PDA

View Full Version : Things Change | My first Naruto fanfic


GhosT #2
08-28-2005, 05:25 AM
Summary:

Naruto has been away for three years training with jiraiya and another secret sensei. Kankuro if the Kazekage of the sand.And Temari and Gaara has decided to become leaf shinobis. The day Naruto is supposed to return the Akatsuki attack Konoah.

(A/N - im gonna do all the jutsus in english and im gonna give the Akatsuki members other names except for
Itach,Deidara and Kisame. I'm also just gonna have 8 members of the Akatsuki)

Names of the Akatsuki : Deidara - Itachi - Kisame - Kai - Gou - Sasori - Toshi - Kasuya

The known pairings are: Gaara x Ino Hinata x Naruto Shikamaru x Temari Sasuke x Sakura TenTen x Neji

Things Change

NORMAL P.O.V

The village Konoah was under attack by the Akatsuki and were having trouble in dealing with the s-rank ninjas. Even though most of the teams now were jounins they were no match for the Akatsuki's.

In the east part of the town Neji TenTen and Lee were fighting off two Akatsuki,but with no luck. Even with Neji's Byakugan their moves were too fast to be predicted and Lee was having trouble getting in a punch or a kick at the laughing Akatsuki's.TenTen was sweating and panting because of all the weapon throwing.

"We have to draw back to the others or we will get killed very soon" said a panting Lee.

Neji started his whirl and the two Akatsuki were blasted a few feet away

" Come on this is our chance to get away!"

TenTen started to run,but felt a sudden pain in her leg, when she saw down she saw a kunai sticking out of her leg.

"Guys go ahead without me i cant run like this" said an afraid TenTen.Neji looked over at TenTen and saw that she was hurt.

He rushed back to her looked her in the eyes and said " No one gets left behind, especially you".

He lifted her bridal style and started to run with the Akatsuki on their tail.

When they came to the west part of the town they saw the rest of the Akatsuki attacking. TenTen narrowed her eyes at the sight and asked

" Why are they attacking six there and only two on the east side?".

Lee was starting to worry " Yeah isn't that a little concentrated for an attack?".

Neji looked back and saw that the two Akatsuki were no longer following them "Shit this was all a trick they are going for the hokage!".

Lee looked at Neji with a confused look "What! How do you know that?".Neji pointed backwords and Lee and TenTen noticed tat the ninjas were no longer behind them.

"Shit we have to tell the others and go back to protect her" said an angry Lee.

They ran passed all the others and shouted "Their after the hokage fall back to protect her!".

They were running towards the hokage monument where the Hokage was.They were soon joined by Ino, Sakura, Shikamaru, Chouji, Hinata, Gai, Kakashi, Kurenai, Kiba, Shino and Asuma.

"How do you know that their going for the Hokage?" asked Gai.

"Because they have six people attacking the west while two are sneaking in from the west" said Neji in a hurry.

When they arrved to the monument they saw Shizune and Tsunade fighting off Kisame and Itachi.

Kakashi charged up his chidori and ran towards Kisame ready to kill him in an instant, he came closer and closer
until he was in range " CHIDORI!" he aimed for the stomach of Kisame,but he was too fast and moved out of the way.

"Did you really think that attack would work on me lowlife" Kisame said with a cold voice that made everyone get chills up their back.Itachi walked closer to the Leaf's and with a bored voice "Look behind you".

They turned around and saw the rest of the Akatsuki ready to fight."Why are you doing this?" asked an angry Gai.

Itachi came closer to Gai " We are doing this because we must" Gai became really angry and tried to kick Itachi "You bastards!".

But Itachi was one step before him the whole time and kicked him in the gut."Give it up old an your no match for me".

All the jounins of the leaf got in their fighting stances "well will take you down once and for all" shouted an angry Sakura.

Kisame stepped towards Sakura "you're annoying". When Sakura heard those words she remembered something.

FLASHBACK

"The solitude..." said an annoyed Sasuke. Sakura looked at Sasuke with a confused look.

"What ? " asked a confused Sakura. Sasuke stopped walking and said

"You can't even compare it to the level of where your parents get mad at you" answered Sasuke

"What's the matter ?" asked the worried Sakura

Sasuke simply turned around with an irritated look and said "You're annoying" before he walked away.

Sakura just stood there thinking about how bad that felt.

END FLASHBACK

Kisame was about to strike Sakura with his Samehada,but then he saw a white and black blur coming at him. He tried to move out of the way,but the blur was too fast and struck him in the stomach with a hard kick.

The blur stopped moving and revealed a blonde bot with black pants with a white shirt on. He looked up at Kisame he had red cat-like eyes and shoulder length hair.He stared at kisame and simply said
"No".

He looked back at the crowd behind him "Need any help?".The others didn't recognize him and had confused looks on their faces.Then Jiraiya came in view on the top of the monument along with Gaara and Temari.
They jumped down to the others and Tsunade looked at Jiraiya

"Jiraiya where is Naruto?".

He started to laugh "You'll see real soon".The boy infront of them turned to the Akatsuki with an angry look.

"Didn't i tell you the last time we met that is you mess with my friends you mess with me?".

Itachi stepped forward "So the Kyubi kid is back huh?".The kids had confused looks on their faces,but the adults knew who the boy was right away when they heard Itachi say Kyubi.

Itachi of course didn't want to fight Naruto himself so he sent two others instead "Kai,Gou take this little brat out!".

Then two of the Cloaked fighters came out and darted towards Naruto.
But it was too late Naruto had already moved and started performig seals.

Tsunade saw the seals and looked at Jiraiya"how did he learn that jutsu?".Jiraiya turned too look at Tsunade "Me and another sensei have been training him".

Tsunade looked at Naruto and started to think ' But the only one that knows those jutsus is the...' . "you cant be serious has the Kyubi been teaching him?"

Jiraiya simply smiled at Tsunade.

Naruto finished the seals and shouted "Fox flaming nova!" then right in front of him a flaming nine tails fox was starting to show.

Kai and Gou looked at each other with scared faces,the last time they had seen anyone use that jutsu it had been the Kyubi. The fox and Naruto began running towards Kai and Gou and Naruto charged two rasengan,one in each hand.

The two Akatsuki just stood there waiting or the blow to happen.Kisame saw that the two was just gonna stand there so he tried to attack Naruto,but then the fox appeared infront of him and blasted fire-balls from his mouth.

Naruto reached his targets and released the rasengans at the two ninjas "RASENGAN!".

When Shikamaru heard what attack it was he immediatly recognized the boy "Naruto?".

The rest of the kids turned to Tsunade who nodded to them.

When she nodded it caught them off guard.the last time they had seen Naruto he was much shorter and a lot more clumsy.Itachi ordered two other Akatsuki to pick up Kai and Gou

"This is not the last time Kyubi brat".

Naruto was just about to move and attack Itachi,but they just disappeared into thin air.Naruto tured around to the others and saw their confused and surprised looks.

"Ehh why are you looking at me like that?" Sakura and the others snapped out of it and ran towards Naruto and hugged him.

Naruto was surprised with all the hugs he got "Okay".

end chapter

GhosT #2
08-28-2005, 05:26 AM
chapter 2

Naruto looked at all the shinobis that were hugging him. He couldn't believe that this was actually happening.
He always thought that they didn't like him. "Ehh guys, could you maybe let go of me now i'm having trouble breathing?"
The shinobi's stopped hugging him and took a step back just looking at him.

He had changed so much. His eyes we're red for some reason and his hair was shoulder length. He was much taller then
they had remembered him to be, his body seemed so much better toned then it had been before. Ino looked at his eyes
"Naruto what happened to your eyes?".

Naruto realized that his eyes were red and closed his eyelids. When he opened them again they had the same blue color that they had remembered he had. "Is that better?" asked Naruto. "Much better" came a voice from behind the younger shinobis. They turned around to look who it was that had said it.

And there stood a smiling Tsunade. She started to walk towards Naruto, when she was 2 feet away from him she flung her arms around him. "Your finally home again, i have waited so long for this moment." said a very happy Tsunade.
"I'm glad to be home too obaa-chan." said Naruto with a big smile on his face. Tsunade stopped hugging him with a serious
look on her face "I told you not to call me that, but since you've just returned i will look the other way just this once."

"So how are you Naruto?" asked Chouji while he was eating his chips.
"I'm great! i have never felt so good in my entire life" said Naruto when he looked over at the girls and saw them almost drooling.
"Are you guys ok?" The girls got out of their trance "Yes i am" they all said in unison. The girls all shot each other glances before blushing.

The other boys saw that all the girls was looking at Naruto and his 'new' looks, and got a little jealus. Naruto started to walk past the crowd and walked over to Temari, Gaara and Jiraiya. "Guys you all know Temari and Gaara." said Naruto while hoping that they wouldn't start to fight. Some of the shinobis got in their fighting stances just waiting for the sand nins to attack.

But Shikamaru knew that they weren't bad and decided to calm them down. "Relax they aren't here to do us any harm." Temari gave
a smile to Shikamaru as a thanks. Naruto went over to Tsunade and whispered something in her ear, she nodded and looked over to Temari and Gaara "Do you two have a place to stay?"

Temari looked over at Tsunade and shook her head. "I'm sorry, but i don't have place in my little apartment for all of us" said Naruto with a little sadness in his voice. Suddenly Ino spoke up "Well if i remember correctly, Shikamaru has at least 1 spare bedroom at his place."
Shikamaru looked over at Ino with his eyes widened, while Ino just gave him a glare. "wow he must have really screwed up" thought Naruto.

"I also have one spare bedroom!" yelled Lee while doing his freaky dance. Temari noticed the weird behavior of Lee and got a little annoyed. "There's no way I'm staying with that little freakish thing there" said an annoyed Temari. Shikamaru realized that is she didn't want to share an apartment with Lee then she had to stay with him. He walked over to Temari with his usual lazy attitude "I guess that means you'll be staying with me then."

She walked over to him and linked their arms together "lead the way mr.Crybaby" while giggling a little.

"Oh how troublesome." all the others started to laugh at his comment.

"then it's settled then! Temari will stay with Shikamaru and Gaara will stay with Lee" said an excited Naruto. Lee looked a bit disappointed that he didn't get to share his apartment with Temari. Tsunade walked over to Naruto " well it's getting late, i'll see you tomorrow morning Naruto." Naruto just nodded in agreement. "I think i will go home too and get some sleep, bye guys."

The shinobis decided to go home as well, they we're so tired from the attack by Akatsuki.

end of chapter 2

GhosT #2
08-28-2005, 05:26 AM
chapter 3

Shikamaru and Temari had just gotten inside the door of his apartment.Temari looked inside of it, it wasn't so full of furniture, but it was enough by her standards.

"So this is where you live huh? Not so much things in here though." said Temari while she was looking for her room.

Shikamaru looked over at Temari with boredom in his eyes "I just moved in here a couple of weeks ago, i haven't got the
time to buy stuff like that."

She opened a door to her left and found a room with a big bed and a nightstand beside it. There were a couple of pictures on the wall and some posters, but that was it. Nothing else, this was a plain bedroom.

Shikamaru saw her go into his bedroom and followed her "That is my bedroom, the one across the hall is your's."

Temari sighed and walked across the hall and went into the room, it was small with a small bed and a little table beside it.

She didn't like the room at all, it was too small for her comfort. "I'm not sleeping in there, it's too small." she said with an annoyed look.

He looked at her and realized that is she wasn't going to sleep in there she had to sleep in his room. "Yeah well your not getting my room, it's too troublesome to move all my stuff in here."

Temari started to pout and Shikamaru rolled his eyes. "Oh come on shika-kun...please." his eyes widened after she called him 'shika-kun' no woman had ever called him that. "No, it's too troublesome." he stated simply.

Then she got an idea and her lips lifted into a smile "Fine then i guess i'll just have to share a bedroom with you then." She walked past him and gently touched his hands before walking in his bedroom. He stiffened as her hands touched his.

"Damn why am i so tense around her?" thought a confused Shikamaru.

He just stood there for a couple of seconds before following her into his bedroom. "But there's only one bed in here and that means that we have to share."

Temari started to laugh and looked over at him with a huge smile on her face "Are you afraid i'll do something inappropriate to you while you are sleeping?"

He stood there wide-eyed while she was laughing and giggling. "No it's just that...that..." Temari got the hint and walked over to him. "You have never shared a bed with a girl have you?" she asked him.

"No i haven't, but that's not the point here ok." he sat down on the bed and sighed. "Fine you can stay in my room."

She showed her wicked smile and whispered in his ear "thanks, and don't worry i wont bite if you don't want me to."

He froze at her last sentence and just sat there for a couple of minutes before turning around and saw Temari in only her underwear.
She saw he was looking and smirked "See something you like there mr.crybaby?"

He looked in her eyes and immediately turned around at once after realizing he was staring at her. "Why are you being so nervous Shika-kun?" Asked a confused Temari.

"No. nothing wrong lets just go to sleep ok?" she just nodded in agreement before going under the covers. He undressed himself and went under the covers a half minute later. He looked over at her and saw she was already asleep.

"The trip must have really gotten her tired." thought with a little smile on his face.

He closed his eyes and tried to go to sleep, ten seconds after he closed his eyes he felt Temari's body snuggle up against him. Shikamaru merely smiled upon her sleeping form as she just kept snuggling up on his chest.

After a couple of minutes he was in slumber land too.

With Gaara and Lee

While walking over to his apartment Lee looked over at Gaara, he wasn't as scary looking as the last time he had seen him.
He had changed his clothes this time and he quickly noticed that Gaara wasn't carrying the gourd he always had with him.

Gaara saw him looking at him and shot him a glare, Lee turned his head back to the road as fast as he could.

Two minutes later they arrived at the apartment and Lee began to smile "This is where i live Gaara-san."

Lee took his key and turned it in the lock. He went in the door and turned on the lights. Gaara was not far behind him, He saw Lee's couch and laid down on it ready to sleep.

"I have a spare bedroom you know..." said a confused Lee.

"No this is just fine, i don't sleep that much either so I'm good here." Gaara said in his usual bored voice.

"No a guest can't sleep on the couch! I insist that you take the spare bedroom." Lee was getting really worked up by this.

Gaara sat up and sighed "If i don't say yes he's probably gonna shout and scream just like his freaky sensei." thought a beaten Gaara. "Fine where is this bedroom that you are talking about?" he asked while looking around the living room, It was full of pictures of Lee and Gai. Gaara had never seen such an obsession with a person before.

Lee's lips quickly lifted up in a huge smile, he got flames in his eyes and started to shout and scream. "THATS THE SPIRIT GAARA!" he saw that Gaara was getting annoyed and immediately stopped what he was doing.

" The bedroom is right this was Gaara-san" he said while pointing at a green door.

Lee ran past Gaara and opened the door for him. Gaara took a look inside the door, it wasn't as bad as the livingroom but there was still some pictures of Lee and Gai.

"Damn this guy is sick, he'll probably be alone for his entire life." thought a tired Gaara.

"I am going to get some sleep, it was a long trip." He said while slamming the door in Lee's face.

"He should really begin to lighten up, or he'll be alone for the rest of his life." thought Lee.

"Good night Gaara!" Lee shouted.

He didn't get a response so he just shrugged and went to bed.

In the Hokages office

Tsunade was drinking sake as she normally would do after a hard day of work and fighting with s-rank criminals. She laid her head on the table and smiled a little bit, "At least Naruto came back today." she thought.

There was a knock on the door and she lifted her gaze, and there was none other than Jiraiya. "What do you want Jiraiya?" she said with a huge amount of irritation in her voice.

"I think we need to talk a little bit about Naruto, and about the Kyuubi." He noticed that she got a little wide-eyed when he spoke the name Kyuubi and he smirked a little.

"Yeah i think we do indeed, how can Naruto to all those things he did today?" Tsunade asked with concern in her voice.

"To make a long story short, the Kyuubi taught him almost everything he knew before they merged together."

Tsunade sat there in shock "They have merged together? How is that even possible?" she asked with a scared voice.

"I don't know only Kyuubi knows how." He looked over at Tsunade and noticed that her arm was shaking a little.

"What is the matter Tsunade ? You seem a little shaken by all this." He asked her while walking over to him and placing a hand on her shoulder "No it's not that it's just that if the villagers finds out that they have merged then they will go crazy and probably try to kill him."

"I know, but you know that he has to tell his closest ones?" He asked her while pouring himself a glass of sake.

"Why does he have to tell them?" She narrowed her eyes at the pervert in front of her.

"Well they saw what he did today and they are going to ask other people in this village about it if he doesn't tell them."

"And then the other villagers will get suspicious and figure out that he has merged with the fox." she drank another shot of sake.

"Yeah and god knows what will happen then." he sat down on the couch to his left.

"So can he do anything else than what he did today?" She asked him.

"Oh yeah a lot more than he did today, he can even summon Kyuubi."

"WHAT! he can sommun Kyuubi?" she got a frightened look and se started to get really confused.

"But i thought they merged, how can he summon him then?" while walking over to the couch and sitting down beside Jiraiya.

"I don't know." he simply said.

"Well is he...you know evil, vicious, dangerous and scary?"

"No Naruto actually seems to have control over him." he said while his eyes never leaving her chest.

She noticed he was looking at her chest and gave him a smack on the head with a scroll. "YOU STUPID PERVERTED MAN! STOP LOOKING AT MY BREASTS" Her veins started popping out of her forehead.

"But they are so big it's hard not to look at them Tsunade-sama." He noticed her fists clenching and got afraid.

She lifted him off the couch and threw him out of the window "STUPID PERVERTED-JIRAIYA!"

end of chapter 3

GhosT #2
08-28-2005, 05:27 AM
Chapter 4

Naruto was lying in his bed thinking about how great it was to be back in Konoha. "It's so good to be back in this town. I really missed all my friends, but i had never imagined that they would be so nice to me when i came back though. Maybe it is because i scared those Ataksuki's away yesterday. I just hope they dont come back anytime soon, i might have scared them yesterday, but that was just luck. If i hadn't caught them by surprise i probably wouldn't have could taken them on."

Naruto's thinking was interrupted by a stone flying through his window, he quickly got out of his bed and hurried over to his window.

He looked out of the window and saw a small gang of 5 people throwing things on his tiny apartment. "Great like this apartment wasn't ruined enough" he thought before sticking his head out of the window and getting a piece of metal thrown at his head.

He jolted back into his apartment before wobbling a bit and blacking out. The last thing he remembered was a voice telling the people to stop throwing things at the apartment and the word "Byakugan!" shouted really loud.

Outside Naruto's apartment

Hinata was walking towards Naruto's apartment, she had decided to invite Naruto for some Ramen. Hinata had grown a little taller then she had been three years ago, her hair was now at level with her chest and she had a little ponytail. She now wore a black skirt with white stripes on it that went down to her knees and a blue tank top. And her body had grown into more feminine formes.

She was no longer as shy as she used to be either, although she had her fallbacks from time to time. A year ago she had resigned from the title as heir of the Hyuuga Clan and moved in with TenTen.

She was walking peacefully when she heard people shouting and throwing stuff. She began to run faster towards the noise and saw someof the villagers throwing rocks, kunais and garbage at Naruto's apartment. She walked up to one of the villagers that we're throwing rocks at Naruto's apartment and pulled fiercely at his shoulder.

"What in gods name do you think you're doing!" She yelled and all the villagers turned to see her.

"We are only getting rid of some Demon-kids and some trash, wanna join?" One of the others asked Hinata.

"NO STOP WHAT YOUR DOING RIGHT NOW!" she yelled higher and the villagers got mad at her.

"So you are with the demonchild, huh!" One of the men threw a kunai after her, but she ducked in the last second.

Hinata got mad and activated her Byakugan. She ran towards them decking them each and every one of them her Hyyuga gentle style.

"Hinata!" she heard a voice cry out for her from behind, she looked around and saw a confused Sakura running towards her.

"Why did you do that to the villagers Hinata, are you crazy?" Sakura took a hold of her shoulders and shaked her lightly.

"No they we're attacking Naruto's apartment and i think he got hit in the head with something." she quickly explained to Sakura before racing inside Naruto's apartment and franticlly searching for him.

When she whipped her head inside his bedroom she saw Naruto laying there with a blunt kunai beside him.

Not long after Sakura came running in and saw one of her friends laying on the floor unconcious, "My god what did they do to him he is completely ouf of it..." Sakura asked hinata with a worried look in her eyes.

"I dont know, I think he got hit with this" she pointed towards the kunai. Sakura walked over to the kunai and tried to lift it, but she couldn't even move it one bit.

"Hinata i dont think this is an ordinary kunai, it wont even budge!" she yelled while trying to lift the kunai off the floor.

"Sakura we need to take him to Tsunade-sama." Hinata said before picking Naruto up and carrying him to Tsunade.

Meanwhile in Tsunade's office

Tsunade was talking to Gaara and Temari about becoming leaf-shinobis. "So your a hundred procent sure that you want to stay in this village?" Tsunade asked them.

Temari glanced over at Gaara and figured he wouldn't answer her question.

"Yes were sure, we cant stay in suna anymore it's so depressing." Tsunade chuckled

and smiled at the siblings in front of her. "Well, then it's final! Your now now official Leaf-shinobis." Temari smiled and her brother merely nodded in agreement. "So what level we're you two in your hometown?" she looked at Temari, because of course Gaara wouldn't answer her.

"Well in our hometown we we're jounins, but it's ok if you dont think we're jounin material Tsunade-sama." she said and noticed the smile of Tsunade's face.

"No no, i think your jounin material. It's just that this generation has so many promising ninjas then any other generation has ever had." She pulled out her drawer and took out two leaf headband protectors. "Here is your headband protectors." she gave them the headbands, Temari took her around her neck while Gaara put it on his arm.

"Do you know whe" she was interrupted by Hinata carrying Naruto into her office and Sakura not far behind her. "Tsunade-sama some of the villagers attacked Naruto-kun!" Hinata ran over to her desk and laid him down in front of the Hokage.

"We think he was hit by a special kunai bacause the kunai wouldn't even budge when i tried to lift it." Sakura explained to her mentor.

"It was propably some kind of jutsu on the kunai." Tsunade took her hands over Naruto's head and tried to heal him. She tried harder and harder but it didn't heal him.

"Damn! I cant heal him, we need to take him to the hospital." Tsunade explained while lifting up the boy and running straight to the hospital.

At the hospital 3 hours later

Everyone of Naruto's friends had heard about the attack on him and had hurried to the hospital, even Jiraiya and Kakashi was there.

The younger ninjas we're trying to get the older ninjas to tell them why the villagers had called Naruto a demon, and why they we're attacking him.

"Why can't you tell us?" yelled a very worried Lee. You could see in his eyes that he was worried for his friend and he demanded answers.

"Only Naruto can tell you that, and if he doesn't wish to share it with you yet then just back off ok?" Temari shouted towards all the younger nins,

She and Gaara were probably the only ones in the room except for the older jounins that knew about the Kyyubi being sealed within Naruto.

Sakura walked over to Temari with a shocked look, her arm was slowly but safely raised as it revealed a finger pointed at Temari.

"You know why they did this?" Temari nodded and was about to answer Sakura, but was rudely interrupted by Lee. "THEN YOU SHALL TELL US WHY!" His voice was getting squeaky and annoying.

"I can't only if Naruto wants you to know the truth then you will hear it, but you will not the answer out of me." Temari stated as she walked to stand beside Shikamaru.

Shikamru also knew about the Kyyubi being sealed within Naruto as he had heard it while two jounins we're discussing the probability of Naruto ever attacking the village. He had also heard about the rule the third put over the village never to talk about the Kyyubi again.

He bent his head over to Temari's ear and whispered a one word question, "Kitsune?" Temaris eyes widened as she turned to Shikamaru who had a smug smirk on his face.

"How did you know?" she asked confused as no one in the village except the older nins knew about it. "I heard some jounins talking about it 2 years ago, and i also heard about the rule the third made." Everyones faces were directed at Shikamaruas he continued to speak. "You might as well kno"

"Shikamaru DONT SAY A WORD!" everyone turned their heads to Kakashi who had put his book away just in time to intercept Shikamaru's little tale.

"You know very well that it's Naruto's decision to tell them or not!" Kakashi made it very clear that talking about it without Naruto's permission was unacceptable.

Shikamaru sat down in a chair before opening his mouth again "Kakashi, i know that your worried about Naruto's well being, but the rule the third made isn't holding people back now anymore since he died. More and more people are talking about it."

Kakashi tore his eyes off Shikamaru to look at Naruto, with a heavy sigh he decided to let him tell the rest. "Fine, but if anyone else then the people in this room hears about i will personally kill the little snitch."

Everyone was shocked by Kakashi's statement, would he really kill them if they told? Shikamaru shifted a little and started to explain why the villagers had attacked him.

"You have all heard that the fourth hokage died in killing the Kyyubi right?" everyone nodded, a little confused why Shikamaru was talking about Kyyubi and the fourth. "The fourth didn't kill the Kyyubi he sealed him within a newborn child, and that child was Naruto.

Everybody in the room that didn't know about the sealing of Kyyubi went wide-eyed of shock. "that's why all the villagers hate him?" asked Sakura.

Jiraiya went over to Naruto's bedside and sighed, "Yeah, the fourth wanted the villagers to see Naruto as a hero. But instead he was treated as dirt and garbage, the people in this village is narrow-minded and they forbid their kids to even play with him when he was a kid."

"Not everyone in the village is like that though, there are people that see Naruto as a hero and the third was one of them." said Kakashi while taking up his icha icha paradise.

"And that's why he made the rule so that no one spoke of this to anyone, and if they did they were severely punished by the third." Said Tsunade.

Hinata walked over to Naruto and put her hand in his, she squeesed it a little bit so that he would know someone was there for him. But

Naruto had already woken up when he heard Kakashi scream. "well at least now they know and they haven't called me a demon yet." Naruto thought before squeesing Hinata's hand back.

Hinata jumped back in surprise that Naruto had reacted to her little gesture and flew right into the wall behind her. "Dont worry it's only me Hinata" Naruto said while opening his eyes and his lips tugged up in a smile.

"You're awake!" everyone shouted together. "Yeah, i have been awake ever since Kakashi screamed at Shikamaru so i have heard everything you said from that point." Tsunade got an angrylook on her face and Naruto flinched a bit,

"How dare you not tell us you we're awake! We we're worried sick about you, YOU IDIOT!" she walked over to

him and Naruto, he automaticallythought she was going to flick him in his forehead.

He closed his eyes and got ready for the impact, but it never came. Instead he felt arms embrace him, he opened his eyes and saw Tsunade hugging him.

"Dont you dare ever do that again." she stated before kissing him on his forehead.

End of chapter 4

BlooFlame
09-04-2005, 01:31 AM
Good story make more :)

airstep
09-11-2006, 05:06 PM
pretty good story. I'm not gonna judge you on your spelling or grammar mistakes.

Lost Prophet
09-11-2006, 06:05 PM
its pretty good for a fanfic. If you want help translating jutsus, heres the link to a translating site. put in one word at a time.

http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html

airstep
09-11-2006, 06:37 PM
hmm never thought of using that, i thought that there was just some special thing behind naming it. well if thats all that it is then i guess i can do it easy now on my own story.