SRVG
04-12-2006, 08:10 PM
this is my fan fiction based on gundam wing +endless waltz
hard to understand without it.
there are still alot of spell and grammar errors. but i dont care. if you wana check it for me plz do so. big_smile
http://www.deviantart.com/view/31722562/
Chapter 1: Foundation of the future.
In the year after colony 195, a Gundam ore mobilesuit wasn’t seen again but despite that the world was still tense. The threat of the colonies was not over and the earth once again turned to a tremendous war zone. But seeing the mobilesuits disappear was not the end of the war. Instead people turned to conventional weapons of mass destruction. In this big war zone everything turned gray and black. People died by the millions and governments didn’t stop. They insisted that the colonies didn’t have full power over the earth and almost blew it so pieces.
After colony 398, almost 200 years after the destruction of the liveable atmosphere on earth, there were colonies bigger than ever. Because there was no life possible on earth, people started to look for other places to live and started making their own colonies bigger and more habitable. Instead of living on the outside of a large planet we now live on the inside of a large sphere. This sphere has the size of the former moon of earth; it has the living space of about twelve colonies. There were also people trying to teraform the planet Venus. But it would take another two years for the program to finish and enable living on the planet.
But three years before all this, in the year 395, there was an attack on one of the colonies that was never claimed and was therefore seen as a threat against the colonies. But there never was anyone claiming the threat and the reason for it was that the the revolution wasn’t finished.
Yes a revolution.
17 Years before all this, a boy that had grown up in this colony learned in school the things that man had done to the planet earth in the attempt to obtain it fully. This boy’s name was Heero Juy. His name was the same as that of the peacemaker and legendary gundam pilot of the Gundam 01 and Gundam Wing Zero. Reading this all in his history book made him think: “I wear the family name, but do I have the power?” Saying this to his self made him wonder and look some more into it. He did some research on the internet but he found absolutely nothing. He decided to ask his father. His father responded very well. He said “So you finally noticed. You know Heero, you are the right descendent of Heero Yuy and Releana Peacecraft, two of the worlds most honorable people in the history of menkind. 200 years ago these two people with their friends and relatives cured the world of the mobilesuit era. Both of them were the soul of menkind,
but menkind didn’t listen and was so stuck in the instinct to fight that earth’s atmosphere got destroyed.
They both were meant to meet each other and bring peace but after 10 years they failed. Earth was dead and Heero and Releana stopped trying. They disappeared to live a happy life. But there were also those men who didn’t give up. The man named Zechs Marquise, or formally know as Milliardo Peacecraft, brother of Releana Peacecraft, pushed on trying to stop menkind destroying the earth together with Lt Cr Noin. The person named named Trowan Barton also didn’t disappear from time and history. This former pilot with no real name joined the rebellion against the destruction.
His role as head of the rebellion formed a mighty power and gave the rebellion strength.
With his best friend Quarra Rabarba Winner at his side, they helped the world not to get totally destroyed and so they were named Patriots because of their freehand actions against everyone.
But there also were some names that didn’t get mentioned ever again, or just on small scale.Names as Duo Maxwell and Wufei. Duo lived his life with his love as long as he could on the scrapyard. He played the game well and made a fortune. Him being good friends with Heero lasted to the end. They met each other sometimes and went to meetings and each other’s birthday birthdays.
Wufei joined the Preventors with the hope of stopping fires grow against the colonies and earth but a fire as big of the one of the government can’t be extinguished. After the war started he used the name of his former clan and made it revive again with the hope of getting restored to its former pride. This maked him honored.
Lady Un, who also was a preventor, set up a faction of here own. The OZ got back into history but this time as a group of peacekeepers.”
After hearing the story his dad told him, his eyes opened and he asked again.
“Do I have that power”. He was answered: “Yes. As long as you have the soul”
hard to understand without it.
there are still alot of spell and grammar errors. but i dont care. if you wana check it for me plz do so. big_smile
http://www.deviantart.com/view/31722562/
Chapter 1: Foundation of the future.
In the year after colony 195, a Gundam ore mobilesuit wasn’t seen again but despite that the world was still tense. The threat of the colonies was not over and the earth once again turned to a tremendous war zone. But seeing the mobilesuits disappear was not the end of the war. Instead people turned to conventional weapons of mass destruction. In this big war zone everything turned gray and black. People died by the millions and governments didn’t stop. They insisted that the colonies didn’t have full power over the earth and almost blew it so pieces.
After colony 398, almost 200 years after the destruction of the liveable atmosphere on earth, there were colonies bigger than ever. Because there was no life possible on earth, people started to look for other places to live and started making their own colonies bigger and more habitable. Instead of living on the outside of a large planet we now live on the inside of a large sphere. This sphere has the size of the former moon of earth; it has the living space of about twelve colonies. There were also people trying to teraform the planet Venus. But it would take another two years for the program to finish and enable living on the planet.
But three years before all this, in the year 395, there was an attack on one of the colonies that was never claimed and was therefore seen as a threat against the colonies. But there never was anyone claiming the threat and the reason for it was that the the revolution wasn’t finished.
Yes a revolution.
17 Years before all this, a boy that had grown up in this colony learned in school the things that man had done to the planet earth in the attempt to obtain it fully. This boy’s name was Heero Juy. His name was the same as that of the peacemaker and legendary gundam pilot of the Gundam 01 and Gundam Wing Zero. Reading this all in his history book made him think: “I wear the family name, but do I have the power?” Saying this to his self made him wonder and look some more into it. He did some research on the internet but he found absolutely nothing. He decided to ask his father. His father responded very well. He said “So you finally noticed. You know Heero, you are the right descendent of Heero Yuy and Releana Peacecraft, two of the worlds most honorable people in the history of menkind. 200 years ago these two people with their friends and relatives cured the world of the mobilesuit era. Both of them were the soul of menkind,
but menkind didn’t listen and was so stuck in the instinct to fight that earth’s atmosphere got destroyed.
They both were meant to meet each other and bring peace but after 10 years they failed. Earth was dead and Heero and Releana stopped trying. They disappeared to live a happy life. But there were also those men who didn’t give up. The man named Zechs Marquise, or formally know as Milliardo Peacecraft, brother of Releana Peacecraft, pushed on trying to stop menkind destroying the earth together with Lt Cr Noin. The person named named Trowan Barton also didn’t disappear from time and history. This former pilot with no real name joined the rebellion against the destruction.
His role as head of the rebellion formed a mighty power and gave the rebellion strength.
With his best friend Quarra Rabarba Winner at his side, they helped the world not to get totally destroyed and so they were named Patriots because of their freehand actions against everyone.
But there also were some names that didn’t get mentioned ever again, or just on small scale.Names as Duo Maxwell and Wufei. Duo lived his life with his love as long as he could on the scrapyard. He played the game well and made a fortune. Him being good friends with Heero lasted to the end. They met each other sometimes and went to meetings and each other’s birthday birthdays.
Wufei joined the Preventors with the hope of stopping fires grow against the colonies and earth but a fire as big of the one of the government can’t be extinguished. After the war started he used the name of his former clan and made it revive again with the hope of getting restored to its former pride. This maked him honored.
Lady Un, who also was a preventor, set up a faction of here own. The OZ got back into history but this time as a group of peacekeepers.”
After hearing the story his dad told him, his eyes opened and he asked again.
“Do I have that power”. He was answered: “Yes. As long as you have the soul”