My Fanfiction

[Canthinkofaname]

dont murder me cuz i probably suck *runs away to ganameyde (jupiters moon) and digs a hole 70 feet deep then creates a udnerground lab in the hole then goes back to earth and hides under the bed*

disclaim..dont own naruto w/e
an: it aint all dialouge but some is

Chapter one: Uchiha Revolation

Sasuke lay sleeping on his bed at his house dreaming
Brother why did you have to kill out family! im goin to kill you!

sasuke awoke to hear knocking at his door
" i wonder who that could be "

"Sasuke-kun answer the door please!"

"i wonder who that could be" he said again after recognizing the annoying voice of sakura. sasuke walked up to the door, and opened it to see sakura standing there like she had just been runnining.

"Sakura-chan what happened?"

"Well it seems that theres this crazy ninja outside attacking anbu and people are trying to contain him"

kinda fazed by this he asked " do you have any info on this guy"

"well it surpirsed everyone there but it seems hes been using techniques..."

grabbing sakuras shoulders gently shaking her he said "techniques!? of what!"

"...know to be from the..uchiha..."

sasuke opened his eyes shocked when she said uchiha he said "then it can only be..." interuped by sakura, knowing what sasuke was going to say she said

"its not itachi, sasuke it seems hes from a different village based on his headband"

"then that can only mean that there are more uchihas then me and itachi"
after saying that they both took off to the seen"

---meanwhile at the scene---

"alright what do we know about this guy" an anbu captain said the an anbu soldier

"what we do know is... one, hes an uchiha two,..." but before he could finish he was interuped by his captain

"WHAT HOW CAN HE BE AN UCHIHA"

"well sir if you let me finish you shouldve heard that i wouldve told you hes from waterfall village"

"look hes an uchiha i dont care what village hes from i just want him..."
before finishing everyone looked at a shuriken with ninja wire tied to it went whizzing towards the nin of waterfall, wrapping around him.

"hmm the sofuushasen no tachi technique of the uchiha clan"

the anbu captain had seen who threw it and jumped up to the building where sasuke was standing with sakura

"whats wrong with you sasuke if you hurt him.."

"AS IF... he was beating up all your anbu squad members and you think I, of all people could harm him?"

hearing this he quickly said "i suppose" and then towards back at the nin of waterfall and dashed towards him

"look your an uchiha right?"

"what the hell do you think!" the waterfall nin said as he looked hard at the anbu captain with his sharingan eyes

turning back towards sasuke, he motioned for them to come here

"you probably want to talk to him dont you"

sasuke of course did want to talk to him but he wasnt going to say yes in front of everyone watching so he simply said no

---later in a holding area where the waterfall nin was---

sasuke woke up in the morning wanting to go see the waterfall nin because he was told by the anbu captain he could at anytime he could so he dashed towards the holding area to meet him. as he reached the entrance he was greeted by two anbu

one said " im sorry but you cant... oh wait im sorry sasuke go in your here to talk to that waterfall nin right? go in"

'jeez' sasuke thought to himself as he walked in and went up to the cell of the waterfall nin

"so your an uchiha, but your not from konoha?"

"obviously" he said throwing his headband only to have it bounce back off the bars. it bounced off and hit him in the head then he did an anime fall.

"you get the point"

'were you really beating anbu back there? how can that be you just got hit by your own headband' "yes i do" sasuke was bored of what he was being told so he decided to ask " if your alive then does that mean theres other uchiha in waterfall village?"

looking at sasuke suscpiciously he replied "duuuhhhhh"

"then why did you come to konoha?"

getting up and retightening his headband again he got serious

"well there i dont know but i do know that one of the reasons i was ordered to come here...not that i would come cuz of the order but i just decided to"

(AN: naruto has kyuubi and can go talk to him now i going to just tell you now that this guy has the three-tailed shark isonade just like naruto and can talk to him, in the same way but different at the same time)

'i think ill take a visit to that shark i hate' and with that he appeared onto a little piece of land while a big area of water with a cage over it and land surrounding it

"alright shark did you make me come here and did you make me attack those anbu"

after a dark shadow appeared a deep voice said "what the hell are you f**king talking about you know i cant control you"

the waterfall nin had made an anime face -.- "what do you mean of course you can, youve done it plenty of times before..."

"look, chikari i know i can but i cant, even though im evil, make you do evil things, i can try to influence you on them but cant make you"

"what ever, f**k you shark" and after that chikari had lifted up and came back to consciousness (an: time with isonade isnt really 1 or 2 sec like with naruto n kyuubi its real time) to be hearing from sasuke

"HELLO YOU STUPID SON OF A BITCH ANSWER ME!"

shaking his head he got serious again "um sry but i dont really want to stay here so if you want to talk find me later cuz im out of here!"

"but..!" before sasuke could finish chikari did some handseals (he has some madeup jutsu i created) and held out his hands. then he blasted huge beams of water blasted out of his hands destroying the wall around him

"crap!" sasuke yelled then ran to an anbu walking down the hallway
"look the nin from waterfall has just escaped"

"WHAT THE HELL! how!"

"i dont know he did a jutsu i have never seen before"

holding out his radio to his mouth the anbu told all other anbu he had escaped so sasuke decided to go visit to hokage to see if she knew anything, but he decided he was tired so returned home for a nap

---the next day---

"hmm...what the hell happened?"

sasuke awoke and check his clock and it said 12:47 so he got up took a shower got all dressed and crap and walked into the kitchen

"but i thought...whatever i mustve fallen asleep the whole night"

he ate breakfast and departed for the hokages office

---hokages building---

sasuke had been walking instead of running and finally reached the hokages building then went up to the hokages office.

"tsunade-sama?" he said as he had walked in

"yes? come in sasuke"

sasuke opened the door fully and came up and sat down in the chair

"hokage-sama... you know about that nin from waterfall right?

to be continued
an: be nice dont murder me cuz you cant find me anyway and it is to be continued definately when you want me to continue it anyway

[AK47]

i got hooked when sakura said about the uchiha ninja
GREAT

[Hellchild915]

ahahhaah does every one do these I will probably start mine

[KageNaruto]

lol well fics have to seem incresed a bit....


i posted mine on ff.net i was just bored and posted it here so you guys wanted more and i kept posting

[Canthinkofaname]

ty ak47 and ty hellchild hope to read yours soon

heres next chapter

Chapter 2: Learning

"hokage-sama... you know about that nin from waterfall right?

"indeed sasuke but what does that have to do with anything"

raising his eyebrow sasuke said " weeeellllllll i just wanted to say... hes an uchiha.. and i just thought that maybe you could help me find out stuff about him! do you know anything?"

getting up from her desk she said "i dont know anything personally, but i know that hes from waterfall so you should check out stuff ther...you know ask around"

"well thank you hokage-sama, i think ill check it out" and with that sasuke left for his house and prepared for his journey. then he heard a knock at the door.

"who is it..." he asked vaguley only to here sakura saying

"sasuke-kun can i come in?"

"now why would you want to do that?" he said as he got up to open the door.

"well i heard from the hokage that you said you were leaving and i wanted to say goodbye"

"k well goodbye sakura and ill be back in i dont know"

"goodbye sasuke..."

sasuke then left his house after sakura left and he departed for waterfall. when he got to the gate he was greeted by kakashi

"sasuke...your leaving?" he came over by him

"yes i am so goodbye kakashi-sensei..." and with that he ran towards waterfall.

---later when he reached waterfall---

sasuke entered the gate and started searching for the uchihas. he then later got to a house with an uchiha in it

he went up to it and knocked.

"who is it?"

"well im an uchiha from konoha and i was wondering if you could tell me something about this one nin from here whos an uchiha."

"i guess... come on in"

he opened the door and came in, then sat down

"so whats your name?"

"i am sasuke uchiha and i was wondering about this one nin who looks like this..." sasuke grabbed a photo he managed to take of chikari

"ok ill examine it give it here" and with that he took the picture and examined it. "Oi, it seems that chikari left the village again..."

'again?' sasuke thought. "so his name is chikari?"

getting up and grabbing another photo of his own, he showed it to sasuke
"this is chikari hes a jounin of waterfall, and hes pretty good at creating his own techniques, and also copying them with his sharingan..."

"well thank you, one more thing and ill be on my way...do you know why he went to konoha?"

"well sorry to say but no" with that he headed into his kitchen.

"thank you i think im done here"

sasuke left his house and went searching for info about chikari. he made his way to a library and picked up a book about the uchihas and turned to the members part.

"where is he where is he" he said while searching over the text with his finger.

"ah here he is" he said starting to read over his past

reading silently in his head, 'chikari uchiha, a sad uchiha who at birth was unlucky to recieve the treatment, of having a demon sealed inside of him'
now knowing that, he mummbled to himself "so he has a demon like naruto... i wonder, can he to harness the power of his demon? in any case i need to find out more about him"

---back at konoha---'

sakura was running towards the gate and saw kakashi

"kakashi..*pant pant*..sensei..wheres..sasuke..kun *pant pant*"

"you totally missed him he left like an hour ago"

"...*makes an anime face -.-*..."

"well i dont know when he'll be back so go do something occupying"

---back at waterfall---

'well ok ive learned everything i need to so ill be heading back to konoha now' and with that sasuke exited waterfall village and starting running back to konoha.

running back to konoha he was thinking 'i bet when i get back to konoha sakura will be there waiting'

---when he arrived (konoha)---

sakura saw sasuke and yelled to him "sasuke-kun!" she yelled while waving.

sasuke came up and made an anime face -.- "why sakura..." he said sarcastically, "...why would you wait all this time for me..."

"...because i had nothing better to do"

then kakashi came in and said " sakura what are you talking about you had plenty of things to do"

"SHUT UP KAKASHI-SENSEI"

"alright sakura ill be seeing you later"

so sasuke went back into konoha and went back to his house to find chikari was there

"um...what the f**k are you doing in my house"

chikari made an anime face with the big white eyes and got mad "WHAT THE HELL IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN"

so then sasuke did the same "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU YOUR A F**KING CRIMINAL SITTING IN MY F**KING HOUSE. WHAT HELL DO YOU THINK ITS SUPPOSED TO MEAN"

he then changed his anime face to -.- "i guess you dont want me here then see you later"

"whoa whoa whoa...thats not what i meant...its just your a f**king criminal in my f**king house so i thought id tell you..." 'damn it hes crazy...jeez'

"well now what a change of heart... anyways i dont even know why im here."

"so i guess..."

"you guess? then that would mean you think which is impossible"

now making then mad, white-eyed face he said " your itching for a fight arent you?"

"are you serious? i guess i have a few minutes"

to be continued...
an: again ty ak47 it will be continued whatever you know the routine

[AK47]

well fics are fun aren't they
better make the fight good
GREAT

[Canthinkofaname]

ty ak47 and the fight shall be as good as i make it
-hehe- ill update soon enough

[Canthinkofaname]

alright

Chapter 3: Chikari Vs. Sasuke

"are you serious? i guess i have a few minutes"

"alright then bring it on"

getting up chikari took his fighting stance. "lets go"

"ok" sasuke threw his stuff on the ground

"but i dont wanna wreck up my house so lets go outside"

"... *anime face -.-*"

"... *sasuke also made it*... well come on"

"lets go outside the gates then"

then they both ran outside and appeared at the gates (an: like on ep 4 and others they take off they like teleport it looks like that)

---outside the gates---

"alright sasuke you can have the first move"

"whatever" so sasuke did some handseals and did phoenix fire at him.

so chikari did some handseals of his own and did the jutsu were he shoots out a blast of water from each hand, then he pulled out his sword and did one more handseal, swung his huge sword (an his sword looks like zabuzas without the holes) and a huge wave of wave came out and went towards sasuke

'what can i do here! ive never seen those jutsu!' sasuke thought while doing a handseal and disappeared while a log got murdered by chikaris jutsus then thinking of a plan 'ok so i have all these fire jutsu but what can i do against his water jutsu? unless ill use' with that sasuke did the three handseals for chidori while jumping out of the tree he was hiding in, throwing his hand hard down on the ground where chikari stood, then as chidori hit chikari he disappeared in a poof of smoke

"what!? a kage bunshin?!" then sasuke got blasted by one huge stream of surging water that sent him flying

'wait a second? maybe i can copy his jutsu with my sharingan!' sasuke thought

"give up?"

"not yet"

"then ill use it again to change your mind" and with that chikari did some more handseals and shot out a huge stream of surging water from his hands, so sasuke activated his sharingan and began copying.

when he was finished in about two seconds he started doing handseals and shot out a stream of surging water

"what!!!??! how can you use my jutsu!" so chikari added more chakra into his blast which overpowered sasukes although sasukes weakened his hit.

'he has alot of tricks up his sleeve, he can add power to his blast!' sasuke thought while doing the handseals for chidori again then creating the lightning in his hand and rushing towards chikari

"chidori? i have my own chidori" so chikari did some handseals creating a watery substance looking like chidori in his hands rushing towards sasuke.

both chidori's collided creating a huge explosion of course harming sasuke and chikari but more sasuke cuz chikari was an expierienced jounin almost near the level of sennin.

"is there anything you cant do?" sasuke murmured while chikari read his mouth movements with his sharingan

"i cant lose to you"

'my god he can read lips can he read...' sasuke was interuped by chikari saying

"minds? yes i can sasuke, but you cant yet with that incomplete sharingan."

'incomplete what the hell is he talking... he couldnt mean... the..' sasuke was then interuped again when chikari opened his eyes and said "yes, its the...MANGEKYOU!"

"...no way"

"yes its true i have the mangekyou and i know you think im evil for having it but waterfall uchiha developed a way to get it without killing your best friend."

'well if he knows how itachi got it then he should be telling the truth but that wont stop him from using the same techniques.'

"indeed sasuke so i think ill use my favorite technique on you" and chikari disappeared and reappeared right behind sasuke, and foolishly enough sasuke turned around and was hit with the tsukiyomi.

'NOOOOOOOOOOOOO how could this happen!!!'

like itachi's tsukiyomi there was millions of chikaris with the swords who started stabbing sasuke. of course sasuke winced in pain for him about 72 hours while after 3 seconds passed for chikari it was over and sasuke fell to the ground

"look sasuke even if i werent an uchiha and didnt have these techniques it wouldnt make me any less of a jounin... id still win"

sasuke got up a glared at chikari. "... so what"

"well i guess you still want to fight" and chikari did some handseals and began glowing with a blue aura.

'what could this be i wonder' sasuke thought to himself

"its my super explosion.." and the aura extended fastly outwards which was a huge explosion causing sasuke to feel pain

"and best of all it doesnt harm me"

"whatever" sasuke said while forming some handseals. he became surrounded in flames and big flame beam shot out going towards chikari

"you think i cant counter that?" 'WHAT!' he thought after seeing another sasuke behind him doing the same thing. 'well he doesnt know shadow clone.... does he?'

"heh... neither are real you idiot i thought youd be able to see that" sasuke said while coming down from the air about to pound down on chikari with his chidori in his hand.

"nice try but you cant..." he was interuped with a big pound near the top of his head with the chidori and disappearing and a log getting murdered

"...as i was saying... you cant hit me im a jounin with the uchiha blood flowing through me"

'damn it to f**king hell how could he be that good' sasuke thought as the log went flying

"chikari show yourself lets have a fair fight you..." again being interuped by a chikari rushing towards sasuke with his chidori in his hand

"AGAIN?!" 'crap i cant use it more than once, DAMN IT... but at least i can try to counter his move' he thought while reading his future movements not knowing chikari was doing the same

when chikari tried hitting sasuke with it sasuke move to the left while chikari then moved his arm to the left trying again to get him so sasuke jumped in the air and chikari did the same facing sasuke

'it cant end like this' sasuke thought while pulling out a kunai

chikari threw his arm at sasuke and it stopped right in front of his face as sasuke stabbed him with the kunai and he fell to the ground still holding his chidori in his hand and sasuke landed next to him

"im sorry but i wasnt going to let myself get killed"

"you arent are you?" chikari said grinning moving his arm with his chidori to sasukes legs tripping sasuke. "look sasuke im not evil but you challenged me so i have a duty to finish the challenge cuz i cant die especially to you"
he said looking down at sasuke with a serious face

"you fought well sasuke but ive won... time to die!" he said thrusting his arm at sasuke

'think think think!!!' sasuke thought to himself watching the chidori flying towards him. then chikari and sasuke both saw a barrage of kunai fly towards chikari and chikari jumped back as the kunai penetrated the ground in front of sasukes feet

"but who" chikari said at loud as all the kunai were done flying

"HEY STAY FOCUSED!" sasuke yelled as he did handseals after standing back up and shooting out a huge stream of surging water out of his hands

"using my own technique against me..." chikari said as he got blasted by the stream. after it stoped he dashed over to chikari who was now on the ground.

"its time to finish you" he said about to do the handseals for chidori again after knowing it would injure him if not worse, but before he did chikari talked.

"even though you think your about to kill me, your wrong im not going to let you do that" and with that he disappeared and a log appeared as sasuke noticed chikari dashing from tree to tree away from konoha.

'ill find him some time again' sasuke thought as he started heading back to konoha to see sakura standing there

to be continued probably
an: nice and junk you know i dont feel like saying this after every chapter

[regina777]

you are improving- i see!!! that is very good indeed.

i have been reading your fanfic for some time now so keep it coming. but add more meat to the descriptions- dialogue is good but too much of it kinda takes something off of the story. just a friendly advise.

[WalkingFish]

wow hellchild that would be intresting to see a second hokage fic

and by the way great job cant

[Canthinkofaname]

ty whats your face
heres chapter 4

Chapter 4: new techs, nother fight

'ill find him some time again' sasuke thought as he started heading back to konoha to see sakura standing there

"sasuke what the hell do you think you were doing?" she said standing there looking hard at sasuke

"what the hell did it look like?" sasuke replied walking past sakura into konoha to see kakashi

"sasuke if you are going to fight all out, especially if your going to use chidori im going to have to teach you some new things" kakashi said as sasuke walked up to him

'ah this is starting to look up' sasuke thought after eharing kakashis remark

"alright come to the training ground in about..." kakashi thought for a second "...maybe an hour

"alright kakashi sensei" sasuke said as he dashed back to his house

sasuke had just arrived at his house and walked into his door. he started making lunch and sat down and started thinking to himself. 'when will i see him again? what will he know then? hmm i also wonder what kakashi sensei wants to teach me.' a few minutes later he got up and ate his lunch and waited for an hour.

"hmm its been an hour so i guess ill head to the training ground now" and with that said he got up and left and started towards the training ground.

he got there and saw kakashi standing there reading his icha icha paradise book.

"hello kakashi sensei so what are you going to be teaching me today?" sasuke said heading up to kakashi.

"well sasuke i saw most of your battle, you used chidori. if you want to use the chidori to full potential. so im going to be teaching you a new version of chidori" kakashi said while still reading his book

'a new version! this is going to be good' sasuke thought to himself inside his head.

finally putting away his book kakashi said "alright its same handseals you just need to add more chakra in a specific way. ill show you" so kakashi when into an open area with one tree there.

'cant wait to see this' sasuke thought watching kakashi quickly do the handseals for chidori.
(ill tell you the rest in a flashback in their next fight)

---meanwhile with chikari---

chikari just got back to a small village near konoha. he entered a hotel and stayed there for awhile

"hmm sasuke is inasnely strong for a genin, i mean im a jounin and had to use one of my intermediate techniques. if i have to actually use that im bound to die and if i die to him it would be embarrasing." he said to himself just laying on the bed

"i will fight him again and if i really have to use 'that' then i will surely die not to mention 'that' jutsu i will die. either of them i will die but with that one at least i have a chance of survival even if it is only a 2.4% chance" he said aloud to himself again while still lying there.

"not to mention its forbidden and even if i survive ill be banished for using that kinjutsu. but if i must i will use it" chikari kept talking to himself

"wait a second...why the F**K am i talking to myself?" chikari pondered to himself aloud.

'whatever the reason i was talking to myself i need to rest up for the next time we meet' chikari thought to himself sitting up.

---back at konoha---

"wow with this technique ill surely kill that ass" sasuke said to himself as he was walking back to his house looking at his hand.

just then sakura came running up to sasuke panting. "sasuke -pant- i think -pant- hes back..."

"hmm! he? you mean chikari?!" sasuke yelled at sakura.

"if chikari is the guy you fought then yes!" she said yelling back at sasuke.

so both sasuke and sakura ran back to where he was at the gates of konoha. they walked up to the gates seeing chikari just standing there.

"ah sasuke ive been waiting to kill you sasuke." chikari said seeing chikari approach him.

"alright chikari are you here for a fight?" sasuke said back at chikari after hearing him say that.

"indeed so, you girl stay back." chikari threw a kunai at sakuras feet

"alright time to die chikari" sasuke said seeing the kunai almost hit sakura

"indeed sasuke. for you" so then chikari did some handseals and touched the ground. then all of a sudden the whole scenery changed into just all white

"wha...who? where the hell are we!" sasuke yelled being sucked into the white nothingness

"this is your gravesite" he said. "for you see the only way to get out. is for someone to die...

"...*makes anime face •.•*..."

"aha you shoulda seen the look on your face, im totally kidding ill release this when i feel like it or when i die" chikari said seeing sasukes expression.

"alright chikari. lets get this fight on the road" sasuke said

"ok sasuke. this is the end!" chikari shouted

an: you know the drill

[regina777]

That is a subalashi addition. i cant say i wanted more. you are going to write more- wont you?
but still a lot of dialogue. That is impressive. but not soo descriptive. Can you give more descriptions in later fictions, instead of lots of dialogue.

[Canthinkofaname]

dont worry the fight is going to be barely even dialouge, mainly description
-movements and what they do- much easier to describe in fights
and yes ill write more

[regina777]

i see. Thats more like it.

[Lost Prophet]

I just finished reading the fanfics, and I just love them. you did a good job. keep up the good work

[Canthinkofaname]

ty human whats your face

[Canthinkofaname]

Chapter five: the fight...

"ok sasuke. this is the end!" chikari shouted

"Bring it on wuss" sasuke shouted back as he dashed to the left doing handseals for chidori and rushing towards chikari. too bad he was too moronic to remember that chikari could see his movements, by the time he realized it it was too late and got blasted from behind.

"are you retarded? did you skip a few grades?" chikari managed to laugh as he did some handseals after biting his thumb and summoning a huge dragon like creature with large plates of white pig-iron melted in the shapes of razors and other sharp things.

"You are the kind of person who, when one first meets you, one doesn't like you. But when one gets to know you better, one hates you." sasuke said softly while doing handseals for Ryuuka, then blasting it towards chikari.

after hering his remark chikari grew angry. he stood there while his face remainded hidden with shadows. sasuke wondered what was happening.

whispering to himself, but just loud enough for sasuke to hear chikari said "opening...of the eight celestial chakra gates...1 gate!" then after that chikari raised his head and sasuke gained vision of a new sharingan.

'what can this be!' sasuke pondered while staring at the golden, four pupil marked (an you know regular sharingan has three swirls this one has 4 and is gold instead of red) sharingan in chikaris eyes.

"this my dear sasuke is called the norgekyou sharingan. it has immense powers beyond the comprehension of your brain." chikari said while knocking sasuke backwards and beginning a sequence of long handseals.
"DRAGON..HORSE..TIGER..DOG..PIG..SNAKE..OX..TIGER.. RABBIT..SNAKE
..MONKEY..HORSE..PIG..DOG..TIGER..DOG..OX..RABBIT. .TIGER..HORSE
..SNAKE..DRAGON..TIGER" chikari said slowy lifting up his hands.

"what could this be?" sasuke pondered aloud as a white ball with a black border/outline began forming infront of chikaris hands. it grew bigger until about the size of a basketball.

"this is the end of you...and sadly, me too" chikari said. eventually the ball started looking like a black hole, not sucking though, with the black hole into the center. an extremely brilliant white radiant light began bursting out of the hole.

"ah thats bright" sasuke said trying to cover his eyes. 'and sadly, me too' sasuke remembered what chikari said. 'what could that mean' sasuke pondered.

"sasuke i could read your mind with the mangekyou what makes you think i cant with this form?" chikari said. "it means, if you havent realized yet i had to open all 8 chakra gates to do this tech. theres a 2.4% chance of survival. now do you think i have the luck it takes to survive?" chikari said jokingly thinking he wouldnt survive.

sasuke didnt answer. he was too busy thinking what chikaris attack would do to him. to his surprise, thinking it was impossible, the light grew brighter and began rotating.

"now what could be happening!?" sasuke grew paying more attention. he was about to run away but he was stuck. "what the hell?" sasuke said looking down at his feet. his feet and legs were wrapped with a long dragon, chikaris dragon. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"

"sasuke ive pulled out all the stops to have you killed. this blast will incinerate your entire body and all of the stuff inside. this blast is so hot it cant even be measured in degrees." chikari began looking down at the ball in his hand then back at sasuke. he lifted his hands up to chest level.

".*makes anime face •.•...why do you want to kill me so bad?" sasuke said staring at chikari.

"look sasuke, you and me began this fight. im going to finish it." chikari replied to sasuke question. the light began glowing so bright even chikari, who wasnt looking at it, began to wince at the brightness. they were already fighting in a white place, nothing else, just blank whiteness, but the attack was so bright, the area was growing whiter.

"sasuke ill stop procrastinating now and obliterate you into pure nothingness." chikari said again without sasuke replying. the whiteness began ascending outward from the hole. it seemed as if it couldnt get any brighter without burning someones retnas, but it grew brighter. sasuke couldnt even close his eyes without seeing the brightness. he wasnt even sure if he was going to be attacked after being blinded.

"alright then just do it. i cant see and if it gets any brighter i wont see anything ever again." sasuke finally replied to chikaris explaination of his jutsu.

"alright fine.." chikari said replying to sasuke. the white light turned into a huge blast. it went surging towards sasuke at an inhuman speed. sasuke opened his eyes only to close them again seeing the light. he opened them one more time as the blast hit him. the blast was intense. sasuke flew back as chikaris dragon was obliterated. it seemed as though sasuke bones were melting and his skin was more than 1000 degrees. of course it didnt. sasuke lay on the ground as chikari fell to his knees then onto his stomach. he had closed the gates and was laying there and trying to breathe just managing to do that.

"oh, my, god..." sasuke tried saying but only managing to whisper. 'what is this intense pain! it feels so hot and my bones are melting.' sasuke screamed in his mind. the thought of dying was melded into his mind.

"oh i forgot to mention..." chikari managed to say getting up holding his left arm. "...that if i survive, which in case you skipped a few grades, i did, then you survive too but in an even worse condition than me." chikari said as blood fell down his chin from his mouth.

"but now time to finish you." chikari said while bitting his thumb and beginning to do handseals. when he finished, put his hands together and slapped them onto the ground. "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" he yelled as the marks appeared and a cloud poofed up. when the smoke cleared chikari was standing and a HUGE red dragon with two mouths and two horns at the joints of his jaw and two spikes on each side of his head on the back and one big one on the center back of the head.

"this is the end of you!" chikari yelled grabbing his left arm once again as blood ran down his chin from his mouth.

an: this was a long fight huh, and not even over! anyways comments plz

[regina777]

hmm!! real good- early release too. That is fine improvement. Keep it up.

[Canthinkofaname]

Chapter 6: the fight... (part two)

"this is the end of you!" chikari yelled grabbing his left arm once again as blood ran down his chin from his mouth.

sasuke jumped back taking in what was happening. he was seeing a giant red dragon. 'what the hell!? how could he summon such a thing?!' he was thinking taking in the dragon's image.

"whats wrong with you..." chikari said slapping his forehead. "dont you understand yet that i can read your mind?" he finished

"doesnt matter" sasuke said back forming the handseals for chidori. "sasuke...that wont work against..." chikari looked towards the back. there was sasuke with a big chidori leaving a streak whereever it went.

"sorry, but this is a new chidori!" he said attacking chikari.

---FLASHBACK---

"alright sasuke im going to be teaching you chidori blast." kakashi said looking at sasuke. "but kakashi...i already know chidori, which you taught me." sasuke said making a -.- face

"sasuke...chidori, BLAST" he said doing a -.- face back. "and the difference?" sasuke said curious as to what is so special about this new chidori. "well for one, you instantaniously teleport behind your opponent. two, its bigger and whatever air it touches, it leaves a big streak which can be used later as an ordinary chidori. and third, when it hits something solid, a brilliant huge lightning bolt comes down, striking the opponent melting anything, excluding you."

'alright then, teach me it now' sasuke thought after hearing that. "teach me it kakashi!" he yelled to kakashi. "alright sasuke.."

---FLASHBACK END---

"DIE CHIKARI!" he yelled about to pound chikari. just then a hand grabbed sasuke arm, throwing him down onto the dragons back and canceling sasukes chidori blast. "what the hell...?!"

he looked up and there was a man with bandages over his eyes. but also veins going into the eyes (like the byakugan). so the first thing he asumed was that he was a hyuuga. but he didnt quite look like a hyuuga. 'what is with his..." sasuke started saying only to be interupped by another man standing by chikari. "its called the akuma sharingan." he said. sasuke thought. 'akuma? as in demon? but the, what, WHATS GOING ON.' he continued thinking.

"yes its called akuma as in demon. it looks like a normal sharingan but instead of red its black, with the pupil and swirls being white, along with veins like a hyuuga" the man continued reading sasukes mind. he also had it activated. but the man who grabbed him had bandages over his eyes so couldnt see it. but this other man didnt, and like he said, it was black with the pupils and swirls white. he continued "it has all the abilities of the sharingan, and the byakugan. which is why he can see with those bandages.

chikari spoke up. "xen? subaiya? what are you doing here?" asking questions. sasuke began thinking 'whos this xen and subaiya?'. "look sasuke do you think im the only one who can read your mind? xen and subaiya are my brothers and can also read your mind" chikari began talking. "by the way, subaiya and xen this is my battle dont interfere."

slapping his head subaiya (the one by chikari) started speaking "do you know what that thing wouldve done to you? i dont know how he learned that move but its deadly no matter who uses it" in his defense chikari said "but hes just a genin."

"did you not here me? deadly no matter who uses it. it doesnt matter if an academy student uses it. youll die. that thing dissolves all air particals inside of you, making you unable to breathe. not that youd want to because it also raises your skin hotter than 1000f°. it also does many other horrible things but you get the point." subaiya continued explaining.

xen (the one who stopped sasuke) spoke. "indeed brother. plus how could he learn the ancient uchiha raikiri blast?" sasuke thought again. 'why are they acting as if it were their move?' "sasuke why are you so dumb. first off i dont know why you can understand we can read your mind. two, it is our move." chikari said reading sasukes mind once again.

"i learned it from my sensei." sasuke said. chikari began thinking, and communicating with his brothers. 'his sensei? maybe his was that one person from leaf with the sharingan in his left eye.' 'probably cuz without the sharingan you cant copy it, or use it at all.' 'so hes an uchiha eh?' then they finished talking. "alright sasuke, this fight will be postponed. not canceled. weve decided you can hone up your skills or whatever for 2 days. and you should bring some teamates to help cause my brothers are fighting too."

"alright. release this whatever the f**k it is and let me go. ill be back in 2 days" and with that sasuke jumped back out and into konoha.

---the next day---

sasuke was searching for naruto. he knew naruto was strong and could help and after naruto hed get some more people. he walked past ichiraku ramen to hear naruto.

"ramen ramen ramen ramen, RAMEN!!" naruto said grabbing the bowl and slurping up the noodles. then sasuke walked in and sat down.

"alright naruto lets talk about something thats going to happen in a day."

an: the fight postponed but to be continued still. cuz sasuke against three jounin? i think not. anyways comments

[Lost Prophet]

WHOA, that is a good story. this is getting better and better

[Canthinkofaname]

ty person
i had part of chapter 7, but it got deleted somehow so i have to like restart it

[Lost Prophet]

err, whens this coming back?

[Canthinkofaname]

hmm, i guess i could update it.

chapter 7: the fight... (part three)

"alright naruto lets talk about something thats going to happen in a day."

"what could you want to talk about to me?"

"this is serious. i found out not too long ago that the uchihas arent really dead. other villages are populated with them. and theres one and his two brothers that are fighting me right now. we were fighting but postponed it and im getting some friends to help in the fight. which is you."

'hmm...what did he just say? i didnt understand anything of that except for he wants me to fight with him...' naruto thought to himself as he usually does. he slurped up the last of his ramen and sat up. "alright! lets go!"

an anime sweatdrop fell down sasukes head. "oi, naruto. its not for a day. plus, we can still get more people and i want to get one more." 'rock lee, you seem to be a powerful fighter. youll come with me.' sasuke thought about the fight in a day.

---the next day---

sasuke naruto and rock lee were taking there time walking to the gates. "so sasuke what exactly are we doing again?" naruto pondered aloud as he forgot what sasuke had said yesterday. "oi, naruto were here to fight some people. their jounin and skilled ninja.

"well lets go!" and naruto started running. "oi..." and sasuke, and rock lee ran to the gates too. when naruto got there rock lee and sasuke were waiting. "oi, naruto your so slow, as usual." and naruto did an anime sweatdrop. "but whatever lets go."

they entered the outskirts to see chikari and his brothers sitting there waiting. they sat up and chikari used the summoning plane thing. they were all suddenly engulfed in pure white.

"AH, what it this nothingness!" naruto screamed seeing all the whiteness. "relax, dumbass. this wont do anything to us." sasuke said coldy.

"alright sasuke, theres three of us and three of you. so 1 on 1." chikari said anylyzing everything here. "the first match will be xen vs that thickbrowed kid." a large vein popped on lees head. "then so be it" lee said shortly after had calming down. xen and lee stepped forward.

"i guess ill go easy on you." xen said underestimating lee. then lee appeared right under xen and kicked him upwards, then jumping up and wrapping xen with his wristape. "take this! initial lotus!" and they both started spinning downwards and they crashed into the ground.

"Xen!" subaiya yelled. 'actually hes fine.' he began thinking after seeing xen stand up. 'that freak could never beat xen.' he finished. then xen did some handseals and a chidori in his hands appeared. it was different though. it was dark, black. "ill get you for that. it kinda hurt... Kage Chidori!" xen said to lee. lee eyes widened. but he jumped in the air and it seemed as though he was floating there. then he slipped off his shin sleeves. 'im sorry gai sensei, but im taking them off.' he thought as he dropped the weights.

the weights nearly hit subaiya and chikari as lee landed. "now i can move easier." and lee disappeared. he reappeared right in front of xen and kicked him in the face. then as he went flying lee appeared under him and kicked him upwards. then reappeared in front of him again and kicked him, and kept doing this.

eventually lee finished and xen went sliding in front of subaiyas feet. "im sorry subaiya. he actually beat me." xen said apologetically. "its alright. ill get revenge." and subaiya stepped forwards as did naruto. the next fight was gonna begin.

in a few minutes naruto got beaten and was over by sasuke. "its alright sasuke that your friend got beaten. i cant help it that im better than him."
subaiya said after a minute. "alright subaiya, enough showing off." chikari said angrily at his older brother.

then the final fight was going to begin. chikari stepped forward and sasuke stepped forward. "ok sasuke this is the final fight. the fight were you lose.!"

an: sorry its shorter than the usual ones, but hey its like 47 times longer than walkingfishes story

[Chidongan]

wow dude these are really good. i think it could use more detail. but toher than that its cool.

[Lost Prophet]

good stuff, but I think naruto was too easily beaten

[Canthinkofaname]

indeed, i didnt feel like actually typing that fight because i was at school doing it, and i write better at my house,

[Canthinkofaname]

Chapter 8: the final fight


then the final fight was going to begin. chikari stepped forward and sasuke stepped forward. "ok sasuke this is the final fight. the fight were you lose.!"

then subaiya fell on his knews spewing blood out from his mouth. "ow, what the hell... whats going on". then he looked down at some kunai lodged in his stomach. "how the hell did these get there?." subaiya said spewing blood from his mouth. "oh well..just..finish him..." and subaiya fell over unconscious.

"subaiya! i will beat you sasuke.." and chikari ran towards sasuke. then he did some handseals and chidori appeared as he continued to rush towards sasuke.
"oh chikari, the same old tricks? ill show you one of my new ones." and sasuke bit his thumb and did some handseals. then a cloud of smoke appeared and when it cleared there was a giant snake. suddenly chikari stopped and chidori disappeared. then he bit his thumb and summoned his beast. but this one was different. it was kinda the same except all the details of the head were different from the other dragon.

both of the summons lurched forward. they each bit each others neck. of course the snakes head practially got ripped off while the snake did nothing to chikari's dragon because of its hard plated armor. then chhikaris dragon obliterated the rest of the snake and sasuke landed hard of the ground.

"its ok sasuke, ill kill you quickly." and chikari jumped off his dragon and onto the ground infront of sasuke. as chikari did handseals for chidori his dragon disappeared. "now now sasuke, i expected better from you." chikari said as he lunged forward at sasuke. the ground exploded as sasuke was no where to be found. then some wires attached to some shuriken flew by chikari.

"what! the sofuushasen no tachi!" and the strings tightened around chikari. "now now chikari, i expected better from you." and veins appeared around chikaris eyes and his head turned towards sasuke. "you silly fool, this can be used against you." and chikari began doing seals with just his right hand. 'katon: ryuuka no jutsu!' and chikari was surrouned with flames as a flame shot out at sasuke. sasuke was planning on doing it first but he was bragging too much.

just then subaiya woke up noticing chikari had the akuma sharingan activated. "chikari what are you doing?!" standing up barely. "the akuma sharingan takes up a huge amount of chakra." he said just to fall back down remaining conscious.

the wire slipped lose and chikari jumped down over sasuke grabbing his throat. "its time you die sasuke!" and he did another sequence of handseals wiht one hand. a chidori appeared and he was about the kill sasuke but sasuke stabbed chikaris arm.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHH" chikari let go of sasuke's throat. he jumped back canceling the chidori. "what the hell sasuke. your going to die eventually stop prolonging it!" and chikari rushed forwards at sasuke again. but sasuke was already gone. sasuke was behind chikari with chidori blast in his hand.

"im sorry chikari, but your going to die here!" and he punched chikari in the stomach. a direct hit and no disappearing or anything. straight into his stomach and it pierced it straight through. blood went everywhere.

"well sasuke..." he spewed blood from his mouth. "...it seems...you got me..." it was getting difficult to breath for him. "but now, i have you..." he said smiling after blood spewed again from his mouth and he began doing handseals with one hand and holding sasukes arm with the other. a chidori appeared in his hand and hit sasuke in the stomach and he coughed blood onto chikaris arm.

"sasuke, you're going to lose here..." coughing out blood again. "even though you got me good, i have more skill. you're going to die..." and he took out sasukes arm out of his stomach and kicking him in the face and he went flying backwards. "now ill show how to really use the sofushsen no tachi." and he pulled out some fuuma shuriken attaching wires to them. he threw them and around and around they went until sasuke was completely covered in wire except for his face.

"oh too bad chikari, you lose." and sasuke lifted his head to show his sharingan. 'mirror heaven earth change!' and suddenly chikari was wrapped in wire. "its time you die!" and sasuke ran towards chikari and slapped on a bunch of exploding notes and stabbed his feet to the ground with some katanas.

"this is where you die" and sasuke jumped up into the air and threw five kunai with exploding tags at chikari. they stabbed into chikari and the notes exploded setting off the others already attached.

the smoke cleared and chikari was lying on the ground. he was still breathing but then disappeared. he appeared behind sasuke with the chidori blast and was about to kill sasuke. "DIE" and chikari attacked sasuke.

an: hehehehehe find out the conclusion in chapter 9. comments plz

[Canthinkofaname]

lkkkk

[AK47]

wow i like the attacks and the fight scene
it was really fun and great to read
really exciting
the summonings were cool too

[Canthinkofaname]

thanks sorry for doublepost

[AK47]

oh if i hadn't posted you could've deleted it
my bad
anyway continue and who cares about double posting

[Canthinkofaname]

eh i guess

[WalkingFish]

sry cant but its sprta confusing to me i dotn really understand

[Canthinkofaname]

its ok my young grasshoppa, in good time
i have pictures ive drawn of chikari, but i dont know how to post them on the computer

[Canthinkofaname]

and if you wanna see chikaris dragons
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e48/ADeadaxe/A.jpg
the first one is the first dragon he used
second is the second dragon
(obviously)

[Lost Prophet]

yugioh cards? those are slifer and his reincarnation!

[Canthinkofaname]

whoa, someone actually knows
yeah i know, cuz i like how they look and they my 2 favorite cards
the reincarnation is called Uria, Lord of Searing Flames

[Lost Prophet]

I used to play like last year, ad I saw the other card. I have slifer in english, and its real. I got it from a trade with a kid. I got it checked, and its legit.worth a lot actually

[Canthinkofaname]

yeah so do i, and i also have obelisk the tormentor
but enough chat about yugioh

Chapter 9: the final fight (part 2)

the smoke cleared and chikari was lying on the ground. he was still breathing but then disappeared. he appeared behind sasuke with the chidori blast and was about to kill sasuke. "DIE" and chikari attacked sasuke.

"like that'd work" and sasuke ducked under chikari's attack and punching him in the stomach. "huh, i expected better from you chikari, a jounin near the level of sannin" and he released his punch and began the shishi rendan combo.

he went flying in the air as sasuke kicked chikari in the chin and jumped up next to chikari and kicked him in the side. then he turned over punching him then turning over again and punching him with the other arm. then he turned over again and kicked him and they were near the ground now and sasuke kicked chikari in the chest, onto the ground hard.

"now chikari. it seems youve grown weak." and sasuke pulled out a fuuma shuriken and began spinning it. he threw it and its blade pierced chikari's stomach and went straight threw it. blood flowed out of chikaris mouth.
"no sasuke, youve grown weak. sasuke, when im near death, i get angry and i prepare to die with my opponent with my ultimate technique." chikari said getting up. then he opened the first celestial gate and activated the Norgekyou Sharingan. "now sasuke, i shall show you true power." and chikari began doing many complicated handseals, with even some unknown handseals. it looked like the jutsu he used in there previous battle, but it was different. it was impossible but this one was even brighter than the previous one.

"now sasuke, you shall die." and chikari opened all eight chakra gates. this attack was so bright, even bright would say that it was bright. it started expanding. it started retaining a sphereical shape this time.
"im sorry chikari, but this is where it ends for you, without me dieing!" and chikari turned around to see sasuke was standing right behind him holding a shuriken with wire attached. sasuke threw it around chikari and he become engulfed in the wire and when the wire ran out the shuriken came around and stabbed him.

"and i know this seems kinda unfair, it doesnt. cuz after all chikari, your basically a sannin. which is why two genins shouldnt be too hard to handle. NOW NARUTO!" and naruto appeared in kyuubi lvl 2 form. "oh and, subaiya was it, you think you easily beat naruto? dont you see that huge hole in your chest? your probably going to die soon with all that bloodloss."
naruto created a kage bunshin. they put their hands together and starting creating a rasengan. but this wasnt any rasengan, it was...Oodama Rasengan!!!

naruto and his bunshin started running towards chikari. chikari turned his head back towards naruto. "you forget, my dear idiot sasuke, this silly technique wont hold me down" and the wire fell to the ground. chikari was behind sasuke and sasuke got kicked way back by him. "now for this brat!" and chikari raised his holding his version of the oodama rasengan. chikari started running towards naruto.

naruto saw him coming but continued running. eventually they came into contact and both of their attacks collided creating a huge burst of intense light that couldve blinded someone. it exploded and chikari went flying backwards as did naruto. the side-effects of chikaris move would take effect soon. but chikari wasnt going to die, so he immediately sealed the gates and started healing himself with the glowing hand.

"alright you two idiots, if you want it to be two against one so be it" and chikari began doing the ram handseals and glowed blue. he was going into isonade form.

"now is the time for you to die!" and chikari went level 3 isonade form. and rushed towards naruto and punched him hard in the stomach hard sending him flying back. then he turned towards sasuke and kicked him in the face sending him flying in the air. he then pulled out some shuriken and threw them at sasuke and then some at naruto which hit naruto in the leg.

"oh thats no good. i think i immobilize you for now you troublesome person" and chikari did some handseals for chakra scalpel. "im no medical ninja but this jutsu comes in handy." and he ran to naruto tapping both of his leg with the chakra scalpel arm causing a sharp pain to go to narutos leg.

"and now for sasuke-kun" and chikari jumped into the air. he tapped both of sasukes legs then turned around and punched him in the chest sending him to the ground hard. then chikari landed and did some handseals again creating a sword of water.

"now, ill finish this once and for all" and chikari started running towards naruto and sasuke.

an: to be continued, comments w/e

[Lost Prophet]

whoa, that was interesting...

[Canthinkofaname]

wow you people read fast

[Lost Prophet]

I definitely do

[AK47]

it's good but i don't get one part
you said sasuke got kicked by rock lee???

[Canthinkofaname]

oh im sorry i just saw that and edited it

[adeadaxe2]

whao, thats a cool story. you that guy sol. of course. anyway, you could make a fanfic out of the rp like him

[Canthinkofaname]

you know, tahts a good idea. but it would be similar to sols, so it doesnt really matter. ill let him make his fic. and sry my readers. i forgot to update i thought it was finished. ill right the next chapter soon

[KageNaruto]

nice, check that PM i sent you! it has links to really good naruto fanfics, so go read em!

[Canthinkofaname]

The final chapter is here, i just added the entire story in front. and im surprised. did i really right this much? i cant even read this much (unless its a new chapter in kagenarutos fic, the one i love -.-)
And currently im working on the prequel to this story. It aint finished, I only have one chapter, so im not posting it yet

Chapter One: Uchiha Revolation

Sasuke lay sleeping on his bed at his house dreaming
Brother why did you have to kill out family! im goin to kill you!

sasuke awoke to hear knocking at his door
" i wonder who that could be "

"Sasuke-kun answer the door please!"

"i wonder who that could be" he said again after recognizing the annoying voice of sakura. sasuke walked up to the door, and opened it to see sakura standing there like she had just been runnining.

"Sakura-chan what happened?"

"Well it seems that theres this crazy ninja outside attacking anbu and people are trying to contain him"

kinda fazed by this he asked " do you have any info on this guy"

"well it surpirsed everyone there but it seems hes been using techniques..."

grabbing sakuras shoulders gently shaking her he said "techniques!? of what!"

"...know to be from the..uchiha..."

sasuke opened his eyes shocked when she said uchiha he said "then it can only be..." interuped by sakura, knowing what sasuke was going to say she said

"its not itachi, sasuke it seems hes from a different village based on his headband"

"then that can only mean that there are more uchihas then me and itachi"
after saying that they both took off to the seen"

---meanwhile at the scene---

"alright what do we know about this guy" an anbu captain said the an anbu soldier

"what we do know is... one, hes an uchiha two,..." but before he could finish he was interuped by his captain

"WHAT HOW CAN HE BE AN UCHIHA"

"well sir if you let me finish you shouldve heard that i wouldve told you hes from waterfall village"

"look hes an uchiha i dont care what village hes from i just want him..."
before finishing everyone looked at a shuriken with ninja wire tied to it went whizzing towards the nin of waterfall, wrapping around him.

"hmm the sofuushasen no tachi technique of the uchiha clan"

the anbu captain had seen who threw it and jumped up to the building where sasuke was standing with sakura

"whats wrong with you sasuke if you hurt him.."

"AS IF... he was beating up all your anbu squad members and you think I, of all people could harm him?"

hearing this he quickly said "i suppose" and then towards back at the nin of waterfall and dashed towards him

"look your an uchiha right?"

"what the hell do you think!" the waterfall nin said as he looked hard at the anbu captain with his sharingan eyes

turning back towards sasuke, he motioned for them to come here

"you probably want to talk to him dont you"

sasuke of course did want to talk to him but he wasnt going to say yes in front of everyone watching so he simply said no

---later in a holding area where the waterfall nin was---

sasuke woke up in the morning wanting to go see the waterfall nin because he was told by the anbu captain he could at anytime he could so he dashed towards the holding area to meet him. as he reached the entrance he was greeted by two anbu

one said " im sorry but you cant... oh wait im sorry sasuke go in your here to talk to that waterfall nin right? go in"

'jeez' sasuke thought to himself as he walked in and went up to the cell of the waterfall nin

"so your an uchiha, but your not from konoha?"

"obviously" he said throwing his headband only to have it bounce back off the bars. it bounced off and hit him in the head then he did an anime fall.

"you get the point"

'were you really beating anbu back there? how can that be you just got hit by your own headband' "yes i do" sasuke was bored of what he was being told so he decided to ask " if your alive then does that mean theres other uchiha in waterfall village?"

looking at sasuke suscpiciously he replied "duuuhhhhh"

"then why did you come to konoha?"

getting up and retightening his headband again he got serious

"well there i dont know but i do know that one of the reasons i was ordered to come here...not that i would come cuz of the order but i just decided to"

(AN: naruto has kyuubi and can go talk to him now i going to just tell you now that this guy has the three-tailed shark isonade just like naruto and can talk to him, in the same way but different at the same time)

'i think ill take a visit to that shark i hate' and with that he appeared onto a little piece of land while a big area of water with a cage over it and land surrounding it

"alright shark did you make me come here and did you make me attack those anbu"

after a dark shadow appeared a deep voice said "what the hell are you f**king talking about you know i cant control you"

the waterfall nin had made an anime face -.- "what do you mean of course you can, youve done it plenty of times before..."

"look, chikari i know i can but i cant, even though im evil, make you do evil things, i can try to influence you on them but cant make you"

"what ever, f**k you shark" and after that chikari had lifted up and came back to consciousness (an: time with isonade isnt really 1 or 2 sec like with naruto n kyuubi its real time) to be hearing from sasuke

"HELLO YOU STUPID SON OF A BITCH ANSWER ME!"

shaking his head he got serious again "um sry but i dont really want to stay here so if you want to talk find me later cuz im out of here!"

"but..!" before sasuke could finish chikari did some handseals (he has some madeup jutsu i created) and held out his hands. then he blasted huge beams of water blasted out of his hands destroying the wall around him

"crap!" sasuke yelled then ran to an anbu walking down the hallway
"look the nin from waterfall has just escaped"

"WHAT THE HELL! how!"

"i dont know he did a jutsu i have never seen before"

holding out his radio to his mouth the anbu told all other anbu he had escaped so sasuke decided to go visit to hokage to see if she knew anything, but he decided he was tired so returned home for a nap

---the next day---

"hmm...what the hell happened?"

sasuke awoke and check his clock and it said 12:47 so he got up took a shower got all dressed and crap and walked into the kitchen

"but i thought...whatever i mustve fallen asleep the whole night"

he ate breakfast and departed for the hokages office

---hokages building---

sasuke had been walking instead of running and finally reached the hokages building then went up to the hokages office.

"tsunade-sama?" he said as he had walked in

"yes? come in sasuke"

sasuke opened the door fully and came up and sat down in the chair

"hokage-sama... you know about that nin from waterfall right?"

Chapter 2: Learning

"hokage-sama... you know about that nin from waterfall right?

"indeed sasuke but what does that have to do with anything"

raising his eyebrow sasuke said " weeeellllllll i just wanted to say... hes an uchiha.. and i just thought that maybe you could tell me stuff about him! do you know anything?"

getting up from her desk she said "i dont know anything personally, but i know that hes from waterfall so you should check out stuff ther...you know ask around"

"well thank you hokage-sama, i think ill check it out" and with that sasuke left for his house and prepared for his journey. then he heard a knock at the door.

"who is it..." he asked vaguley only to here sakura saying

"sasuke-kun can i come in?"

"now why would you want to do that?" he said as he got up to open the door.

"well i heard from the hokage that you said you were leaving and i wanted to say goodbye"

"k well goodbye sakura and ill be back in i dont know"

"goodbye sasuke..."

sasuke then left his house after sakura left and he departed for waterfall. when he got to the gate he was greeted by kakashi

"sasuke...your leaving?" he came over by him

"yes i am so goodbye kakashi-sensei..." and with that he ran towards waterfall.

---later when he reached waterfall---

sasuke entered the gate and started searching for the uchihas. he then later got to a house with an uchiha in it

he went up to it and knocked.

"who is it?"

"well im an uchiha from konoha and i was wondering if you could tell me something about this one nin from here whos an uchiha."

"i guess... come on in"

he opened the door and came in, then sat down

"so whats your name?"

"i am sasuke uchiha and i was wondering about this one nin who looks like this..." sasuke grabbed a photo he managed to take of chikari

"ok ill examine it give it here" and with that he took the picture and examined it. "Oi, it seems that chikari left the village again..."

'again?' sasuke thought. "so his name is chikari?"

getting up and grabbing another photo of his own, he showed it to sasuke
"this is chikari hes a jounin of waterfall, and hes pretty good at creating his own techniques, and also copying them with his sharingan..."

"well thank you, one more thing and ill be on my way...do you know why he went to konoha?"

"well sorry to say but no" with that he headed into his kitchen.

"thank you i think im done here"

sasuke left his house and went searching for info about chikari. he made his way to a library and picked up a book about the uchihas and turned to the members part.

"where is he where is he" he said while searching over the text with his finger.

"ah here he is" he said starting to read over his past

reading silently in his head, 'chikari uchiha, a sad uchiha who at birth was unlucky to recieve the treatment, of having a demon sealed inside of him'
now knowing that, he mummbled to himself "so he has a demon like naruto... i wonder, can he to harness the power of his demon? in any case i need to find out more about him"

---back at konoha---'

sakura was running towards the gate and saw kakashi

"kakashi..*pant pant*..sensei..wheres..sasuke..kun *pant pant*"

"you totally missed him he left like an hour ago"

"...*makes an anime face -.-*..."

"well i dont know when he'll be back so go do something occupying"

---back at waterfall---

'well ok ive learned everything i need to so ill be heading back to konoha now' and with that sasuke exited waterfall village and starting running back to konoha.

running back to konoha he was thinking 'i bet when i get back to konoha sakura will be there waiting'

---when he arrived (konoha)---

sakura saw sasuke and yelled to him "sasuke-kun!" she yelled while waving.

sasuke came up and made an anime face -.- "why sakura..." he said sarcastically, "...why would you wait all this time for me..."

"...because i had nothing better to do"

then kakashi came in and said " sakura what are you talking about you had plenty of things to do"

"SHUT UP KAKASHI-SENSEI"

"alright sakura ill be seeing you later"

so sasuke went back into konoha and went back to his house to find chikari was there

"um...what the f**k are you doing in my house"

chikari made an anime face with the big white eyes and got mad "WHAT THE HELL IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN"

so then sasuke did the same "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU YOUR A F**KING CRIMINAL SITTING IN MY F**KING HOUSE. WHAT HELL DO YOU THINK ITS SUPPOSED TO MEAN"

he then changed his anime face to -.- "i guess you dont want me here then see you later"

"whoa whoa whoa...thats not what i meant...its just your a f**king criminal in my f**king house so i thought id tell you..." 'damn it hes crazy...jeez'

"well now what a change of heart... anyways i dont even know why im here."

"so i guess..."

"you guess? then that would mean you think which is impossible"

now making then mad, white-eyed face he said " your itching for a fight arent you?"

"are you serious? i guess i have a few minutes"

Chapter 3: Chikari Vs. Sasuke

"are you serious? i guess i have a few minutes"

"alright then bring it on"

getting up chikari took his fighting stance. "lets go"

"ok" sasuke threw his stuff on the ground

"but i dont wanna wreck up my house so lets go outside"

"... *anime face -.-*"

"... *sasuke also made it*... well come on"

"lets go outside the gates then"

then they both ran outside and appeared at the gates (an: like on ep 4 and others they take off they like teleport it looks like that)

---outside the gates---

"alright sasuke you can have the first move"

"whatever" so sasuke did some handseals and did phoenix fire at him.

so chikari did some handseals of his own and did the jutsu were he shoots out a blast of water from each hand, then he pulled out his sword and did one more handseal, swung his huge sword (an his sword looks like zabuzas without the holes) and a huge wave of wave came out and went towards sasuke

'what can i do here! ive never seen those jutsu!' sasuke thought while doing a handseal and disappeared while a log got murdered by chikaris jutsus then thinking of a plan 'ok so i have all these fire jutsu but what can i do against his water jutsu? unless ill use' with that sasuke did the three handseals for chidori while jumping out of the tree he was hiding in, throwing his hand hard down on the ground where chikari stood, then as chidori hit chikari he disappeared in a poof of smoke

"what!? a kage bunshin?!" then sasuke got blasted by one huge stream of surging water that sent him flying

'wait a second? maybe i can copy his jutsu with my sharingan!' sasuke thought

"give up?"

"not yet"

"then ill use it again to change your mind" and with that chikari did some more handseals and shot out a huge stream of surging water from his hands, so sasuke activated his sharingan and began copying.

when he was finished in about two seconds he started doing handseals and shot out a stream of surging water

"what!!!??! how can you use my jutsu!" so chikari added more chakra into his blast which overpowered sasukes although sasukes weakened his hit.

'he has alot of tricks up his sleeve, he can add power to his blast!' sasuke thought while doing the handseals for chidori again then creating the lightning in his hand and rushing towards chikari

"chidori? i have my own chidori" so chikari did some handseals creating a watery substance looking like chidori in his hands rushing towards sasuke.

both chidori's collided creating a huge explosion of course harming sasuke and chikari but more sasuke cuz chikari was an expierienced jounin almost near the level of sennin.

"is there anything you cant do?" sasuke murmured while chikari read his mouth movements with his sharingan

"i cant lose to you"

'my god he can read lips can he read...' sasuke was interuped by chikari saying

"minds? yes i can sasuke, but you cant yet with that incomplete sharingan."

'incomplete what the hell is he talking... he couldnt mean... the..' sasuke was then interuped again when chikari opened his eyes and said "yes, its the...MANGEKYOU!"

"...no way"

"yes its true i have the mangekyou and i know you think im evil for having it but waterfall uchiha developed a way to get it without killing your best friend."

'well if he knows how itachi got it then he should be telling the truth but that wont stop him from using the same techniques.'

"indeed sasuke so i think ill use my favorite technique on you" and chikari disappeared and reappeared right behind sasuke, and foolishly enough sasuke turned around and was hit with the tsukiyomi.

'NOOOOOOOOOOOOO how could this happen!!!'

like itachi's tsukiyomi there was millions of chikaris with the swords who started stabbing sasuke. of course sasuke winced in pain for him about 72 hours while after 3 seconds passed for chikari it was over and sasuke fell to the ground

"look sasuke even if i werent an uchiha and didnt have these techniques it wouldnt make me any less of a jounin... id still win"

sasuke got up a glared at chikari. "... so what"

"well i guess you still want to fight" and chikari did some handseals and began glowing with a blue aura.

'what could this be i wonder' sasuke thought to himself

"its my super explosion.." and the aura extended fastly outwards which was a huge explosion causing sasuke to feel pain

"and best of all it doesnt harm me"

"whatever" sasuke said while forming some handseals. he became surrounded in flames and big flame beam shot out going towards chikari

"you think i cant counter that?" 'WHAT!' he thought after seeing another sasuke behind him doing the same thing. 'well he doesnt know shadow clone.... does he?'

"heh... neither are real you idiot i thought youd be able to see that" sasuke said while coming down from the air about to pound down on chikari with his chidori in his hand.

"nice try but you cant..." he was interuped with a big pound near the top of his head with the chidori and disappearing and a log getting murdered

"...as i was saying... you cant hit me im a jounin with the uchiha blood flowing through me"

'damn it to f**king hell how could he be that good' sasuke thought as the log went flying

"chikari show yourself lets have a fair fight you..." again being interuped by a chikari rushing towards sasuke with his chidori in his hand

"AGAIN?!" 'crap i cant use it more than once, DAMN IT... but at least i can try to counter his move' he thought while reading his future movements not knowing chikari was doing the same

when chikari tried hitting sasuke with it sasuke move to the left while chikari then moved his arm to the left trying again to get him so sasuke jumped in the air and chikari did the same facing sasuke

'it cant end like this' sasuke thought while pulling out a kunai

chikari threw his arm at sasuke and it stopped right in front of his face as sasuke stabbed him with the kunai and he fell to the ground still holding his chidori in his hand and sasuke landed next to him

"im sorry but i wasnt going to let myself get killed"

"you arent are you?" chikari said grinning moving his arm with his chidori to sasukes legs tripping sasuke. "look sasuke im not evil but you challenged me so i have a duty to finish the challenge cuz i cant die especially to you"
he said looking down at sasuke with a serious face

"you fought well sasuke but ive won... time to die!" he said thrusting his arm at sasuke

'think think think!!!' sasuke thought to himself watching the chidori flying towards him. then chikari and sasuke both saw a barrage of kunai fly towards chikari and chikari jumped back as the kunai penetrated the ground in front of sasukes feet

"but who" chikari said at loud as all the kunai were done flying

"HEY STAY FOCUSED!" sasuke yelled as he did handseals after standing back up and shooting out a huge stream of surging water out of his hands

"using my own technique against me..." chikari said as he got blasted by the stream. after it stoped he dashed over to chikari who was now on the ground.

"its time to finish you" he said about to do the handseals for chidori again after knowing it would injure him if not worse, but before he did chikari talked.

"even though you think your about to kill me, your wrong im not going to let you do that" and with that he disappeared and a log appeared as sasuke noticed chikari dashing from tree to tree away from konoha.

'ill find him some time again' sasuke thought as he started heading back to konoha to see sakura standing there

Chapter 4: new techs, nother fight

'ill find him some time again' sasuke thought as he started heading back to konoha to see sakura standing there

"sasuke what the hell do you think you were doing?" she said standing there looking hard at sasuke

"what the hell did it look like?" sasuke replied walking past sakura into konoha to see kakashi

"sasuke if you are going to fight all out, especially if your going to use chidori im going to have to teach you some new things" kakashi said as sasuke walked up to him

'ah this is starting to look up' sasuke thought after eharing kakashis remark

"alright come to the training ground in about..." kakashi thought for a second "...maybe an hour

"alright kakashi sensei" sasuke said as he dashed back to his house

sasuke had just arrived at his house and walked into his door. he started making lunch and sat down and started thinking to himself. 'when will i see him again? what will he know then? hmm i also wonder what kakashi sensei wants to teach me.' a few minutes later he got up and ate his lunch and waited for an hour.

"hmm its been an hour so i guess ill head to the training ground now" and with that said he got up and left and started towards the training ground.

he got there and saw kakashi standing there reading his icha icha paradise book.

"hello kakashi sensei so what are you going to be teaching me today?" sasuke said heading up to kakashi.

"well sasuke i saw most of your battle, you used chidori. if you want to use the chidori to full potential. so im going to be teaching you a new version of chidori" kakashi said while still reading his book

'a new version! this is going to be good' sasuke thought to himself inside his head.

finally putting away his book kakashi said "alright its same handseals you just need to add more chakra in a specific way. ill show you" so kakashi when into an open area with one tree there.

'cant wait to see this' sasuke thought watching kakashi quickly do the handseals for chidori.
(ill tell you the rest in a flashback in their next fight)

---meanwhile with chikari---

chikari just got back to a small village near konoha. he entered a hotel and stayed there for awhile

"hmm sasuke is inasnely strong for a genin, i mean im a jounin and had to use one of my intermediate techniques. if i have to actually use that im bound to die and if i die to him it would be embarrasing." he said to himself just laying on the bed

"i will fight him again and if i really have to use 'that' then i will surely die not to mention ' that ' jutsu i will die. either of them i will die but with that one at least i have a chance of survival even if it is only a 2.4% chance" he said aloud to himself again while still lying there.

"not to mention its forbidden and even if i survive ill be banished for using that kinjutsu. but if i must i will use it" chikari kept talking to himself

"wait a second...why the F**K am i talking to myself?" chikari pondered to himself aloud.

'whatever the reason i was talking to myself i need to rest up for the next time we meet' chikari thought to himself sitting up.

---back at konoha---

"wow with this technique ill surely kill that ass" sasuke said to himself as he was walking back to his house looking at his hand.

just then sakura came running up to sasuke panting. "sasuke -pant- i think -pant- hes back..."

"hmm! he? you mean chikari?!" sasuke yelled at sakura.

"if chikari is the guy you fought then yes!" she said yelling back at sasuke.

so both sasuke and sakura ran back to where he was at the gates of konoha. they walked up to the gates seeing chikari just standing there.

"ah sasuke ive been waiting to kill you sasuke." chikari said seeing chikari approach him.

"alright chikari are you here for a fight?" sasuke said back at chikari after hearing him say that.

"indeed so, you girl stay back." chikari threw a kunai at sakuras feet

"alright time to die chikari" sasuke said seeing the kunai almost hit sakura

"indeed sasuke. for you" so then chikari did some handseals and touched the ground. then all of a sudden the whole scenery changed into just all white

"wha...who? where the hell are we!" sasuke yelled being sucked into the white nothingness

"this is your gravesite" he said. "for you see the only way to get out. is for someone to die...

"...*makes anime face •.•*..."

"aha you shoulda seen the look on your face, im totally kidding ill release this when i feel like it or when i die" chikari said seeing sasukes expression.

"alright chikari. lets get this fight on the road" sasuke said

"ok sasuke. this is the end!" chikari shouted

Chapter five: the fight...

"ok sasuke. this is the end!" chikari shouted

"Bring it on wuss" sasuke shouted back as he dashed to the left doing handseals for chidori and rushing towards chikari. too bad he was too moronic to remember that chikari could see his movements, by the time he realized it it was too late and got blasted from behind.

"are you retarded? did you skip a few grades?" chikari managed to laugh as he did some handseals after biting his thumb and summoning a huge dragon like creature with large plates of white pig-iron melted in the shapes of razors and other sharp things.

"You are the kind of person who, when one first meets you, one doesn't like you. But when one gets to know you better, one hates you." sasuke said softly while doing handseals for Ryuuka, then blasting it towards chikari.

after hering his remark chikari grew angry. he stood there while his face remainded hidden with shadows. sasuke wondered what was happening.

whispering to himself, but just loud enough for sasuke to hear chikari said "opening...of the eight celestial chakra gates...1 gate!" then after that chikari raised his head and sasuke gained vision of a new sharingan.

'what can this be!' sasuke pondered while staring at the golden, four pupil marked (an you know regular sharingan has three swirls this one has 4 and is gold instead of red) sharingan in chikaris eyes.

"this my dear sasuke is called the norgekyou sharingan. it has immense powers beyond the comprehension of your brain." chikari said while knocking sasuke backwards and beginning a sequence of long handseals.
"DRAGON..HORSE..TIGER..DOG..PIG..SNAKE..OX..TIGER.. RABBIT..SNAKE
..MONKEY..HORSE..PIG..DOG..TIGER..DOG..OX..RABBIT. .TIGER..HORSE
..SNAKE..DRAGON..TIGER" chikari said slowy lifting up his hands.

"what could this be?" sasuke pondered aloud as a white ball with a black border/outline began forming infront of chikaris hands. it grew bigger until about the size of a basketball.

"this is the end of you...and sadly, me too" chikari said. eventually the ball started looking like a black hole, not sucking though, with the black hole into the center. an extremely brilliant white radiant light began bursting out of the hole.

"ah thats bright" sasuke said trying to cover his eyes. 'and sadly, me too' sasuke remembered what chikari said. 'what could that mean' sasuke pondered.

"sasuke i could read your mind with the mangekyou what makes you think i cant with this form?" chikari said. "it means, if you havent realized yet i had to open all 8 chakra gates to do this tech. theres a 2.4% chance of survival. now do you think i have the luck it takes to survive?" chikari said jokingly thinking he wouldnt survive.

sasuke didnt answer. he was too busy thinking what chikaris attack would do to him. to his surprise, thinking it was impossible, the light grew brighter and began rotating.

"now what could be happening!?" sasuke grew paying more attention. he was about to run away but he was stuck. "what the hell?" sasuke said looking down at his feet. his feet and legs were wrapped with a long dragon, chikaris dragon. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"

"sasuke ive pulled out all the stops to have you killed. this blast will incinerate your entire body and all of the stuff inside. this blast is so hot it cant even be measured in degrees." chikari began looking down at the ball in his hand then back at sasuke. he lifted his hands up to chest level.

".*makes anime face •.•...why do you want to kill me so bad?" sasuke said staring at chikari.

"look sasuke, you and me began this fight. im going to finish it." chikari replied to sasuke question. the light began glowing so bright even chikari, who wasnt looking at it, began to wince at the brightness. they were already fighting in a white place, nothing else, just blank whiteness, but the attack was so bright, the area was growing whiter.

"sasuke ill stop procrastinating now and obliterate you into pure nothingness." chikari said again without sasuke replying. the whiteness began ascending outward from the hole. it seemed as if it couldnt get any brighter without burning someones retnas, but it grew brighter. sasuke couldnt even close his eyes without seeing the brightness. he wasnt even sure if he was going to be attacked after being blinded.

"alright then just do it. i cant see and if it gets any brighter i wont see anything ever again." sasuke finally replied to chikaris explaination of his jutsu.

"alright fine.." chikari said replying to sasuke. the white light turned into a huge blast. it went surging towards sasuke at an inhuman speed. sasuke opened his eyes only to close them again seeing the light. he opened them one more time as the blast hit him. the blast was intense. sasuke flew back as chikaris dragon was obliterated. it seemed as though sasuke bones were melting and his skin was more than 1000 degrees. of course it didnt. sasuke lay on the ground as chikari fell to his knees then onto his stomach. he had closed the gates and was laying there and trying to breathe just managing to do that.

"oh, my, god..." sasuke tried saying but only managing to whisper. 'what is this intense pain! it feels so hot and my bones are melting.' sasuke screamed in his mind. the thought of dying was melded into his mind.

"oh i forgot to mention..." chikari managed to say getting up holding his left arm. "...that if i survive, which in case you skipped a few grades, i did, then you survive too but in an even worse condition than me." chikari said as blood fell down his chin from his mouth.

"but now time to finish you." chikari said while bitting his thumb and beginning to do handseals. when he finished, put his hands together and slapped them onto the ground. "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" he yelled as the marks appeared and a cloud poofed up. when the smoke cleared chikari was standing and a HUGE red dragon with two mouths and two horns at the joints of his jaw and two spikes on each side of his head on the back and one big one on the center back of the head.

"this is the end of you!" chikari yelled grabbing his left arm once again as blood ran down his chin from his mouth.

Chapter 6: the fight... (part two)

"this is the end of you!" chikari yelled grabbing his left arm once again as blood ran down his chin from his mouth.

sasuke jumped back taking in what was happening. he was seeing a giant red dragon. 'what the hell!? how could he summon such a thing?!' he was thinking taking in the dragon's image.

"whats wrong with you..." chikari said slapping his forehead. "dont you understand yet that i can read your mind?" he finished

"doesnt matter" sasuke said back forming the handseals for chidori. "sasuke...that wont work against..." chikari looked towards the back. there was sasuke with a big chidori leaving a streak whereever it went.

"sorry, but this is a new chidori!" he said attacking chikari.

--- FLASHBACK ---

"alright sasuke im going to be teaching you chidori blast." kakashi said looking at sasuke. "but kakashi...i already know chidori, which you taught me." sasuke said making a -.- face

"sasuke...chidori, BLAST" he said doing a -.- face back. "and the difference?" sasuke said curious as to what is so special about this new chidori. "well for one, you instantaniously teleport behind your opponent. two, its bigger and whatever air it touches, it leaves a big streak which can be used later as an ordinary chidori. and third, when it hits something solid, a brilliant huge lightning bolt comes down, striking the opponent melting anything, excluding you."

'alright then, teach me it now' sasuke thought after hearing that. "teach me it kakashi!" he yelled to kakashi. "alright sasuke.."

--- FLASHBACK END ---

"DIE CHIKARI!" he yelled about to pound chikari. just then a hand grabbed sasuke arm, throwing him down onto the dragons back and canceling sasukes chidori blast. "what the hell...?!"

he looked up and there was a man with bandages over his eyes. but also veins going into the eyes (like the byakugan). so the first thing he asumed was that he was a hyuuga. but he didnt quite look like a hyuuga. 'what is with his..." sasuke started saying only to be interupped by another man standing by chikari. "its called the akuma sharingan." he said. sasuke thought. 'akuma? as in demon? but the, what, WHATS GOING ON.' he continued thinking.

"yes its called akuma as in demon. it looks like a normal sharingan but instead of red its black, with the pupil and swirls being white, along with veins like a hyuuga" the man continued reading sasukes mind. he also had it activated. but the man who grabbed him had bandages over his eyes so couldnt see it. but this other man didnt, and like he said, it was black with the pupils and swirls white. he continued "it has all the abilities of the sharingan, and the byakugan. which is why he can see with those bandages.

chikari spoke up. "xen? subaiya? what are you doing here?" asking questions. sasuke began thinking 'whos this xen and subaiya?'. "look sasuke do you think im the only one who can read your mind? xen and subaiya are my brothers and can also read your mind" chikari began talking. "by the way, subaiya and xen this is my battle dont interfere."

slapping his head subaiya (the one by chikari) started speaking "do you know what that thing wouldve done to you? i dont know how he learned that move but its deadly no matter who uses it" in his defense chikari said "but hes just a genin."

"did you not here me? deadly no matter who uses it. it doesnt matter if an academy student uses it. youll die. that thing dissolves all air particals inside of you, making you unable to breathe. not that youd want to because it also raises your skin hotter than 1000f°. it also does many other horrible things but you get the point." subaiya continued explaining.

xen (the one who stopped sasuke) spoke. "indeed brother. plus how could he learn the ancient uchiha raikiri blast?" sasuke thought again. 'why are they acting as if it were their move?' "sasuke why are you so dumb. first off i dont know why you can understand we can read your mind. two, it is our move." chikari said reading sasukes mind once again.

"i learned it from my sensei." sasuke said. chikari began thinking, and communicating with his brothers. 'his sensei? maybe his was that one person from leaf with the sharingan in his left eye.' 'probably cuz without the sharingan you cant copy it, or use it at all.' 'so hes an uchiha eh?' then they finished talking. "alright sasuke, this fight will be postponed. not canceled. weve decided you can hone up your skills or whatever for 2 days. and you should bring some teamates to help cause my brothers are fighting too."

"alright. release this whatever the f**k it is and let me go. ill be back in 2 days" and with that sasuke jumped back out and into konoha.

---the next day---

sasuke was searching for naruto. he knew naruto was strong and could help and after naruto hed get some more people. he walked past ichiraku ramen to hear naruto.

"ramen ramen ramen ramen, RAMEN!!" naruto said grabbing the bowl and slurping up the noodles. then sasuke walked in and sat down.

"alright naruto lets talk about something thats going to happen in a day."

Chapter 7: the fight... (part three)


"alright naruto lets talk about something thats going to happen in a day."

"what could you want to talk about to me?"

"this is serious. i found out not too long ago that the uchihas arent really dead. other villages are populated with them. and theres one and his two brothers that are fighting me right now. we were fighting but postponed it and im getting some friends to help in the fight. which is you."

'hmm...what did he just say? i didnt understand anything of that except for he wants me to fight with him...' naruto thought to himself as he usually does. he slurped up the last of his ramen and sat up. "alright! lets go!"

an anime sweatdrop fell down sasukes head. "oi, naruto. its not for a day. plus, we can still get more people and i want to get one more." 'rock lee, you seem to be a powerful fighter. youll come with me.' sasuke thought about the fight in a day.

---the next day---

sasuke naruto and rock lee were taking there time walking to the gates. "so sasuke what exactly are we doing again?" naruto pondered aloud as he forgot what sasuke had said yesterday. "oi, naruto were here to fight some people. their jounin and skilled ninja.

"well lets go!" and naruto started running. "oi..." and sasuke, and rock lee ran to the gates too. when naruto got there rock lee and sasuke were waiting. "oi, naruto your so slow, as usual." and naruto did an anime sweatdrop. "but whatever lets go."

they entered the outskirts to see chikari and his brothers sitting there waiting. they sat up and chikari used the summoning plane thing. they were all suddenly engulfed in pure white.

"AH, what it this nothingness!" naruto screamed seeing all the whiteness. "relax, dumbass. this wont do anything to us." sasuke said coldy.

"alright sasuke, theres three of us and three of you. so 1 on 1." chikari said anylyzing everything here. "the first match will be xen vs that thickbrowed kid." a large vein popped on lees head. "then so be it" lee said shortly after had calming down. xen and lee stepped forward.

"i guess ill go easy on you." xen said underestimating lee. then lee appeared right under xen and kicked him upwards, then jumping up and wrapping xen with his wristape. "take this! initial lotus!" and they both started spinning downwards and they crashed into the ground.

"Xen!" subaiya yelled. 'actually hes fine.' he began thinking after seeing xen stand up. 'that freak could never beat xen.' he finished. then xen did some handseals and a chidori in his hands appeared. it was different though. it was dark, black. "ill get you for that. it kinda hurt... Kage Chidori!" xen said to lee. lee eyes widened. but he jumped in the air and it seemed as though he was floating there. then he slipped off his shin sleeves. 'im sorry gai sensei, but im taking them off.' he thought as he dropped the weights.

the weights nearly hit subaiya and chikari as lee landed. "now i can move easier." and lee disappeared. he reappeared right in front of xen and kicked him in the face. then as he went flying lee appeared under him and kicked him upwards. then reappeared in front of him again and kicked him, and kept doing this.

eventually lee finished and xen went sliding in front of subaiyas feet. "im sorry subaiya. he actually beat me." xen said apologetically. "its alright. ill get revenge." and subaiya stepped forwards as did naruto. the next fight was gonna begin.

in a few minutes naruto got beaten and was over by sasuke. "its alright sasuke that your friend got beaten. i cant help it that im better than him."
subaiya said after a minute. "alright subaiya, enough showing off." chikari said angrily at his older brother.

then the final fight was going to begin. chikari stepped forward and sasuke stepped forward. "ok sasuke this is the final fight. the fight were you lose.!"

Chapter 8: the final fight

then the final fight was going to begin. chikari stepped forward and sasuke stepped forward. "ok sasuke this is the final fight. the fight were you lose.!"

then subaiya fell on his knews spewing blood out from his mouth. "ow, what the hell... whats going on". then he looked down at some kunai lodged in his stomach. "how the hell did these get there?." subaiya said spewing blood from his mouth. "oh well..just..finish him..." and subaiya fell over unconscious.

"subaiya! i will beat you sasuke.." and chikari ran towards sasuke. then he did some handseals and chidori appeared as he continued to rush towards sasuke.
"oh chikari, the same old tricks? ill show you one of my new ones." and sasuke bit his thumb and did some handseals. then a cloud of smoke appeared and when it cleared there was a giant snake. suddenly chikari stopped and chidori disappeared. then he bit his thumb and summoned his beast. but this one was different. it was kinda the same except all the details of the head were different from the other dragon.

both of the summons lurched forward. they each bit each others neck. of course the snakes head practially got ripped off while the snake did nothing to chikari's dragon because of its hard plated armor. then chhikaris dragon obliterated the rest of the snake and sasuke landed hard of the ground.

"its ok sasuke, ill kill you quickly." and chikari jumped off his dragon and onto the ground infront of sasuke. as chikari did handseals for chidori his dragon disappeared. "now now sasuke, i expected better from you." chikari said as he lunged forward at sasuke. the ground exploded as sasuke was no where to be found. then some wires attached to some shuriken flew by chikari.

"what! the sofuushasen no tachi!" and the strings tightened around chikari. "now now chikari, i expected better from you." and veins appeared around chikaris eyes and his head turned towards sasuke. "you silly fool, this can be used against you." and chikari began doing seals with just his right hand. 'katon: ryuuka no jutsu!' and chikari was surrouned with flames as a flame shot out at sasuke. sasuke was planning on doing it first but he was bragging too much.

just then subaiya woke up noticing chikari had the akuma sharingan activated. "chikari what are you doing?!" standing up barely. "the akuma sharingan takes up a huge amount of chakra." he said just to fall back down remaining conscious.

the wire slipped lose and chikari jumped down over sasuke grabbing his throat. "its time you die sasuke!" and he did another sequence of handseals wiht one hand. a chidori appeared and he was about the kill sasuke but sasuke stabbed chikaris arm.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHH" chikari let go of sasuke's throat. he jumped back canceling the chidori. "what the hell sasuke. your going to die eventually stop prolonging it!" and chikari rushed forwards at sasuke again. but sasuke was already gone. sasuke was behind chikari with chidori blast in his hand.

"im sorry chikari, but your going to die here!" and he punched chikari in the stomach. a direct hit and no disappearing or anything. straight into his stomach and it pierced it straight through. blood went everywhere.

"well sasuke..." he spewed blood from his mouth. "...it seems...you got me..." it was getting difficult to breath for him. "but now, i have you..." he said smiling after blood spewed again from his mouth and he began doing handseals with one hand and holding sasukes arm with the other. a chidori appeared in his hand and hit sasuke in the stomach and he coughed blood onto chikaris arm.

"sasuke, you're going to lose here..." coughing out blood again. "even though you got me good, i have more skill. you're going to die..." and he took out sasukes arm out of his stomach and kicking him in the face and he went flying backwards. "now ill show how to really use the sofushsen no tachi." and he pulled out some fuuma shuriken attaching wires to them. he threw them and around and around they went until sasuke was completely covered in wire except for his face.

"oh too bad chikari, you lose." and sasuke lifted his head to show his sharingan. 'mirror heaven earth change!' and suddenly chikari was wrapped in wire. "its time you die!" and sasuke ran towards chikari and slapped on a bunch of exploding notes and stabbed his feet to the ground with some katanas.

"this is where you die" and sasuke jumped up into the air and threw five kunai with exploding tags at chikari. they stabbed into chikari and the notes exploded setting off the others already attached.

the smoke cleared and chikari was lying on the ground. he was still breathing but then disappeared. he appeared behind sasuke with the chidori blast and was about to kill sasuke. "DIE" and chikari attacked sasuke.

Chapter 9: the final fight (part 2)

the smoke cleared and chikari was lying on the ground. he was still breathing but then disappeared. he appeared behind sasuke with the chidori blast and was about to kill sasuke. "DIE" and chikari attacked sasuke.

"like that'd work" and sasuke ducked under chikari's attack and punching him in the stomach. "huh, i expected better from you chikari, a jounin near the level of sannin" and he released his punch and began the shishi rendan combo.

he went flying in the air as sasuke kicked chikari in the chin and jumped up next to chikari and kicked him in the side. then he turned over punching him then turning over again and punching him with the other arm. then he turned over again and kicked him and they were near the ground now and sasuke kicked chikari in the chest, onto the ground hard.

"now chikari. it seems youve grown weak." and sasuke pulled out a fuuma shuriken and began spinning it. he threw it and its blade pierced chikari's stomach and went straight threw it. blood flowed out of chikaris mouth.
"no sasuke, youve grown weak. sasuke, when im near death, i get angry and i prepare to die with my opponent with my ultimate technique." chikari said getting up. then he opened the first celestial gate and activated the Norgekyou Sharingan. "now sasuke, i shall show you true power." and chikari began doing many complicated handseals, with even some unknown handseals. it looked like the jutsu he used in there previous battle, but it was different. it was impossible but this one was even brighter than the previous one.

"now sasuke, you shall die." and chikari opened all eight chakra gates. this attack was so bright, even bright would say that it was bright. it started expanding. it started retaining a sphereical shape this time.
"im sorry chikari, but this is where it ends for you, without me dieing!" and chikari turned around to see sasuke was standing right behind him holding a shuriken with wire attached. sasuke threw it around chikari and he become engulfed in the wire and when the wire ran out the shuriken came around and stabbed him.

"and i know this seems kinda unfair, it doesnt. cuz after all chikari, your basically a sannin. which is why two genins shouldnt be too hard to handle. NOW NARUTO!" and naruto appeared in kyuubi lvl 2 form. "oh and, subaiya was it, you think you easily beat naruto? dont you see that huge hole in your chest? your probably going to die soon with all that bloodloss."
naruto created a kage bunshin. they put their hands together and starting creating a rasengan. but this wasnt any rasengan, it was...Oodama Rasengan!!!

naruto and his bunshin started running towards chikari. chikari turned his head back towards naruto. "you forget, my dear idiot sasuke, this silly technique wont hold me down" and the wire fell to the ground. chikari was behind sasuke and sasuke got kicked way back by him. "now for this brat!" and chikari raised his holding his version of the oodama rasengan. chikari started running towards naruto.

naruto saw him coming but continued running. eventually they came into contact and both of their attacks collided creating a huge burst of intense light that couldve blinded someone. it exploded and chikari went flying backwards as did naruto. the side-effects of chikaris move would take effect soon. but chikari wasnt going to die, so he immediately sealed the gates and started healing himself with the glowing hand.

"alright you two idiots, if you want it to be two against one so be it" and chikari began doing the ram handseals and glowed blue. he was going into isonade form.

"now is the time for you to die!" and chikari went level 3 isonade form. and rushed towards naruto and punched him hard in the stomach hard sending him flying back. then he turned towards sasuke and kicked him in the face sending him flying in the air. he then pulled out some shuriken and threw them at sasuke and then some at naruto which hit naruto in the leg.

"oh thats no good. i think i immobilize you for now you troublesome person" and chikari did some handseals for chakra scalpel. "im no medical ninja but this jutsu comes in handy." and he ran to naruto tapping both of his leg with the chakra scalpel arm causing a sharp pain to go to narutos leg.

"and now for sasuke-kun" and chikari jumped into the air. he tapped both of sasukes legs then turned around and punched him in the chest sending him to the ground hard. then chikari landed and did some handseals again creating a sword of water.

"now, ill finish this once and for all" and chikari started running towards naruto and sasuke.

Chapter 10: the final fight (part 3)

"now, ill finish this once and for all" and chikari started running towards naruto and sasuke.

Sasuke noticed chikari running towards him and naruto, now immobilized. His sword didn’t look like an ordinary sword made of water. Sasuke turned to naruto to tell him a plan, but he turned and naruto was standing up. He wasn’t moving, but he was at least standing. Sasukes legs were torn up from the inside because of chikaris chakra scalpel attack.

Naruto wouldn’t follow a plan if sasuke told him one. Naruto would just do whatever he felt like doing. And sasuke himself was immobile. He couldn’t think of what he could do. Chikari was next to naruto now slashing his sword at naruto. It hit naruto but didn’t slice through or anything.

“haha, your stupid sword did do anything” naruto starts speaking

Then suddenly naruto falls to the ground.

“it seems you’ve never heard of the Takigakure Ryuu: Mizukuri no Yaiba. Its my hidden waterfall secret style sword of draining. It drains your chakra basically.”

Chikari kicks naruto to the side.

“and now, the original fight. Me vs you.”

Sasuke stares at chikari as hes about to swing his sword of draining. ‘what can I do!’ he screams in his mind. Then chikari falls over.

“what the?” sasuke wonders and gets up.

“heh, it seems my legs are back to normal, chikari. Now, I will defeat you, so I can become stronger, and kill itachi.”

Chikari gets up and the sword disappears. His eyes turn back to normal.

“if you want to kill itachi, you have no need to fight me. You can train by your self.”

“shut up! What do you know hmm?”

“sasuke. You see this scar of mine?” chikari points to a big vertical scar over his right eye.

“yeah, what about it.”

“guess how I got it. Do you know who gave it to me?...thats right, itachi gave me this scar.”

Sasuke shocked from this, didn’t even notice chikari walking away.

“wait! Tell me about it.”

“sorry sasuke, but I don’t wish to tell you this story of mine. I might see you another time, but, maybe not for awhile.”

Chikari did some handseals and his hands started glowing green. He went over to his brothers and healed their wounds. They got up and they disappeared with a gust of wind.

Sasuke, naruto, and rock lee got up and started heading back towards konoha. ‘wow, I wonder if will ever see chikari again. But, he was a powerful opponent. I will eventually kill itachi. One day…’

END

[Mudkipz]

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[Canthinkofaname]

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[AK47]

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[Canthinkofaname]

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[AK47]

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