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WalkingFish
04-21-2006, 01:23 AM
::Death of a great Ninja::

Ok this takes place after the series of naruto is over(i have no i dea when it ends but whateva) Oro and the akatsuki are dead or imprisoned.

Leaf nin:i have some horrible news one of are great ninjas is dead
*shaking in sadness*

*sakura and naruto stand bow down crying*

Sakura: *crying*
Why?

Tsundae: its ok i know its hard for you 2.
*puts hand on there shoulders*

Naruto: ill kill them those FUCKERS!

Tsundae: i know thats 2 people you have lost that are important to you 2. i had the same experience.

Sakura: but why him why?

Tsundae: this war is hurting us all.

*someone comes behind Naruto*

Jirayai: i know its hard for you naruto.

Naruto: What Village?
What village?!
*hands in a fist*

*narutos teeth start to grow sharper and his markings grow wider and his eyes become a blood red*

Naruto: what village!?

Tsundae: Sand

Jirayia: why'd you tell him

Tsundae: well i dotn want him destroying konoha

Jirayia: so you let him go and destroy sand.

Tsundae: its better then konoha being destroyed

Sakura: naruto
*still crying*
*chases after naruto*

A great ninja:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/sonike/th_kakashi.jpg


http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/kawidi/th_Naruto.jpg

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a380/Typestgirl/th_the20yandao.jpg
LOVED BY MANY

JUst the start oh and the war going on is a world war every village is fighting

AK47
04-21-2006, 01:25 AM
short but what's the plot?
i wanna see the war or w/e
sad too kakaashi
wanna read more

Hellchild915
04-21-2006, 01:43 AM
it was pretty good

WalkingFish
04-25-2006, 11:23 PM
::Left Behind::

Naruto: those F**kers are gonna die.
huh.
i'm here

*meanwhile with sakura who couldn't keep up with Naruto*

Sakura: dang it Naruto he probley destroying Suna right now

*3 ninjas surround sakura*

Pervy unknown nin: lets rape her

serios nin: shut the f**k up

Sakura: what village?

uknown nin: shes trembling in fear
*in creepy voice*

*all nins rush at her*

*sakura jumps up and comes down usin gone of her chakra punches killing one of the nins*

*not able to do anything else the rest of the ninjas throw kunais at her*

Sakura: *screams*

*in suna*

*sand nin walking towards council room*

sand nin: were so F**king dead
*enters room*

Sand nin: Kage, Uzamuki Naruto is heading here

Gaara: Why would he be here?
*confused face*

Sand nin: well kakashi the copy ninja was found dead here and we have records that say kakashi was Naruto's jounin sensei.

Kankurou: Naruto must of been told that he was found dead here

Temari: but who killed kakashi

Sand nin: no sand has really bragged about killing the great kakashi

gaara: i'll see him. we have a special kind of bond we had the same experiences.
*gets up and starts to walk out of room*

*outside of Suna*

Naruto: Who the hell did it?
*a roar that could be heard a mile away*

*dead suna nins everywhere*

gaara: Naruto what have you done

Naruto: You see this blood it came from one of your nins how the hell does it feel to lose some people dear to you.
HOW!
*another roar*

*temari rides down on her fan*

temari: Oh my god what the hell did he do
*scared face*

*a puppet comes behind naruto and locks him in the puppets torso*

Kankuro: you think he can break out

* a huge roar *

*the puppet breaks into lots of peices hitting temari and kankuro's head*

*kankuro and temari are knocked out on the floor*

Naruto: i'll kill you all!

Thats the end of this chapter
(edited i like bad stories)

Canthinkofaname
04-25-2006, 11:41 PM
thats good, alittle short but good

WalkingFish
04-25-2006, 11:54 PM
im doing it short but itll go on for soem time

AK47
04-26-2006, 12:41 AM
i like the guy who wanted to rape sakura
anyways i like the story
keep going

WalkingFish
04-26-2006, 12:52 AM
ill post tomorrow

badash
04-26-2006, 07:46 PM
Hahaha.... man this story has its naughty moments...


Keep it up there dude!!!

WalkingFish
04-27-2006, 01:07 AM
This might be a bad one cuz i dont have any thoughts right know

:: Arithos and Koto ::

*in a cave out side of suna*

Sakura: where the f**k am i

Pervy nin: Hey B**ch shut your *ss up you killed one of are minions

serious nin: he was only a pawn in or plan

pervy nin: *whispers to sakura*
your lucky hes here or id be having fun with you.
*weird cackle*

Sakura: when naruto finds out im missing he'll find you and kill you.

serious nin: shut up b**ch

pervy nin: *weird cackle*
its to bad you won't be able to see him again cuz your going to die right here and now.

serious nin: kakashi wasn't as b**chy as she was.

Sakura: you killed him you are gonna die kill me if you want youll just be bruttaly killed by naruto.

pervy nin: hey can we cut her in half ill take the bottom half.

serious nin : why did i partner up with you

pervy nin : because im Koto of the clan of Rapists

sakura: you sick f**ker.

Pervy nin : *whispers*
hey i can save you i can prosuade him that we spare you but one cost.

sakura: but will i have to do.

*serious and Koto start to whisper to each other*

Serious: Fine.

Koto: yes

Sakura: what?

serious nin: you are now Koto's personal B**ch

Sakura: you tricked me you F**ker.

Koto: hey you went for it.
*cackle*

Serious nin: can we get onw ith the plan

koto: yes, arithos

Arithos/serious nin: ok who should we pick off next

koto: oh her. please her.

Arithos: No! after whta youve done to her.

Koto: man i wanted another b**ch

Arithos: This one!

Koto: Who?

Arithos: Shikamaru.

Canthinkofaname
04-27-2006, 02:28 AM
thats funny

WalkingFish
04-29-2006, 06:11 PM
:: Troublesome! ::

Shikamaru: What a troublesome girl she expects me to go out on a date with her. i hate girls!

* walks and lays on a bench watching the clouds *

* a shodow falls over Shika *

Girl: Shikamaru RUN!

Shika: Sakura

* right when he said that he is hit hammer like object *

Koto: B**ch shut the F**k up

Arithos: shut her up.
she'll make a seen.

Koto: let's go to a hotel ill take her to a room and have some fun.

Arithos: God why?
Fine lets go.

*arithos grabs the knocked out Shika and puts him in a bag*

* the 2 outlaws arrive at a hotel and rent 2 rooms one for Koto and Sakura and one for Arithos and a closet for shika*

*that night Koto rapes Sakura*

* the reason Koto's family is based on rapings and assasination is because they have a jutsu that makes sound go away in an area of choice*

*morning comes*

Arithos: you ready

Koto: *crying*
I went to hard on her.

* Sakura eyes wide open and bleeding from the wrists and the neck *

Arithos: *sigh*
well get her body we'll need it.

Koto: what about-

*arithos cuts Koto off*

Arithos: hes still un-consious.

Koto: did you get kakashi's body

Arithos: yes.

Koto: you can kill the Nara boy i had my fun iv'e killed kakashi and her so

Arithos: so we'll have 2 kills each.

Koto: I would of loved to kill the uchiha boy but you got him first.

Arithos: who cares?
Lets get back to the cave.

* the 2 nins head back to the cave while the figh between naruto and Gaara goes on for 2 days *

*naruto is lieing on the floor beside the remains of the 3 siblings*

*bodies and armes everywhere the kage of Suna killed the entire village killed suna is the first to be taken by the war*


the end of that chapter

oh and if your wondering how he did all of the things to Suna he went into 4-tails

Canthinkofaname
04-29-2006, 06:41 PM
aw. sakura died

Lost Prophet
05-05-2006, 10:52 PM
TIS IS SUCH A SAD FANFIC!! I CAN TTAKE IT!!!!

AK47
05-14-2006, 12:57 AM
man i forgot to read the next chap
this is sad and funny
where is the next chap

WalkingFish
05-14-2006, 05:14 AM
sorry i havent been on in while ill be doing it soon.

WalkingFish
05-16-2006, 12:44 AM
::The List::

Arithos: ok well we have atleast half the list.
*arithos looks at a list of nins*


Uchiha Sauske
Hyuuga Hinata
Kirayia
Huruna Sakura
Hatake Kakashi
Rock Lee
Hyuuga Neji
Nara Shikamaru
Gaara Oh the Desert

Koto: Ohh let me look

Arithos: 5 more 5 more

*Koto grabs list*

Koto: This guy this guy
*points to kirayia*

Arithos: ok lets go

*koto and arithos dissapear and in atleats 3 hours show up at Konoha*

*arithos and koto search the town*

Koto: lets go there im hungry

Arithos: fine

*the two walk in and start to talk*

Koto: This kirayia guy is he here.

Leaf citizen: Hey did you hear The Nine-Tails Uzumaki Naruto killed the Kazekage

*koto's and arithos's eyes grow wide*

Leaf citizen2: yeah and did you know that the kazekage was ripped to shreds

Arithos: F**k
*as he jumps up*

*everyone stares at him*

Arithos: umm hi have you seen him
*shows a picture of Jirayia*

Leaf citizen: umm try the womens hot spring.

Koto: lets go

Arithos: yes

*they both dissapear in ablink of an eye and show up t the womens hot spring*

*they both walk in and koto uses a henje jutsu to change into a girl*

Koto: hey girls
*as he walks down to all the naked women*

*arithos shakes his head and walks around the place and he finds Jirayia's peeping area were he is*

Arithos: hello you like peeping to>
*as he smiles*

Jiraya: i love peeping.
Oh my fu**ing god look at the new girl.

*arithos's face kinda goes sick because jiraya is looking at Koto*

*koto and another girl go into a bathroom*

Arithos: he's gonna rape her

Jirayia: whats that?

Arithos: nothing
Ya know you think you can take a survey i made.

Kirayia: Yeah su-

*arithos slashes kirayia's neck*

With Koto

Girl: God i love this place

Koto: Me too
*changes back to guy*

Girl: a ninj-
*Koto uses special sound jutsu to cut off all sound*

*he ties the girl up and starts to do some graphis stuff that i won't mention*

Arithos: Koto

*Koto runs out of the bathroom*

Arithos: did you kill her

Koto: course i did

Koto: did you-

*koto looks at jirayia's body*

*Arithos laughs*
*he crosses out jirayia's name*

u]Uchiha Sauske[/u]
Hyuuga Hinata
Kirayia
Huruna Sakura
Hatake Kakashi
Rock Lee
Hyuuga Neji
Nara Shikamaru
Gaara Oh the Desert

AK47
05-16-2006, 12:56 AM
haha that's cool
jiraiaya's finally dead and you put in kiraiya all the time
it's good.
and he 'killed' a girl haha

Drunken_Master_Rock_Lee
05-16-2006, 01:18 AM
LOL, WF, thats great, i was wondering when youll continue it, and its funny, lol!

Lost Prophet
05-16-2006, 10:18 AM
DAMN IT I HATE HOW SAD THESE CHAPTERS ARE!!!

WalkingFish
05-17-2006, 02:15 AM
thanks ill do the next chapter tomorrow

Drunken_Master_Rock_Lee
05-17-2006, 02:20 AM
aight, nice, im lookin forward to it, i hope sasuke will die in that chap.

WalkingFish
05-23-2006, 01:39 AM
::Sakura I'll Find You::

Leaf nin: We are missing many nins.

Tsundae: i know and they all seem to be connected.

Leaf nin: Well Jirayia is missing and Sakura too and -

Tsundae: Nara Shikamaru

Leaf nin: let go over this.
Sakura went after Naruto and didn't come back with him.
Nara Shikamaru Dissapeared over night.
Kakashi was killed his body was later stolen.
Jirayia Dissapeared also but thats not new.

Tsundae: This is crazy

*Back With are to Villains*

Koto: Lets get her her i say her.
*creepy cackle*

Arithos: for once you might be right.

Koto: Are you serious back to Konoha.
God we should just stay there.
*mad*

Arithos: yeah and they'll be right on are F***ing **s.

Koto: fine lets go.

*the two dissapear off to konoha very quikly*

*night falls*

Arithos: one ninja is out patroling and hes very skilled.

Koto: I see another one.

Arithos: no there the same person.
*confused*

Koto: no look ones taller then the other.

Arithos: they must be twins

Koto: Girl twins!?
*smiles*

Arithos: shut up and lets go.

*they both go and find the Hyuuga Household*

Koto: Ill use my jutsu.
*forms handseals and it becomes silent over the Hyuuga household*

*arithos walk in and fines hinata*

*pulls a kunai and out and slits her throut then puts her in a bag and they flee*

*Morning*

Hyuuga clans person: Hinata she was kidnapped there was blood in her room.

Leaf nin: Another one.

*rock lee runs in*

Rock lee: Gai he went after them we saw them i went to but couldn't keep up.
*breates heavily*

Tsundae: good job Rock lee

Rock lee: but i couldn't keep up im weak im gonna run aroundkonoha 1,000 times and let Gai Punch me.

Tsundae: what direction did they leave in.

Rock lee: *looks up*
ummm I don't know.
But it was that way.
*he points northeast*

Tsundae: try to pick up scents ok get the Inuzuka clan to help pick up the scents.
Move out.

Drunken_Master_Rock_Lee
05-23-2006, 01:53 AM
lol, it seems that chap was shorter than the acustom, i want another chap, lol, but you really had to make fun of lee, lol!

AK47
05-23-2006, 01:59 AM
that's a cool chapter
dmrl you impatient fool :)
i wanna nother chap too!!!

Lost Prophet
05-23-2006, 05:02 PM
NOT HINATA TOO!!!!!!! T T

WalkingFish
05-24-2006, 12:32 AM
sry i had to go so i finished ill do one later.

Lost Prophet
05-24-2006, 04:34 PM
alright.....

WalkingFish
06-06-2006, 02:42 AM
sorry for the wait guys i cant think of anything

AK47
06-06-2006, 02:42 AM
that's ok
read my fanfic!
and kagenaruto's!!

WalkingFish
06-12-2006, 03:02 AM
::The Chase::
*In the forest way outside of Konoha*
Gai: These guys Chakra is way higher then any nin i've ever in countered.
*scared face*
Koto: lets just kill
*creepy laugh*
Arithos: it will be my pleasure
*he turns around*
*koto laughs*
Arithos: YOu die know
*Eyes grow wide and becomes sharigan his hair turns black*
Gai: the Uchiha Boy
*Sauske's chest grew wide adn he blasted a huge fire at Gai*
Gai: i can't dodge this
*screams and turns to ashes*
Koto: but you...
Arithos: hes not on the list
*as he changes back to his normal self*
Koto: i smell chakra
*sniffs around*
Arithos: ANBU
*koto turns around and Arithos is Hinata*
Arithos: Byukugan is a great power.
you kill them im heading back to the cave.
Koto: got it
*koto rushes over then uses his blood limit*
*he goes around slitting there throughts as all of the ANBU silently scream*
*back at the cave*
*arithos looks at the list again*
Uchiha Sauske
Hyuuga Hinata
Kirayia
Huruna Sakura
Hatake Kakashi
Rock Lee
Hyuuga Neji
[/u]Nara Shikamaru[/u]
Gaara Oh the Desert
*koto enters*
Koto: lookie who i found
*Koto Held Rock Lee by his color*
*koto then threw him at coffin knocking the coffin top off to reveal sakura's body*
*Rock Lee looked at Sakura with teers in his eyes*
Rock Lee: you killed her
*rock lee started to open the games he ran at Koto*
*Rock lee is at gate 5*
Rock Lee: i will kill you even if i die too.
*Rock lee opened the eitgth gate*
*Rock Lee walked up to Koto and put his Hand on Koto's shoulder*
*Rock Lee squeezed Koto's shoulder shattering*
*Koto Screamed loudly*
Rock Lee: Shut UP
*Loud boloming voice*
*he punches Koto making his head fly off*
Rock Lee: weres Gai
Arithos:*eyes wide opened and laughing*
I blasted him to dust
*rock lees eyes grew wide opened and dropped to the floor dead*
*arithos walked up to Koto's head*
Arithos: You were only a pawn anyways.
*Arithos laughed as he crushed Koto's head under his feet *
Arithos: Wait theres still one more Hyuuga.
*Laughs*
Arithos: i don't need him im finished.
*arithos walks out of the cave but steppign on a newspaper*


::::::::::::::: Konoha Record::::::::::::::::
Monday(2 years ago)
Orochimaru dissapears!
Sunday A crew of ninja brought back Uchiha Sauske the last of the Uchiha's. There was no Body of orochimaru. we talked to Sauske and he said this " i was by myself asleep when i heard a scream of kabuto and Oro. I thought it was normal i went back to sleep but i later woke up here."
The body of the sound spy was not found either. ANBU found a arm at that seemed to be of kabuto's DNA. They say that Oro was finnaly killed but by who?Me(it said in black ink wroten probley by the one who killed him)

Thats the end sorry if the ending kinda sucked

Canthinkofaname
06-12-2006, 03:43 AM
lol rock lee punched that dudes head off

AK47
06-12-2006, 10:22 PM
it's a nice story
but you write it in RP form LOL

WalkingFish
06-12-2006, 10:43 PM
yeah i used to love yuyuhakusho so i went to a site that talked about that and thats how they did there fanfics like that

Lost Prophet
06-14-2006, 05:08 PM
although gai and lee died, THAT WAS FING HILLARIOUS!!!!! lol, rock lee punches a guy's head off! wow...

adeadaxe2
06-15-2006, 05:09 AM
wow, thats a funny yet sad story

WalkingFish
06-20-2006, 01:16 AM
Next chapter coming soon

Volrath
07-22-2006, 05:30 AM
Just a question here walkingfish.. where did you get the name Arithos.. seeing as i hppen to Use that name on severl RP sites... And somehow your Sig reminds me of someone...

WalkingFish
07-25-2006, 02:08 AM
lol arithos from from SRP LOL yeah i got it from you then cuz it was the first name that poped in my head sorry if i shoudlnt of used

OH yeah and guess Writers block i can't think of anything

WalkingFish
07-18-2007, 02:21 AM
::POWER::
*Arithos walks out laughing*
*3 ANBU members aprouchs him*
*another is behind him with a blade to his neck*
*Arithos starts to laugh as the ANBU members Neck explodes*
*Arithos know looks exactly like Shikamaru*
"Everyoen has secrets do you want to hear mine"
*Arithos's shadow flies at a ANBU member*
"Where is his partner?"
*A ANBU member askes*
"Anyone i kill becomes apart of me"
*The ANBU member dodges the shadow*
"But i can amplify there powers"
*Suddenly Arithos takes the apperance of Jirayai*
*Arithos is suddenly behind the ANBU Member and uses Rasengan*
*the ANBU member is teared in half with only a head and calves and feet left*
*Amazed the ANBU memnbers are in aw as they are captured by Arithos's shadow as he appears to be Shika again*
*The two are choked suffering from a horrible death*
*Arithos starts for KOnoha trying to find Naruto*

Very short man its been like a year since i started this up again