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Araceli
09-10-2006, 04:08 AM
Hi.You mayby thinking why I am writing this,but this is to tell my story.The life of a shinigami heir.

My family,the Shinigami clan,were known as savior's to our allies and death god's to our enemies.Our bloodline,the Takiagan,or death's eye,was the reson for the respect and fear we recived everywhere.

Along with it being a gift,it was also a great curse.My clansman where always hunted and killed for our blood's secrets.Whenever one of us was seen,it became Kazama open season.But,thankfuly as soon as we die,our blood instantly losses it's advanced properties and the Takiagan is permanentaly destroyed.One of our more ingenious plans.

My father,Kazama Arashi,head of the Kazama clan,is where I got my blood as an heir to the dead.He was kind and gentle,much like the rest of my family,but he was also not afraid to protect his friends,family,and village.He was known as the Yondaime Hokage,Konoha's 'Yellow flash'
,and hero of the second shinobi war.As the hokage and clan head,he was very busy,but he alwasy had time for me and my mother.

Speaking of my mother,did I mention she was a full-blooded youkia(demon).In her human form,she was the most beutiful creature to walk this earth.Long,unruly crimson hair,big beutiful green eye's,like emerald's shining in a sea of white nothing.A pair of fluffy red ear's and 9-long elegand tail's.

When I was young she would always come into my room and sit on my bed.On instinict,i woud grab one of her tails and cling to it like a lifeline,that is until the fur bon her tails caused me to sneeze myself awake.After that,my brother,Yashin,3 years my senior,would help my mom make breakfast,and set the table.It was a good life.

I know what you are thinking,was,well let's continue.
It was an ordinary night,just like any other in the Kazama monor.I was 5 and fast asleep when I awoke sudenly and smelled smoke.I got up and wobbled to the bedroom door when it swong open to reveal a heavily breathing Yashin."Come with me and don't stop running untill the ANBU are beside you!",He panted

As we reached the door to the courtyard I could hear the screams and explosions outside,The dor was blown off its frame and slamed smackdabb in the hallway.I stepped outside and saw aleast 2,000 shinobi,all looking to destroy my family.

Kunia rushed passed my head as i ran to the village.Explosion's,screams,blood boodies and fur.........wait!Fur!I looked up to find my father or mother.I turned left and right,looking,looking for a sigh of my parents or brother.

I ran toward's our winter home,screaming for a familiar voice.Funny.All around me were familiar voices,yet not the one's I wanted to hear.

As I continued,the smoke grew unberable and I colasped in somthing wet and red.I traced the red liquid to three perticular bodies.My parents and brother lieing in a pool of their own..............blood!My heart broke at that moment,it was like my reson for living died along with them.I was now alone.

Somthing turned me over after what seemed like hours.I did not here the screams of the ememy or the pounding of feet next to me.The person above me had blood red eyes and long black hair,the man obviously an ANBU for he was in a cat mask."Naruto?",I hered him ask.I recodnized the voice as the one of the brother of my best friend.As I lost consiousness,a lone tear trickled down my face.I could only see the starry,blue sky

I awoke 3 days later in the hospital.The first people I saw were Uchiha Sasuke and his brother Itachi.Remembering what trancpired 3 day's ago my sadness was lifted a little to know that I could always count on them to be there.But when I asked his what happened my sadness came back 10 fold.I was the only surviver of the Kazama massacure.

Right after Itachi said that I should be out in a weak ,Sandaime comes in.He was happy to see I was finaly awake.After a brief look over by the nurse that came in,He said,"I know you probably have a lot of questions,so let me tell you that on this day in 5 years you will become the Kazama clan head.Also your Families saving and summer home will belong to you.Also, the funeral is in 8 days,I'm so sorry this had to have happend,Naruto",after that I was dead quiet,Eye's blank and far off.

When Itachi and Sandaime left the room,I finaly broke down an cried.All the pain of never seeing my family again,Too never see their smiling faces again,never hear their cheerful voices,most of all,never again feel the love of a family.My Heart was in so much pain I swore I could physicaly feel it.My soul felt empty like I had died.Sasuke was my only comfort,the comfort of a friend that in 2 year's,I would call my brother.
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After Two whole years of begging Sasuke's father,Fugaku,finaly agreed to adopt me.When he asked Sandaime though,TheProfessurerefused,for resons unknown.I am glad he did not accept the offer.

Later that night,Itachi killed his own clan,Leaving only Sasuke behind.To say that Sasuke was devistated was an understatement.After a few day's I asked him if he wanted to join me at the Kazama manor.He gladly accepted.

By midday it was official.We became brothers.For the next five years we lived in peace at my family house,until.

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Done withg chapter one,yay!So how was it.Oh,and if you see the same characters in my other ficRevival of a Legandin later chapters,don't say anything.I happened to like using mayed up characters more than once.

Ja ne!

regina777
09-10-2006, 11:22 AM
Nice read for me :) :) :)

Keep it up. More practice and the english, sentence structure, grammar will all get better. :wink: :wink:

Araceli
09-23-2006, 02:10 AM
Thank's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!As a special treat,SMALL SPOILERS,SMALL.There is one Kazama,other than Naruto,left.Yes,Naruto has a sibling and she was not murdered.Also Haku and Naruto's sibling,Temari and Shikamaru,Ino and Choji,Sakura and Lee,Sasuke and ?,Naruto and Hinata,are the main pairings in the story.

Caqil-Feisar
09-28-2006, 06:40 AM
HURRY UP AND FINIDH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yOur fan fics are kick ass man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

Araceli
10-03-2006, 09:28 PM
Thank you for the confidence.As a reward............CHAPTER 2.Enjoy!!!!

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CHAPTER 2:Orochimaru return's

It was a fine fall morning,brids singing,people moving to get to their shops.A darkly cloaked man was walking amoung them.He looked form house to house,shop to shop,and person to person>Looking for something or someone.

Yellow,snake like eye's looked around franticly,that is until,"Can you believe that Uhiha Sasuke and Kazama Naruto!They actualy tied for rookie of the year!","Yeah I heared that from my son,Kiba,at the Acadamy.You know,I still can't Believe he was adopted by Naruto.",Said a second voice sadly.

The pale man turned with an inceasing interest to the canversation.Kazama,He thought the were wiped out 7 years ago.He listened closer hopping to find more out.

The first female looked down sadly,"He's too young for this.Too lose his family at such a young age.Also to become clan head at age 10,And he's only 12!".The other woman looked up in concern,"I keep thinking another clan will be mostly wiped out.First it's the Kazama's,only two serviving members,Naruto and his sister,Emily.Also,The Uchiha's,only Two have servived,Sasuke and his brother,Itachi,the convicted merdurer.I think it's only a matter of time till the Hyuuga's are nearly wiped out,this time the servivor's will be the merdurer's.".The Inuzuka woman sounded worried and troubled."Now,don't say tha-.Oh,look here they come!".

The stranger turned in a calm manor and spotted the boy's.He smirked.Finally,he could see the last Kazama and Uchiha.

Uchiha Sasuke whore a standard pair of shinobi sandle's.Cream white short's and a navy blue shirt,the Uchiha clan symbol on the back.He had pale skin and contrasting black hair,But,his hair was more in the sape of the head of an exicted or alarmed cookatoo,Or the back end of a duck.His calm ,obsidean eye's stared a the streat ahead.

Naruto on the other hand,whore the same sandles,Blak hamaka's a white belt,an onxy shirt,fingerless black gloves,and obsidean katana strapped to his back in a white sheath.Around his neck was a thin blue chocker with the Kazama clam sign on the cloth,a yin-yang sign surronded by black flame.He had tanned skin,sun-kissed blond hair,2 golden,fluffy fox ear's on the top of his head,a 9 long tailes swung elegantly behind him.

Both carried 7 bags.'It seems that they are just heading home.Now let's see about that occursed manor.',thought the stranger.
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To tired to write any more.You people arew lucky I pre-wriote this stuff or else this would be a lame story that is freash out of my mind.SO TIRED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This is only part one of chapter 2.
Ja ne!

AK47
10-03-2006, 09:53 PM
good story and nice start on chap 2
keep it up!

__Mõchá
10-21-2006, 11:13 PM
Coo', Coo'! Tha ear and youkai thang is from inuyasha innit? lolz I love that show. Continue this story is real good!!

Araceli
11-02-2006, 12:05 PM
Sorry peoplr but my keyboard at home is fried and refuses to cooprate,escpcially whn I type g.Im using the keyboard at school now

Chidongan
11-02-2006, 03:13 PM
thats a pretty good story. so naruto is part demon? nice.

it's good to read a story thats different from the original storyline. ^^

Araceli
11-12-2006, 05:14 PM
Thanks.And I did not have the idea come to me from Inuyash.I love that show,but no.STILL NO NEW KEYBOARD,sorry.:-(

Nick
11-14-2006, 06:18 PM
This is shaping up nicely. It's a daring re-imagination of the Story but it's got my interest.

Araceli
02-09-2007, 01:39 AM
Sorry,people,but I have compleatly given up on any of my previous fan fics.I am now more interested in female Naruto fan fics and my mind is going a mile a millisecond with ideas.Sorry to say,I won't be writing for a while.

I've been thinking about doing an evil female Naruto who's name is Takai and is part of a secret underground organization called the "Brotherhood of the Bijuu Nine".As you've guessed,this organization is comprized of a 9 jinchuuriki(demon vessel's),and the organization goes around and kills people,does illegal jobs,and want's to destroy all human life.If someone could draw a picture of the organization member's,(A female Naruto,male Gaara,and Yugito,Check the manga,Have to be incuded!),it would truely be appresiated.Also,You shall be stated in my potential story and be given half of the cedit for the creation of the potential story.

I've also thought of doing a Female Naruto/Dot Hack(play the games .Hack Infection,.Hack mutation,.hack Outbreak,And .Hack Quarentine.You don't have to play all of them though.)crossover.If people could give me a picture of what the charaters look life,The credit will be given as stated above.Any chareaters for this one.Only a female Naruto must be included.Also You must lable which charater is which,and what class the are.

Only the highest of quality out of all the particapents will win.Also,depending on which one you people vote for on my new thrad will be the one that is writen.Don't worry,If I don't use your picture due to low quality or it is noit part of the story people voted for,I will still reference you as a contestant.Please post pictures and votes in the new thread please.,and let the contest begin!