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KageNaruto
06-04-2006, 12:46 AM
Part 1 of Chapter 1...
“Kakashi-sensei, Naruto still isn’t here!” Sakura whined.
Sasuke stood against a tree with his unemotional, wanna-be-badass face looking at the ground.
“Did he get lost on the road of life as well?” Kakashi asked, his face buried in his pornographic novel. The Jounin was a few hours late, yet again, however the third member of Team 7 was still missing.
“Let’s just go on without the idiot. He always messes the missions up anyway. Not to mention he’s a hindrance anyway,” Sasuke stated flatly, his hands resting in his pockets.
“It isn’t very nice to leave your teammate behind,” Kakashi said.
“C’mon Kakashi-sensei! This team would be better off without him! Let’s just go like Sasuke-kun said,” Sakura complained.
“The dobe probably overslept,” Sasuke commented.
“Or he’s stuffing his face with ramen,” Sakura said.
“Well, I guess it can’t be helped. Let’s get going,” Kakashi replied.
“Great! We don’t have to the “annoying Naruto” today, isn’t that great Sasuke-kun?” Sakura exclaimed.
“Hn,” he grunted back.
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Naruto snorted and chuckled to himself. The blonde shinobi watched his team leave through the gate, Sakura fawning over Sasuke like an idiot as usual. He was perched on the branch of a tree, only about 100 feet away from his team’s meeting place. How he ended up with such a pathetic team he’ll never know, and how the famed Kakashi was such a moron in real life the Kyubi container will never figure out.
Naruto chuckled to himself. The Sharingan bearing Kakashi couldn’t even slightly see through his act. Of course, the rest of the world couldn’t either. But that’s because most people treated him like shit, or didn’t give him a second glance because he wasn’t important enough. Sure Kakashi realized that the said shinobi had potential, but he never acted upon it one bit. They could all drown in their ignorance for all he cared.
The blonde shinobi looked through the fluttering leaves into the deep blue sky. He smirked, recalling the words of his black-haired brooding teammate. Him, a hindrance? If anything that pink-haired sack of crap was the one that never did a single thing on their team. And they believed he liked her? For having Sharingan they were worse than blind. How could anyone like a useless ugly bitch that needed anger management like her?
Naruto still put an act up in the academy of being the cheery and talentless troublemaker everybody thought he was, but it was nowhere as severe as it is now. What too many people didn’t know about Naruto is that he didn’t trust other humans, in fact he despised them. Growing up all alone, and having everybody spit at your feet, it taught him to only trust himself. So one day, he can teach the village a lesson. How? He dint know yet, but that time would come up; it was destined to. So for now our blonde Kyubi container decided to put up an act, so when the time came, nobody would be able to foresee what he truly was.
Sure some people treated him nicely, Iruka and the Sandaime, but he saw through their acts not too long ago. Iruka just felt sorry for Naruto, since the Chuunin could relate to him; they were both picked on and grew up alone without anybody. If Iruka truly cared for him, he might as well have adopted him earlier, instead of just buying him ramen now and then. Iruka was just trying to feel better about his past by giving guidance to Naruto, who he saw as himself. The Sandaime gave up his position to Yondaime, who soon after had to sacrifice his life to protect the village. So Sarutobi felt like he had to look over Naruto, since he felt like it was his fault the fourth Hokage died. After all, since Naruto knew of the Kyubi residing in him, the motive of the Hokage’s care wasn’t too hard to figure out.
When the blonde shinobi did find out about Kyubi from Mizuki, he didn’t know quite how to take it. He knew why the villagers despised him so much, but it was a stupid reason. Those fags wouldn’t even be alive if he didn’t hold the fox; they would have all been killed by it ages ago. So why did they scorn him for saving their hides? But taking in the fact that he holstered a demon wasn’t too hard for him. In fact he took the nine tailed demon fox inside of him as something positive. He could scare any villager shitless, and being able to tap into the Kyubi chakra was great. Yet most of his true self was created from the influence of Haku and Zabuza. Naruto gazed at the sky, the endless blue reflecting in his own irises filled with oceans.
“Haku, Zabuza, I barely knew you, but I miss you guys.”
FLASHBACK
“Oi, dobe, are you coming back with us or what?” Sasuke asked.
“Sasuke-teme! I’m gonna stay here and master climbing this tree unlike you!” Naruto yelled back.
“Suit yourself Naruto. Tiring yourself out wont speed things up,” Kakashi stated plainly.
“Naruto you baka!” Sakura said.
“Hmph,” the blonde shinobi replied.
Naruto watched the rest of his team walk away, going through the underbrush and leaving the forest. When they were finally out of sight he started laughing. “Hahaha! Idiots!” The Kyubi container walked up to the tree he was trying to walk up earlier. He placed one foot on the trunk and slowly began making his way up the tree.
“Heh, treewalking. Piece of pie, I can’t believe Sasuke can’t even do this.” He kept walking steadily up the tree with no problem. When he finally reached the top, he took out a kunai, and after twirling it with his fingers made a slash on the very top branch. Naruto then hopped back down to the ground.
“Now for some real training!” he exclaimed. He formed his hands together into the ram seal and began focusing his chakra. A massive blue burst of energy erupted from him. It swirled around him, flowing freely. “Ok then, time practice molding that demon chakra!” The blonde shinobi began concentrating harder, and more of his own blue chakra began flooding from him. “Raaaaaagh!” he began yelling. Soon a red spark surrounded him, and before he knew it a mountain of red chakra was rapidly swirling around him. Naruto felt his fingernails and canines lengthen and grow. He grinded his teeth, trying fiercely to focus on compressing the rabid chakra. “Must maintain it!” he shouted aloud, his body already shaking from the strain of the red chakra.
The Kyubi chakra swirled intensely around the blonde ninja. The ground around him was rupturing and cracking apart. The skin on Naruto’s arm suddenly ripped making a large gash run down from his elbow to his hand, blood freely flowing from it. The same thing happened on his other arm, and he could feel blood dripping down from his chest and the rest of his body. The chakra was taking its toll on Naruto, and with one last yell, his eyelids closed and he fell to the ground, unconscious.
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The light trickled through the canopy, making shadows run along the blonde shinobi’s face. His arms were sprawled out on the grass, his injuries from the previous day already healed. Birds hopped and pecked around the unconscious ninja. Naruto’s eyelids slightly opened, not used to the glare of the sun after being closed for so long. He could suddenly feel somebody shaking him.
“You’re going to catch a cold if you sleep there,” the mysterious person said.
Naruto sat up all rubbed his eyes. “Who are you?” he asked in a weary voice. The girl with long black hair wearing a strange outfit smiled back at him. “Did you wake me up? By the way, what are you doing?”
“Picking herbs,” the person answered.
“Herbs?” Naruto questioned.
“That’s right. It’s to cure injuries and illness.”
For a few minutes Naruto helped this mysterious person pick herbs. “Doing a tedious job like this in the morning?” he questioned.
“What are you doing here so early in the day?”
Naruto decided to keep up his act for a while longer with this person. He smiled, and confidently said “Training!”
“Are you a ninja or something? That forehead protector…”
“Do I look like one?! Yes, I’m a ninja!” he exclaimed.
“Wow, you’re amazing. But were you training?” the newcomer asked again in a monotone voice.
“I need to become stronger!”
“For what reason?”
“To become the number one ninja in my village. I’m going to make everyone recognize my powers,” Naruto lied.
“Are you doing that for someone else, or for yourself?” the black haired girl asked.
“Huh?”
“Do you have someone that is important to you?”
“Important? What are you trying to get at?” Naruto questioned. The black haired person got a distant look in her eyes, filled with something Naruto recognized. It was a different pain from his, but the pain of being alone was still in there. He was going to drop his act now.
“Actually no, I have nobody important in my life,” Naruto said. The girl across from him looked up a little startled at his change of tone; it was no longer cheery and enthusiastic.
“A person is able to become truly strong when they protect someone they cherish,” the person replied.
“Well then, I hope I eventually find somebody to cherish,” Naruto replied harshly. There was a brief moment of silence. “You, you’re that person that made us believe Zabuza was dead aren’t you?” he questioned.
The black-haired person looked up startled. “What?” she exclaimed. “How do you know?”
"Gut feeling,” Naruto replied. “You’re eyes… are familiar. What’s your name?”
“Haku,” Haku replied, looking back down at the ground, trying to hide the pain in her eyes.
“I’m Naruto.” He paused for a short period of time. “So Zabuza is your precious person?”
“Yes,” Haku replied, not sure what to do about Naruto, killing him was something Haku really didn’t want to do.
“Can you take me to Zabuza then?” Naruto asked.
“What!?” Haku exclaimed, not expecting this in the least.
Canthinkofaname
06-04-2006, 01:00 AM
yes yes very good and i like how naruto is eeeeeeeevil but are you ever gonna finish your other fanfic? plz oh plz thats something i actually like to read. PLZ update it i BEG OF YOO!! i mean cmon im your goldfish, plz do it, for your goldfish?
KageNaruto
06-04-2006, 01:11 AM
yes ill continue it eventually. and this fic should get a lot more twists around the times of the chuunin exam. and naruto isnt quite evil.... he just has a lot darker of a character, and it should really change and shape itself strangely during the fic.
and yeah like i said, this is a serious fic, not comedy-crackfilled-crazy-perverted like my other one. ill post the rest of chapter 1 up later(hopefully)
Canthinkofaname
06-04-2006, 01:35 AM
great, i look forward to it. and even though you think yer other one is crazy, i find it to be, not completely serious but kinda serious
Ww how do you just sit their and type that? Thatwas great good job man. You have talent! Get the hell off this forum and go write a book you crazy bastard!
A really weird twist to the naruto story.
But i don't see it lacking anything, even in the humour department, well for me :D
good start!
KageNaruto
06-05-2006, 04:16 PM
Okies then heres all of chapter 1.... Comments and feedback would be appreciated!^^
if you guys think i should chnage or add something or blah blah blah suggest it!
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“Kakashi-sensei, Naruto still isn’t here!” Sakura whined.
Sasuke stood against a tree with his unemotional, wanna-be-badass face looking at the ground. It was safe to say the Uchiha was brooding, as he always did.
“Did he get lost on the road of life as well?” Kakashi asked, his face buried in his pornographic novel. The Jounin was a few hours late, yet again, however the third member of Team 7 was still missing.
“Let’s just go on without the idiot. He always messes the missions up anyway. Not to mention he’s a hindrance anyway,” Sasuke stated flatly, his hands resting in his pockets.
“It isn’t very nice to leave your teammate behind,” Kakashi said.
“C’mon Kakashi-sensei! This team would be better off without him! Let’s just go like Sasuke-kun said,” Sakura complained.
“The dobe probably overslept,” Sasuke commented.
“Or he’s stuffing his face with ramen,” Sakura said.
“Well, I guess it can’t be helped. Let’s get going,” Kakashi replied. He really didn't feel like spending his whole day searching for the hyperactive blonde, besides it was just a simple mission, one Naruto would complain about if he figured out what it was.
“Great! We don’t have to the “annoying Naruto” today, isn’t that great Sasuke-kun?” Sakura exclaimed.
“Hn,” he grunted back.
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Naruto snorted and chuckled to himself. The blonde shinobi watched his team leave through the gate, Sakura fawning over Sasuke like an idiot as usual. He was perched on the branch of a tree, only about one hundred feet away from his team’s meeting place. How he ended up with such a pathetic team he’ll never know, and how the famed Kakashi was such a moron in real life the Kyubi container will never figure out.
Naruto chuckled to himself. The Sharingan bearing Kakashi couldn’t even slightly see through his act. Of course, the rest of the world couldn’t either. But that’s because most people treated him like shit, or didn’t give him a second glance because he wasn’t important enough. Sure Kakashi realized that the said shinobi had potential, but he never acted upon it one bit. They could all drown in their ignorance for all he cared.
The blonde shinobi looked through the fluttering leaves into the deep blue sky. He smirked, recalling the words of his black-haired brooding teammate. Him, a hindrance? If anything that pink-haired sack of crap was the one that never did a single thing on their team. And they believed he liked her? For having Sharingan they were worse than blind. How could anyone like a useless ugly bitch that needed anger management like her?
Naruto still put an act up in the academy of being the cheery and talentless troublemaker everybody thought he was, but it was nowhere as severe as it is now. What too many people didn’t know about Naruto is that he didn’t trust other humans, in fact he despised them. Growing up all alone, and having everybody spit at your feet, it taught him to only trust himself. So one day, he can teach the village a lesson. How? He dint know yet, but that time would come up; it was destined to. So for now our blonde Kyubi container decided to put up an act, so when the time came, nobody would be able to foresee what he truly was.
Sure some people treated him nicely, Iruka and the Sandaime, but he saw through their acts not too long ago. Iruka just felt sorry for Naruto, since the Chuunin could relate to him; they were both picked on and grew up alone without anybody. If Iruka truly cared for him, he might as well have adopted him earlier, instead of just buying him ramen now and then. Iruka was just trying to feel better about his past by giving guidance to Naruto, who he saw as himself. The Sandaime gave up his position to Yondaime, who soon after had to sacrifice his life to protect the village. So Sarutobi felt like he had to look over Naruto, since he felt like it was his fault the fourth Hokage died. After all, since Naruto knew of the Kyubi residing in him, the motive of the Hokage’s care wasn’t too hard to figure out.
When the blonde shinobi did find out about Kyubi from Mizuki, he didn’t know quite how to take it. He knew why the villagers despised him so much, but it was a stupid reason. Those fags wouldn’t even be alive if he didn’t hold the fox; they would have all been killed by it ages ago. So why did they scorn him for saving their hides? But taking in the fact that he holstered a demon wasn’t too hard for him. In fact he took the nine tailed demon fox inside of him as something positive. He could scare any villager shitless, and being able to tap into the Kyubi chakra was great. Yet most of his true self was created from the influence of Haku and Zabuza. Naruto gazed at the sky, the endless blue reflecting in his own irises filled with oceans.
“Haku, Zabuza, I barely knew you, but I miss you guys.”
FLASHBACK
“Oi, dobe, are you coming back with us or what?” Sasuke asked.
“Sasuke-teme! I’m gonna stay here and master climbing this tree unlike you!” Naruto yelled back.
“Suit yourself Naruto. Tiring yourself out wont speed things up,” Kakashi stated plainly.
“Naruto you baka!” Sakura said.
“Hmph,” the blonde shinobi replied.
Naruto watched the rest of his team walk away, going through the underbrush and leaving the forest. When they were finally out of sight he started laughing. “Hahaha! Idiots!” The Kyubi container walked up to the tree he was trying to walk up earlier. He placed one foot on the trunk and slowly began making his way up the tree.
“Heh, treewalking. Piece of pie, I can’t believe Sasuke can’t even do this.” He kept walking steadily up the tree with no problem. When he finally reached the top, he took out a kunai, and after twirling it with his fingers made a slash on the very top branch. Naruto then hopped back down to the ground.
“Now for some real training!” he exclaimed. He formed his hands together into the ram seal and began focusing his chakra. A massive blue burst of energy erupted from him. It swirled around him, flowing freely. “Ok then, time practice molding that demon chakra!” The blonde shinobi began concentrating harder, and more of his own blue chakra began flooding from him. “Raaaaaagh!” he began yelling. Soon a red spark surrounded him, and before he knew it a mountain of red chakra was rapidly swirling around him. Naruto felt his fingernails and canines lengthen and grow. He grinded his teeth, trying fiercely to focus on compressing the rabid chakra. “Must maintain it!” he shouted aloud, his body already shaking from the strain of the red chakra.
The Kyubi chakra swirled intensely around the blonde ninja. The ground around him was rupturing and cracking apart. The skin on Naruto’s arm suddenly ripped making a large gash run down from his elbow to his hand, blood freely flowing from it. The same thing happened on his other arm, and he could feel blood dripping down from his chest and the rest of his body. The chakra was taking its toll on Naruto, and with one last yell, his eyelids closed and he fell to the ground, unconscious.
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The light trickled through the canopy, making shadows run along the blonde shinobi’s face. His arms were sprawled out on the grass, his injuries from the previous day already healed. Birds hopped and pecked around the unconscious ninja. Naruto’s eyelids slightly opened, not used to the glare of the sun after being closed for so long. He could suddenly feel somebody shaking him.
“You’re going to catch a cold if you sleep there,” the mysterious person said.
Naruto sat up all rubbed his eyes. “Who are you?” he asked in a weary voice. The girl with long black hair wearing a strange outfit smiled back at him. “Did you wake me up? By the way, what are you doing?”
“Picking herbs,” the person answered.
“Herbs?” Naruto questioned.
“That’s right. It’s to cure injuries and illness.”
For a few minutes Naruto helped this mysterious person pick herbs. “Doing a tedious job like this in the morning?” he questioned.
“What are you doing here so early in the day?”
Naruto decided to keep up his act for a while longer with this person. He smiled, and confidently said “Training!”
“Are you a ninja or something? That forehead protector…”
“Do I look like one?! Yes, I’m a ninja!” he exclaimed.
“Wow, you’re amazing. But were you training?” the newcomer asked again in a monotone voice.
“I need to become stronger!”
“For what reason?”
“To become the number one ninja in my village. I’m going to make everyone recognize my powers,” Naruto lied.
“Are you doing that for someone else, or for yourself?” the black-haired girl asked.
“Huh?”
“Do you have someone that is important to you?”
“Important? What are you trying to get at?” Naruto questioned. The black-haired person got a distant look in her eyes, filled with something Naruto recognized. It was a different pain from his, but the pain of being alone was still in there. He was going to drop his act now.
“Actually no, I have nobody important in my life,” Naruto said. The girl across from him looked up a little startled at his change of tone; it was no longer cheery and enthusiastic.
“A person is able to become truly strong when they protect someone they cherish,” the person replied.
“Well then, I hope I eventually find somebody to cherish,” Naruto replied harshly. There was a brief moment of silence. “You, you’re that person that made us believe Zabuza was dead aren’t you?” he questioned.
The black-haired person looked up startled. “What?” she exclaimed. “How do you know?”
“Gut feeling,” Naruto replied. “You’re eyes… are familiar. What’s your name?”
“Haku,” Haku replied, looking back down at the ground, trying to hide the pain in her eyes.
“I’m Naruto.” He paused for a short period of time. “So Zabuza is your precious person? And those herbs are for him, huh?”
“Yes,” Haku replied, not sure what to do about Naruto, killing him was something Haku really didn’t want to do.
“Can you take me to Zabuza then?” Naruto asked.
“What!?” Haku exclaimed, not expecting this in the least.
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The staying place of the two mist nin was quite well hidden in the thickest part of the forest. Not to mention it was surrounded by a thick fog. The inside of the layer was quite dull and had an atmosphere Naruto didn’t even like.
“Momochi Zabuza is in this room,” Haku said, and pushed the large door open. It creaked as it swung aside. “Zabuza-san.” Haku called out.
“What is it, Haku?” the former demon of the mist replied, currently lying down on his bed with his arms crossed behind his head.
“A certain person wants to see you,” Haku stated, unsure how this situation would turn out. And at that moment, the blonde ninja walked through the door.
“You, you’re that kid that was on Kakashi’s team,” Zabuza said, picking up the kunai next to him and twirling it between his fingers.
“Hello Zabuza-san,” Naruto greeted, giving a slight bow. He really didn’t feel like getting killed off, so being a bit more polite than normal would probably help.
“Why are you here, kid? Haku, mind explaining what you’re doing?” Zabuza asked.
“Well, I’m still not completely sure why I’m here Zabuza-san. I just felt like I should come here,” Naruto answered.
“Well, you are not leaving. Haku, please terminate this pest,” Zabuza ordered.
“Zabuza, you seem a bit lost. And you’re eyes… cover up your pain don’t they?” Naruto questioned.
“You have guts kid, coming here, and then asking questions as pathetic as these,” Zabuza smirked. Haku stood there and watched the situation. This Naruto kid was putting his life on the line, and it seemed he didn’t even have a reason for it.
“Well, me living my life the way I did, I can usually see barriers people put up to bottle up their misery,” Naruto replied. “You’re eyes are full of it Zabuza-san.”
The sword-wielding nin crossed his hands, and smirked. “Haku, please go use those herbs to make medicine,” the bandaged man ordered after a brief moment of silence.
“Yes, Zabuza-san,” Haku replied, and walked out of the room. The marble floor echoed the retreating footsteps.
“You most likely see the pain in my eyes too, don’t you Zabuza-san? Just like you saw the pain in Haku’s eyes when you took her in,” Naruto stated.
“You’re analyzing skills are quite superb, you’re getting the right answers on things you have no clue on,” the demon of the mist replied.
“You can smile, you can laugh, you can cry, but all those things can easily be fake. A person’s eyes can’t lie. No matter how thick your mask or cover-up, a person’s eyes still reflect the life they lived,” the blonde ninja said, still not loosing his eye contact with Zabuza.
“But one thing you should know, Haku is a boy,” Zabuza said.
This caught Naruto off guard. “Well… that’s kind of awkward.” Naruto scratched the back of his head. “He has superb cross-dressing skills,” the Kyubi container joked, finally breaking eye contact with the mist nin.
“The reason I took Haku in…” Zabuza began. Naruto looked up, focusing his attention back on the mist ninja. “Is in fact because of how miserable he looked. It was after that that I discovered he had a bloodline and could be of huge use to me. The look in his eyes was so severe he was on the edge of having no emotions at all. It looked like he would give up on life at any second. In fact, it seemed like he was waiting for the snow to bury him and take away his life when I found him at that bridge.” Zabuza took a brief pause and looked down at the ground. “At the time I thought I had gotten rid of all my emotions. But it seems I still had a heart.”
“Life, it can be a bitch can’t it?” Naruto said, having a slight compassionate smile on his face.
“That’s one way of putting it.” Zabuza lied back down on the bed. “I guess you can relate to us more than I thought, brat.” Naruto remained silent.
“I used to be called the demon child of the mist long ago,” Zabuza began. “From what I’ve heard, my father was mad. When I was a small child, he killed off a member of the council of the mist village. Then he went on and killed civilians for no apparent reason, and when other ninja tried to stop him, he ended their lives as well. He caused a massacre in the village; the streets were overflowing with blood that day. When they cornered him he tried using my mother as a hostage, but killed her off as well. Then he was captured and publicly executed. He was then referred to as the demon of the mist.
Since I was his son I was naturally called the demon child of the mist. I grew up alone, and barely managed to survive. When I walked by, people walked the other way. Nobody wanted to be near me. Beating me to the verge of death was a hobby for many shinobi of the village. How I managed to survive I still don’t know. I entered the ninja academy, but nothing changed. I sat alone on one side of the room, with everybody avoiding me, the teacher tried to pretend I didn’t exist. I kept all that pain and suffering hidden away, I didn’t want to break down like a weakling. After class, my classmates beat me, on the way home shinobi of the mist beat me. My house was just a small shack, but most of the time it was sabotaged.
You’ve already heard of that graduation exercise of the mist, where best friends are made to kill one another. On that day I couldn’t take it, and I snapped. All the pain I kept hidden away escaped and took over. It turned into wrath, and as soon as that graduation exercise began, I killed all the academy students. I laughed when their blood splattered on my face, I wanted to rip their arms off, to cut them into pieces. I found each and every academy student, I hunted them down, and I killed them all. I was laughing the whole time, I wanted that blood to soak my skin. It was the happiest day of my life. Technically, the point of the exam was to kill each other, so I wasn’t executed for doing such an act. But that day I became the demon of the mist. My father’s legacy became my own.
From then on I lived at the edge of the village in complete solitude, training every second of the day. The village council now knowing of my skill soon assigned me to be an assassin, and for the years to come I worked as a killer for them. And one day I felt I was strong enough, and I tried to assassinate the Mizukage. However I failed, and had to flee from the village before I was caught. On my way out I came across Haku. I left telling him we would return to the village, but we would have control over it when that happened.”
Naruto bit his lip and looked down at the ground, his fists clenched. “Heh, and I thought I had a bad life. Humans can hate for the stupidest reasons can’t they?”
“I don’t think Haku and I will be around for much longer…” the sword-wielding nin stated.
Naruto’s head jerked up, the surprise evidently showing in his eyes. “What!?”
“For the past few years, we tried to gather forces and to earn money so one day we could take over the village of the hidden mist. Hunter nin were constantly on our tail, and when it seemed things were finally going our way there was a setback.
Brat, you said I seemed lost, well I am. Only a little while ago had I realized that this really was a lost cause. Our goal will never be accomplished, and our lives will never get better. I think fate has it set for us, we won’t be part of this world much longer,” Zabuza explained.
“You’re giving up?” the blonde ninja asked.
“One way of putting it. Maybe in the afterlife Haku and I can finally be at peace. In two days your team will fight against us, and most likely that’s when Gatoh will try to exterminate all of us. I’ll kill the bastard before I leave this world, at least then this country will have a chance to survive.”
“You still have a heart after all, Zabuza-san.”
“Emotions are a lot harder to get rid of than it seems, kid,” Zabuza stated. He sat up and opened the drawer next to his bed. He rummaged through materials inside it until he pulled out three scrolls that seemed quite old. He tossed them to Naruto who caught them and examined them. “Some jutsus from the mist village, from the looks of it you instructor wont teach you anything useful anytime soon.”
“Thanks, Zabuza-san.” The Kyubi container put the scrolls into his pockets.
“Now leave this place, or else I might actually kill you.”
Naruto turned away from the demon of the mist and began walking to the door.
“One last thing,” Zabuza began.
“Hm?” Naruto looked back.
“Take my sword, Kubikiri Houcho, and use it as your own. I don’t want it to rust away at my grave, I made that sword after all. One of those scrolls is a sealing scroll, and you can keep Kubikiri hidden in there so no suspicions arise.”
Naruto smiled a true smile. “I’ll take good care of it. We… we are much more similar than we seem, aren’t we?”
“I trust you know you shouldn’t tell your team anything about this, for both our sakes,” the demon of the mist said.
“Don’t worry, I’m not THAT stupid,” Naruto replied, and walked out the door.
Zabuza lied on his bed, looking at the dull grey ceiling. He shut his eyes and smiled. “His eyes really are similar to mine,” he muttered to himself.
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Naruto leaned over Sasuke’s motionless body, checking his pulse. There wasn’t one. Many needles adorned the Uchiha’s body, blood trickling from the places they punctured his skin.
Naruto looked up at the frozen mirrors in front of him that reflected a masked person with needles in his hand. “Haku, did you actually kill him?” the blonde ninja asked.
“No, I struck the certain parts of his body that makes him appear dead, same as I did with Zabuza that one time,” the masked boy replied, stepping out of the ice mirror and approaching Naruto. The Kyubi container grasped the needle in his shoulder and pulled it out. He winced at the pain. He proceeded to do that to the rest of the needles that covered his body.
“Sorry about that,” Haku apologized.
“Its fine,” Naruto replied, pulling out the last needle stuck in his body. “Kakashi might suspect something if Sasuke got beat and I didn’t, so just in case…” He formed the ram seal and began focusing his chakra. A colossal amount of blood red chakra escaped from Naruto swirling madly in circles like a rabid beast. Naruto kept the chakra churning around him until his body began shaking from the pressure. He then stopped gathering the chakra and it soon vanished. Haku stood there watching the boy, awed at the drastic chakra that he just molded.
“So… that’s the reason you were hated your entire life?” Haku questioned.
“Bingo,” the blonde answered. There was a brief pause between the two. The mist cascaded across the bridge, and Haku’s ice mirrors melted back into water.
“Zabuza-san and I won’t live until tomorrow, isn’t that right, Naruto?” Haku asked.
“How did you find out?” the Kyubi container replied.
“I also had a gut feeling about it,” Haku looked down at the ground, his eyes swirling in a pool of sadness. “I remember how happy he was when he took me in, he saved me, I owe him my entire life.” A lone tear trickled down Haku’s cheek. “I regret nothing that happened during all the years I was by his side.”
“Haku… it might not happen that way. Even if it is fate, fate can be changed,” Naruto argued.
“Even if we live, life will only get harder and harder. There is no future…” the black-haired boy said in a low voice.
Naruto clenched his fists. ‘This isn’t fair. These two… They can’t just die like this!’ the blonde ninja thought.
“Naruto, I hope you find your precious person,” Haku smiled at the blonde boy.
“Haku…”
“Zabuza-san!” Haku exclaimed. In a poof of smoke the boy was gone.
“Haku!?” Naruto yelled out, surprised at the sudden disappearance. “Shit!”
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The rabid sound of chirping birds echoed throughout the bridge, disrupting the eerie silence the mist created. Kakashi hand was surrounded by a massive amount of chakra that resembled blue electricity. The Jounin thrust his hand forward and a shockwave from the impact could be felt from the other side of the bridge. Blood splattered into the air, landing on Kakashi’s and Zabuza’s face, and a torrent of the red liquid gushed down onto the ground.
Needles pierced the scroll used to summon the dogs, and in turn the canines attached to Zabuza’s arms and torso disappeared. Between Zabuza and Kakashi stood Haku, his outfit completely soaked in blood. Kakashi’s arm penetrated Haku’s body and went all the way through it. Haku’s eyes were wide open, but no remains of life reflected in them. He was smiling, happy that he could protect his precious person.
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“What just happened?” Naruto asked aloud. He looked around himself franticly. “The fog, it’s clearing.” The blonde ninja peered through the fog; he could make out a few shapes in the mist. The Kyubi container ran forward, but stopped dead in his tracks as he saw what the shapes were.
His sensei’s arm was gouged through Haku’s body, blood still gushing down onto the ground below. “What the hell is the meaning of this?” he asked aloud.
The blonde ninja watched Zabuza pull his sword, and began swinging it at both Kaakshi and Haku. “Kakashi will dodge it…” Naruto said aloud, knowing that the demon of the mist would never do something like that to Haku. ‘Damn it, Zabuza was right after all about the outcome of today… It’s not fair!’ Naruto clenched his fists, and grinded his teeth.
“Naruto, you’re okay!” a familiar voice called out. He looked up, and saw the pink-haired girl waving to him. “Where’s Sasuke-kun!?”
Naruto cringed. ‘Is all that fucking bitch cares about Sasuke? Can’t she see the fucking situation here!?’ he screamed in his mind. He felt himself shake, the pain and anger of everything that was happening overwhelming him.
“Naruto, where’s Sasuke-kun?” Sakura asked again. Naruto tried to refrain from yelling at the girl, his fists clenched. He bit his lip and felt it draw blood. Sakura obviously misunderstood Naruto’s expression and looked like she was going to break down right there.
“Kakashi! You don’t have time to look away!” Zabuza yelled out and charged at the masked ninja. Kakashi kicked Zabuza back and lunged toward him.
Sakura began running to where Sasuke was, Tazuna following her. She ran past Naruto not giving him a second glance. ‘I hope she has a heart attack over Sasuke. Besides, he isn’t dead anyway,’ Naruto thought to himself.
Kakashi and Zabuza kept fighting, the sword-wielding mist nin doing a lot worse then he did before. Soon his sword was knocked aside and skid to the edge of the bridge. Kakashi managed to get kunai pierce both of Zabuza’s shoulder, and at this point the demon of the mist couldn’t even use his arms.
Naruto watched the two ninjas clash. Zabuza was fighting a lot worse from before, even though it didn’t look like it, Haku’s death must have been taking its toll on him.
“Now you can’t use your arms, you can’t form seals anymore,” Kakashi stated. Loud footsteps could be heard from the other side of the bridge. Kakashi looked at the direction they came from. Naruto turned his head to see who was coming.
“Looks like you got beaten pretty badly,” a short man leaning on a cane said. He was wearing an expensive looking black suit along with a red tie, and had dark round glasses. Zabuza looked in the direction of the voice, recognizing it immediately. “I’m disappointed Zabuza,” the man continued. Behind him was an immensely large group of people, all carrying swords, maces, knifes, spears, and other different types of weapons.
“Gatoh, why are you here? And what’s with those subordinates?” The mist nin questioned.
“We had a little change in plans,” Gatoh laughed. “I’m sorry Zabuza, but you’re going to die here,” he smirked.
“What?’ Zabuza pretended to act surprised.
“If I rent official ninja, it would cost a lot of money. So, I rented an exiled ninja like you,” Gatoh began. “If you ninja just killed each other it would have saved me a lot of trouble and money. And you call yourself the demon of the village of the hidden mist? You’re just a cute devil if you ask me,” the short man teased, and the army of men behind him laughed.
‘Who are they? There are so many of them,’ Naruto thought.
“Kakashi, I’m sorry but the battle ends here. Since I no longer have a reason to kill Tazuna, I have lost the reason to fight you,” Zabuza stated.
“Yeah, you’re right,” the masked ninja replied.
Gatoh walked forward until he was right beside the dead body of Haku. “Oh yes, I owe this guy a favor. For gripping my hand until it broke!” Gatoh kicked the dead corpse with all his might. Naruto’s eyes widened as he registered just what happened. “He’s already dead,” Gatoh said.
“BASTARD! What the hell are you doing!?” Naruto shouted, rage overwhelming his entire body. He lunged forward and charged at the short man.
“Stop. Don’t move so carelessly,” Kakashi said as he grabbed Naruto and prevented him from moving.
“Why don’t you say something too!? He was on your side, right!?” Naruto yelled at Zabuza.
“Shut up, kid. He’s already dead,” Zabuza replied.
‘He wants to make this situation realistic…’ Naruto thought sadly. “You really don’t feel anything about what he did? You were with him a long time, right!?” the blonde ninja shouted.
“Like how Gatoh used me, I was just using Haku. I said this before. We ninja are just tools. I wanted his abilities, not him. I have no regrets,” the demon of the mist lied.
Naruto clenched his fists. “Do you really mean that?”
Kakashi placed is hand on Naruto’s shoulder. “Stop it Naruto, we don’t have to fight him anymore. Besides-”
“Shut up!” Naruto interrupted and knocked Kakashi’s hand away. “He’s still my enemy!” The Kyubi container panted. “He… He really liked you! He really, really liked you!” Naruto shouted, pointing at Haku. “And you really don’t think anything of him!?” Naruto let the tears fall from his eyes, and they ran down his face. These tears weren’t part of the act; they were his actual feelings for the situation at hand. “Do you really… really not think anything of him!?” When a person becomes as strong as you, do they start to think like that…?” Naruto sobbed. “He sacrificed his life for you! He couldn’t even see his own dream… Dieing as a tool… is just… just… too painful…” By this time the tears flowed freely down his face and dripped to the ground. ‘Haku… Zabuza… I’m sorry it had to end like this for you…’ he thought.
“Kid…” Zabuza began. Naruto looked up. “Don’t say anymore…” The tears cascaded down the bandaged face of the mist nin. He finally let his emotions out, and the river of tears dropped to the ground. “Haku, not only did he hurt his heart to fight for me, but he also hurt his heart for you. I know. He was too kind. I’m glad we were able to fight you as our final opponents.” ‘You were glad that you met me before you guys died…’ Naruto thought, understanding the message in Zabuza’s words.
The demon of the mist bit off his own bandages and let them dangle downwards until his face was revealed. Tears were still streaming down his face, and cascading to the ground. “Yes kid, it was just like you said. Ninja are human too. They might not be able to become a tool without emotions. I lose.” Then Zabuza’s tone changed. “Kid, give me your kunai.”
Naruto shut his eyes. ‘Goodbye, Zabuza.’ He reached into his weapon pouch and pulled out a kunai knife and tossed it to Zabuza. It twirled through the air and the demon of the mist caught it by the handle with his teeth. Insatantly he lurched forward with intense speed, startling Gatoh who stood in front of him.
“Hey kill them!” Gatoh yelled at his miniature army and ran behind them to take cover.
“Idiot, do you think you can beat so many of us on our own?” one man with a large sword yelled at Zabuza, but at that moment Zabuza dashed past him, slicing his waist with the kunai in his mouth as he went.
As he ran through the crowd he madly sliced at their vital points, blood splashing into the air as he passed them. He dodged the weapons being swung at him and kept slaying more men that got in his way like a rabid animal. One person managed to shove a spear into his back, but the mist nin kept going, slicing and slashing the necks of the people. More swords got gouged into his spine and torso, and the crimson liquid poured down his back like a waterfall.
He finally burst through the large crowd of people and zoomed toward Gatoh. The demon of the mist was living up to his name, a huge evil chakra was surrounding his body and you could almost see it shape into a demon. Gatoh let out a scream as Zabuza dug the kunai into his chest, blood flowing freely from the wound.
Gatoh backed up, clutching his wound in pain. “If you want to go where your friend is that badly, go by yourself!” Gatoh shouted.
Zabuza looked up at Gatoh with a purely evil look in his eye. “Unfortunately, I don’t intend to go to the same place as Haku. You’re going to hell with me!” The demon of the mist swung his head, the kunai piercing Gatoh’s neck and shredding away at his flesh. His head flew off from his body and rolled down the bridge leaving a bloody trail behind.
Zabuza turned around, the pure killing intent radiating from him made all the hired men of Gatoh make a path for Zabuza to get through. The mist nin began limping forward, and the bloody kunai dropped from his mouth, making a shrill clanging sound against the ground.
Zabuza walked onward, his vision blurry, but he could still make out the shape of his dead subordinate lying on the ground. “Haku…” he wheezed, “It’s time to say goodbye Haku… Thank you for everything. I’m sorry,” and with those last words the demon of the mist fell to the ground.
Naruto cringed and looked away. ‘Goodbye Zabuza…. Goodbye Haky….’
“Don’t look away,” Kakashi ordered, “It’s the end of a man who lived desperately.”
Naruto focused his gaze back on the body of Zabuza. ‘I won’t look away for a different reason.’ He thought.
“Naruto! Sasuke-kun is okay! He’s alive!” Sakura shouted to the blonde ninja.
Naruto turned around and saw Sasuke slowly stand up. It was difficult, but he tried to put on a happy face. ‘Of course he’s alive,’ he thought.
“I see, so Sasuke is safe too. I’m glad,” Kakashi said, looking back at the Uchiha.
A loud clinging caught the attention of the ninja. “Hey, hey! You guys are feeling too safe!” a man from the group of thugs Gatoh hired called out.
“Damn ninja! You killed our source of revenue!” another shouted.
“Now we have to attack the town and steal all the valuables,” another said, and the whole group of armed men yelled in agreement.
“This isn’t good,” the masked ninja stated. At that moment the group of thugs charged.
“Kakashi-sensei, don’t you have some jutsu that can beat them all at once?” Naruto asked urgently.
“No, I’ve sued up too much chakra,” he replied.
At that moment an arrow struck the ground in front of the charging men and they abruptly stopped. Inari had gathered all the people of the village and they had all came here to defend what was theirs.
“Alright I’m going to help too!” Naruto exclaimed, and created four kage bunshin. ‘I could create a lot more but then it would be too suspicious,’ the blonde ninja thought.
Then Kakashi created nearly one hundred normal bunshin, but since the hired thugs didn’t know the difference it didn’t matter.
And with this all the hired men of Gatoh dropped their weapons and ran back to the ship, which soon bean sailing away.
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Kakashi made his way over to Zabuza, and Naruto closely followed. The mist nin was at the verge of death, and had lost a ton of blood.
“Looks like it’s over,” Zabuza hoarsely said.
“Yeah,” Kakashi replied.
“Kakashi, I have a favor to ask.”
“What is it?”
“I… I want to see his face.”
Kakashi covered his Sharingan eye with his headband. “Sure.” He picked up Zabuza, and began carrying him down the bridge. Naruto felt something cold land on his face. He looked up and saw snowflakes steadily make their way down to the ground.
‘Haku, are you crying?’ both Naruto and Zabuza thought.
Kakashi gently put Zabuza down right next to Haku, the snow by now was already settling on the ground. “Thanks, Kakashi,” Zabuza said with a weak voice. The masked nin then walked back to his team.
“We’ve been together all this time… So I’ll die next to you,” Zabuza said to Haku. He mustered all the strength he could and placed his hand on Haku’s cheek. “If possible… I want to go to the same place you’re going to…”
He snow fell and covered the ground like a thin blanket. The clouds opened up and the sunshine danced on the two figures. A lone tear escaped Haku’s eye, and made it way down onto Zabuza’s hand, and from there it trickled to the ground. The two died together.
Naruto couldn’t help the river of tears that raced down his face. “I will never forget you Zabuza…. Haku… Thank you…” the blonde said, loud enough for only them to hear.
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Naruto looked at the two graves upon the hilltop, the setting sun shining down on them. The sky was a vivid orange color, with the clouds tinted purple. Zabuza’s sword, Kubikiri Houcho, was shoved into the ground between the two graves. It reflected the sun, and let off a bright gleam.
“I was wondering Kakashi-sensei…. Does a ninja really have to be the way they said a ninja should be?” Sakura asked.
“Shinobi are not supposed to seek their reason to exist,” Kakashi answered. “It is important that they exist as a tool. That idea exists in Konoha too.”
“Is that what being a ninja really means? I… kinda don’t like that,” Naruto stated. He looked down at the two graves in front of him. “All right!” he exclaimed, “I’ve decided I’m going to follow my own “way of the ninja”! I’ll run down the path where I won’t regret anything!”
In a few minutes Team 7 began making its way down the hill, back to the home of Tazuna. Naruto, however, remained standing in front of the graves, looking up at the setting sun.
“Are you coming, Naruto?” Kakashi asked.
“You, guys go on head, I’ll follow in a few minutes,” the Kyubi container replied. His team proceeded to walk away, leaving Naruto to stand there alone.
“My way of the ninja is to live to make you proud, Haku… Zabuza…” the blonde boy said to the two graves. He firmly clasped the handle of the large sword, and with one pull plucked it out of the ground. Holding the Kubikiri Houcho gave him a sense of strength, and the feeling that Haku and Zabuza were with him. It felt right in his hands, it belonged to him. “I understand, by giving me your sword, you gave me yours and Haku’s will, your strength, your hopes…” The sword glistened in the sun, and Naruto saw his own reflection on the surface of the blade. He smiled. “I will make you proud!”
The blonde shinobi took out the scroll Zabuza gave to him and opened it. He bit his thumb, and smeared the blood onto the paper. He touched the scroll to the blade, and with a large puff of smoke, the head cleaving sword was gone, successfully put into the scroll for storage. Naruto tucked the scroll away into his jacket, and ran down to catch up with his team.
FLASHBACK END
Naruto halted his reminiscing session, and smiled at the sky above him. “Well… I guess it’s time to do some training,” the blonde boy said to himself. He jumped down from the tree and proceeded to walk to the nearest training area. He didn’t know what destiny had in store for him, but he would confront those challenges head on.
OK COMMENT! XD! and heres the story on fanfiction.net: (its really the same just without some of the cuss words edited cause the forum does this automaticly) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2974764/1/
Canthinkofaname
06-05-2006, 05:33 PM
good and very long too, id have to check but do you think you rite as much as this guy temjixzaron or something like that? he rites alot but so do you
VERY GOOD :D *thumbs up*
i like naruto's personality you gave him
this is a great story!!!
KageNaruto
06-06-2006, 12:20 AM
thanks for the comment guys, and canthinkofaname this first chap is about 6700 words long (when you put it on ff.net it shows you how many words there are)
slight spoiler about this story but eh watever.... theres a lot of fics (that are usually a bit crappy) when kyubi acts like naruto is his friend and fuses with him or teaches stuff him like they love each other or something. well kyubi will help naruto out in certain ways in this fic....... but it will have some certain requirements... meheheheheheheheh
Canthinkofaname
06-06-2006, 12:23 AM
yeah i know
i copy and pasted it on microsoft word and used word count and it was like 6700-something
KageNaruto
06-06-2006, 12:55 AM
You what? You better not steal my fic and call it your own! or else life will be hell for you!!!!!! :evil:
(jk) whyd you do it anyway just to see the word count?
yea why didnt you just count it one by one?
jk
i wouldn't worry about word count, canthinkofaname.
i mean if you see a book with a llong chap
tell me when your finished counting all the words of that chapter :)
Hellchild915
06-06-2006, 01:05 AM
very good and I like the long ones
KageNaruto
06-06-2006, 01:07 AM
lolz, thanks for the comments.
i just cant keep my mouth shut so heres spoilers on.... deaths in the first 5 or 6 or so chaps!!!!
in white: (dont read if you dont want it ruined for you... bwahahahahah)
the people who'll die in the first few chaps are.... sasuke, kakashi, lee, sakura, and im trying to decide if it should be hinata or not
Canthinkofaname
06-06-2006, 01:23 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HH
*screems like a little girl*
Darknesswithin
06-13-2006, 01:38 AM
I liked ur story, but why do u hate Sasuke? Well, Sakura, yeah I can understand cuz I hate her lol. Oh well I guess not everyone likes Sasuke...I do. Anyway, good job on ur fic! :D . Btw what do u mean by the 5 or 6 chaps die in white? ( I didn't find it ).
Canthinkofaname
06-13-2006, 01:48 AM
dude, he means in his first 5 or 6 chapters he writes, those people writtin in the white text will die. hes only on chapter 2 so wait. if you can read the white, you highlight it
Darknesswithin
06-14-2006, 04:35 PM
Oh ok srry dude calm down
KageNaruto
06-14-2006, 05:51 PM
actually im still on chapter 1, the next chapter i put on here, which im hoping to be by tomorow or at least by friday, will be chapter 2.
about the death spoiler:
i already know how every person will die, almost got the details out on everything, hinata will stay alive though, not cause i like her or anything (yeah if you know im also a hinata hater)
man i work on a chap for 1 day....
maybe 4 hours at the most
adeadaxe2
06-15-2006, 05:09 AM
lol, i like the darker side to naruto
dude your update was supposed to be due last week (lol i sound like a teacher)
KageNaruto
06-29-2006, 06:08 AM
heh sorry everybodies! i got monster hunter freedom for PSP, i was kinda playing it nonstop, as well as a few other video games, adn I was going to the beach... Anyway you get the point, I WAS HAVING FUN ENJOYING LIFE OK!?
anyway im almost done with chap 2, if I actually DeCIDE to write it should be finished tomorow. But i just feel like I'll post part 1 of chap 2 now.
IMPORTANT ALERT: ANY COMMENTS OR FEEDBACK PLZ TELL ME! IF YOU SEE ANY SPELLING/GRAMMER MISTAKES IN THE FIC ALSO TELL ME!
ok then...
CHAPTER 2, PART 1
The creek ran through the meadow, afterward spiraling back into the lush green forest. The area was peaceful, the only sound being that of the running water and the chirping birds that rustled in the trees. Serenity filled the area, and tranquility mixed into the gentle breeze.
The foliage rustled as the blonde shinobi stepped into the clearing. He smiled, this really was his favorite training ground. The surroundings made him forget about his problems, his life, everything. It just made him feel at peace with himself. If Naruto didn’t meditate here every once in a while, he didn’t know how he would keep up his act. The Kyubi container walked into the middle of the meadow.
“I’ll start off with some stretching and then some conditioning,” Naruto said to himself. He bent forward and touched his palms to the ground and held that position. He then proceeded to stretch to both of his sides, and afterward went into the splits position. He stretched forward from the splits, and did a few other stretches. The Kyubi container then began to do three hundred jumping jacks.
Naruto put his hands together to form his favorite hand seal and shouted out, “Kage bunshin no jutsu!” Another orange-clad Naruto poofed into existence. The original Naruto lied down on the grass, and the shadow clone held his feet. Naruto began to do sit-ups, and kept doing them until he reached three hundred.
The blonde shinobi then sat up, and pulled out a scroll. He rolled the scroll open, and touched his palm to it. With a puff of smoke many needles now laid across the parchment. Naruto scooped the needles into his hand and began plucking them into the ground. The shadow clone was doing the same thing a small distance away from where the original Naruto.
After all the needles were shoved into the soil the blonde shinobi began to take off his shoes. He put his sandals aside, and then got on top of the needles in a push-up position. The kage bunshin then got on top of Naruto’s back and sat there. “One,” Naruto said allowed as he preformed a push-up on top of the senbon needles. “Two.” He made sure he went low enough for his chin to touch the needles. “Three. Four. Five.” This exercise built Naruto’s arm strength from performing the push-ups with the added weight of the kage bunshin, and also helped him on his chakra control ability. Since his feet and hands were on the needles, in order for the senbons to not puncture his skin he had to exert chakra and focus it on the points of the needles. This act required the chakra to be gathered and compressed at the tiny end of the needle at an even rate on every single senbon. The feat needed just a small amount more chakra control than water walking.
“One hundred ninety-eight.” Naruto felt a trickle of sweat race down his face. His elbows were shaking and ready to buckle, and he was having a hard time keeping his chakra under control. He bent his arms and went down into another push-up. “One hundred ninety-nine.”
“C’mon, you’re almost there!” the kage bunshin on the Kyubi container’s back encouraged him.
“Two hundred!” Naruto exclaimed. The shadow clone poofed out of existence, and Naruto rolled off the needles onto the soft grass. He panted heavily, but soon regained his breath. After a few minutes he got back on his knees and put all the senbon needles back into the scroll they came from. He tucked that scroll into his bright orange jacket and pulled out another scroll. The blonde shinobi took out a kunai from his weapon pouch and made small gash in his thumb. He rolled this scroll open and smeared a small amount of his blood onto the paper. With a large puff of smoke, the sword which was Kubikiri Houcho now lay in front of him.
Naruto had made it so the scroll could only be opened with his blood just in case somebody else got their hands on it. He clasped the handle of the oversized blade and heaved it into the air. Due to its massive size he was still unable to wield it flawlessly. To even use the sword properly the blonde shinobi had to focus and concentrate chakra to his hands, thus maximizing his strength, or else the sheer size of the Kubikiri Houcho would get the best of him. The head cleaving sword was much taller than him after all.
Naruto held the sword up into the air and began practicing his katas. He vertically swung the sword downward, and stopped it right before he hit the ground. He then lifted the blade back up and swung it downward again. The blonde ninja continued to do this for a few more minutes. He then began horizontally slashing the sword, from his left side to his right. After practicing that, he began swinging it from his right to his left, making sure it covered a 180 degree area of space. After finishing that exercise, Naruto began doing an uppercut slash, however due to the massive size of the cleaver he had trouble controlling the sword once it reached its peak. It would always go over the Kyubi container’s head and he didn’t have enough strength to stop it, thus making there be delay time if the blonde ninja wanted to continue the attack. If he tried to perform this attack in a real fight he would leave himself wide open. Naruto kept practicing the upward slash, but didn’t get any better results.
“Damn, still can’t get it right,” he swore to himself, “I’ll just move on for now.” The blonde ninja preformed a horizontal slash followed by a spinning slash where the sword spun a complete 360 degrees, and afterward proceeded to do a forward thrust with the large blade. He practiced this combination of attacks for a few minutes longer until he finally felt like he got it down. He then began swinging the sword around his body at a very fast pace, similar to the attack Zabuza did when he threw all the clones Naruto made off of him. The blonde ninja wasn’t at that level to perform the skill properly yet, but he was slowly reaching it. His slashing speed was still too slow and his movements lacked finesse and accuracy.
“And now time for the jumping attacks.” Naruto leaped into the air and preformed a horizontal spinning slash, and landed back on the ground. The trick was to use the heavy weight of the sword as the momentum for the spin. The blonde shinobi then attempted a double spin and successfully completed it. As soon as he landed he swung the sword around his body for a diagonal slash and then followed it up with another thrust. The Kyubi container practiced this kata for a while, making sure that as soon as he landed after completing the spinning slash he could move into his next attack without delay.
Naruto sat down on the ground and put down his sword. He was out of breath from performing all those katas, and the sword being as large as it was, needed an enormous amount of energy to wield. After a minute of rest the blonde shinobi stood up and formed the required hand seal for the shadow clone technique. After the large explosion of smoke cleared, thirty copies of Naruto were scattered across the meadow. The kage bunshin didn’t have a sword like the original Naruto, however. The blonde shinobi picked up the Kubikiri Houcho and settled into his fighting stance. “Let’s go!” the Kyubi container shouted out, and with a simultaneous yell the shadow clones began charging at him.
The first clone charged in and attempted a jumping side kick at Naruto. The blonde ninja sidestepped the attack and whacked the clone in the chest with the hilt of his sword. The kage bunshin fell to the ground and disappeared in a plume of smoke. Next, two clones charged in at once, and Naruto greeted them with a horizontal slash. The kage bunshin leaped over the sword and sailed into the air. They then plummeted back down to the ground ready to kick the Kyubi container. Naruto lifted his sword above his head and used it as a shield as the clones plummeted down and kicked the blade instead of him. The two clones jumped backward, but Naruto gathered a large concentration of chakra to his feet, and lunged toward them at a tremendous speed. He thrust the head chopping cleaver into one of the clones, erasing it from existence. The other clone saw this as an opportunity to attack and moved in with a punch. Before the punch could connect, the blonde shinobi threw out a side kick that connected with the clones gut, sending the kage bunshin flying backward and then disappearing.
“All right, surround him!” one of the remaining clones yelled out, and the rest of them followed, surrounding Naruto from all sides. “Charge!” All the clones that circled Naruto ran in, getting ready to assail. Right before they reached him, Naruto spun the Kubikiri Houcho entirely around him, eliminating all the clones that didn’t duck in time. The kage bunshin that dodged the onslaught leaped at Naruto, knowing he couldn’t hit them with the sword due to the delay time of the spin.
‘Shit!’ Naruto thought. He let go of the handle of the sword, letting it drop to the ground behind him, and proceeded to parry the punch of the first incoming bunshin. He grabbed on to the arm of the second clone, grappling him into another clone which made both of them disappear. Another clone came in with an axe kick and Naruto put his hands up just in time to guard himself, however this left him open for an attack. The two other kage bunshin took this opportunity and kicked Naruto in the side, sending him flying backward. As the Kyubi container zoomed through the air he outstretched his arm towards the ground and managed to grasp the handle of his oversized sword. He then flipped his body upright and landed on the soil, slightly skidding backward from the speed at which he was sent flying.
The blonde shinobi held the sword up in front of him, tightly gripping the handle of the head chopping cleaver. “Now I’m going on the offensive!” he shouted, and lunged at the shadow clones, ready to strike the first one that came into range. He made an abrupt halt in front of one of the clones, and before the surprised bunshin could even put its guard up he swung the sword upward slashing across the clones’s chest. As that kage bunshin disappeared in a column of smoke, another charged at Naruto. The blonde shinobi lifted the Kubikiri Houcho above his head and swung it downward on the charging clone, slicing it perfectly in half.
The remaining clones pulled out kunai and shuriken from their weapon pouches and simultaneously threw them at Naruto. As the weapons homed in on Naruto the Kyubi container lifted his sword in front of his body. The projectiles hit the metal blade and bounced off it, falling to the grass and truing into petite clouds of smoke.
Naruto gathered chakra to his feet and bounded high into the air, sailing forward to the rest of the shadow clones. As he reached them a few clones jumped into the air to attack him. Before the first clone could reach him, Naruto delivered a front kick to its jaw, sending it hurling back to the ground. The other tried to grab the Kyubi container from behind, but the blonde ninja preformed a spinning slash cutting that lone in half at the waist. As Naruto descended to the ground he thrust his sword into the head of another clone. The blade went through the vanishing smoke, and buried itself deep in the soil.
Another kage bunshin saw this as an opportunity to attack and raced toward Naruto. Currently being unable to use his sword, the blonde ninja shuffled through his weapon pouch and quickly pulled out a kunai, which he flung at the incoming clone. The kunai glided through the air impaling the clone right in the chest, and the bunshin turned back into a cloud of smoke right before it reached Naruto.
Naruto grasped the handle of the sword and pulled it out of the ground. He looked at the kage bunshin remaining; ten of them were loosely spread across the meadow. The Kyubi container felt a small smirk make its way across his face. “Alright then, all of you come at me at once!” he hollered out.
“Everybody pile on top of him!” a kage bunshin yelled out, and the remaining shadow clones charged at Naruto and pounced onto the blonde shinobi, piling up on top of him.
“Rhaaaagh!” Naruto mustered up all his strength and swung the Kubikiri Houcho upward, and then slashed completely around himself. He then swung the sword rabidly in all directions knocking the clones off of himself and sending them soaring through the air. Every single bunshin was sent flying aside from the powerful onslaught. As the shadow clones hit the ground they skidded through the grass and moaned in pain before bursting into plumes of white smoke.
“That’s all of them…” Naruto panted. He stuck the head chopping cleaver into the earth so it could stand on its own, and then fell backward onto the ground. The blonde ninja wiped the sweat on his forehead away with his hand, and relaxed so he could get his breath back. After a few minutes of rest the Kyubi container sat back up, and took out the scroll he used to store his sword. He put his finger on the edge of the giant blade and slightly pushed forward. Blood began pouring out from the small gash Naruto made. He wiped the blood on the scroll and touched the paper to the sword. After the trail of smoke disappeared the cleaver was safely stored.
Naruto lifted himself onto his feet and stretched upward, keeping his muscles from getting cramped. The blonde ninja walked through the meadow until he reached the bank of the creek. By now it was midday, and the sun was slowly beginning its descent down. The setting fiery orb cast a gleaming orange reflection in the running water, as a breeze ruffled the blonde spikes of the Kyubi container.
“OK then, time for some jutsu training,” Naruto exclaimed. He had put the scrolls Zabuza given him to good use, and practiced the jutsus within them at any moment he could. One scroll contained water attacks from the Hidden Mist Village, while the other had detailed explanations at how to turn the water into ice and several ice type attacks. The ability to turn water into ice is a capable feat for any shinobi, however it needs a large amount of skill and chakra to do. Due to Haku’s bloodline he could turn the water into ice with almost no expense of his chakra and with ease, but that wasn’t the case for Naruto. The ice scroll said to master every technique from the water jutsu scroll before attempting ice techniques, due to their difficulty level being higher. The blonde ninja was on the verge of mastering every technique from the water scroll.
Naruto began to perform the proper hand seals and then said, “Kirigakure no jutsu.” The air around him began turning thicker and thicker until a pale white fog covered the area. The mist got thicker and thicker until you couldn’t see anything farther than a foot in front of you. “Kirikagure no jutsu, success!” Naruto exclaimed happily. He was able to use this jutsu even without a water source nearby, by condensing the water vapor in the air. However in order for the mist to become think and cover a large area water nearby was necessary.
When the broad blanket of mist cleared, Naruto began making a different set of hand seals. “Mizu bunshin no jutsu,” Naruto said aloud, and the water from the creek began rising upward, forming into the shape of ten exact copies of the Kyubi container. “Mizu bunshin no jutsu, success,” the water clones chanted. Naruto then dispelled the clones, and they turned back into water. The blonde ninja found mizu bunshin no jutsu an easier technique to learn than kage bunshin no jutsu. Even though the water clones only had 1/10 of Naruto’s strength, they could be made anywhere there was water, while shadow clones had to appear around the user. This could make the mizu bunshin more useful at times.
Naruto began forming another set of seals. “Suirou no jutsu.” He held his hand out over the water, and the liquid began rising upward, slowly forming a shape of a large sphere around his hand. The water got thicker and more compacted, and by now was slowly swirling in the orb shape Naruto formed it into. The water prison needed a lot of focus, and at Naruto’s level even if he was slightly distracted the sphere of water would be disrupted. Naruto also took a while to perform this jutsu, but that’s only because he didn’t perform it enough casually to make it in a matter of seconds. The technique needed a lot of practice to fully master.
The Kyubi container formed more seals and gathered a large amount of chakra together. The water rose up from the creek and began spinning in a ring shape at a fast pace in front of the blone shinobi. “Daibakufu no jusu!” Naruto yelled out, and unleashed all the concentrated chakra forward. The water ring erupted in a large explosion, the water forming a huge wave and racing across the creek. Once it reached the opposite bank of the small river the enormous wave crashed down into the earth, tearing up the soil and grass, and leveling a few trees in its path. Naruto smirked; this was his favorite jutsu due to its destructive power. However, the great waterfall technique needed a very large amount of chakra to be concentrated into a small area and then released, which made it fairly hard to perform. It also destroyed anything in its path and couldn’t be used for just one target.
“Alright then, now this is the jutsu I have to master,” Naruto muttered to himself as he formed the proper hand seals. “Suiryudan no jutsu!” Naruto bellowed out, focusing all his chakra into the creek in front of him. The water began swirling upward in the shape of a miniature tornado. It rabidly rose upward, growing larger and larger, and began to take the shape of a dragon. The dragon of water lurched forward, however before it made it to the other side of the creek it split in half. The large mass of water plummeted back down into the river, resulting in a giant splash. “Damn it!” Naruto cursed at his failure.
The water dragon technique not only needed a large amount of chakra, but also a large amount of chakra control. Once the water takes the form of the dragon, it needs to be controlled so it stays that way, and in order for the water dragon to home in and ram into its target, it constantly needs to have chakra controlling its movement. While Naruto can easily gather the large amount of chakra for the technique, he has a hard time controlling the movement of the water dragon, which results in the jutsu failing.
“I’ll get it right this time!” Naruto redid the seals and concentrated on the chakra he was molding. “Suiryudan no jutsu!” The water began revolving upward again, forming into the shape of a fierce dragon. “Alright!” Naruto exclaimed, and forced the water dragon to lunge forward. The liquid dragon soared over the river, swerving from side to side like a snake. The giant mass of rabid water sailed over the bank of the creek, but lost its control and plummeted downward into the soft soil of the riverbank, tearing up the earth and making a small crater. Naruto sighed, he almost accomplished the jutsu that time, but he still failed.
“All right then, again.” Naruto clasped his hands tightly together on the last seal and concentrated harder than before. The water towered into the air, taking the familiar shape of the dragon. Drizzle flew out from the base of the water dragon, spraying high into the air. The Kyubi container sent the dragon racing forward, but kept focusing on the chakra he was exerting with all his might. The liquid dragon zoomed over the creek at a fast pace, making it all the way across the stream. Naruto felt his control on the jutsu slipping, and the water dragon began slightly descending. “Must control it!” Naruto shouted out, and with his last bit of effort the dragon began rising back up, and rammed into the tree Naruto was aiming for. The entire tree trunk shattered into pieces and wood chunks flew high into the air. The base of the tree was uprooted and was sent sailing twenty feet away from its original location. The entire tree was obliterated from the sheer force of the jutsu.
The breathless Naruto smiled at his achievement. “Almost got it flawlessly that time,” he panted.
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A group of four shinobi leaped through the trees, quickly making their way back to Konoha. The instructor of the team had a bowl haircut and huge bushy eyebrows. The strange man wore a green spandex along with a jounin vest. The person behind him was almost an exact replica, only much younger and was not wearing the green vest. The other two people consisted of a brunette girl with her hair tied into two buns and a boy with long black hair and eerie white eyes.
“Gai-sensei, we’ve been genin for almost a year now, I thought these worthless missions of hunting down people’s run-away pets would stop,” Tenten complained.
“Now Tenten, you still are genin after all, and besides, it’s always a good deed to go and help out the village when it’s in need!” Gai replied with a thumbs up.
“Gai sensei is right, helping the village is indeed a youthful and honorable deed!” Lee exclaimed.
Tenten sighed, a bit annoyed with the two “green beasts”. Neji remained silent through the trip, not entering the conversation at all. Suddenly, Gai abruptly stopped jumping and his team came to a halt right behind him.
“Hey, Gai-sensei, why did we stop?” Tenten asked her instructor, but figured it out when she looked forward. Slightly in front of them a blonde boy in orange clothes was standing on a creek, forming the water in front of him into the shape of a giant dragon.
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The water dragon clashed into yet another tree, doing more damage to this one than the last.
“Yeah, finally mastered it! Practice does make perfect after all,” Naruto smirked. “I should perform it one more time just to make sure I got it down, though.” He began the jutsu yet again.
As the water dragon took shape Naruto heard something out of the corner of his ear. “Hey, Gai-sensei, why did we stop?” The startled blonde ninja looked up, to find a group of ninjas in the tree a short distance away from him.
‘Shit!’ In a split second Naruto searched through his weapon pouch until he found a smoke bomb. He quickly flicked it at the ground, and it exploded into an enormous cloud of purple smoke. By the time the smoke cleared from the area Naruto was long gone.
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The purple smoke spread through the area, and soon began disappearing. The blonde boy was nowhere in sight by now.
“Gai-sensei, who was that?” Lee asked.
“I’m not sure, he had a Konoha headband, but that jutsu is not from Konoha…” Gai pondered. “It was also very advance.”
“Yosh! Seems like there could be a new rival for me!” Lee exclaimed.
“That’s the spirit my young student!” Gai cried back.
“Can we please just get going now?” Neji questioned, obviously not one bit amused with the two green-clad ninjas.
ill post up part 2 of chap 2 soon (hopefully), it has to do with kyubi :P
Canthinkofaname
06-29-2006, 11:31 AM
its not even finished yet?
wow thats a great story. i await part 2
Araceli
07-06-2006, 01:05 AM
That is one of the coolest stories I have ever read.Please write more soon.I can see it now"Naruto the demon of Konoha,Student of the Copy-Cat Ninja Hatake Kakashi,and Heir of the Demon of the Hidden Mist,Momochi Zabuza",sounds so CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!
KageNaruto
07-15-2006, 10:45 AM
haha, well i stayed up all night on the internet, and thought, what the hell? why dont i finally finsih chapter 2 of the fic. and i did! so without further delay...
CHAPTER 2 PART 2
Naruto rushed back to the village, now casually walking through the streets. The Kyubi container walked through the town, bearing an overconfident smirk and crossing his arms behind his head. By now the sun had just set, and the sky was quickly getting dark and murky. The streets were rather deserted, most people were already in their homes by now. The few vile stares Naruto did get didn’t bother him, and he easily ignored them as he proceeded on his way. In a few minutes the orange-clad ninja was standing in front of his apartment, and with a turn of the doorknob he stepped into his crap-shack. He didn’t even bother to lock his home; nothing valuable was inside and robbing his house would just be a waste of time for the burglar.
Naruto stepped into his messy and undersized living quarters. His entire home consisted of two small rooms, three if you counted the bathroom. One room was the bedroom. In the very right corner was Naruto’s old bed, as shitty as it may have been it still gave him a good night’s sleep. A large cabinet was situated against the back wall of the room, containing Naruto’s clothes and other supplies, whatever they may be. Of course those supplies including dirty clothes, random scrolls and books also loitered the floor, almost obscuring the dirty carpet from view. Across the room from the bed was the door to the bathroom, which contained a sink, toilet, and petite shower. The other tiny room in Naruto’s home was the kitchen. It contained an old stove and rusted fridge which sat next to each other against the wall. In the middle of the room was a small coffee table barely two people could sit at and still be comfortable. On the left side of the room there was a sink and a small cabinet which was attached to the wall, holding the food Naruto had that didn’t need to be refrigerated.
The blonde ninja walked into his kitchen, the frame separating the two rooms didn’t even have a door. He opened the cabinet and pulled out one of the last few remaining instant ramen cups. Naruto looked at the flavor. “Shrimp,” he said dully to himself. He then pulled out a teapot and turned on the sink, letting the water run into the container. He put the teapot on top of the stove and after a few tries a flame emitted below the appliance, thus heating the water. When the familiar noise of the teapot “shrieking” filled his ears, Naruto turned off the stove and proceeded to pour the boiling water onto his noodles. The blonde ninja found a fork, and after waiting a minute to let his ramen cool, he began eating it. Sure he liked the taste of ramen, but the main reason he bought it was because it was very cheap. Naruto gulped down his meal in silence, but since he lived alone he was used to it. Sometimes he often talked to himself just so the atmosphere wouldn’t feel as lonely.
When he finished eating his noodles, Naruto tossed the fork into the sink and threw the ramen cup into the trashcan under the table. He strode into his bedroom and flopped onto his creaky bed. He put his arms behind his head and stared at the dreary white ceiling, letting his mind wander freely.
“Too bad my training session was interrupted and ended early today,” Naruto said to himself. “Really woulda liked to keep training a bit more.” Saying the thought aloud didn’t seem to faze the shinobi out of his stupor. Naruto could stand being lonely, but one thing he couldn’t stand was being bored. And being lonely and bored at the same time was just too much to handle for the blonde nin.
“Gotta be something I can work on in here… gotta think…” Naruto pondered allowed, scratching the back of his head. The blonde ninja rubbed his chin, searching his mind on what kind of training he could practice in his house. A light bulb seemed to go off in Naruto’s mind. “Hey, I can try and go visit that bastard fox!” he exclaimed.
A few days after Naruto’s discovery of the Kyubi no Kitsune residing within him, he tried to see if there was anyway he could use it to his advantage. After many hours of focusing and random attempts at chakra molding, he somehow found himself in a slightly flooded dark chamber. That was where he first met the fox, and established the deal that the nine-tails would lend him chakra. Ever since then, he hasn’t “visited” the bijuu.
Naruto sat up on the bed and crossed his legs. The blonde ninja closed his eyes and began concentrating all his energy. He wasn’t exactly sure how he would be able to get into the Kyubi chamber, but he did something similar to this last time. Naruto focused his mind and his chakra and let it spread equally throughout his whole body. He tried to envision the prison of the Kyubi in his inner eye. Still nothing was happening, and Naruto began getting annoyed. Several minutes passed, and still no results.
“Damn it, maybe if I try focusing on the seal…” Naruto put his hands together and began focusing everything he had onto the seal on his stomach. He shut his eyes tight and tried to concentrate, and formed the picture of the demon fox in his mind.
The world went dim, and before Naruto could realize what happened he was falling through pitch black darkness. The blonde ninja felt his body stop moving and looked up. He was in a familiar sinister corridor. The ground was covered in several inches of water, and dripping echoed through the narrow passageway. The walls were an eerie green color, and almost seemed to glow. Naruto picked himself up and began to walk forward slowly. Even though he was here once before the place still gave him the creeps. A faint growling could be heard, and the blonde ninja followed the noise, which led him to a bright passage that he willingly walked through.
He was met with the sight of a huge cage, towering hundreds of feet into the air. Behind the bars he could make out the shape of enormous eyes and a mouth that belonged to no human. The eyes were bright red, the color of blood, and had slits for pupils. Malevolence swirled within those fierce eyes. The mouth had long sharp teeth and was curled upward into an evil smirk.
“Hey brat, what the hell are you doing here!?” the Kyubi roared, its breath smelling foully of corrosion.
“Hello, Kyubi,” Naruto said, pushing his fear of the monster back inside of him. He still couldn’t help but shiver under its wicked gaze.
“Cut the casual shit, you fucking brat! Why the hell are you here? I already let you borrow my chakra, don’t tell me you have gotten even more goddamn spoiled and want something else!” the nine-tailed demon fox snarled.
The blonde shinobi gulped in response and tried not to loose eye contact with the demon. “I was kinda wondering… Do demons know jutsus…?”
The massive claws of the bijuu clashed against the gate, making the blonde ninja back up a few steps. “What the fuck are you babbling on about!?”
“Well, are demons like you able to do ninjutsu like ninjas?”
“We fucking can do whatever we want, of course we know some jutsu of you’re inferior kind, its not that hard to pick up!” the Kyubi answered. “Why the fuck are you asking me this, weakling!?”
Naruto mustered all his courage and asked aloud, “You think you could teach me a jutsu or two?”
“Ahahahaha!” the Kyubi let out an ear piercing laugh. “Me!? Teach a shit like you a jutsu? You’ve have to be fucking joking!” the Kyubi cackled.
“Hey, I’m serious about this!” Naruto yelled out.
“Bahahahahahah!”
“Hey you fucking fox, I’m not messing around here!” the blonde shinobi shouted back, louder than he expected himself too.
The Kyubi no Kitsune put its face right up against the cage and let out deafening roar, the power of it almost sent Naruto flying backwards. “You’ve got guts, talking to me like that, you fucking twerp!”
“Give me an answer fox, can you teach me something or not!?”
“Of course I could teach you something. But why in the hell would I want to!?” the nine-tails replied. “Now get the fuck out of here!”
“Hey, hey! Can’t we have some sort of negotiation?” Naruto pleaded.
“Hahahaha! What the hell could you offer me, brat?” the bijuu sneered.
“Well… I don’t know, there must be something I can do that you want!”
“Hm… I tell you what, kid. You rip of the seal on this cage, and I will teach you all the jutsu I know!”
“You really think I’m stupid enough to do that?”
“Hey, you humans are some of the most idiotic things on this planet!”
“Well, there has to be some sort of negotiation we could make…”
“Heh, I think I’ve got something. Ok fucking brat, listen up! I haven’t heard screams of pain or fear since I’ve been sealed here. I miss seeing all that blood, the flesh…” the Kyubi reminisced. Its mouth curled upward into a very disturbing smirk. “Go ruthlessly kill somebody, but first torture them! I want to hear the screams of pain, I want to see the blood!” an evil glint appeared in the fox’s eye. “You do that, and I’ll teach you a jutsu.”
Naruto crossed his arms and thought about it for a second. “Ok fox, you’ve got a deal then!”
“Now get the fuck out of here!” and with those threatening words, a huge wall of crimson chakra rushed at Naruto sending him sailing backwards.
The Kyubi container opened his yes. He was sitting on his bed, back in his apartment. “Alright, so I have to murder somebody… It doesn’t sound too hard,” he said to himself. Naruto scooted to the edge of the bed and stood up. “The bastard fox better keep his word.”
The orange-clad shinobi ran out of his house and ran into the village. He jumped onto the roof of a house and began leaping from one building to the other. As Naruto soared over the establishments of Konoha he searched the streets and alleyways of a potential victim. It was already nighttime and the streets were almost bare of any people. He zoomed over the town keeping his gaze focused on the ground, like a hawk searching for its prey.
“Bingo!” Naruto exclaimed to himself, as he found his target. A dark-haired man was slumped against the wall of an alleyway, a beer bottle in his hand. His clothes were torn and dirty. Naruto jumped down onto the street, he was only a few feet away from the man. On further inspection you could tell the man was drunk, and if he had a home it was much worse than Naruto’s. His hair was ragged, and he had a pungent odor that didn’t just derive from the alcohol he was consuming.
The orange-clad ninja strode toward the drunken man, bumping harshly into him as he passed. The man stood up from his slump position and pointed his finger at Naruto.
“Hey, what the hell are ya doing!?” the drunkard yelled. He was having a hard time balancing on his feet and slightly slurred his words. Naruto turned around and faced the man.
“You! You’re the fucking demon boy!” he yelled accusingly.
‘This is going to be easier than I assumed,’ the blonde shinobi thought.
“Well ya piece of demon shit, are you gonna… are you gonna apologize to me or not!?” the rugged man asked, you could tell that he was feeling dizzy and drank too much alcohol.
Naruto replied to the man by smirking at him.
“Well, where’s my goddamn apology you fucker!?”
Naruto spat at the man’s feet, the saliva landing on the person’s worn-out shoe. “You’re pathetic. You really think I’ll apologize to the likes of you?”
You could tell the man was enraged, his brow furrowed and he literally snarled at the orange-clad ninja. “What the fuck did ya say to me, demon boy!? I’LL FUCKING KILL YOU!” The enraged drunkard rushed at Naruto, beer bottle in hand, ready to strike the blonde ninja on the head. As he swung the glass bottle, the Kyubi container ducked and it whizzed right over his head. Naruto delivered a massive punch right to the man’s gut, and a stream of blood squirted from his mouth. The drunk male then slumped to the ground and was still. He blacked out from the force of the punch.
“Lucky I found someone like you, I don’t think anybody will look for you and nobody will miss you,” Naruto said to the unconscious man lying next to his feet. “And now to take you somewhere where your screams can’t be heard.” The blonde ninja holstered the man onto his shoulder and began bounding towards the forest located right outside of the village.
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As the man began coming to his senses, the first thing he noticed is that he was being held in place by something. His arms were against his sides and he was sitting down, leaning against a wall or tree trunk perhaps.
‘Musta gotten really drunk again,’ was the first thought that came to his mind. However when he opened his eyes, everything was still pitch black. He was blindfolded. “Hey! What the hell is going on? Where am I?” he yelled, hoping somebody would hear him.
Naruto stood in front of the tree he had tied the person to. The orange-clad ninja was twirling a kunai in his hand; he was waiting for the man to wake up. Now that he had, Naruto could begin his little “torture session”. He had tied the man to the tree with rope so he would be unable to move and blindfolded him with a simple cloth. Since Kyubi wanted the screams to be heard, the blonde ninja didn’t gag the man. However Naruto was pretty far way from Konoha so the yells and cries of the man wouldn’t be heard by others.
‘Alright, it’s showtime!’ Naruto though. He wasn’t going to let blood and flesh bother him. He was a ninja after all. And he wouldn’t feel bad about killing this man. Sure, it was monstrous and inhumane, but so was the way the villagers treated him. ‘It’s fair, right?’ the Kyubi container reasoned in his mind. He then just decided to put the thoughts behind him and proceed with his plan.
The blonde ninja moved the kunai over the man’s pinky finger, letting the cold metal touch the skin, and without hesitation put pressure on the blade, and it cut cleanly downward.
“Aaaaaaaaaaaagh!” the hostage let out a shrill yell, as his finger was severed from his hand. Naruto felt a tad bit of pity for the man, but pushed his emotions backward; ninjas shouldn’t give in so easily. The orange-clad shinobi cut off the next finger in line, blood spurted onto the grass, staining it red. “I beg of you please stop! Stop! Aaaaagh!” the man pleaded, but Naruto droned out the man’s screams. He continued to severe the rest of the fingers on the hand, and then moved on to the next one. By now quite a large amount of blood was surrounding the man’s hands and his screams were the loudest yet.
To ignore the man’s begging was a hard task for Naruto, but he managed. ‘It’s payback, payback for all the hate I received, its fair. The way I was treated, this justifies it. I’m not doing anything wrong…’ the Kyubi container thought. He pulled out several senbon needles from the inside of his jacket. He grasped one in his hand, and plunged it into the man’s gut. The thin piece of metal easily tore into the man’s skin and through his flesh. As the senbon imbedded itself deep in the hostage’s body, he let out another shriek, and was still begging for mercy. ‘It’s totally fine. My actions are righteous, this drunkard is better off dead anyway. I’m not doing anything wrong. Nothing wrong. Nope, I’m definitely not doing anything wrong. It’s totally fair and called for,” the blonde ninja kept repeating these thoughts in his mind. Naruto’s doubt of the actions he was performing was slowly starting to fade away. Sliding three more needles between his fingers, the blonde impaled the man with one swift strike. Not stopping there, more needles were propelled into the man’s body, a tortured scream coming from the hostage with every new senbon. And with every new needle plunged into the man’s flesh, Naruto’s hesitation and pity he was feeling left him. Soon he was being excited by the shrill yells, and was enticed with continuing the torture.
“Please stop! I beg of you, I’ll do anything! Just stop, please!” the man wailed desperately. Tears from the pain had soaked the blindfold and by now were making their way down the male’s face.
‘He deserves it! The beatings they gave me, the pain they caused! This doesn’t even begin to justify their torture!’ Naruto’s eyes shined with malice, a feral and insane grin on his face. ‘You’ll pay for it!’
The Kyubi container took out the very familiar scroll and summoned the head chopping cleaver. He gripped the handle and lifted the massive blade high into the air. ‘You’ll pay for what you did to me! You’ll be the victim of my revenge,’ and with that thought Naruto swung the sword downward, the Kubikiri Houcho cleanly slicing through the man’s flesh and bone. The blonde shinobi had sliced the hostage’s leg off, right below the knee. A deafening yell of agony accompanied the torrent of blood that spewed from the severed body part. Some of the crimson liquid stained Naruto’s clothes and sprayed onto his face. The downpour of red droplets was beginning to cover the surrounding area.
“I’m not done yet! You shunned me, you beat me, you sabotaged everything I had, some of you tried to kill me! You whispered threats, you shouted insults! Die you motherfucking bitches!” Naruto shouted aloud, and swung the blood stained sword down once again. A sick sound of flesh shredding and bone breaking echoed through the air, and now the other leg was severed from its host. The scream of torment hadn’t stopped from the man and now more blood than ever spurted out from the injuries; it covered the ground and hid the color of the green grass underneath from view.
“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh!” the man screamed at the top of his lungs, and his body lurched and shook violently due to him not being able to handle the severe pain.
“Every day, more pain more agony.” Naruto said with a snarl. He thrust the sword into the hostage’s shoulder, not enough to severe the arm, but enough for the metal blade to pierce the bone.
More blood.
“My life was hell.” The Kubikiri Houcho tore through the man’s other arm.
More blood. The red fluid was like a raging fountain, pouring and gushing.
“Each night I cried in the corner of my room.” The cleaver pierced through the torso, easily perforating the man’s right lung. He couldn’t even scream properly anymore due to the blood in his mouth. He was choking on the red liquid in his throat.
More blood. It kept coming, as if it was never-ending.
“And it’s all because I am the one who saved your goddamn asses!” The blade slid through the man’s body, its tip coming out from the other end. He was dead. He was dead even before the sword pierced its way through him. He died choking on his own blood. The huge cleaver was pulled out, by now almost every inch of it was crimson.
The man was dead, but the blood kept coming.
Naruto’s eyes widened, as he abruptly let go of the handle, and the Kubikiri Houcho fell to the ground. The blonde shinobi looked at his hands. They were red, completely soaked in blood. His orange clothes were mostly crimson by now as well. Naruto kept looking at his hands, and soon began trembling. His hands were furiously shaking, and he couldn’t make them stop. He grabbed his head so hard that his nails pierced the skin. Tears streaked down his face. And then, he screamed.
The minutes passed. The Kyubi container sat on the blood covered ground, his hands gripping the soil tightly. His gaze was focused on the cloudy dark sky above him, and he ignored the gory body a few feet away from him.
“I…” he began, “I killed him. And tortured him. And… I liked it.” Naruto was scared. Scared of himself, scared of what he was. “I took out all my pain on him… I wanted him to suffer…” He began sobbing uncontrollably. “Who the fuck am I?”
He bit his own lip, making it bleed. And he began laughing, he didn’t know why, but he laughed. It wasn’t a laugh of amusement, in fact it was a laugh void of all emotion. “I guess I’m a lot cruder than I thought. Heh, hehehehehe… I can’t even fucking control myself or my emotions!” Naruto swiped his hand through his blonde locks. “Hahaha! Hahahahahah! I am so fucking pathetic!” The orange-clad ninja held out his hand in front of him. He clenched it into a fist and then re-opened it. A high pitched laugh left his mouth, and it continued for quite a while. “I think I am so fucking unstable right now,” he snickered.
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After a few hours, Naruto was able to return to his normal demeanor, and the insanity that overtook him a short while ago was almost completely out of his system. The blonde ninja had decided that he would get over the experience and eventually it would become unimportant and he would forget it. It was the first time he had murdered anybody in cold blood; the experience just shook him up a bit. “I’m such a retard, can’t even kill anybody without fucking myself over about it.”
The body and severed parts of the dead man were dragged and dumped into a nearby river, in courtesy of Naruto. Wild animals would likely have eaten the body before it was found, but the Kyubi container didn’t feel like taking a chance. The trip back to the village and his apartment was rather swift and Naruto kept silent the entire time. It was lucky that nobody spotted him, his blood covered clothes and body would raise some questions.
As he opened the apartment door, he stripped out of his outfit and threw it onto the floor. Naruto quickly made his way into the bathroom and took of his boxers and threw them onto the cold tile. He stepped into the shower and turned it on immediately. The cold streams of water fell onto his face, and dampened his hair. Slowly the blood washed off of him, trickling its way off his body. The blonde stood in the shower for almost an hour with his eyes closed, not moving a single muscle. He let the running water do all the work for him.
He stepped out of the bathroom with a towel wrapped around his waist and instantly plopped himself onto the bed. “OK, might as well. This is the whole reason I did this after all,” he said to himself.
Focusing all his chakra onto the seal and thinking of traveling to the Kyubi’s domain instantly took him there. He walked through the chamber into the large room that contained the caged fox.
“Alright bastard fox, I did what you asked of me!” Nauto shouted aloud.
The nine-tailed demon showed its face from behind the cage, it bore a large smirk. “You actually enjoyed torturing him, that was an unexpected treat! You might not be as bad as I originally thought.”
“Shut the fuck up about that,” Naruto threatened, not even slightly afraid of the Kyubi.
“Did I touch a nerve with that? Are you ashamed for being so vile and coldhearted!? Ahahahahahahaha! You really are pathetic after all!” the fox cackled.
“I said shut it.”
“Remember who you’re talking to here you inferior human!”
“Look, I fulfilled the requirement alright!? Now we had a deal!” Naruto shouted angrily.
“I don’t remember any deal,” the demon said casually.
“You fucking-“ the blonde ninja began but was interrupted.
“Hah, just kidding! You puny humans get worked up so easily, pathetic!” the Kyubi snorted.
Naruto growled under his breath but it ended up being rather loud anyway.
“I may be the most powerful and hated demon of them all, but I keep my word. So fucking twerp, what kind of jutsu do you want to learn?”
Naruto sighed in relief that the bijuu kept the deal. “Well… something that would come in handy would be along the lines of…”
SO YEAH THATS THE END OF CHAP 2! mainly shows naruto's darker nature, along with how unstable he can get. so yeah leave a comment, and if you see grammer/spelling errors please tell me too.
BloodySand
07-15-2006, 12:57 PM
Loved It!!
Canthinkofaname
07-16-2006, 12:38 AM
wow, great.
but, why. why.WHY WONT YOU UPDATE THAT OTHER FIC DAM IT
KageNaruto
07-16-2006, 01:02 AM
wow, great.
but, why. why.WHY WONT YOU UPDATE THAT OTHER FIC DAM IT
dont feel like it. lost my current passion to write it.
next chapter will most likely be beggining of chuunin exams up to the forest of death, and will end right before the first match of the prelims is announced.
but im taking that all into account..... and that means the next chap will be REALLY long...i think. then chapter 4 will have the rest of the pre-lim fights.
im thinking if chapter 5 will have the 1 month intermission AND the fights of the exam up to the part where the sound attacks or how i should handle that. cause that might be a long chapter too, or probabaly not though..... because the 1 month will go by fast.....
chap 6 will be the sound-leaf attack and the gaara issue.
so i have the first 6 chaps planned out for the most part...... im still fearing chap 3 will be way to frikin long, im not afraid of the length, but if it turns out to be too long might not write it as descriptively and at a too fast pace, and i dont wanna do that.
Canthinkofaname
07-16-2006, 10:51 PM
you stink. that was one of my favorite storyes
Araceli
07-26-2006, 02:08 AM
Damn!That was badass.Realy,you made him kill in cold blood and he's,what,12!Badass!COOL!WOW.Please write more or I will thrust upon you the pain of the torcher that comes with being the queen of demons, Kyuubi's twin sister,Being a female,and a giant wolf demon.The pain of .......................NAGGING.MUHAHAHAHAHAHA..... ......Bey.
airstep
08-31-2006, 06:29 PM
Ouch this damages my image of Naruto now. Great now every ep i'm expecting him to snap at anytime.
Its great so far. The detail reminds me of Elfen lied. Ahh bloodly, painful, graphic, Enjoying it.
regina777
09-13-2006, 08:08 PM
a little bit bloody for the image created for naruto. Now i see where you are getting your motivation for liking Kyuubi Naruto 4- or am i wrong?
Keep it up!!! Good work.
KageNaruto
10-17-2006, 10:50 PM
alright, i've taken a beyond super long break from writing but i can now finally declare i wrote the first paragraph of chapter 3! wootz! after i write my rough draft(on paper) i hope i'll type it up right away. my gaol, finish chapter 3 by the latest, 15th of november(before the wii and PS3 come out!).
It is a long chapter though, so I'm gonna try to stay motivated. And I want to start chapter 4, the chuunin exam preliminaries. For these next two chaps, expect many deaths!
I have a feeling that I will end up revising chapter 3 at least once though, in my mind it feels like it'll be a hard chapter to pull off.
So basically this announcement is just to remind you that I havent gave up, and that hopefully soon, you will get to rean chapter 3!
I really think this story can have a lot of potential(at least from the ideas I thhought up for it so far), so I definitly wanna finish it! But there will be many many chapters...
So stay tuned, I plan to post back with chapter 3 eventually! Alright, time to go write this bugger and cramp up my hands from my incorrect way of typing!
edit: wow, so much crap happened, i didnt.... but x-mas break is soon ;)
__Mõchá
10-21-2006, 11:02 PM
Freaky....gory....disturbing....I like!
Add more soon.
OMG! I'm not gonna be able to sleep after this!
WoW!!! That's all I can say!
It's brilliant,I love it (OMG,Naruto reminds me of Mariko from Elfen lied in Chapter 2)
I really havent imagined Naruto like that before,it's crazy...
WoW,poor Hinata,in the chuunin exam you're probably gonna make her say "I love you,Naruto-kun" and he's all "DIE BITCH!!!" (OMG what am I saying about my sweet Hinata??!?!?!?!?)
But keep up the good work ^^ You have pure talent ^^ :p
KageNaruto
12-23-2006, 12:54 AM
Split Chapter 3 into 2 chapters, thought it would be best. Due to word limits (hate them!) gotta split it into 5 posts. Oh, and for some reason the first part of the stroy gets smudged together, and editing doesent help it. Enjoy the fic anyway:
...Chapter Three...
Nearly two weeks have passed since Naruto’s deal with the demon fox had been fulfilled. The Kyubi did stick with its words, and taught its host the jutsu, as promised. But the blonde ninja couldn’t admit the bijuu was a good teacher, far from it. The fox told him the required hand seals, how to channel the chakra, and a brief description of the technique itself. When Naruto asked for clarification, the demon simply snarled at him, and told him that it kept its part of the deal.
If the orange clad boy didn’t have a scroll nearby to write everything down before he forgot it, his rather unpleasant torture session would have been all for nothing. Naruto made a mental note to himself, that if he ever would strike a deal with the nine-tailed fox again, he would be much more careful when deciding on the “contract”.
However, Naruto also learned that making deals with the Kyubi was well worth it. The promised jutsu wasn’t anything basic or useless. If mastered, it would help out in battle an enormous amount. But this ninja technique was extremely complex, and the blonde shinobi had been practicing it ever since. It frustrated him to no end that he was unable to master it. When he thought he had it, the jutsu would be disrupted, and the boy wouldn’t even be able to figure out what factor he messed up in. His only guess was that it needed tremendous concentration and chakra control.
Other than trying to perfect his previous jutsus and trying to learn his new one, nothing else took up Naruto’s time. This actually intrigued the orange clad ninja a slight bit. Normally, his team would meet up twice a week, once to receive a mission, and the other to practice and train. However the training with his team was anything but satisfying, how anybody could get stronger from it he still couldn’t figure out. Naruto wished he could just skip it every single time.
But it was almost the second week in a row that Naruto had not received any notice from his team whatsoever. Not that it was a bad thing, he was happy with the sudden change. But it was still very irregular, and didn’t make sense to the blonde ninja. He tried to ignore it, it was easily possible that his teacher got his own mission and didn’t tell them about it. Or perhaps he just wanted to take a break. It seemed like a thing Hatake Kakashi would do, cancel a team meeting to read his pornographic novels. He was several hours late for every single meeting they had so far, after all.
So in short, the passing days had been really well for Naruto. He could train with no hindrances, and didn’t have to meet up with his team (which he obviously wasn’t very fond of).
Currently, the boy was walking back to his apartment. He had just emerged from the forest where he trained; his clothes were ripped and ragged. Most of his body was scathed and dirty, but his cuts were already starting to heal due to the regeneration the Kyubi provided him with. His hands had a few calices from wielding the Kubikiri Houcho so much. Naruto decided it would be best if he went and bought some gloves. He was still panting and trying to catch his breath from his over excessive training.
“If you don’t take yourself past your limits, you’ll never improve!” Naruto smirked to himself. It was a little saying he believed in. He dragged his ragged and worn body through the streets of the village, finally stopping at his usual eating spot. He entered the Ichiraku Ramen stand, and sat down in a seat. He swung his elbows onto the counter and hunched over. It was obvious the boy was exhausted.
“Hello Naruto. Training hard today as well, I see?” the owner asked. He had just emerged from the kitchen and spotted the orange clad ninja waiting to order.
“Yup, old man! I need to get stronger,” the boy replied, and smiled back. He didn’t have to put on a mask or pretend to be happy at Ichiraku Ramen. The people there accepted him, and never treated him different from anyone else. Naruto didn’t know why this place was so nice to him, but he enjoyed it. At times they almost treated him like family. If it wasn’t for him finding this peculiar ramen stand, his hate for the village would have probably overwhelmed him long ago.
“So, what will my number one customer have today?”
“Four bowls of the usual should do,” replied the Kyubi container.
“Alright then, coming right up! Since you caught me in a good mood, I’ll give you twenty percent off!” the owner winked at him.
“Heh, thanks old man!”
“No problem, Naruto.”
Mr. Ichiraku stepped into the kitchen behind the counter and began preparing Naruto’s order. The blonde shinobi sometimes wished he could spend the whole day at the ramen stand. It was one place he felt welcomed at no matter what the situation was. Perhaps that’s why he ended up eating so much, just so he could stick around longer. Thank god he had a fast metabolism.
A steaming bowl of pork ramen was placed on the counter in front of the tired boy. Naruto instantly grabbed a pair of chopsticks and split them in half.
“The rest of your ramen should be coming up soon,” the owner smiled.
“Alright, thanks,” and without further ado, the blonde ninja dug into his meal, devouring it quickly, but still savoring the taste. He couldn’t help it, when he was hungry, he could forget all his eating manners.
Eventually, Naruto finished eating all of the ramen he ordered, and paid the bill. He stood up from his seat and patted his full stomach.
“Thanks old man, delicious as always,” he complimented.
“Of course it is! Well, see you soon Naruto,” the owner replied.
Before the orange clad ninja could turn around an begin walking away, the owner’s daughter, Ayame, came out from the kitchen.
“Thanks for eating here, Naruto!” she called out.
“Of course, Ayame-nechan. I wouldn’t think of eating anywhere else,” he replied.
“See you next time, Naruto. Keep that training up,” the owner chuckled.
“Heh, of course!”
The Kyubi container then began the short walk back to his apartment. A meal at Ichiraku’s never failed to cheer him up. He soon reached his home, and was rather surprised at seeing a note pinned to his door. He took it into his hand and looked over it.
“Naruto, tomorrow meet up at the bridge at nine in the morning. It’s quite important, so try not to miss it.
-Hatake Kakashi”
“So, there’s finally a team meeting, huh?” Naruto asked aloud. “Wonder what’s so important about it.” The blonde ninja swung open his door and walked inside. A shower would definitely do him good.
THE NEXT DAY
It was a warm and sunny morning, the usual weather condition in Konoha. Naruto was slowly walking toward his team’s meeting spot. As the familiar red bridge came into view, he could make out the faint shapes of Sakura and Sasuke. He began running toward his teammates, soon halting right in front of them.
“Good morning Sakura-chan!” the orange clad boy yelled, sporting a forced grin. He then turned his attention to the brooding Uchiha. “Hmph, Sasuke!”
The black haired boy grunted back in annoyance.
‘Geez, these two are always acting like this,’ Sakura though, and let out a sigh.
“Kakashi-sensei still isn’t here?” Naruto asked.
“Nope, he’s late yet again,” Sakura huffed, annoyed with the copy nin’s habit. “I wish he could just tell us to come later instead of making us wait for so long! I didn’t even have a chance to blow dry my hair!”
“Yeah, yeah! You’re right, Sakura-chan!” the blonde shinobi enthusiastically agreed. He let out a sigh, Sakura did have a point, if their teacher is the one who calls them to meet he shouldn’t be late.
Nearly an hour past, and time wasn’t flying by. It slowly crept along, seeming to take forever. Team seven was overcome with a wave of boredom during the long wait for their teacher. Naruto could barely handle it, he was just about to leave, however that’s when he felt a presence coming.
A cloud of smoke appeared on the red railing of the bridge, and when it dissipated, a masked silver haired jounin was standing on the railing.
“Yo! Sorry I’m late, this lady needed help with her groceries-” Kakashi was cut off by Sakura and Naruto.
“LIAR!” they both shouted at the copy nin.
Kakashi then put on a serious face, and jumped down from the railing, standing in front of his team. However, before he could begin speaking, Naruto asked him a question.
“So, Kakashi-sensei, what’s so important about this meeting? Do we have some big urgent mission!?” the blonde boy pretended to be excited.
“That’s what I was about to tell you. The thing is I recommended all of you for the chuunin selection exam, so… Here take these applications.” The masked jounin pulled out three slips of paper and handed them to his team.
“Chuunin exam?” Sakura asked, surprised.
“However, the application does not force you to take it. You can decide if you want to take it or not,” Kakashi continued.
“Sweet! Thank you, Kakashi-sensei!” Naruto shouted and threw his hands into the air. He was actually very excited about this, a chance to raise his rank, what could be better. He would finally be able to do difficult missions and if he was lucky he could even be placed on a new team.
“Alright, calm down, Naruto. If you want to take it, go to room 301 at the school, five days from now. The test will begin there at three in the afternoon,” Kakashi explained.
“Hehe, chuunin exam, chuunin exam,” Naruto grinned, and looked down at the application he held tightly in his hand.
KageNaruto
12-23-2006, 12:55 AM
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Naruto walked through the now somewhat familiar chamber. He found it a bit strange that it was even more flooded that the last time he was here. The water was a few inches deeper, and seemed to have turned a darker color, if that was even possible. The blonde boy strolled through the oddly lit passageways, now being quite familiar with the area. Before long he had reached his destination.
”Yo demon fox, how about another proposition?” the orange clad ninja asked casually.
The Kyubi glared at him from behind the enormous cage, its eyes flared in anger and its teeth bared. “A weakling like you shouldn’t have this informal attitude while talking to such a superior being,” the bijuu grimaced.
“Sorry, all-powerful Kyubi-sama, I was just in a good mood,” Naruto replied sarcastically.
“If you think I’m going to make a deal with you know you’re dead wrong you little shit,” the agitated nine tailed fox replied.
“Alright, alright, I apologize. Seriously though, there’s an exam coming up, and I might have a chance to spill some blood, and that probably won’t come again for a while,” Naruto explained. By now he had lost fear of the Kyubi, there was no way it could reach him behind the sealed cage. It was illogical to fear something that was unable to harm you.
“You’re such an annoying brat! I’m starting to regret I ever made a deal with you to start with.”
“So c’mon, will you teach me another jutsu if I… you know, kill a person?”
The bijuu let out an iniquitous laugh. “You aren’t the one who makes deals around here.”
“Then you propose a deal,” Naruto said, getting annoyed with the demon’s antics.
“How about instead of teaching you a jutsu, I’ll tell you how to do something you’ll like for sure. In exchange, you kill as many people as you can during this exam you spoke about,” the Kyubi offered.
“What the hell!?” the orange clad shinobi couldn’t hold back his outburst. The fox’s conditions were just simply absurd. “You expect me to agree to that!?”
“So you little shit, do we