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temjinxzarron
04-20-2004, 01:54 PM
Okay this is the start of my 1st fanfic before Ending My Destiny.
Title: One of a Family. By TemjinxZarron
Summary: This is the story of a certain girl trying to prove her nindo in her own way. That is if she doesn’t run into trouble first.
Italic- is thoughts
()-are actions
Chapter One: Wakening Up
She was not the average 12 year old girl. She was wild with her mother looks and her fathers’ personality one could easily be fooled by the “innocence” that she can portray. Especially when she is trying to achieve something on an important day like today.
(BAM!) An alarm clock flew toward the wall when it started to ring at 6:30 in the morning.
“Awww, man morning already.” The girl said as she tried to pull the covers up over her head to continue sleeping. The alarm clock started to ring again which got her very irritated.
“Damn it!” she screamed/yawned as she got up to turn off the clock. Now that she was up she might as well shower and get ready for school. She lazily grabbed her clothes that she was going to wear today and went to the bathroom to shower. As she showered she thought about what she was going to be doing today.
“Today is the final graduation exams.” She thought as she let out a huge grin. She knew that becoming a genin was going to be easy. It was that once she became a genin, the question was who exactly will become her two teammates? Not to mention her teacher for that matter. She finished up her shower and started to dye the tips of her bluish hair a blonde color and put on her which was a blue and black shirt with a white spiral symbol in the front and some black pants. When she got finished; she walked out the bathroom still a little sleepy.
As she was headed to the kitchen she passed by her little brother and sister rooms. They were still asleep since school ended early for them anyway. She quietly walked past the rooms careful not to wake them up. She knew it would be hell if she did wake them. This meant going through the evil task of babysitting! One thing she hated was to baby sit her little brother and sister.
As she went to the kitchen to find her breakfast was neatly wrapped up by her mother and a note on top that simply read:
“Dear sweetheart, good luck on your exams. Love Mom and Dad”
She couldn’t help to let out a small grin. She knew that her father was out on business or a mission and her mother was at the hospital working the graveyard shift so they couldn’t come to see her off to school. She quietly ate her meal and started to get ready to go when she thought of something.
“This is the last day that I will be in the academy! I have to SOMETHING to leave my mark on that school!” She thought as she ran into her room and picked up some fireworks. Looking at the fire works she let out a huge grin as she place them in her backpack.
“This will be perfect!” She snickered to herself. She grabbed the rest of her stuff and ran out the front door.
AN: Sorry if that was a little short. I am also saving her name for the next chapter. The next chapter will be a little longer. This is my first fic so please be nice and R&R.
temjinxzarron
04-20-2004, 01:57 PM
Here is Chapter two!
Disclaimer: I do not nor will I ever will own Naruto.
Chapter Two: Vandalism can be fun
The young girl walked up to the door of her classroom. She had already had a plan to how she was going to pull the stunt.
“Okay here we go!” She thought. She put her hand together to form the seals.
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! In a puff of smoke one bunshin appeared and took the fire works and ran out towards the roof of the academy. Once she saw the bunshin leave went into the academy doors and took her seat.
“Late again are we Aoi-chan.” A certain pink hared teacher said across the room. “I…ugh….well it’s kinda hard to explain” Aoi stammered. “Well save it; you’re up next for the exam.” She replied. “Yes, Sakura-sensei” Aoi replied as she got up from her seat and went into the room where the exam will be held.
Aoi looked around the room to see Sakura and other ninja take their seats. Well mostly to see Sakura wobble to hers.
“Ah, going to have a kid soon huh? No wonder why she acts the way she does now.” Aoi thought as she was stepping in the room. Then she thought of all the babysitting that her friend Uchiha Millia was going to do and snickered to herself.
“Something funny, Aoi-chan?” Sakura asked looking very irritated with her.
“No, it’s nothing sensei.” Aoi quickly replied back and she was taking her place in the center of the room. As she looked around she noticed that there was nothing in the room except a table and on it she saw the ninja leaf headbands neatly lined up in rows, ready for the taking.
“Alright, Time to shine!” She thought.
“Okay” Sakura said. “The exam is the Bunshin no Jutsu. You must make at least 3 clones, understand?”
Before she could say anything else; Aoi created about ten kage bunshins. Sakura smiled.
“Taught by you dad huh?”
“Of course, Sakura-sensei.” Aoi said with a huge grin
*meanwhile*
“Okay, its set!” the bunshin thought. She placed the fireworks in a circle so when Aoi walked out of the academy they would go off and spell her name in huge letters all over the sky.
“Hey if I am going to go out; it might as well be with a bang!” she thought as she made sure that everything was in place and waited for the real Aoi to come out to see her final performance at the academy.
Once she got her headband and left, she quickly ran towards the academy’s front door to jump on the roof of the school. As the other kids left out to greet their parents and others teachers they looked at her with bewilderment and wonder if she was crazy.
“Okay Aoi; what are you doing yup there.’ Said a boy named Sol said. Aoi looked at the boy. He was wearing a white shit with some red shorts. His right arm and left leg were bandaged up and had packs of kunai in them. One thing that she noticed was that he had the same eyes has hers. The only difference was that while hers had a tint of blue; his had a tint of black.
“Well it’s nothing too serious.” Aoi smirked at the boy. “I’m just going to leave my mark on the school that all.” Before Sol could say anymore all the rest of the students came out of the academy.
“Alright!” She thought. “Listen up everyone!” she yelled to the crowd of people below her. Everyone looked at her like she was crazy. “To every one here who as graduated today, congratulations!” Before everyone started to cheer the Aoi quickly said “But of course as you all know this is about me!” Right then everyone sweat dropped. “As you know I have graduated also.” Aoi said getting ready for her light show in the sky.
“So with that said I would like to present one of the greatest students of the academy…………………………………..ME THE GREAT UZUMAKI AOI!” Aoi shouted as she spun around in a circle with her hands up in the air. The fireworks immediately went off and spelled her name in the evening sky. Once the fireworks went off the kage bunshin disappeared.
“Okay, that’s just stupid.” Sol thought. Most of the people there either looked at the fireworks in wonder or thought just like Sol did.
As Aoi was enjoying her light show something caught her interest in the corner of her eye. The interest was a tree that was burning.
“Oh crap!” Aoi thought. “One of the rockets must have hit a tree!”
As the tree caught fire Aoi noticed that some of the grad students and parents took noticed and almost just a quickly as the fire started people were already starting to put it out with water jutsu.
“I think now is the time I take my great leave.” Aoi thought as she jumped from the roof onto the ground. She ran out of the academy grounds and when she did she noticed someone behind her. “Holy Crap! If they catch me I’m in so much trouble!” She picked up the pace and eventually lost them. “Man that was close!” She thought trying to catch her breath. Once she was ready she started to jog. As she was turning a corner she bumped into someone hard. Aoi fell on the ground butt first.
“Sorry about that!” Aoi stammered as she was trying to get up. But when she got a good look at WHO she bumped into she couldn’t get up. Standing in front of her was a woman with the konoha headpiece around her neck. Her pure pearl eyes were drilling a hole in Aoi head. And her bluish short hair that hasn’t changed a bit since Aoi has ever known her.
“I see you made a scene at the academy. Also that scene involving a fire.” The woman said calmly. “Add the fact that you tried to run form me doesn’t help any either.” All Aoi could do at this point was to laugh nervously. She knew that she was in deep trouble. She tried to speak but the only two words that Aoi could get out of her mouth were………..
“Hi, Mom.”
AN: Well I hope that chapter was better than the first. I got some great things planned for future chapters so until then bye! ^_^.
like i said at your other fanfic:
more more more!!!
Anbu Dr J
04-20-2004, 10:21 PM
yes ditto!! more more more!!
temjinxzarron
05-07-2004, 04:33 AM
Other few chapter are almost finished and will be comming tomorrow.
temjinxzarron
05-07-2004, 11:13 PM
I have to admit the even though the story is my creation the idea of a future naruto is my friends idea. So here is the next chapter. *runs and hides under desk.*
Chapter three: Scolding
Aoi walked with her mother to their home.
“But I was just trying to make a name for myself you know?” Aoi said. She thought that could be a good enough of excuse but her mother wasn’t buying it.
“Listen, I know that; but you can’t just be pulling stunts like that.” Hinata said while looking at her daughter. “But anyway, congratulations on the exam, we knew you could do it!” Hinata bend over to give her daughter a hug. Aoi blushed.
“Hey, maybe mom won’t ground me!” Aoi thought. She knew that it was a possibility but she had to ask anyway. “So no punishments?” Aoi asked.
“Of course there is going to be a punishment. You didn’t think that you would get away with that did you?” A man said behind her. Aoi quickly turned around frustrated and upset.
“Come on dad! If it was you; you’ve probably would’ve did the same thing.” Aoi said looking at her dad.
Naruto laughed. “I’ve probably would have, but Iruka would’ve punished me for it though.” Naruto walked over to his wife and gave her a kiss. “I think that first her replanting those trees that burnt down. Then she could do some babysitting for awhile.”
“Nooooooooooooooooooo! Anything but babysitting! I can’t stand babysitting!” Aoi screamed in her head. She could only frown on the outside thought. But just then she thought “Wait my official genin test is two days form now! That must mean that the punishment can’t last that long!”
“Oh and Aoi sweetheart,” Hinata said sweetly smiling at her daughter.
“Yes mama?” Aoi asked curiously.
“Since we KNOW that your official genin test is in two days. You’ll be planting those trees tomorrow. And you will be babysitting your brother and sister the week after that.” Hinata said still smiling.
“DAMN IT! Man does she have to smile like that thought.” Aoi thought.
As they were almost at their house Hinata forgot something at the store.
“Awww,” Hinata pouted. “I totally forgot to get some groceries for dinner.”
“Well don’t worry. I’ll get it. Besides, you’re probably tired form working all day.” Naruto said. Hinata handed him a list of all the stuff they needed to make dinner. Naruto started to walk towards the grocery story when she said those dreadful words to him.
“AND DON’T GET ANY RAMEN!!” Naruto flinched like he was in pain upon hearing those words.
“Okay I won’t” Naruto said sadly as he walked towards the store.
Once Hinata and Aoi got to their home they saw Ino sitting in on the porch in front of their house.
“Hi,” Ino said with a big smile.
“Hello, Ino-chan” Hinata replied back. “Aoi you go on inside okay?” Hinata said looking at her daughter.
“Okay,” Aoi said. “Good to meet you Ino-san.” Ino smiled. As Aoi went inside the house Ino looked at Hinata with a devilish look on her face.
“So,” Ino said still looking devilish. “Have you tried my special little present on Naruto yet?” Hinata blushed. She knew exactly what she is talking about.
“Well,” Hinata said trying to find the words so that she wouldn’t disappoint Ino. “Not yet exactly. I just don’t know about using that.”
“Oh come on!” Ino said almost yelling. “He has to succumb sometime.” Before Hinata could say anything else, she saw Naruto walking towards the door of the house.
“Well,” said Ino. “I have to go. But you better think about it okay?” With that Ino greeted Naruto and left for her and Shikamaru house.
“I got the stuff and came here as fast as I can.” Naruto said while giving Hinata a quick kiss on the cheek. As he entered the house a question came into mind. “By the way; what were you guys talking about?”
“Nothing much,” Hinata stammered as she sorted out the groceries. “Well let’s start making dinner shall we.”
“Okay,” Naruto said following Hinata directions. The two made dinner; ate and turned in for the day.
AN: Well that’s another chappie! I hoped you liked it. If its short, sorry about that. I promise that the next chapter will be better and longer.
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AN: is it safe to come out now. *still hiding under desk*
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