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B166ER
07-28-2005, 06:19 AM
you'll find it here: www.japflap.com/~naruto
it seems to be a pretty kickass chapter XD

Butterz
07-28-2005, 10:58 AM
Yes. It's a very good chapter. Cant wait for the translation. :O!

Salomaa
07-28-2005, 11:34 AM
CR Needs to get his super hax translations here =p

CRtwenty
07-28-2005, 11:37 AM
Heh, I could do my own translation of it, before I know what it actually says :p

kwint
07-28-2005, 11:44 AM
Wow, go Sakura. Straight ninja trickery.

regina777
07-28-2005, 12:10 PM
Heh, I could do my own translation of it, before I know what it actually says :p

i like CRs stuff on CHAOS- like the fight to fight analysis
they are just wonderful

but still with whatever Sakura and Chiyo can do wouldnt if be kinda anticlimatic if they actually manage to beat u know who

i really liked sakuras strength- Tsunade in the making- no wonder she was able to lift a whole ships mast in the idate RACE filler arc

Go Sakura Go chiyo-baa

CRtwenty
07-28-2005, 12:55 PM
Ok... finished the Redub, I'll post it in a bit

EDIT: Here it is... presenting, Naruto Rebub #2: Eco-Awareness
http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=31T0KUDNW18C101ZHX57SREZ0K

EDIT2: Link should work

Salomaa
07-28-2005, 01:48 PM
Omg a rebub of 270? :D

'Summon Captain Planet'
Wtf?

regina777
07-28-2005, 01:52 PM
CR when is ur fight synopsis of 270 coming out-
it has become one of my favorites reading synopsos like that on this forum

i wonder what naruto will do when he comes up. sakura has sure become a delight

Vishox
07-28-2005, 02:01 PM
FLY BOBO FLY!!!

regina777
07-28-2005, 02:32 PM
http://www.coolccc.ho8.com/

has the first tranlation- click on their ads if u download from there

graff
07-28-2005, 04:00 PM
good translation just seemed to be alittle off. man sakura. i was starting to doubt but she just destroyed that puppet in one punch and that was his strongest puppet. damn man im now a sakura fan boi.

nawar
07-28-2005, 04:42 PM
There's so much dialogue in this chapter, it's like Kishimoto's making up for lost time. >_<; edit: I know I'm supposed to say this is a first draft, and promise more tweaks, but damn this one was a novel and a half.

Page 1-

Sidebar:

Return of the Frontier Patrol! That face with a flustered look, what is it that Temari's after...!?

Page 2-3 (note: am leaving the movie-ad stuff untranslated)-

Shikamaru: Give it up, man.
Sakura: Enough already...
Naruto: I'm still going strong!

Title:

270: Miscalculation...!!

Page 4:

Panel 1, Kankurou:

You're late.

Panel 2, Temari, Right:

And yet, we managed to make it here as fast as we could.

Panel 2, Temari, Left:

More importantly, we were sent to the border way too late!

Panel 3, Temari:

This is your fault for not being prepared!

Panel 4, Kankurou, Right:

And yet, while I was recovering, I thought I'd let you act on your own for once.

Panel 4, Kankuro, Left:

You're out of line.

Panel 5, Temari:

Hmph...

Page 5:

Panel 1, Kankurou:

Well then...

Panel 1, Temari:

Shall we?

Panel 3, Kakashi:

Wait, Naruto! You're getting too far ahead of me!

Page 6:

Panel 3, Deidara, Right:

Well then... I said I'd get the jinchuuriki, but I'm already out of plastique, and...

Panel 3, Deidara, Left:

Even that Copy Ninja Kakashi is out to get me.

Panel 4, Deidara:

What to do... Hm.

Panel 5, Kakashi, Right:

We're getting too far from Sakura and the others.

Panel 5, Kakashi, Left:

At this range, the transmitters won't even work.

Page 7:

Panel 1, Kakashi, Right:

I cant let this keep up.

Panel 1, Kakashi, Left:

I've got no choice but to use "that" to hurry up and end this.

Page 8:

Panel 1, Sasori:

Your brute strength is so very effeminate.

Panel 3, Chiyo, Right:

Impressive, young lady...

Panel 3, Chiyo, Left:

After this little time, she's already begun to pick up on Sasori's attack patterns...

Panel 4, Chiyo, Right:

Even without my help, to be able to do it all on her own...

Panel 4, Chiyo, Center:

For that girl to have come this far...

Panel 4, Chiyo, Left:

Tsunade, heh... You've got quite a student there.

Page 9:

Panel 1, Tsunade:

Listen, Sakura. For medical ninjas, attacking abilities are secondary in importance.

Panel 2, Tsunade:

Do you understand why?

Panel 2, Sakura:

Medical ninja play the support role in their squads. Before attacking, combat support and medic actions are their primary concern!

Panel 3, Tsunade:

Wrong!!

Panel 4, Sakura:

Huh?!

Panel 5, Tsunade, Right:

A medical ninja must NEVER take the hit from an enemy attack.

Panel 5, Tsunade, Left:

Your primary concern is the ability to dodge your opponent's attacks.

Panel 6, Sakura:

...Why is that?

Page 10:

Panel 1, Tsunade, Right:

If the medical ninja dies...

Panel 1, Tsunade, Left:

Who will be there to treat the team?

Panel 2, Tsunade, Right:

...From here on, I'll be attacking seriously.

Panel 2, Tsunade, Left:

Your training will be to dodge all my attacks. ...I won't hold back.

Panel 3, Sakura:

Before an attack comes, the fingers move without fail. That's the puppeteer's weak point... And now, by the patterns of his arm and finger movements, I'm beginning to read the direction of his attacks...

Panel 4, Sasori:

She's staring right at me. At this rate, we're losing time. It'll use some chakra, but there's no way around it. I'll stop her with "that"...

Page 11:

Satetsu Kaihou! (Iron Sand Forest!) [ed: yeah, winging it with that one].

Page 12:

Panel 2, Chiyo:

This is bad!

Panel 3, Sakura:

The field is too wide!

Page 13:

Panel 6, Chiyo:

Sakura!

Page 14:

Panel 1, Chiyo:

Sakura, are you alright!?

Panel 4:

Even just a scratch will become a fatal wound.

Panel 6, Chiyo:

!! She's wounded...!

Page 15:

Panel 1, Sasori:

I thought I told you... "And that's not all!"

Panel 2, Chiyo:

Just as I thought, so you had poison applied to the Satetsu...!

Panel 6, Sasori, Right:

Heh heh... So the poison's taking its effect...

Panel 6, Sasori, Left:

The poison acts quickly, and your body becomes numb and immobile. Left alone, you've got three days, but...

Page 16:

Panel 1, Sasori:

I'm not gonna stop there!

Panel 3, Chiyo:

The rock...!!

Panel 18:

Panel 6, Chiyo:

Sakura... You...

Page 19:

Panel 1, Sakura, Right:

It's the antidote...

Panel 1, Sakura, Left:

There's only one more vial. I'll give this one to you, Chiyo-baasama.

Panel 2, Chiyo:

When did you...

Panel 3, Sakura, Flashback:

I can make three vials of antidote.

Panel 3, Sakura:

When I used the antidote on Kankurou-san, I was only able to make three doses.

Panel 4, Sakura:

Since I knew the enemy used poison, I went with the injection-type and brought the antidote with me.

Panel 4, Chiyo:

I see.. Then...

Panel 5, Sakura, Right:

However, you only get the antidote's effect during a three minute window.

Panel 5, Sakura, Left:

During that time, any poison you take will be rendered harmless by the medicine.

Page 20:

Panel 1, Sakura:

I couldn't let Sasori know I had this antidote...

Panel 2, Sakura, Right:

Only during his last attack, when he was especially careless, did I have my chance.

Panel 2, Sakura, Left:

That's why I had to cut it so close.

Panel 3, Sakura, Right:

For three more minutes, the poison won't have any effect on me.

Panel 3, Sakura, Left:

These last three minutes mean victory or defeat!

Panel 5, Sasori, Right:

Very well...

Panel 5, Sasori, Left:

Let us end this!

Sidebar: The strongest puppet ever, completely smashed! In a fight to the extremes, a beautiful genius blooms! And now, for Sakura and Chiyo-baa... The final battle!!

Preview:

Next Issue: Center pages in color for the intense fight to the finish!!? "Unknown Abilities!!"

Vishox
07-28-2005, 05:00 PM
oooo unknown abilities eh?

RandomGuy
07-28-2005, 05:51 PM
Looks like the Akatsuki are getting their asses handed to them. Sasori's puppets gone and Deidara is also out of weapons. I wonder if they die or get away...

graff
07-28-2005, 06:07 PM
DIE!!!

Butterz
07-28-2005, 09:15 PM
well said. http://forums.emuparadise.org/images/smilies/eusa_dance.gif

CRtwenty
07-28-2005, 11:15 PM
CR when is ur fight synopsis of 270 coming out-
it has become one of my favorites reading synopsos like that on this forum

i wonder what naruto will do when he comes up. sakura has sure become a delight

I usually do it once Shannaro releases their trans.

regina777
07-29-2005, 12:38 AM
oh! coolccs might be a little of low quality anyways

but i dont think the third Kazekages puppet is all that Sasori has. One thing though is that he might be short on chakra
what if he brings one of his many puppets which might just be the natural enemies of sakura/chiyo

and i cant wrap my mind around Sasori who is strong to overpower someone like the strongest kage would lose to Sakura/chiyo-

what is possible is Sasori might run away or he hasnt shown his true form yet

CRtwenty
07-29-2005, 11:34 AM
~sigh~ Shannaro is too slow, I'll just get the speed one for now, and use it for Fight Club.

It's time once again for the weekly edition of
CR's Fight-Club! A Panel by Panel synopsis of the fights this week!

Sasori: This girl won't take her eyes off me. If things stay like this, it could take awhile. It'll use a bit of chakra, but there's no way around it. Guess I'll finish her with "that".

(1) The two pieces of Iron sand (from the previous chapter) collide with each other.
(2) The Kazekage Puppet performs "Satetsu Kaihou", controlling the sand.
(3) The sand begins to quickily branch out from the combined objects.
(4) The branches move towards Sakura.

Chiyo: No!
Sakura: That thing is going everywhere!

(5) The branches converge on Sakura, who tries to leap back.
(6) The tremor of the branches attack is strong enough to cause a landslide outside of the cave.
(7) Rocks slam into the wall of the cavern
(8) Chiyo lis pinned under a falling rock
(9) Sasori looks to see if his attack worked.
(10) Sakura staggers out from the spikes.

Chiyo: Sakura! Sakura are you alright?

(11) The branches have completely filled the cavern.
(12) Blood drips to the ground, is it Sakura's?
(13) Sakura is bleeding from numerous cuts on her body. Chiyo's words echo in her mind

Chiyo: Even a scratch will be a fatal wound...

(14) Sakura begins to slump forward

Chiyo: She was cut!!

Sasori: That's why I told you... I said "That's not everything"
Chiyo: So you had mixed poison into the sand after all.

(15) Sakura falls to her knees
(16) Chiyo watches helplessly
(17) Sakura passes out

Sasori: Heheh, the poison's started working I see. Your body goes numb right away, and then stops moving. If left alone you'll last three days, but... I don't intend to do that.

(18) Sasori commands the Kazekage Puppet to finish off Sakura
(19) A blade extends from the Puppets Arm
(20) Chiyo tries frantically to free herself from under the rock

Chiyo: This rock....!

(21) The Puppet approaches Sakura
(22) The Puppet readies a killing blow
(23) Suddenly, Sakura stands up and punches the puppet, ripping it in two!
(24) Pieces of puppet fly past Sakura's face
(25) Sasori looks shocked.
(26) Chiyo watches in awe
(27) The Iron sand begins to crumble.
(28) Sakura leaps over to Chiyo
(29) Sakura moves the rock off of Chiyo

Chiyo: Sakura, you're...

Conversation about Antidotes, and End

regina777
07-29-2005, 04:24 PM
that is more like it- u see more stuff than i am willing to pay attention to or just glance through
impressive. But do u guys really thnk Sasori is going to lose to Sakura and chiyo baa or is he gonna run away with Deidara or something- one them might die

Bowsie
07-29-2005, 04:25 PM
that is more like it- u see more stuff than i am willing to pay attention to or just glance through
impressive. But do u guys really thnk Sasori is going to lose to Sakura and chiyo baa or is he gonna run away with Deidara or something- one them might diei don't think sasori is gonna get killed. don't know why, but that's just what i think

CRtwenty
07-29-2005, 10:16 PM
Well he activated the Puppets Head in the final panel... remember, a puppet master can control the individual pieces of his puppet independently. I think he still has a few tricks up his sleeve.

narutoIZZAbest
07-30-2005, 01:24 AM
ive noticed something about this... Shannaro has been takin over in the translating /... whatever happened to Inane?

Vultimax
07-30-2005, 02:23 AM
Inane is doing slow coz he's releasing HQs.

Naruto_Guru
07-30-2005, 05:23 AM
Cmon now guys lets not get hastey I dont think theyll kill off any of the mebers of the akatsuki so soon, that would just be no fun.

I think theyll bolth end up getting away but with a lot of bumps and bruises!

BTW whats taking Gais team so long how gay!

CRtwenty
07-30-2005, 09:31 AM
Personally I think that Sasori is going to be defeated, and Deidara is going to escape. And last we saw Team Gai was still fighting their clones.

Remember, despite taking weeks of RL time, it's probably been less then 15 minutes since the seal was broken in Naruto Time. Fights move quickly.

As for Inane, they are still releasing, but they don't do speed releases. They make HQ releases, last I checked they were only up to 266.

regina777
07-30-2005, 06:52 PM
i have Inane 268. so i got it from a friend somewhere else.
But i am thinking one of these guys would die. Yeah! if the whole gang gangs up on them. that sounds more believable than Sakura/chiyo alone defeating sasori.

7hat1kid
07-30-2005, 10:49 PM
Here's my two cents on the whole situation. Sasori still has plenty of tricks left up his sleve i'm sure. Considering he's got hundreds of more puppets he could go through. The odds are in his favor for him to win just because of that. It lets physically demanding to control a puppet. He uses far less stamina then Sakura with her smash your face in style. Since that's the case I do see guys team returning soon to give a hand. Sasori will then realize the odds are against him find a way to flee.
I could however see Deidara being killed in this battle. He doesn't seem to play a very vital roll to the storyline and seems to be the weekest member of the group. Plus he's got nothing left and a very fresh Naruto and Kakashi are right on his ass. Kakashi said i'm going to have to end it with 'that' which tells me one of two things. A. We're going to get to see Kakashi's new jutsu finally or B. he's going to somehow convince naruto to just let him go and they will return to help out against Sasori. The first of which is more likely because I don't see naruto just letting deidara have Gaara's body.

evil_murai
07-31-2005, 12:41 AM
man, shannaro is WAY later than usual. maybe inane smothered them while they were sleeping to get rid of the competition.

Lixie
08-01-2005, 07:32 PM
Sakura is kicking ass more than ever.

regina777
08-02-2005, 01:40 AM
i hope she can keep up- had it not been chiyo she would have been gone a long time ago.
Oh God dont let SASORI get pissed and release all of his power. otherwise- our dear sakura and granny will be done for

Vishox
08-02-2005, 09:19 AM
i speak for everyone when i shout...

FINISH HIM!!

prediction??


SAKURA WINS!! FATALITY!!

Dream_Walker
08-02-2005, 09:19 AM
wow! sakura's cool! alot cooler than she used to be :P

B166ER
08-02-2005, 09:46 AM
this chapter rocks there is still one problem tho...
...WHY THE HELL HASN'T IT BEEN SCANLATED YET ???

Vishox
08-02-2005, 10:09 AM
it has, its just that noones put up a link yet?

B166ER
08-02-2005, 01:54 PM
hum right, narutofan has it :wink:
anyway, sakura appears to be a dodge expert, no really now she does rock ^^

hamstar
08-03-2005, 01:15 AM
prediction: sasori unleashes the next shit on sakura and chiyo.

regina777
08-03-2005, 02:12 AM
she sure rocks now- but she got hit
had it not been chiyo she would have been
hit a lot more especially if u havent forgotten the first time all those arms and knives shot out of hte puppet.

soo would there be any manga this week at all. or all the attention is on the Naruto movie

Vultimax
08-03-2005, 07:19 AM
man..im really proud of sakura now.
she's way mature than before.
hiding that antidote and ownaging sasori..
now she's got 3 minute without worrying!!!

regina777
08-03-2005, 12:14 PM
she has to worry- poisons i doubt are sasoris only power- He is an Akatsuki member. they will sure need help.i am more afraid of she getting ahead of herself and getting in trouble- because i doubt they will let Sakura a chuunin and chiyo an aging powerful ninja to Kill Sasori
i hope i am wrong- Gai get ur asses up out of that trap and go help them- hurry up

vegita625
08-04-2005, 09:11 PM
i speak for everyone when i shout...

FINISH HIM!!

prediction??


SAKURA WINS!! FATALITY!!

You sure it won't be BABALITY!!

Yea... I got Mortal Kombat II in mind right now... but somehow I doubt it'll be "SAKURA WINS!! Friendship :)" lol

Amatsu Mikaboshi
08-04-2005, 11:04 PM
anyone know the deal on why 271 isnt out yet?

Vishox
08-05-2005, 12:41 AM
theyve been late recently ...no biggy

probably late friday/ early saturday methinks

Divinedemon
08-05-2005, 12:43 AM
i think that it will ddefinetly be that sakura uses up the three minutes trying to beat sasori and she is struggling. just as sasori is ready to land the final blow Gais team pops out of nowhere to save the day. and thus we have a fleeing Akatsuki

B166ER
08-05-2005, 04:21 AM
isn't there like a summer break now ? that would explain why the 271 is so late :wink:

Jofil..kankorou..rocks
08-09-2005, 03:15 PM
probably- how long is the summer break in there newayz? but i have seen 271 its pretty good