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zoldic777
06-21-2006, 04:04 PM
The ultimate End of Senshi

CHAPTER 1
The Assassin's history

There used to be a Samurai named Samsunaki,He was a very talented samurai and he had 3 big battles,One country with each battle,He fought with a whole country which was more then 25000 people,all with his own sengushi sword,Later people wanted to nail him down bacause he was a murderer who would kill anyone for money,So this was how his life went on,so then later he married and had a child named Senshi.
He put all his efforts in trying to raise his son in a good manner,but his son was an experience of all the killing his father had done in his house,As we know,People wanted to nail him down and finish him so they attacked his house continously,but he easily killed them while his son was standing watching at the corner,So then he continued doind his job and he was known as The Upsidedown Demon.



CHAPTER 2
the life of a kid of an Assassin

Senshi grew upt o be a truoblesome but good boy,he used to never have that much friends as they all feared him,They used to know him as a son of a murdere,so at school senshi never had friends so he kinda had a lonely life,So today he was going to school after the holidays

"Senshiiiiiiiiiiiii,Dont forget you breakfast,this time if you do,you'll miss something special tonight" said his mom

Senshi said while he was running out of the door,"ya,mom,i really took it before you said a thing"

*His mom walks to the table,hmmmmm,he left his breakfast again,I'll punish him when his back"said his mom smiling


Now Senshi was at the bus stop and the bus was coming so he just was looking at the bus and noticed that there were fighintg and making alot of noise,he said"hah,wow,I would like to join some fun",but as he went inside the bus there was complete silence and everyone got seated,Some of the boys hid their faces and some of them stared at him with fear,but,there was this one boy named gahu,he was a new student,All he could do was eat,and trian himself by his father,His father was a well known Samurai but not as much as Samsunaki,Gahu and Senshi's Father were both friends at childhood,but later they became best friends and enemies at the same time,they were competing to get the title as the best Samurai,and had a lot fights for the sake of that.

So now Gahu stared at Senshi in a bad manner and said"WTF are you standing there for,get the hell outta my face"
Senshi got angry but he said to himself,"Control yourself,you cant just go mad at people even if they insulted you"

Then Gahu shouted very loudly"DEEEEEMON"
Senshi was now in a rage,He punched the way to Gahu's face but Gahu moved his face and all that was hit was the seat,it looked like a Giant mans punch had striked it,Then everyone started shouting

"Oh My God,You would've killed him if you got him,aaaaaaah,now,he really is a Demon"

Gahu then started saying"Calm down guys and gals,its okay,He wouldn't get me with his punch,hes really slow,ahahaha"

"Anyway pal,Comeone,come sit next to me,this seat is kept for you,"

Senshi was so suprised,he said"huh?"

"yeah,You heard me"

*So then later when senshi went home he thought hardly,Why am i like this,I dont wanna become like my father,and i wont"

Later on Senshi and Gahu got to be best friends and they really had fun,Senshi and gahu had been Trianing together very hardly,And they really became best friends


CHAPTER 3
Senshi's leave to the darkness

After one night of hard training,both of them were returning home,they met a strange mysterious man who asked Senshi"Do you need power,follow me",then gahu got scared and said,"Senshi,dont listen to him,he's just an evil guy or something like that

Senshi said to gahu in an angry way,"Just shutup,you dont know anything about me,"MY ONLY WISH IS TO KILL ME FATHER,HE KILLED ALOT OF PEOPLE AND HE IS STILL KILLING ME SO I EANT POWER TO STOP THAT DEMON"
Gahu"EVEN IF YOU HAVE TO BECOME A DEMON YOURSELF?"
Senshi answered in a sad manner and disappeared behind Gahu and striked him and knocked him out,and said"YES,EVEN IF I HAVE TO BECOME A DEMON"

*THEN SENSHI FOLLOWED THAT MAN,HIS NAME WAS HIJAIME*

Hijaime laughed and said"okay,so listen,I can give you power by training you and i will give you the title of a demon to kill your father
Senshi answered him right away and told him that i will do anything to gain power"
CHAPTER 4
Farwell,my friend,to the darkness,for no reason

After 3 years of complete training Senshi had become completely Experienced,He was ready to gain the title of the Demon to kill his papa.

When he came back he met his mom and killed her right away with his samurai sword,his eyes only showed hatred and anger,Then he searched the full house and didn't find his dad,He went in the village asking what happened to his father and if he was in a mission

CHAPTER 5
The Return of the Demon

Now Senshi killed nearly the full village asking them for where his father was and not even waiting for an answer,He sliced his sword through their bodies,Then he kept on doing that until he met a boy and that boy said to him,"You really are a DEMON"

This was the same boy who at the bus called him a demon for delivering that strong punch.

ARGHHHHHH,Senshi went in rage unleashing his lethal move,The seven arcs of destruction and killed that boy.

Now he killed everyone in the village and was confused,he said to himself,where is my father,Then at the same moment A samurai appeared and sliced Senshi but Senshi blocked that move and pushed him away

The two samurais then met their Eyes with each other preparing theirself for a battle,Just when Senshi.....

Senshi suprisingly said"ggggg--g-gg-Gahu

Gahu replied"Yes,it is me,the very old friend you abandoned for evil

Gahu said"I got a big story for you"

Senshi then replied"I dont want any bullshit stories,all i am asking is,Where is my father

CHAPTER 6
The ultimate fate of Senshi

*Gahu the started saying the story that happened*

As you know,you father was know as a demon,And he still went on killing more people,and his other mission was to Eliminate a Whole Country,So.................,My father,the Samurai,Decided to stop him and went on a fight with him,and he Successfully stopped your father at

his limits,That Demon deserved what he got

Senshi then was shocked and surprised

Gahu then said"your training was all for no use,going with the evil and all that stuff,but anyway,I am here for one goal

Senshi then said" What do you want,I am going to take my fathers place and be the "Upsidedown Demon" and Conqeur all the Countries i can.

Gahu Grins and says"I know"

Gahu"but i am here for one goal,TO KILL YOU

Senshi"ahaha,How can an UNexperienced guy like you stop me

Gahu then replied"MY father trained me alot,so i will show you how i will stop you

*BOTH OF THEM SAID*

*The Infinity Arcs of Friendship*(gahu said that)
*The 7 arcs of Darkness*(Senshi said that)

AND CLASH BOOF KA DOOM KA DAM ALAKAZAM

GAHU>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<SENSHI

But then Gahu Eliminated Senshi and said in his mind

I am sorry my friend,so stop evil there must be sacrifices,but you are evil yourself so you have been the biggest sacrifice to me,my best friend,I am sorry,but,but(then Gahu Burst out into tears),but,I had to put you in your limits,SO THAT IS YOUR FATE!!!!!!!!!!


This story is written by Zoldic777,If there is any mistake or something like that,then please tell me,Cause you know I'm not very good in writing stories

AK47
06-21-2006, 04:14 PM
mistakes are just grammar and spelling but it's pretty good

zoldic777
06-21-2006, 04:23 PM
cool,really,Thankx,but i think it sounds like a silly 3 year old Story,my stories aren't interesting as yours

AK47
06-21-2006, 04:51 PM
yea take ur time to edit, cuz i don't edit and my stories sound dumb