Kakashi on a mission

[Tyvas]

Kakashi, that is your mission", slowly said the 3rd Hokage. "Will you be able to handle it?"
"Yes", a short answer came out from Kakashi's lips.
He left without any more chat. All he needed was few thigs to buy now and then, of to the journey. As he reached the shop, Naruto came across.
"Sensei, I need training", he said.
"Not now, Naruto. Or maybe never"
"What do you mean, Sensei?"
"I'm going on a mission..."
Naruto was shocked. He pondered why would Kakashi go on a mission if he was in charge of Naruto, Shakura and Sasuke. But Naruto bothered him no more and left. Kakahsi entered the shop and gave the shopkeeper his weapons. They needed to be sharpened for killing from one thrust. And he bought a few big Shurikens. Although those are easily dodged, but for attacking from behind they're perfect. When he left the shop, he jumped on the fpur head-statues (those four in Kanoha) and looked one last time at the village.
"The journey begins..."



soz about the english. i'm from a english-speaking country, so i try to do my best. i could do a lot better in my own language

[Zone]

Wow... You do pretty well... Im not from an english speaking country either... By the way... Where do you come from? :)

Oh... And I really like the story... Do you plan on continuing? :D

[WildWolfay]

Good start, of course :o

Hope to see a lot of originality, that would be awesome.

[Anbu Dr J]

hmm thats a good beginning..and yeah!!i like it though :D

[Tyvas]

thx for the suport u guys. i'm form Lithuania, if that says something to you. and don't bother saying the name, u'll do it wrong anyway. it'll be original cuz i have seen only about 10 naruto episodes (first five and last five till 79). so and here's the next part:






As he left Kanoha a thought came to his mind. He wondered if he could take his old friend to his mission. Myabe then it would be much easier to complete the task. Kakashi turned around and headed back for the forest. His friend was supposed to be there, training Neji and Lee. He found found them in a clearing. Neji and Lee were fighting and Gai was watching them.
"Hey, Gai", shouted Kakashi.
The two stopped fighting. Gai turned and gave a smile.
"What brings you here, Kakashi?" Asked he calmly.
"Could i have a word with you?"
"Allright. Boys keep fighting"
They went on fighting each other. Lee was zooming aroud with his incredible speed, but Neji wasn't so easy to hit because of his 360 degree view. Then finally Lee prepared for the Omote Renge. He stood ready and opened the Initial gate unleashin an incredible amout of chakra. He became so fast that Neji could hardly see him. But still he was able to defend himslef. A few punches went through but he stayed calm until a last kick, which broke his defences. Then punch after punch Neji was down, but Lee was't finished yet. He used his bandages to stop Neji from moving. Then grabbed him and stared spining at an incredible speed. They were flying to the ground and hit it. Lee jumped out at the last moment and saved himself. He wasn't very exhausted because he was geting used to Omote renge. Lee carefully tied his bandages. Then from the smokes Neji came out. He was all weary and hurt.
Gai and Kakshi were more watching then talking. BUt they talked over what they needed to and Gai agreed to help Kakashi.
"Good job Lee," said Gai. "You two go eat something."
They left and so did Kakashi and Gai. They went to Gai's home, where he had taken his Ninja-stuff. And they were of to the road...




Lee beaten Neji just because he was alwasy beaten by Neji all the time in the episodes, so i thought a bit of revenge would be sweet :lol:

[Zone]

Uhh... Now Gai is in too.... ;) It's becoming interesting... And what a nice guy you are, letting Lee win once in a while! :) He deserves it! :D

[WildWolfay]

Work on the spelling but that's really all...

I don't wanna critic your work too much... so I'll stop there :o

but gj

[Tyvas]

soz about the english. i'm from a english-speaking country, so i try to do my best. i could do a lot better in my own language

i told u about my english...

[Anbu Dr J]

its still really good keep going!! I'm loving it

[thompkinsbrian]

yeah you really cant tell someone about spelling when english isnt even their language