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AK47
05-16-2006, 03:56 AM
i made some stupid funny fanfics before and now i decided to write an ok one (hehehehehe)
well here goes


Chapter One- Return to Konoha
After two and a half years after the moment Sasuke permanently left the village of Konoha, the village seemed to be more calm and peaceful. Konoha made many more allies and made peace treaties with most countries and was a strong civilized village. The proud leader of Konoha, Tsunade and a legendary medical sannin, stood outside with the wind blowing against her standing proud with her hands on her hips. She smiled.
The blonde kid was going to return.
A voice called out, “Tsunade sama?”
Tsunade turned around and met eyes with her pink haired apprentice, “what is it?” she asked.
Sakura smiled, “Naruto is coming isn’t he?”
Tsunade smiled and turned around to look at the sky, “yeah” she replied.
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A few kilometers away outside the village, a grown up boy was skipping along the forest path excited to return to his home.
“Naruto.” Shouted out a voice behind him.
Naruto turned and replied, “eh? What do you want ero sennin?”
Jiraiay had a frown look on his face and paused for a while.
Naruto looked at Jiraiaya, “ what?!”
Jiraiaya said “ don’t tell anyone about that mission….”
Naruto’s face looked down and he turned around and said “yeah.”

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Tsunade was walking down the streets of Konoha with her busty chest bouncing up and down and making a daily check on Konoha, but also relaxing from the millions of papers she had left to work on.
Then something caught her eye, it was in the ramen shop. She saw a person who she recognized. The old hokage started running to the ramen shop and tapped on the person’s back.
“Hey naruto!”
but then she realized it wasn’t him. The person was wearing a dark cloak and a hat on his head. The person looked at tsunade with a glare.
“PISS OFF!”
Tsunade jumped back and did a quick bow and said “sumimasen” and walked away.
The tough old lady just got scared and usually could take pissed off people, but those eyes were vicious and she wanted to get away at the first moment she saw it.
A voice called from behind, “ YO OBAASAN”
The voice was recognizable, and she turned around but saw an unrecognizable person.
It was grown up Naruto.
“Naruto.. you’ve grown. What has it been two years?”
Naruto stood there looking at tsunade with a smile. “yep, I have so much to show you! I learned so many new jutsus and techniques that I could probably be hokage right now.”
Tsunade smiled and leaned forward towards Naruto and pinched his cheek, “haha maybe in a few years, but not right now.” And took her hand of Naruto’s face leaving a big red mark.
Jiraiya came behind Naruto and greeted, “hey tsunade how’s the village?”
Tsunade replied casually, “eh it’s not that bad. And what aobut you? Roaming around peeking on woman again?”
Jiraiya frowned and started to look at a building.
“eh what’s wrong?”
Jiraiya looked at the ground “tsunade there’s something I need to tell you privately.”
Tsunade looked at him awkwardly, “what is it?”
JIriaya made hand movement pointing at naruto and told her to come to him.
Tsunade looked at Naruto who was rubbing his cheek and walked over to Jiraiaya and they talked.
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Far away, in a secret cave, villains surreptitiously meet to discuss their plan. Eight ninjas (there is a reason for 8 right now so don't complain) or so called terrorists meet for the first time in 5 weeks for the arrangement of the kidnapping of the kazekage.. and also the jinchurriki who they laid eyes on for the last 3 years…………………



oh what a cliffhanger
i know this is similar to the manga but i have something in store for you... hehehehehehehe

Lost Prophet
05-16-2006, 10:46 AM
wow, Ak. Your fanfics are my favorites!

Abscon
05-16-2006, 02:15 PM
Nice work...

Good story..Some of the sentices are a little wierd. Maby a bit more desciptions...

But great work.. By all means,, keep it up :)

Edit: oh yeah,, and sweet avatar... I love Fullmetal Alchemist (allthoug its kinda hard to get : / )
Btw thanks for reveiwing my fanfics :mrgreen:

Hellchild915
05-16-2006, 07:44 PM
That was pretty good

AK47
05-16-2006, 08:00 PM
Nice work...

Good story..Some of the sentices are a little wierd. Maby a bit more desciptions...

But great work.. By all means,, keep it up :)

Edit: oh yeah,, and sweet avatar... I love Fullmetal Alchemist (allthoug its kinda hard to get : / )
Btw thanks for reveiwing my fanfics :mrgreen:
thanx everyone
and ya you can get avatars from photobucket.com
just search and type in w/e you want and you'll get pics or avatars and stuff
That was pretty good
that's what you say every time

AK47
05-16-2006, 11:26 PM
CHAPTER 2- REUNION

The meeting was commenced and there was an awkward silence between the eight members.
Water dripped from the roof of the cave which broke the silence.
”Where is *&^&*% (muted for suspense lol)?” asked the one of the members.
“He’s spying on the kyuubi brat right now..” replied one of the ninjas.
An old and recognizable face that we know speaks up, “what do we plan on doing with the jinchuuriki?”
The leader answers “you will see. Just remember the seals that I performed for you.”
The old and recognizable face lights up, and his eyes start glowing red.
“oh so you plan on using that to read my mind?” asks the leader.
The red eyes start to fade and a demanding voice calls out.
“How long do we have to do this fricking thing for?” asked an uneasy voice which belonged to the sword wielder, Kisame.
“After we retrieve all the jinchuuriki…”
Kisame interrupted, “I heard you already have two. Why can’t you just use that to do whatever you are going to do…..” he stopped, he felt his neck grabbed. Just seconds after the leader replied. Kisame couldn’t move. The leader’s strength was unimaginable.
“Stop.” Said the person with the glowing red eyes. “ we will receive the jinchuuriki for you, just let go of him.”
The leader lets go .
The leader spoke again “Well now, back to the meeting…..”


Naruto begins to grow impatient from the conversation between the two old Sannin.
“I’m gonna go eat some ramen, see ya ero sennin and obaasan.” And Naruto ran off.
Tsunade turned to Naruto’s direction and watched him run down the road.
“So is this true?” she asked Jiraiya.
“I’m afraid it is…”answered the old hermit.


The blonde ninja went into the ramen shop and saw a guy sitting in his usual seat, but ignored him and sat on Iruka sensei’s spot.
He called out, “ONE BOWL OF YOUR BEST RAMEN PLEASE!”
The chef turned around, “OH if it isn’t my best customer, you finally returned to Konoha?”
Naruto replied “YEP, after two years of training I feel the need for your Ramen, Mr Chef.”
“hahaha, this will be on the house,” the chef laughed handing him a bowl of ramen.
“AH THANK YOU, ITADAKIMASU!” Naruto jumped excited to eat his ramen and grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started to eat.
Naruto thought, “OH I CAN’T WAIT TO EAT THE FIRST NOODLE….” And suddenly he stopped.
He noticed the chef was on the floor with a puddle of blood laying beside him.
Shaking, Naruto turned his head slowly, still incapable of moving and looked at the man beside him, He finally recognized his appearance. The man was wearing a black cloak with little red clouds and a bamboo hat on his head. He had the same exterior that the man that destroyed his best friend's life.
Naruto couldn’t move but he was able to get a peep out, “……Itachi?....”
The man continued his genjutsu, with one hand in a seal position and his other hand taking the hat of his head.
The man said and smiled and took off his hat, “no..”
Naruto’s eyes widened and sweat dropped from his forehead.
“Sasuke?”

KageNaruto
05-17-2006, 02:37 AM
wow, just how much can you write lol? if i had a laptop, id actually prob update my fic waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more often since id be able to type in school while im bored.

will this be another funky story?

AK47
05-17-2006, 02:40 AM
read all my stories
do you think?
i don't want to hear you life story.......-_-

Hellchild915
05-17-2006, 02:43 AM
yeah you must love to write but that was good

Lost Prophet
05-17-2006, 11:53 PM
I love your fanfics, aK

AK47
05-18-2006, 12:17 AM
thank you lost prophet and hellchild thank you

Canthinkofaname
05-18-2006, 12:17 AM
i do to love your storyes

wow, just how much can you write lol? if i had a laptop, id actually prob update my fic waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more often since id be able to type in school while im bored.

will this be another funky story?

YOU WILL, HECK COME OVER TO MY PLACE AND ILL GIVE YOU MY LAPTOP