone left. For a couple of seconds no one moved. Then one person raised there hand and stands up.
“I can’t. I just can’t do that. I’m sorry mates I just can’t” He said as his number and his teammates numbers were called and were excused from the rest of the exam. Dozens of others followed suit leaving a total of twenty teams.
The remaining twenty sat down looking deadpan towards Ibiki “Well then if that’s everyone then I have no choice but to pass all that are present.” there were a few gasps and complaints. Suddenly the next examiner flies through the window to announce the next test. “Early as usually Anko.”
Everyone just stares are Anko with stunned faces expect for the three cloaked men. Anko explained where the test will be held and further details will be explained there. She then just vanished in a poof of smoke. People started getting up and leaving to the next test. She spots the cloaked men just standing by the door like there waiting for someone. Sakura starts walking towards them.
Sakura takes a few steps forward and suddenly stops holding onto a desk for support.. She starts having another flashback of her dream. She was on her knees and could hear a sinister laugh from the man standing in front of her wearing the same cloak as the one in the chuunin exam. He crouches down and opens his cloak and reveals his face.
Again she snaps back to reality. ‘hmm if it’s the same person like in my dreams then that must be...’ she starts to tremble ‘Naruto.’ She starts walking up to what looks to be the leader of the group. “Um, excuse me sir, but you wouldn’t by chance be Naruto Uzumaki?”
“Ah haha...Guess you found me out Sakura. I knew you would see through my disguise.” Naruto said opening his cloak to reveal himself. Sakura gasps at how well toned he was with sculpted muscles and a rippling chest. He then took off the bandana that was covering his head to reveal his blonde spiky hair, it was a few inches longer then before. His face was well toned and had a very kind expression on his face that could melt the hearts of every lady, the whiskers he once had were now nearly invisible and his eyes sparkled like the stars on a crystal clear night in the spring. Even Sakura was in awe. “I’m quite sorry that I had disappeared for quite sometime. But perhaps after the second exam we could talk privately, oh and do you still have that letter that I sent you five years ago?” He said in a rather calming voice.
Sakura put a finger under her chin trying to remember a letter long ago. “Hmm” then she snaps her fingers and remembers there is an old letter sitting on top of her dresser locked in a small chest where she keeps her most valued possessions. She then tries to recall what the letter had said.
Dear Sakura,
For the most part I was not good at many things and saying goodbye is one of them. So I think I will just let everything out.
I don’t think I couldn’t never make up for what happened to Sasuke and I hope in time, you will forgive me. I can’t say I’m sorry enough times to you. To let you know I thought of Sasuke as a friend, no more then just a friend, he felt more like a brother to me and it hurts me to know that I killed him. He maybe not of been my real brother but the emptiness inside is all the same. Just know that I feel the same as you.
When or if I return, just know that my feelings deep inside me burns strong for you will never die. You may had made fun of me, insulted me at times and I understand that I deserved it now with my foolish ways. I guess I’m telling you that I care, no love you beyond what words can say.
With loving care
Naruto
p.s. If you have forgiven me I would like to treat you to dinner.
“Yes I do have that letter.” Sakura said rather cheery then blushes as naruto smiled at her.
“Bring that letter with you to the Tenchi hotel in room 411" he stated wiping the grin off his face and returned to his previous state. “I will later introduce my teammates the next time we meet.” he said while putting his cloak and bandana back on.
Please Read and review. thank you.
Well I would like to give FanFic another try. To be honest i have no idea what i should rate this story but i guess it doesn't really matter as you will probably read it regardless. although theres no swearing yet there are some violent parts in the beinging and a small reference to sexual content.
A.N. Parts of the story have been revised.
This story takes place three years naruto left konoha for training. much is unknown at this point about naruto since then.
Even if i said i did own Naruto, would anyone believe me?
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Chapter one:
Explosions could be heard all over Konoha. People running for their lives. The ninjas tried there best to repel the attacks to no avail. A single man wearing a black cloak with gold swirls covering both his body and face wearing a black bandana on his head with two platinum strips is the cause of the destruction. The ANBU have been totally wiped out. He didn’t care who he killed, ninjas, women, children, it didn’t matter to him.
He continues his rampage of destruction destroying building after building, killing at will. In his wake is fire, destruction, and blood filled streets. He walks calmly, not even flinching as hundreds of knifes fly at him. A large burst of red chakra repels the attacks. Without looking he kills his attackers instantly without mercy.
Now the man stands in front of Sakura. He stops. Sakura drops to her knees begging the man to spare her life. The man replies in a kind voice. “I won’t kill you just yet,” Then his voice changes into something daemonic “I want you to watch me destroy this pathetic village you call home and all of its people.” She trembles in fear. Feeling that fear in her he starts a sinister laugh and another burst of red chakra comes out of him. This burst however was not the same as before, it resembles a fox with nine tails and eyes filled with pure evil.
The man turns slowly and crouches down in front of her, she starts to back away in fear. The man starts to open the cloak to reveal his face. What Sakura saw petrified her making her unable to move an inch. He just smiled at her like nothing has happened. She hears a scream and realized it was her mother.
Sakura’s mother was running towards her and before her very eyes Naruto sliced the woman in half with a signal move. Blood sprayed everywhere filling the street, the walls and all over Sakura. None touched Naruto. He stands back up and calmly walks down the street not moving out of the way of the attacks as they were deflected by the red chakra.
She lifts her hand and looks at the blood on it, she wanted to scream but couldn’t. ‘This can’t be real. No it can’t. I don’t believe Naruto could do this. It...it has to be a dream...it has to.’
“Sakura, Sakura! Wake up.” a woman shouted. Sakura still screaming opens her eyes and sits up very quickly. “What’s wrong Sakura? I could hear you from out side.” Sakura looks into her mothers eyes and tears started to fall down her cheeks.
“Mom!” She screams then calmly says“Oh, it was just a bad dream.” tears still flowing down her cheeks. She lets out a huge sigh of relief. “What time is it?”
“Its almost ten thirty dear, why do you ask.” her mother replied.
“What! I’m going to be late for the chuunin exams, Ibiki is going to have my hide if I don’t get there on time. I’m suppose to help out.” she nearly shouted as she jumps out of bed and runs towards the shower half naked.
She turns on the hot water for the shower and undresses. She sticks her hand in the shower to see if its warm enough to enter. ‘Just right’ she thought as she steps in the shower. The warm water runs through her silk like pink hair making it glisten in the light, slowly runs down her smooth thin body cresting each and every curb of her. She felt very relaxed and a warm feeling deep down inside her. She rubs her body down with soap getting every inch and crevest of her body making sure she was complete clean. She suddenly felt very light headed when she was cleaning between her thighs then a sudden burst of pleasure erupted through out her body. She instantly stops what she was doing, 'this isn't me, I have self control. although that...no i can restrain myself i will not give in.'
She slow recollects her thoughts and starts thinking about the chuunin exam for a while until she remembers her dream. ‘Oh I’m just glad it was just a dream. I still can’t wonder why Naruto disappeared nearly five years ago after failing to bring Sasuke back alive. I don’t think he could forgive himself. He shouldn’t blame himself for that cause I know you wouldn’t kill him.’
Finishing with her shower she steps out grabbing a towel off the towel rack and wraps it around herself. She quickly dries her hair and body off and quickly ran back to her room to get dressed. She use to wear pink with white, but after Sasuke death and Naruto disappearance she started to wear dark blue jeans and a white tee shirt with an orange and black swirl on front and a red and white paddle symbol on back. She grabs her chuunin jacket and vest and puts them on while running out the door.
She quickly rushes out the door and runs down the street. She only manages to get half way down the street when she ran into someone causing her to fall down. “I am very sorry mister.” she said apologetically. She looks up to see a man wearing a black cloak with gold swirls and a black bandana with two platinum strips covering his head. She went into a daze not realizing that he had extended his hand towards her.
She has a flashback from her dream. She could hear screams and cries for help. Destruction every where and standing in the middle of it all was a man very much like the one in front of her. “Miss? Are you ok miss?” came a very gentle and caring voice.
She snaps back to reality “I’m sorry, I guessed I must have fallen harder then I thought.” She extends her hand to meet his. He pulls her up to her feet when she realizes that two other people are dressed exactly like the person that helped her up. The three cloaked men start walking towards the first exam. “Sir, I didn’t get your...” before she could complete her sentence the men disappeared out of sight. ‘Huh that is strange’ she thinking to herself. She quickly starts running towards where the chuuni examiners for the first exam are waiting. ‘Hue, made it just in time.’
“Alright gents. Its time to start the first exam.” Ibiki shouted into the room. Everyone stood up and disappeared in a cloud of white smoke and reappeared in the exam room. Everyone snapped to attention expect one group crouching in the corner. It was that man Sakura ran into earlier. “Quite down you punks!” was the first words out of Ibiki once in the exam room. The examiners all took there seats around the walls of the classroom.
All of the participants all drew numbers. Sakura was looking at the man sitting in the corner. His two companion stood up and walked to grab there numbers and slowly took there seats while the one remaining man stayed still.. ‘He hasn’t even moved yet.’ Ibiki thought
“You in the corner come up here and take a number” Ibiki shouted. All the man did was raise his hand up into the air with a piece of paper showing a number on it. ‘What...when did he...’ he was shocked but didn’t allow it to surface to his face. “Very well take your se...” but before he could finished his sentence the mysterious man was already in his seat. He hasn’t seen that kind of speed since Itachi, no its even faster. Its as fast if not faster then Yondaime, the forth Hokage.
Ibiki starts to talk to the group of misfits about the exam. Sakura couldn’t keep her eyes off of the mystery man. Ibiki then started to hand out the test. Once he finished handing them out he explained the rules of the test and the point system. After explaining it all he announced that the test may being.
She continues to watch the three men ‘They hasn’t even moved a muscle since the test began and time is almost up. I’m sure they know the test has started, don’t they?’ Sakura thought. “Time is up. I can see that many of you have returned so I’m going to change it up a little. I’m going to ask the final question to only those who has at least six out of ten or more questions correct,” Everyone looked shocked
People lined up and handed there paper to Ibiki. “Four out of 10, you fail.” he read aloud. Then her number along with two other number were called. They were told to leave. “Seven out of ten, good. Next!”
The last three men in the black and gold cloak are next in line. When it was finally they turn their papers to Ibiki “your joking right, the seal isn’t even been broken, you fail”
The man spoke up “Why don’t you open it and make sure.” he said in a low monotone voice.
He opened the test paper and looked completely stunned which caught the attention of everyone in the room. “Ten out of Ten, a perfect paper!” He grabbed the last two and said “You all got ten out of ten.”
Ibiki stayed silent for a few seconds then announced “Everyone please take a seat. Will the examiners please come with me.” Suddenly Ibiki and the examiners disappeared in a puff of smoke. Everyone in the room took a step back from the man.
The leader of the unknown team could feel the fear in each and everyone of them. He could hear some people starting to whisper about them. He enjoyed this very much. ‘They all fear us, I wonder if I should tell them my real identity.’
Minutes later all the chuunis returned. “Ok, everyone shut up. We may begin the last question.” Ibiki stated looking very stern. “This will be a multiply choice question. You are an a four man team with a mission to infiltrate an enemy country and retrieve secret scrolls about there attack plans. Your team consist long range fighter, one that excels in scouting, one that has mastered close combat and your self. Now before I tell you the answers you must make a choice weather to accept this mission or decline it before you choose where to place your team.”
Someone shouts out “What do you mean weather we should choose it or not.”
“Your only answer is to accept or decline, you decline your team will fail this exam but you will be allowed to return. If you accept and answer the question wrong you will not only fail the exam but will never be allowed to return to the chuunin exam.” Ibiki stated firmly to everyone left. For a couple of seconds no one moved. Then one person raised there hand and stands up.
“I can’t. I just can’t do that. I’m sorry mates I just can’t” He said as his number and his teammates numbers were called and were excused from the rest of the exam. Dozens of others followed suit leaving a total of twenty teams.
The remaining twenty sat down looking deadpan towards Ibiki “Well then if that’s everyone then I have no choice but to pass all that are present.” there were a few gasps and complaints. Suddenly the next examiner flies through the window to announce the next test. “Early as usually Anko.”
Everyone just stares are Anko with stunned faces expect for the three cloaked men. Anko explained where the test will be held and further details will be explained there. She then just vanished in a poof of smoke. People started getting up and leaving to the next test. She spots the cloaked men just standing by the door like there waiting for someone. Sakura starts walking towards them.
Sakura takes a few steps forward and suddenly stops holding onto a desk for support.. She starts having another flashback of her dream. She was on her knees and could hear a sinister laugh from the man standing in front of her wearing the same cloak as the one in the chuunin exam. He crouches down and opens his cloak and reveals his face.
Again she snaps back to reality. ‘hmm if it’s the same person like in my dreams then that must be...’ she starts to tremble ‘Naruto.’ She starts walking up to what looks to be the leader of the group. “Um, excuse me sir, but you wouldn’t by chance be Naruto Uzumaki?”
“Ah haha...Guess you found me out Sakura. I knew you would see through my disguise.” Naruto said opening his cloak to reveal himself. Sakura gasps at how well toned he was with sculpted muscles and a rippling chest. He then took off the bandana that was covering his head to reveal his blonde spiky hair, it was a few inches longer then before. His face was well toned and had a very kind expression on his face that could melt the hearts of every lady, the whiskers he once had were now nearly invisible and his eyes sparkled like the stars on a crystal clear night in the spring. Even Sakura was in awe. “I’m quite sorry that I had disappeared for quite sometime. But perhaps after the second exam we could talk privately, oh and do you still have that letter that I sent you five years ago?” He said in a rather calming voice.
Sakura put a finger under her chin trying to remember a letter long ago. “Hmm” then she snaps her fingers and remembers there is an old letter sitting on top of her dresser locked in a small chest where she keeps her most valued possessions. She then tries to recall what the letter had said.
Dear Sakura,
For the most part I was not good at many things and saying goodbye is one of them. So I think I will just let everything out.
I don’t think I couldn’t never make up for what happened to Sasuke and I hope in time, you will forgive me. I can’t say I’m sorry enough times to you. To let you know I thought of Sasuke as a friend, no more then just a friend, he felt more like a brother to me and it hurts me to know that I killed him. He maybe not of been my real brother but the emptiness inside is all the same. Just know that I feel the same as you.
When or if I return, just know that my feelings deep inside me burns strong for you will never die. You may had made fun of me, insulted me at times and I understand that I deserved it now with my foolish ways. I guess I’m telling you that I care, no love you beyond what words can say.
With loving care
Naruto
p.s. If you have forgiven me I would like to treat you to dinner.
“Yes I do have that letter.” Sakura said rather cheery then blushes as naruto smiled at her.
“Bring that letter with you to the Tenchi hotel in room 411" he stated wiping the grin off his face and returned to his previous state. “I will later introduce my teammates the next time we meet.” he said while putting his cloak and bandana back on.