Your own Naruto-nin?!

[Zone]

(Well, I would say it's fanfic ;) )
Do any of you guys ever make up your own ninja? You know... Which could be in the Naruto universe? Well I did... I'll post it now... Then you can see what I mean... :)

My Nin!

Name: Ikari Ryu (Says the last name first, just like in the series ^_^)

Age: 16

Sex: Male

Rank: Genin

Appearance: Red eyes, Darkbrown halflong hair, Blue jeans, large black t-shirt,
long black scarf around the neck, normal colored skin and he always wears his
Konoha forehead protector.

Likes: Training, Being with his teammates, Imono Taki.

Dislikes: Show-offs, Sand nins, Hyuga Genji.

Jutsus:
All the basic (Bunshin, Kawarimi, Henge and so on).

Chiyute no Jutsu (The ninja focuses chakra into the palms of his/hers hands,
creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated,
can repair physical damage to another person).

Kanashibari no Jutsu (The ninja stares down his/hers opponent, causing them to become completely frozen in their tracks).

Chakra blade (The ninja focus some chakra in to the blade of a sword and can cut through materials 10 times harder than wood. Ryu made up this Jutsu himself).

Special Jutsu: Konoha ryu no jutsu (The ninja molds almost all his/hers chakra into A weapon, leaves a little left in the body, used to charge at his/hers opponent. This jutsu is passed down in the Ikari family).

Weapon: Katana.

In bag: Kunais, small shurikens.

Info: Ryu was raised in konoha. His father died in the fight against Kyubi and
his mother is still alive. After his father died, his mother took over Roy's training. She taught him Chiyute no jutsu and Kanashibari no jutsu.
In the academy he was no genius, but no dropout either. He was dedicated and hardworking. Ryu has been practicing the art of swordplay since he was six, and since the age of ten he has been practising running and jumping everyday, so he is a fast runner and his jumps are much taller than the average. He is not very good at Taijutsus or Genjutsus, but his ninjutsus are good.
He became a Genin at first attempt and has tried the Chuunin exam once, but failed in the first test because of his teammates. His eternal rival is the genius Hyuga Genji. He is of the Hyuga head family.

Ekstra info: In a fight Ryu runs and jumps alot, and keeps an eye out for both his enemy and the environment around him. He uses his katana for deflecting attacks, and in emergency situations, he uses it for attacking (he uses Chakra blade and Konoha ryu no jutsu only when close to dying, so he basically only used these in training). He rarely stays stationary in a fight. Only if he can't hide in trees, bushes and so on, he stands still on the battlefield. He is average at focusing and molding chakra. He can see through most mid level genjutsu, but when it comes to high level he is not that good.

Team:

Sensei: Temachi Kazumi

1st teammate: Anchien Mizuki

2nd teammate: Imono Taki

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This is my nin then... well.. Go out there and get creative! ;)

[Lixie]

My own would be in my fanfic. Yamiya Nariko.

[Zone]

Come on guys! ;)

Have you no ideas? :?

:P

[WildWolfay]

I'll come up with one when I get home...

I'll use one of the characts from my book..

[timeformydeath]

I've finally decided to make a nin

Name: Invisible Shadow (...... Kage) it might be my future rank

Age: 19

Sex: Male

Rank: Chuunin (going to take the Jounin exam this year)

Appearance: Black eyes, Black hair, no apparant ninja gears (its well hidden), Often dressed in a black cloak whch I camoflage fomr time to time, has no forehead protector anywhere, often seen only in the night as a glimse of a shadow

Likes: spying, strategizing, hiding, sneaking, training, reading, and role-playing

Dislikes: ignorant people, loud sounds, youth, battle

Jutsus: Basics thats all, a few jounin level techniques, but only those you can't see

Specialties: Spying, snearking, stealth tactics, blending into any environment

Strengths: sensitive hearing and sight, cloaking, never giving up unless its required

Secret power: transformation 2 forms healing-light and soul drain- dark +
1 Final transformation using both light and dark to create Red Zero the perfect stealth assassin who can not only think above human levels, but cannot be detected unless the one they are facing have super-human abilities

Bag: 2 summoning scrools, 13 daggers, 1 katana, 2 soldier pills, 2 sets of clothes, 1 ninja body armor, 4 days worth of food, 7 days worth of water in a magic gourd, 10 explosion notes, 1 flashbang, 1 charkara detector, one 1 in 1 ninja army knife, 20 pieces of paper to write on, 2 brushes, 1 bottle of ink, 1 book of the undead (req Darkness form)

Summoning: Fuse with the form of either light or dark, but can fuse with both for the ultimate fusion summon (I can turn into a red stealthy fox)

History: A lone ninja often working as either a merc or a plain ninja for hire. Lived alone in the dark forest full of creatures unknown to man where only the darkest of ninjas hide their secrets only to be found soon by a youth with 3 symbols on him. One a dark tattoo symbolizing the darkness in the hearts of man, another light-colored showing the good in such few people, and a third red colored one with an unmistakable aura of demonic power (it kinda looks like the demon fox) I joined the village of the Rain Ninjas (they are very well hidden) and became working form the beginning as a (didn' go to a academy had to take a separate test) genin to a chuunin who is almost going to reach the rank of Jounin. Often known in the village as the unseen one because on mission I am rarely found even by my own teamates.

Ability levels: level 3 taijutsu, level 5 genjutsu, and level 3 ninjutsu

Stats:
level 4 spell-level 5 stealth-level 4 stamina-
level 5 illusion-level 4 wisdom-level 3 strength-
level 3 speed-level 5 spirit

I have no team I work with whomever I am assigned with
I've watched many ninja live part of their lives in all 7 villages
(I may write a story, but its very unlikely unless people actually really want me to write it and I can also draw, but my skills have diminished because of their lack of use im guessing 1/5 as good as it used to be)
oh no gotta go :*(

[Zone]

Wow! He sounds pretty cool! He follows the code of the ninja! ;) STEALTH! WEEE! :P

[harddoom]

i think no1 replies cuz its too long and hard.

[Zone]

i think no1 replies cuz its too long and hard.
I think you're right! ^_^ But... If you guys feel like it! You can always post them in here! ;)

Name : Rokun
Clan : hurican ( the clan of koruna, masters of chakra )
Age : 12
Class : genin

Description : long black hair, dark eyes, eyebrow piercing, sunglasses, 5 foot 2 inches

Clothes :
v black pants,
v dark blue t shirt,
v chains around the shoulders to waist (crossing) with the head protector across the chest
v wrist to elbow gloves
v bandage on wrists, heels, and waist (belt)

equipment :
thy shuriken holster
waist belt with : knives, smoke bomb and flash grenades
on the back held by the chains, are two katana swords (drown from the waist sides down, not from the shoulders up)

techniques

bunshin, henge and kawarimi ( learned at age 6 )
a huge talent for understanding elemental jutsu ( bloodline type)
3rd seal unleashment ( ultimate gaia ) : ( completed at age 11 )
a jutsu that allows the user to completely control the 4 elements : earth, air, water and fire but only if the elements are with the range of the jutsu which depends on amount the of chakra used and with normal maximum chakra, it gives rokun control for 30 min and 5 feet radius of control (absolute control)
*to actually be able to activate gaia, there are 94 hand seals needed, ( wich combines the 4 elements) at his age impossible thus he tried to create a hand seal bypass :
2nd seal unleashment (hand seal bypass) : ( completed at age 9 )
a perfect amount of chakra concentrated on the arms entrance of the chakra circulation system, which when activated, it creates a lens, that allows chakra to go in but only limited amount to exit, thus powering up his arms and allowing him to increase the speed of his hands ( also capable to be used as taijutsu ), but the unleashment requires at least 3 times his own chakra so he perfected the concentration factor in his :
1st seal unleashment (chakra batteries) : (completed at age 8 ) ( batteries holding 365 times his normal chakra )
to activate the lens in his circulation system there is allot of chakra needed to mould the lens, so he needed to increase the power of his chakra and the fastest way he could do this is by SAVING unused chakra, before going to sleep he initiates the jutsu that absorbs al his chakra until he falls asleep and concentrates it on two dots on his chest. These two dots will become like batteries, powerful enough that they don’t even need the circulation system and thus immune to the hyuga martial arts,
side effects chakra radiation : (completed at age 8)
as a side effect because of the vast amount of chakra in the batteries there occurred a radiation effect, his body healed his chakra normally but the batteries emitted chakra that could be used without any negative effects



Eternal Air kawarimi and henge : (completed at age 10 )
as soon as he realised the side effects of his batteries he came up with the ultimate defence, since henge needs continuous, chakra he used that chakra to give himself a weaker look and he hid his weapons, to make enemies think that he didn’t use any,
after completing his hand seal bypass, he gained great knowledge of the elements from trying to control them, and in one of his trial he found away to use air as a replacement, by focussing his chakra he could create an air bubble, and then use that as a replacement, thus gaining the ULTIMATE defence, by escaping all attacks, without loss of any chakra and without the use of any hand seals(attacks he was capable of detecting), soon after he finished his arsenal he needed a way to improve his defence
sixth sense ( chakra/elemental detection) : (completed at age 12 )
after greatly increasing his batteries they’re side effects grew stronger, so it gave him the opening he needed, with this increase of chakra he had what he needed to improve his defence, by using the emitted chakra he could spread it at more than 50 feet ( 50 meter max) from his own body, which gave him the power to detect attacks within this range, and thus his defence was finally complete, though it was not perfect due to the fact, that speed and illusions were still his vulnerability

jutsu in progress :
- Cancellation sphere ( anti-chakra sphere that burns al chakra within the sphere
- Air kawarimi trap ( the air bubble is compressed to create a bomb in case of close combat
- Pressure unbalance ( by using the air kawarimi to compress a larger bubble than the body size, it creates an air pressure unbalance that will suck the enemy towards it, and giving Rokun an opening


Biography :
When Rokun was 6 he was an orphan in the fire country and was lost in the forest near Konoha, on a journey back from a mission a man named koruna, found rokun, and decided to adopt him, due to Rokun’s weak state and Konohas distance the journey would take 5 days, but on the 4th day, they encountered Orochimaru, Koruno knew of Orochimaru and he quickly realised that it was him that was abducting Konoha ninja, and he faced him to give Rokun a chance to escape and warn the ninja of Konoha. Which he did, knowing that he will never see Koruna again. this is also his strength. knowing the love and kindness that Koruna showed him, he knew that he had to become the same way, he was to protect those who are precious to him no matter what and that meant the entire village. That is why he did all he could to do as Koruna told him and he ran as hard as he could and reached Konoha within hours. He quickly warned the villagers and when the name Orochimaru fell, the Anbu informed the Hokage and they went on a search party. Koruna’s body was found but his life was taken. And even today Rokun does not know the true fate of Orochimaru. He has lived believing that he died.



The beginning

A few moths after Rokun reached Konoha in his desperate attempt to save his friend he wakes up in the hospital. He quickly realized what was going on. His attempt failed and it failed so miserably that he ended up in the hospital. He started to tell himself, stupid me! trying to learn a technique that difficult I should have known better, while thinking those words he tried to stand up but with no time at all he fainted again, and the nurse came in. she helped him back into bed.
A few hours later his best friend came to visit him her name was Kirma, An 18 year old chuunin at the ninja academy. She was on of the many orphans from the kyuby incident and she was also the younger sister of Koruna. The moment she saw him lying there as beat up as he was. She got terrified!. For him to train that hard at his age was unbelievable.



From the moment she met him 3 months ago he showed true potential. He immediately showed great interest in the ninja arts and at the beginning she even thought that he didn’t even care about what had happened to Koruna. But she was quickly convinced otherwise as she soon found out that he barely could sleep a night without falling into tears. She also decided that if he really wanted to train that hard that she would help him. And the first technique she would teach him was his chakra control. Explaining the essence of chakra wasn’t that hard for Rokun to understand and he quickly began to train his body to gain more physical strength.

With some tips from Kirma. He started to do weighs, and minor similar training, in the morning. In the afternoon, he had to train his speed. With small harmless projectile dodging he trained his reflexes and reaction speed. At night after dinner he trained his chakra. Figuring that the more tired he was the more effective his chakra control would be. Every night for 6 days he did the same routine. Kirma advised him that he should try to first control his chakra on a more rested state to at least know how it is. But he refused. At the 6th night he finally started to feel his chakra. He decided that his chakra has grown enough and that the next week he would only train in controlling the chakra that he has.

The next day he started as soon as breakfast was made. He went outside and did a small warm up. And then he just sat down in the garden doing absolutely nothing. Kirma was curious to what he was doing so she went to look at him. The moment she stept outside she witnessed his potential. He created a HUGE amount of chakra but due to his weak control over this it was like a bomb. 1 small eruption of chakra so she wasn’t that surprised but very pleased that he could do this in such short time. The second fase of his training started right then. As proud as he was he wanted to learn more. So she gave him a leaf. And told him to try and focus his chakra to hold the leaf at any certain place on his body. And that his hands would be the easiest place to start. He soon found out how difficult this was. After three days of trial and error he finally could do it on almost every place on his body. He was also humoured to be able to cover his butt cheeks with leaves and go walking around naked. But Kirma didn’t share this fun with him and she told him. If he would want to keep her training he had 1 week to masterfully hold the leaf to his forehead for 10 min. impressed by his own skills he quickly tried to move a leaf from his butt to his head with his chakra but once reaching the neck he stopped he couldn’t go any further, not only that it seemed that he was getting weaker and weaker every second. She then explained to him. That because of the importance of the neck and head, due to brain waves, blood transfer, air transfer and all the bodily functions, he could just force chakra on that spot. He would only harm his own body, so he needed to learn to use a flexible amount of chakra and also learn to increase and decrease that amount every moment to every change. This task seemed impossible. Every day he tried as he could but he simply couldn’t hold that leaf there without his head feeling like it was going to burst. After 5 days he was about to give up. He only had 2 days left and all he did in the past 5 days barely increased his potential in succeeding. Until he remembered something that Koruna taught him when he had a headache on they’re journey to Konoha. He told him. That a body has a certain energy, it is the will to survive, the will to live and fight for your own life, this will is also the power to heal yourself and to stop the pain. Any kind of pain. Be it physical or emotional, if you put your mind to it you can overcome those pains. And with that thought he knew what to do. So on the night of the 7th day Rokun entered the house, beat up and about ready to faint, and with that sight Kirma commented with: so? Have you given up kid. And with a smile as big as possible he said NO. in fact, he walked towards her and took her forehead protector, put it on her lap and bend his head on it and lifted his head again to match hers. The forehead protector stood there in its fullest glory for 10 minutes long and then said : So? Are you impressed now ?
She laughed and hugged him. She also told him to go prepare for dinner. And heard a small bump when she turned around she saw him there lying on the floor as happy as could be and as tired as possible. The next morning Kirma was asked to go on a mission to the wave country escorting some farmers. Rokun wanted to go along but he wasn’t allowed. The mission was to take 2 weeks. So all that Rokun had for him is to do some minor training until she returned but she promised to teach him a very cool technique when she returned. After two weeks passed Kirma returned home and she did as the promised, she began to give him the instructions. It was the “henge” the ability to change your appearance for a certain amount of time with his chakra control it took him no more than 2 weeks to learn and master the technique so he was disappointed. And wanted to learn something better. With that request Kirma decided it was time for the second chakra fase. The tree walking ability. Once Rokun heard this he complained that she said that the leaf ability was all he needed to know about chakra. And she replied with : the forehead leaf is to teach you how to adapt your body to your chakra and your chakra to your body. This technique helped you control the chakra that you had. The tree climbing technique will teach you to control the amount of chakra that you use and when to use it. Also most important of all it will help you control your chakra since the feet are the hardest parts of the body where a human can concentrate his chakra. even though he had his doubts he agreed to learn this technique before she would teach him another jutsu. After 4 weeks he has yet to learn this jutsu. And this is where our story begins.

Bunshin no jutsu : guess which is the true one

As soon as kirma wakes him up he acts a little bit ashamed. Rokun you should take it easy, the tree climbing technique isn’t something you should rush. Kirma said to him. I’m sorry Kir (His nickname for Kirma), its just that I’ve got so close to the top that I have to try harder. She then replied. Well either way tomorrow I’m going with you, I don’t want you to end up in the hospital again.
The next day they leave for the training. And after 20 minutes of walking Kirm starts to wonder where this tree of his is, after another 10 minutes they arrive. And she quickly replies with her mouth open larger than an elephant , IS THIS WHAT YOU HAVE BEEN CLIMBING and pointing at the most humongous tree she ever saw, this thing was easy over 25 meter ( 8 floors building ) and cracked and scratched all over. He then replied actually it’s the next to it and pointing at a tree almost twice the size, that one I climbed 2 weeks ago, this one is harder, I cant seem to keep up my chakra all the way to the top so I get tired every time, that’s how I ended up in the hospital the other day, for a small distraction she told him to go look for some fire wood, they were going to have dinner here this night, hoping that he would stay away for a while. As soon as Rokun left she decided to see if she could handle the tree(s) she first climbed the first one, and had little trouble with it. Then she climbed the second one and at 2/3 rd f the thing she got tired and more tired with every step, she was chuunin and has had 12 years more experience than he had, how could a child like him climb farther than she could, this kid either was a true genius or he had a reason to be an orphan. She had to find out.
When rokun returned they started the fire and began talking about everything and nothing. And then she asked him what he knows about himself. He said that every once and a while he gets nightmares but they never show anything else but, the fight between Koruna and Orochimaru. When he first arrived in Konoha, the finest medics tried all they could to help him in his memories but it seems that what ever caused it, its irreversible, only time could heal those wounds. She than told him to get ready for tomorrow he will learn his second Jutsu. Rokun got excited and went to sleep immidiatly, he barely noticed that he didn’t even had to show her that he could do the climbing technique.
The Next day they started kind of slow but after eating they’re breakfast, they began the training, Kirma explained the principles of the jutsu, and he practised the jutsu for 3 days, until he created 1 fully functional clone, on the 4th day he created 2 and within a weak, he was able to create dozens without problems, when she experienced him at firsthand she decided that it was time to enrol him in the academy, as soon as he was enrolled he immediately showed his potential. He soon leared al he needed to learn,



The birthday problem!

His age being guessed to be 6 is not that hard, but his birthday is!. Now that he is a student with more children his age, he soon found out that most of them celebrate they’re birthdays, while he didn’t even know his own age, this gave him a small childish problem but a problem nonetheless. Kirma then decided that his birthday would be the same birthday that koruna had, that way Rokun will always have a piece of Koruna in him, and Kirma will have a step closer to the brother she lost. With this decided, rokuns birthday would be in 2 weeks. This gave a celebration for Rokun. Not a major celebration but still it was a brake that Rokun needed, now age seven he began to really mature, in mind and in body, he begon to realize the secrets, of his own abilities, he quickly realized that he had great talent for elemental techniques. He didn’t know much about them but with the chakra control he gained from the leaf and tree techniques, he had great understanding about the truth.


il try to finish this as soon as posible but i was wondering if anyone had some feed bach on it

[Dweezil]

:shock:

too damn long, couldn't make myself read it :?

[nawar]

well your not supposed to read the whole thing, just read the beginning and if you get bored. than stop ;)

[Everlust]

Here you go Zone!

My Nin!

Name: Takata Kenato

Age: 16

Sex: Male

Rank: Chuunin

Appearance: Black eyes, Long black hair, black shirt, black jump pants, almost totally hidden, wears a blue scarf around his mouth and nose, only his eyes are seen, he always wear his Konoha forehead protector around his elbow.

Likes: Training with kunais and shurikens, peace, learning jutsus.

Dislikes: Grown-ups who look down on him. battle.

Strenghts: Can take care of himself.

Weak points: Don't really wants too fight, but has great potential.

Jutsus: All the basic stuff: Kawarimi no Jutsu, Bunshin no Jutsu, Henge no Jutsu etc.

Chiyute no Jutsu.

Chidori no Jutsu

Special Jutsu: Ryu Fuujin no jutsu. Seals all jutsus in the body with no help from recovering until fully rested again. Nobody know where this jutsu come from, and only a selected few can use it.

Weapon: none.

In bag: Kunais, shurikens.

Info: Not much is known about Kenato, he is very quiet, only talks in emergency situations and when talked too. He is an orphenage and nobody really knew who his parents was. Most of his jutsus he has learned by training himself hard, but he learned Chidori at the age of 12 by mimicing Sakase Hintori and he doesn't even have Sharingan. In school nobody ever paid him much attention, he was the quiet type so nobody bothered talking to him and he prefered it that way until. only a single Jounin saw his true potential and started training him after school, the Jounins name was Sakase Hintori, his future team leader.
The only reason why he took the Genin, was because he wanted to party up with a certain youth. The youths name was Ikari Ryu the only person he ever wanted too fight.
But that didn't happened. Instead he got partied up with Katanake Sinoshi and Sakushe Namaru. The party leader was Sakase Hintori.
For the first time in his life he was happy. He leaned to have friends, and it highly helped his always evergrowing potential. It resulted that he took his team took the Chuunin the year after, resulting that he was a Chuunin at the age of 13.
He now trains hard everyday waiting for Ikari Ryu too catch his eye in a combat.


Ekstra info: In battle it looks like Kenato isn't moving at all, thats because he uses his Genjutsu too trick his opponents. He is an good Taijutsu, Genjutsu and Ninjutsu user, and he was the best in his Genin team, so watch out for him, cause he knows his stuff.