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Hello guys! This is my first attempt. Its one shot unless you want it otherwise.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto in anyway.
Ending My Destiny (Act 1)
“I cannot tell who or what I am anymore. Everyday I see the darkness in me. I try to control it but I can’t. I see all their faces all their hatred. But soon………….soon it will all be over, because I finally managed to do it now. At first it was painful but hey soon I will be in eternal bliss and peace. There are you f***ing are you happy now!
No more will I have to put up with you stares!
No more will I have to put up with fate!
No more will I have to put up with karma always going against me!
I can’t finally have piece of mind for once! I can control my own destiny, my own fate. I don’t need to live with this curse anymore, because I am now free! To finally have this much power in my hands is overwhelming! Ah, look at the blood! It’s so freely flowing and dripping out of me. I even remembered to cut down and not across. Ah the power, it feels so good! My eyes are starting to close. Wow so this what death feels like? Death………………………..for many people death is something that people fear. They share hatred and loathing towards it. For me thought death is my best friend. Right now it’s the only thing that provides me comfort, security and happiness. I really enjoy this. Right now no one can stop me. Not other jonins, not other people, not even family can stop me.
Family………………………..for many people family is all about compassion, understanding, comment, love and being there for one another. Hell if that was the case then I was f***ed from the beginning. There is no family to me that care for me and my father……………..F**K MY FATHER!
He was never there for me.
He never cared about me!
He never did anything to help me!
True, at first I thought of excuses for why he was never there for me, but now I have to face the fact of reality that he was just a heartless bastard after all! Just thinking about him makes me sick. That’s why I hoped to find the courage and strength needed to die. But I finally did it! I did it.
I broke through the sand!
I defied Shukaku!
I don’t have to live in fear anymore!”
And with that Gaara of the sand closed his eyes and went to sleep with a last thought.
“I thought that if I kill every human being in existence then I could feel truly alive. But this was is so much easier. If people continue to hate and fear thing which they don’t have a understanding for, then how can people ever come out of the darkness that is blinding them?”
THE END?
AN: Okay the end is up to you. Should I continue? Should I let this be one shot? Please R&R and let me know.
sorry thats my story above :oops: . strange that they didn;t sign me in :oops:
temjinxzarron
04-19-2004, 01:24 PM
sorry thats my story above :oops: . strange that they didn;t sign me in :oops: That was me! I keep trying to login and it keeps putting me as an guest!
too short!!
i like your writing style
please write more
Lixie
04-19-2004, 08:00 PM
The ending's fine on its own... but your storie's definitely open for more. I'd go for more. :D
thompkinsbrian
04-19-2004, 08:26 PM
still too much for me to read :lol:
temjinxzarron
04-20-2004, 12:43 PM
Well here is a second chapter. This story will jump around a bit but don't worry.
Ending My Destiny by TemjinxZarron
Disclaimer: No I don’t own Naruto……………….well some of the gamecube games.
Ending My Destiny (Act 2)
“Who, what, why do I exist for; what do I live for?
Why must I try to always prove myself? I’m getting sick of this. I am always defiled upon, spat upon and look down upon. I thought that if I show them what I was made of then I would not have to spend my life living in loneliness. But that loneliness is going to stay with me. There’s no way I can get around the fact that I was never loved by a real family. Hell you can add friends also. Sure I have a team that I am on, but the only reason for that is because they are only there to make sure I don’t do anything to myself or others.
I am looking at my kunai now. I’m thinking should I take the plunge in to eternal sleep.
Everyday I try to find some reason, someway to keep myself for living.
Everyday I try to find some reason to keep my sanity.
Everyday I try to find some reason to keep myself from hurting others for revenge.
Even I never believed in how the simplest of things can keep one alive.
You know I tried to find love somewhere else. Sure I’m not gonna lie I have seen friendship in some people, but it’s not enough because no one will feel anything if I were to die right now. All I want is love. Is that really so hard to obtain? Is it because that I fell jealous of other people? If that’s the case then I DESERVE to be! Because no one has to put up with the s**t that I had to endure!
No one deserves to be treated the way I did!
No one deserves to not experience love!
All I ever wanted was to love someone and to receive that same love back. But something so simple and yet complex as love I can never feel. And I KNOW that acceptance and understanding will never come form those people. All they will NEVER see me for what I was not; and not who I am. So f**k you world! You people can just go to hell! Because with this; I could finally find some peace and serenity.”
Before Naruto could drive the kunai in his wrist a knock came at the door.
“Naruto, come on! I don’t know why I was the one that had to wait for you.” Sakura said a little upset that she was the one that had to go out to get Naruto when she could have been spending some more time at the hospital with Sasuke. Naruto dropped the kunai and walked out the house.
“What not going to say a hello to me!” Sakura almost screamed at him. Naruto didn’t even look at her as he passed right by her like a ghost. This in turn made Sakura infuriated.
“NARUTO!” she said trying to hit him but, before the she connected Naruto grabbed her fist and clenched it hard. Sakura winches in pain form Naruto squeeze.
“If you ever try that again I WILL hurt you!” Naruto said coldly. Sakura look in his eyes with fear. The sudden change in his attitude and personality was too overwhelming for her. Naruto then let go of her hand and started to walk down to the training ground where Kakashi was. Sakura made sure that she walked behind him to avoid any confrontations again. When they arrived Kakashi was the first to speak.
“Oi Naruto, Why are you late?”
All Naruto could do was look back and his teacher and say “Why are you always late?” This started to push Kakashi buttons a bit.
“Listen, Naruto” Kakashi said calmly. “How do you expect to become better if you show up late for training? You never will become Hokage at that rate.” This made Naruto a little angry.
“Well how am I expected to get better if all you do is worry about the improvement of Sasuke?” And before Kakashi could get another word out Naruto gave an evil look and snapped. “With you for a teacher, I could never get better! I was a fool!” Kakashi was surprised by all of this.
“Naruto I…..” Kakashi said before Naruto cut him off again.
“You know Kakashi.” Naruto said not even addressing his teacher by formal name. “I totally lost all respect for you as a person. I used to think that you were a fair and cool person. But it seems that you are not fair. You are just like all the other people in this village; cold and hateful.”
“No I’m not Naruto,” said Kakashi quickly in his defense.
“Oh yes you are!” Naruto yelled back. “You’re so inconsiderate that you focus most of you time on Sasuke and not me or even Sakura for that matter. “I don’t know why Ero-Sennin wanted to still make me do missions and train with you. I never learn NONTHING form you! Every single jutsu and little thing that I’ve ever learned in or about life; all of it came form other places, not you!”
Kakashi could easily since the killer intent in his eyes and the hatred in his tongue. “Well if jutsu is all you’re worried about…..”
“Don’t start!” Naruto shouted. “I know the real reason why I was assigned to you.” Naruto started to sound hysterical. “See; I been doing some reading on you. I found out that you were taught and trained by the fourth Hokage.”
“So what,” Kakashi said in a calming voice again.
“SO, who would be the best person that would be able to control the seal in case something goes wrong?” Naruto said sarcastically.
“What seal are you talking about?” Sakura asked. Kakashi looked in a little shocked when he saw Sakura still standing there watching the argument.
“Its nothing Sakura don’t worry about it. Say, can Naruto and I have a little word in private?” Kakashi asked.
“Umm, okay” Sakura stuttered still a little afraid. She walked to the other side of the training ground but she could still hear some of the conversation.
“Naruto!” Kakashi almost yelled. “Do you want to let them know what inside you!?”
“Shut up. I know now why I was paired with you. I know why I was placed with a bookworm and the number one rookie. Even when I am dead-last in scores. It was because if something was wrong with the seal then you could know how to take care of it; that’s all.” Naruto turned to walk away.
“Like I said before Kakashi I lost all respect for you as person. You could’ve told me before hand.”
“Yea, and what do you think that would’ve done?” Kakashi calmly asked.
“Well; it’s better than finally figuring it all out now.” With that Naruto walked away.
“Maybe I should tell Hokage-sama about this later” Kakashi thought to himself as she turned to Sakura. “Okay Sakura. We can start training now.” He said with a simile under his mask.
*while walking*
“I should really go to the Ero-Sennin and have him take me in.” He thought. Naruto wasn’t looking where he was going or else he wouldn’t have bumped into a person just now.
“Sorry about that” Naruto said to get up. As he looked at the person he saw that it was Hinata that he bumped into.
“Na Naruto-kun.” Hinata stammered. “I’m so sorry I didn’t see you and,” Naruto quickly got up.
“Well its fine I wasn’t looking anyway.” Naruto said. He extends his hand to help her up expecting her not to take it. He was surprised that she did. “Well anyway I have to get going, see ya.” Naruto continued to walk. “She one of the few people that doesn’t have that look of hatred towards me in their eyes.” He thought.
Hinata started to walk in the direction where she was headed but stepped on something. It was the small medicine jar she gave to him in the chuunin exam. She looked around to see if Naruto was still around but couldn’t find him.
“Well I guess I could give it back tomorrow.” She thought. She picked up the little jar and put it in her pocket.
Naruto was walking to the bath house as he knew that the Ero-Sennin would be there. Sure enough he was there and peeping on the women inside.
“Hey Ero-Sennin I need to talk,” before Naruto could get another word out he was stopped.
“Quiet. You want them to hear you.” Jiraiya whispered.
“YES I DO WANT THEM TO HEAR ME!” Naruto shouted. All the girls in the bath house ran away due to Naruto shouting.
“Damn, what do you want kid. Shouldn’t you be doing a mission with Kakashi?”
Naruto looked and the Sennin. Hearing Kakashi name started to make him sick. “I want you to fully take me in as a student like you did before. This double training teacher thing is crap that you made-up so that you could rid me somewhere else while you go peeking at bath houses and spas.”
“Why don’t you want to train with Kakashi?” Jiraiya asked bluntly.
“Because,” Naruto said. “If I were to train with him I would never get stronger. I only time that I was stronger was with training with you. I beat Neji and Gaara because of your training. I have learned moves that if it wasn’t for you I never would’ve learned form Kakashi. The only thing that Kakashi is worried about is Sasuke. Even Sakura is too blind to see that with him as a teacher she will never get better. I say the only thing he has taught me is a little bit of charka control. And even before I met you he gave me away like some cheap toy to another teacher for that training. And that’s saying that I supposed to get better with this guy!? Please! I need you to fully take me in again.”
Jiraiya looked at Naruto and could tell that he was serious. “Wow, it seems like he fully thought this one through” He thought.
“Okay kid I will. But first; let me talk with Kakashi.” Jiraiya said as he was getting up form his sitting position and walking away. “Go home and rest up. Tomorrow meet me here to train okay.”
“Alright,” Naruto said as he as he turned around to walk home.
Jiraiya looked for Kakashi and found out that he was in the Hokage office. When he arrived there he found that Kakashi was there as well as Tsunade.
“Kakashi, I need to ask a question. What did you do to him to make him act like that?” Jiraiya asked. Before Kakashi could say anything; Tsunade spoke out.
“Nice of you to drop in Jiraiya,” Tsunade said. “Kakashi has already explained everything to me and I need to here your side of it.”
“Well he just basically said that he wanted me to take him in full time again. Also he said that couldn’t learn or get stronger by staying with Kakashi.” Jiraiya explained.
“With Kakashi story it seems that Naruto is starting to know who he truly is. We don’t need to drop everything on the kid. Listen Jiraiya; I need you to take him in again and if he starts to figure out whom he truly is and if he asks then talk with him slowly and truthfully. I fear that if he finds out by his self, he might take it the wrong way and that could be bad for konoha in all.”
“Yes Hokage-sama” Kakashi spoke.
“Alright,” Jiraiya simply said. With that the two men walked out the door. Tsunade sighed.
“Naruto please don’t make my job any harder than it already is.” She thought as she went back to read reports and sign papers.
AN: Well that’s the first chappie. This story may jump around a bit but it will all come together in the end. Hope you liked it, please R&R.
Anbu Dr J
04-20-2004, 10:14 PM
YES MORE MORE MORE!!
temjinxzarron
04-21-2004, 09:55 PM
Okay here it is *runs away and hides*
Ending My Destiny by TemjinxZarron
(Act 3) Crying Blood for Roses
Disclaimer: NO OWN NARUTO! (Thought I wished that I did!)
Naruto got up to an alarm clock buzzing at six in the morning.
“Damn, I don’t see why I have to wake up this early.” Naruto said still sleepy. Then he remembered that most women in konoha usually don’t bath until this time of day. “Damn you Ero-Sennin, you are starting to grow on me.”
Naruto got up and started to cook him some breakfast which was some ramen. “Man ramen is good and everything, but even I get sick of it every once in a while.” He thought as he was cooking for the food. He slowly ate; got on the rest of his clothes and walked out the door.
“Damn I forgot my pack.” He thought. Naruto then went to get his pack which was filled with kunai and scrolls as well as other things. As the picked it up a single kunai fell out of the pack. Naruto then looked at the kunai and picked it up. He was looking at it with certain awe then turned to his wrist.
“Damn Sakura interfering.” He thought while still holding the kunai. His breathing became harder and his heartbeat beginning to run a million miles a minute.
“Why,” he thought. “Why do I feel so compelled to do this? Did I want acceptance? Did I want happiness? Did I want love? No that wasn’t it because I know what I truly want. I want freedom. I want the freedom to have a chance in life and not to be already labeled as worthless trash. I see the people everyday that I walk across the streets with and none of then will even accept me. Even I know that acceptance, understanding, compassion, happiness and love come before or with acceptance. Hell no one will ever understand me and even if they tried they will never accept me. So what do I have to live for? I found some of the stupidest reasons why but now I see noting. I first the only drive that I have was to become hokage. But now that is shot down. I see the reality now. How could one be somewhere as high as hokage and not even be respected. They can’t. So if that’s the case I am going to end it right here right now.”
Naruto started to drive the kunai in his wrist and started to slice down. Just then he heard a noise he looked down at the direction of the noise and found that there was a little medicine jar rolling on the floor. As he looked up he saw a girl.
“So Hinata are you going to tell? Or are you happy that I want to do this?” Naruto calmly asked. Hinata could barely move. Here was a guy that she greatly admired even loved killing himself right in front of her eyes. Out of just natural instinct not even controlled by her she ran towards him to pull out the kunai out.
“Naruto-kun why?” was all she could choke out. Tears falling freely form her eyes. Naruto smiled.
“Simple,” Naruto said calmly still having a little smile on his face. “Because I give up; I just can’t take this anymore. The pain and loneliness is too much for me. So please let me do this. Let me end my life so that you and all the other people of konoha could live in peace.”
After hearing all this Hinata did something that neither Naruto nor even she for that matter had not expected to do.
She slapped him hard across the face.
“Hinata,” Naruto said shocked at what she did.
“Naruto-kun you think that all people think like that?” Hinata choked out. “You think that all of us think of you like trash!? How could you be so selfish? You didn’t even consider who would morn for you! You can even see who would hurt by killing yourself. What about you team? And your friends, what about them!?” With that Hinata looked down and whispered “What about me?”
“I’m sorry Hinata but I have no real friends. I don’t have any family. I have always been alone locked up in this prison that they call my home. I mean look at this place.” Naruto said as he span around to look at the house. “There is nothing here for me Hinata so please let me do this.”
“Okay Naruto-kun,” Hinata said while digging in her pack to pull out her own kunai. “But if you kill yourself; you’re going to be responsible for me too.” She said as she put the kunai to her own wrist.
“Hinata what are you doing?” Naruto asked.
“If you can’t see the good things in your life; the things that are right in front of you then you are truly selfish.” She said still holding the kunai to her wrist. “You know Naruto-kun, I have always admired you. In fact even now I still do. I don’t understand all about what happened in your life and frankly I don’t care. I care only about you Naruto-kun. You have helped me so much, even more than you could ever realize.” Hinata said before saying the three words that would shatter Naruto whole line of thought and emotions.
“Naruto-kun I love you.” With that she looked down and blushed a bit still shedding tears though.
Naruto dropped the kunai. His mouth was open and for the first time in his life he was completely loss for words. Someone loved him. He tried to think was there anyone else that have the same feelings and he felt ashamed.
“Iruka,” he thought in his mind. Naruto then looked at Hinata who was still looking at her wrist. He walked over to her and hugged her.
“Thank-you for giving me a reason to continue living on,” He said calmly. “I promise that I won’t be that stupid again.” He broke off the hug with Hinata who was blushing even more. Naruto then smiled at her.
“Well I gotta get going.” He said as he started to walked out with her. “Wait a minute Hinata.” Naruto said while running into his house. He first picked up the medicine jar that she gave to him then he started to look around the house and found an extra spare house key under his bed.
“Here,” he said while handing the key to Hinata.
“W-What do you want me to do with this.” Hinata asked
“Well in case I try to do anything. I’m going to do whatever it takes to keep my promise to you.” Naruto said with a small smile on his face. “Well I better get going or the Ero-Sennin will not train me. Am already late you know.”
Naruto left leaving Hinata outside his doorstep.
“I know that you always keep your promises.” Hinata whispered to herself as she put the key in her pocket and left to her teams training grounds.
AN: Okay that chapter may have been a little rushed. Sorry about that. But man this story is starting to depress me but oddly enough that’s when I get all of my ideas for this fic and fall into the zone. Well tell me what you think and R&R.
Anbu Dr J
04-21-2004, 11:29 PM
wow that was a great chapter..but one thing...UPDATE MORE OFTEN!!! this is a great fic and i wanna read what happends next. *sniff sniff* wow how beautiful... :D
man you´re a good writer!!!
more more more!!!
Anbu Dr J
04-24-2004, 03:37 AM
hmm hurry and update!!
Wow... You are a good writer... I too wanna see what happens next...
WildWolfay
04-24-2004, 11:21 AM
This almost makes me wanna start posting my book....
This almost makes me wanna start posting my book....
Book? :P
temjinxzarron
04-24-2004, 04:52 PM
Okay next chapter *hides in deep hole scared*
Ending My Destiny by: TemjinxZarron
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto (I don’t know why I keep putting this in my fics.)
AN: I am sorry that this chapter is very short but stay with me.
Act 4: Finding a Diamond in the Ruff.
“I must do this. It is my destiny. Can’t they see that? I worked hard like everyone else yet they won’t let me have the one thing I desire. I want power. I want freedom. But mostly I want a peace of mind. I can’t tell you how many times that I woke up in the middle of the night screaming because of what happened. I know that it was in the past and I know that I should move on but how? How can anyone move on like that!? They try to say that everything will be okay by comfort, understanding and time but I know that is just a bunch of bull. There is no way out. I am not supposed to have friends. I am not supposed to love. I am not supposed to fell anything because that will get in the way of my mission. I MUST keep focused at the task in hand!”
Sasuke woke up felling dizzy and nauseated form the curse seal that was put on him. After all the time of wearing that seal I was still unbearably painful. So pain full that he passed out in front of Naruto during the fight to bring him back. He slowly got up and sat up form his bed. He saw that there was an anbu standing in front of the door. “There trying their best to keep me in here.” He thought as he continued to look around.
“Umm, is it okay that I see him now?” a girl asked in front of the anbu.
“Of course, but you only have about another fifteen minuets before visiting hours are over.
“Okay, thank you.” She said as she passed the anbu and walked inside the room. “So how are you doing Sasuke-kun?”
“I’m fine.” Sasuke simply said. They sat there in dead silence until one of them spoke up.
“Well, I am glad you are okay.” Sakura spoke up. Sasuke then stared at her.
“Why?” Sasuke asked. “Why did you stop me? You could’ve let me go. I could have achieved my goals. I would have had power. But you…………YOU had to send him to stop me didn’t you?” Sasuke glared at her with certain hatred in his eyes. Here he was thinking that he would obtain the ultimate power needed and yet that last place trash stopped him…………HIM of all people! It didn’t seem right. Before Sakura could say anything back the anbu came back.
“Excuse me, but visiting hours are over. You will have to come back tomorrow.” The anbu said while scanning out both of them.
“Well I see you later Sasuke-kun.” Sakura said as she was walking past the anbu and out the door. “But Sasuke-kun I meant what I sad earlier.” She walked out the door and left leaving Sasuke to have a moment to his own thoughts.
“Naruto,” Sasuke thought. “I’ve seen you’re true form and I don’t think you’re truly human.” He thought about the fight. He truly seen Naruto transformation and could tell form his eyes. “Eyes; I have seen them before when we were in the forest of death.” He continues to ponder then on name popped into his head. “Gaara; his eyes changed the same way that Naruto did. So that must mean.” Sasuke hands clenched. His eyes narrowed. He was doing everything in his power to keep form exploding in anger and betrayal. “Naruto I will find out who you are.”
*meanwhile*
“So he doesn’t fully know yet?’ A girl asked looking though a scope to view a blonde hared boy.”
“The way it looks no not yet.” The green and black haired boy replied. “Well since you where the one who started to leek in the information to him but I am afraid that it wasn’t enough. If you really want to……………….”
“I know,” the girl replied. “But we don’t want to play all are cards just yet. Especially since so far the Hokage hasn’t played theirs yet we’ll wait to see what they will do, and besides,” the girl stand up to fully show her dark black hair. Her deep blue eyes turned around to look at another girl who was sleeping in her sleeping bag. “We have to make sure that he thinks that he can fully trust us.”
“Okay,” the boy said as he started to walk away. “But for our and his sake I hope you know what your doing.” The boy jumped and disappeared. The girl turned and thought to herself for awhile.
“Naruto-kun, please stop torturing yourself. There is no more need to worry about anything. You can finally see the truth and come back home with us.”
AN: Okay please don’t get mad that the chapter was short. But the way I wrote it this will be the shortest chapter in the whole story. The next chapter should be at least five times longer than this.
CAN't WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! :D :D :D
WildWolfay
04-24-2004, 11:26 PM
Seksy...
Yeah I'll post a couple pages of my book tonight and see if anyone likes it...
If it gets good raves... I'll start it from the beginning :o
Anbu Dr J
04-25-2004, 01:10 AM
WHOA that was great!! i didnt understand what was happening at the end though...?
temjinxzarron
05-03-2004, 03:07 PM
Okay here it is. *still hiding under bed.*
Ending My Destiny Act 5: The truth of sadness
Disclaimer: No own Naruto.
AN: Sorry for the update timing. I really should be sooner. I guess that I only write this when I am even a little depressed. That’s were I get my best ideas for this fic. There are going to be a few OC in this fic but don’t worry. It’s not going to change the NaruHina or any other paring. Anyway please be nice and R&R.
“Come in,” Tsunade said. Two people walked in the room. One was a girl with long black hair and dark bluish eyes. The other was a guy with green and black hair. Tsunade looked closely and noticed that these weren’t ordinary guest. “You wanted to speak to me about something.”
‘Yes, I wanted to speak to you about one of your konoha ninjas.” The girl replied. Tsunade hoped that is was not about Jiraiya. She would kill him if he was caught again peeking in the bath houses.
“Well what ninja is it?” Tsunade asked.
“It’s Uzumaki Naruto. We are here to retrieve him and bring him back with us.” The girl replied. “My name is Uzumaki Reimi and this is Zolli Vadinii. I don’t mean konoha any harm. I am just here to explain myself.” Tsunade look at her hard. She didn’t have any weapons on her nor did she seem like the fighter type.
“Okay, have a seat and explain yourself.” Tsunade said. Once both Reimi and Zolli were seated she started to explain.
“See we come from what used to be the hidden village of Star. But as you know that village was destroyed. It is said in legend that the original villages were Star, Moon, and Heaven. Since they all went to war all three villages were destroyed. But some of the people of the star village lived.” Tsunade mouth dropped when Reimi then pulled out a headband with the original star village symbol on it. She had heard the legend that once the star, moon and heaven were destroyed they created Konoha and all the other villages there after. But she only thought that is was just legend.
“So what do you want with Naruto?” Tsunade asked.
“Simple, since because of the nine tails incident, we thought that Naruto was dead. Now that we know that he is alive we want to take him where he belongs that’s all. Besides the villagers have drawn extreme hatred towards him here and we are here take him away form that. So far after watching him I have not seen one person so far that truly loves him.” Tsunade was taken back a little when Reimi mentioned the nine-tails but was not fully acceptable to her whole story.
“So tell me,” Tsunade asked. “Why now? Why did you try to take him sooner?”
“Like I said before Hokage-sama; we thought that he was dead.” Zolli said.
*Meanwhile*
As Naruto finished his daily training with Jiraiya he started to walk home. The hatred stares was nothing new to him. He did just like he’d usually do and ignore them. ‘Thanks to her I think that I am finally thinking with a straight head for the first time in awhile’ he thought. Then while in a train of thought he bumped into someone. “Ah, sorry about that I didn’t mean to bump into you.” Naruto said while getting up. He was hoping that it was anyone but another villager because being scolded and being told that he was worthless were the last things that he needed now.
“No sorry it was me that wasn’t looking.” A girl said. Naruto looked up and saw a young girl about his age. “I should be more careful.” The girl looked at him. ‘Interesting,’ she thought. ‘He has the same type eyes as me. Maybe…..’ “Excuse me, are you Uzumaki Naruto perhaps.”
“Umm yes I am. Why do you ask?” the girl smiled and said. “My name is Uzumaki Masami, pleased to meet you.”
*Back in Tsunade’s office*
“You know you got some nerve to come to me with a demand like that.” Tsunade snorted.
“I know and I am truly sorry.” Reimi replied. “But as I can see no one cares for him. He lives alone correct.”
“Well yes he lives alone but there are people that care for him.” Tsunade said. This intrigued Reimi. She wondered who in this village could possibly care for him. When she was watching him the only person that she thought might have cared was a blue haired girl in his apartment but that’s about it. “Well for one thing I care about him. Also a man named Iruka also cares.”
“If you truly care you would a least try to be a little protective. So far I have seen no one.” Reimi said.
“You don’t have to see. Besides how do I know that you’re telling the truth about who you are?” Tsunade snapped back. Reimi then pulled out a small med kit. Inside was a syringe, needles and stuff for cleaning cuts. Reimi then filled a small tube with her own blood and toss the tube to Tsunade.
“Here is your proof. All you need to do is to get Naruto’s blood and it will tell you everything.” Reimi said as she was getting up. “I will return here within a week. I would hope that you do the right thing and let us have him.” Reimi and Zolli then walked out of the Hokages office. Tsunade then called the guards in to have them schedule a meeting immediately.
*Back with Naruto*
“So how come you have my name?” Naruto asked curiously. Masami looked at him.
“Are you lonely here? Don’t you have a warm home and family to go to?” She asked. Naruto flinched at those words. Masami looked at him and saw the instant pain that shot through him like a needle piercing skin. “Look I am sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you. It’s just that I am the same as you. I really don’t have a place that I can call home. That’s until I found my sister. Well we aren’t really related but she is still family to me.” Masami then looked away from Naruto. “And I think that she looking for you also.” Just then Naruto head snapped up.
“What do you mean?” Naruto asked. Masami looked around and saw some of the villagers giving Naruto hateful and feared looks.
“Listen, can we talk about this at your place? I am not sure that this street corner is best place for this.” Masami said still looking at the villagers. Naruto just nodded and lead Masami to his apartment. When there got there she saw that the apartment was cold and empty. There was nothing that showed any signs of comfort and support. Masami shuddered when she saw this. ‘There is no way that I could ever compare myself to the harsh treatment that Naruto has endured.’ She thought. She stepped inside and took a seat at the table. “Well I don’t know all the details but I do know that the only relation that you and I have is by blood limit.” Naruto looked puzzled. “Well that what I know. Like I said I don’t know all the details but Reimi went to go see the Hokage of this village so maybe your hokage knows better than me. So I would probably go and see her.”
“What about meeting your sister?” Naruto asked. “I mean she would know about me better than that old hag anyway right?”
“Well I would but I don’t know where she is and besides if you trust your hokage you will go see her.” Masami said. Naruto nodded and started to walk out the door. He turned around to see Masami still sitting there.
“Hey aren’t you coming?”
“Well I was hoping that I could stay here until you got back if that’s okay with you.”
“Sure you can stay here Masami. You can help yourself to anything” Naruto then walked out the door. As he walked towards the hokages office, he took the long route through the forest. As he was walking he saw Hinata sitting there by herself. “Hey Hinata what are you doing here?” She quickly looked up and saw Naruto walking up to her.
“Na…Na…….Naruto-kun what are you doing here?” She asked him. Naruto quickly thought of and excuse.
“I was going to the hokages office. That’s when I found you sitting there. Is there something wrong? You seem kinda sad.” Naruto said concerned. Hinata looked up a blushed a bit. She was happy that he was so concern for her.
“It’s nothing Naruto-kun you don’t have to be concerned about me I don’t think that I am worth the time.” She said. This made Naruto even more concerned and a little upset at the same time. Naruto then walked over and sat down next to Hinata. She tried to look away but Naruto wouldn’t let her. Instead he gently cupped her chin and made her look eye to eye with him.
“Listen, you save me through the pain that I was going through. You saved my life. Reached out to me and touched me like no one else could. I just wished that I can at least help a precious person like you to me. So please tell me what’s wrong.” Naruto asked worried. Hinata looked deeply into his eyes and blushed. He just said that she was a precious person to him. Those words even if was just a few were enough to keep her going. Those words gave her a new found light. She went and hugged him and started crying. All Naruto could do at this point was to hug her back. He already knew the reason why; about her family about her life in general. “Come on now. You don’t need to cry. I promise I will do anything to make you feel better.” He said while wiping the tears from her face. Then he thought for awhile. “I wanted to find you and properly thank you for everything. Say would you like to come with me for some ramen tomorrow or if you want you could have anything else.” Hinata looked at him again and smiled.
“Sure Naruto-kun, I would love to.” Then Naruto gave her a kiss on the cheek which made Hinata blush even more.
“Well then see ya later.” With that Naruto left Hinata to her own thoughts. At the hokage office Naruto found it hard to get in with all the security there. “Well what do you mean I can’t see her. “He asked an anbu.
“Right now hokage-sama is in a private meeting with some of the jounins. If you want to see her you will have to tomorrow.” The anbu said. Naruto was disappointed but he had no other choice but to go see her tomorrow. So with that he started to walk home. When he got there he saw the Masami was still there but this time she was sitting with two other people.
“Hey who are these guys Masami?” Naruto asked. Before she could say anything one of the people stood up.
“My name is Uzumaki Reimi, pleased to meet you Naruto.” Naruto looked shocked when she said that her name was also Uzumaki. He made sure that his door was closed and asked…..
“Okay Masami was calling her my name and now you. Just who are you guys anyway? Also what do you want from me?” Reimi looked at Naruto. She breathes in deeply and said
“We simply want you to come with us. You don’t belong here Naruto. If the hokage lets us we want to take you to your real home. Your real family where you truly belong,” Naruto looked puzzled.
“Oh yeah and why would I want to go with you? Why should I listen to anything you say? You’re coming here saying that I belong somewhere where in reality I don’t belong anywhere.” Naruto said. Reimi looked at him and then closed her eyes.
“Listen Naruto,” she said. “Just ask your hokage. She should tell you everything. Naruto turned away form her.
“I just tried to meet up with her. But an anbu blocked me from meeting her. Besides why can’t you explain to me why yourself?”
“I can’t, at least not now.”
“Why not?” Reimi then turned Naruto around to face her.
“Because Naruto-kun I want you to see for yourself who telling truth and who is lying.” Reimi then singled the other two to follow her out the door and as they were leaving she said one more thing. “Listen Naruto-kun I really want you to have a live where you won’t live in pain anymore. Trust me you won’t have to live in loneliness anymore.” With that all three walked out the door leaving Naruto to his thoughts.
*meanwhile, the meeting in the hokages office.”
“Are you sure that’s what they want?” Gai asked. “I mean they could want to give Naruto to Itachi.” Tsunade shook her head and handed Gai a piece of paper. “What’s this?” he asked.
“Before Reimi left, she filled a tube with her own blood and gave it to me. I went down to the lab in the hospital and did some test. No matter how I want to deny it the results of DNA doesn’t lie.” Gai read the file and was shocked. Afterwards he passed the file to the rest of the jounins. All of them were shocked after reading the file.
“Well that can’t be! There is no way this could be truthful.” One of the other jounins said. Kurenai looked at the jounin who made that comment.
“Well since this is true, we don’t have to listen to them.” She said.
“True but we don’t know what they truly plan for.” Jiraiya said. Tsunade responded.
“Since I don’t know what they are planning. We must keep a watchful eye on them and Naruto. They might have already contacted Naruto. Jiraiya I want you to look after Naruto more closely and you guys do the same. The last thing I need is to have something happen. You all are dismissed.” Then all of the jounins left except for Jiraiya.
“Are you sure that’s what she’s claiming to be?” Tsunade nodded her head.
“The test don’t lie Jiraiya.” Tsunade said. “She is Naruto sister by blood.” The two sat there in silence.
*At the hospital*
Sasuke overheard that he was going to be released tomorrow. He saw this as a perfect opportunity to try to find out who Naruto really was. ‘Soon Naruto, if nobody else will tell me what you are, then I am going to find out form you.’
AN: Okay this one was longer than 4. But tell me what you think so far. Should I continue? Should I put this fic on hold and finish my other two that are already on this site? Like always please be nice and R&R.
good story
good writing style
i can´t wait for the next chapter
I finally read all the chapters it was really good its like Naruto in another world that is similar, but slightly different from the current one.
Anbu Dr J
05-05-2004, 09:41 PM
love it keep going!!
The Fifth
05-11-2004, 02:58 PM
Yeah it's pretty good...I'd read the rest
temjinxzarron
05-12-2004, 09:11 PM
Next Chapter WARNING: This chapter is a little longer than some of the rest.
Ending my Destiny Act 6: Painful Truths and Healing Lies.
AN: Okay I hit another sub depression moment again so now the next chapter is here. But I would like to add that its official………………I NEED A BETA READER FOR THIS FIC!!!!!! It’s been really hard to proof read this fic myself because I keep going over my own mistakes. If any of you like to beta read this fic for me then I would much appreciated. Also if there are some ideas that you want to comment on feel free to post up your ideas. But I STILL NEED A BETA READER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway other than that I am happy how long this chapter is. Sorry if it’s a little dull in the middle but I had to slowly build up the drama of the rest of the story. So with out further adieu; here is chapter six.
The next day Naruto was walking toward the Hokages office. He wanted to know the truth once and for all. He was tired form putting up with all the lies and false truths. He wanted to know who he was. Also he wanted to know who those other three ninja were. Two out of the three called themselves Uzumaki which bothered him. ‘If I had family out the somehow; then how come no one has ever told me?’ He thought to himself. Then he realized something. ‘Maybe no one wanted to tell me. Maybe it’s like how when I first found out about the rule that was cast about the nine-tails. I mean I know it was for my safety but, it would hurt a lot less if I was the one that new first.’ He arrived at the hokage office only to meet that same anbu that told him to go home yesterday.
“Hey, can I see the hokage now? You told me that she was in a meeting and to come back the next day.” The anbu looked at Naruto. If only Naruto could look under that mask because the man looked disgusted at even the sight at Naruto.
“Well the hokage is still busy right now. You can’t go see her. Besides, I don’t know why she would want to see a person like you anyway.” Naruto’s eye flashed in anger and sorrow at the same time. He knew what the anbu was really trying to say. I was more in the lines of ‘I don’t know why she wants to see a pathetic excuse of a human being; a f***ing demon anyway.’ But remembering about trying to be kind and knowing how to hide the rage and pain he clamed himself down.
“Well listen I really need to see her. It’s very important.” Naruto then tried to walk in when the anbu blocked him.
“I said no you demon.” The anbu said. The anbu swung at Naruto only to be grabbed by that arm. The anbu turned around only to see Tsunade holding his arm.
“Naruto,” she said. “I know that you wanted to talk to me. I was personally going to see you myself.” She was still grabbing the anbu’s hand and then she started to squeeze hard. The anbu instantly went down on his knees winching in pain. “Say Naruto can you go inside my office and wait there for a bit? I promise I will be right up there.” Naruto simply nodded his head and walked up stairs. Once Naruto went inside the building, Tsunade squeezed the anbu hand even harder. So hard that any more was going to crush his arm and break it into pieces.
“What in the hell did I just hear you call Naruto?” she asked with a deadly tone in her voice. The anbu looked scared. He knew what the penalty was for talking about Naruto like that. Even thought the third hokage was dead his rules wasn’t. The anbu just nodded his head.
“I apologize hokage-sama. Please forgive me.” He said still winching in pain. Tsunade then let go of his arm; grabbed his neck and pinned him against the wall. The other anbu were either scared about their hokage strength or actually agreeing with what she was doing.
“Listen, if I even suspect that you are even thinking about those things about Naruto, I will personally rip your spine out. You understand me?” Tsunade said with an even more aggressive tone in her voice. The killer intent that she was producing was massive. The anbu just nodded. Tsunade then threw him to the side and started to walk in the door to her office. “Go home you’re done for the day.” Where her final words as she walked into he quarters. When she got in her office she saw Naruto sitting there quietly on the floor, which in turn kinda scared her. “So brat, I already knows what you wanted to talk to me about.” She was saying the word brat to try to lighten the mood for Naruto. To try to bring him back to his original self. Naruto on the other hand just looked at her with sorrow in his eyes. These in turn scarred and sadden Tsunade even more.
“Hokage-sama.” Naruto said. “Do you know who am I really? I mean I met a girl that called Uzumaki Masami then another person named Reimi and I don’t know who was the third person was. So who are they, please I need to know.” Tsunade then sat on the couch in her office and then motioned Naruto sit next to her. Naruto did as he was told and look into Tsunade’s eyes.
“So you really want to know who they are.” She said. Naruto nodded his head. “Well the one who is called Uzumaki Reimi is really you big sis. As far as Masami goes I haven’t met her yet but I think that she is probably not related to you. The only thing Masami has close to you is a blood line limit.” Naruto looked shocked yet at the same time it was like he knew what she was going to say. He looked away form Tsunade and looked to the floor.
“So they don’t want me either. I mean that’s why they left konoha when I was born. They don’t need a pathetic excuse of a human being; a demon like me anyway.” Tsunade just looked at him. “Listen I’m sorry it’s just that…….”
“You don’t need to say anything else.” She said. “Listen I don’t have a demon inside of me but I know how the pain feels of being left alone. I just want you to know that as long as you have at least one person who you care about and care about you then you’re not alone.” Naruto looked up at her. “And if you look you would find out that you have more than you think.” She then handed Naruto a piece of paper. “Now back to Reimi she is really your sister and the reason why they didn’t come until now is that they thought that when the demon was sealed inside you they thought you were killed in the process. Now that they know that you’re alive they wanted to see you.” Tsunade looked away form Naruto. “Actually they want to take you away.” She finished. Naruto looked up at her with curiously on his face.
“So you agreed to give me to them?” he asked. Tsunade shook her head.
“No, of course not! You’re a ninja of konoha and that will never change.” Naruto then got up and walk towards the window.
“Well I guess that it is nice to have some type of family here.”
“Yea it is but I don’t want you around them unless you’re with either Jiraiya, Kakashi or myself got it.”
“Why is that?”
“Because I don’t want you to get kidnapped or something even worse. I know that you’re strong but even I don’t know the true capacity of their strength and we still don’t know their true motives. Listen I don’t want to doubt them but I have to check them out not only for the village protection but for yours as well okay.” Naruto turned around to Tsunade and smiled.
“Okay thanks old hag.” He said. Tsunade looked a little annoyed.
“Okay Naruto I going to let that slide.” She said. She then walked over to Naruto and kissed him on the forehead. “No go, I think that old pervert is waiting for you.” Naruto then thanked her again and ran out the door.
“Okay that one thing off my things to do list.” He thought. ‘Now to find the Ero-Sennin and get my training done.’
*Meanwhile*
“Okay Sasuke the doctor says that you’re okay and you can leave.” The nurse said. Sasuke simply put on his regular clothes and walked out the door only to find Sakura walking down the hall to visit him.
“Hi Sasuke-kun how are you feeling.” She asked. Sasuke just walked past her like she was a ghost.
‘Naruto I will find out who you are.’ He thought. The Sakura walked in front of her.
“Sasuke-kun please, tell me what’s wrong?” Sasuke continue to ignore her and walked down the hospital doors. Once he walked out the doors he was confronted by Sakura again. “Listen, to me!” she almost screamed that time. Sasuke turned to looked at her.
“Okay, what do you want?” he asked.
“What wrong with you? Maybe I can help?” Sasuke thought for a second.
“Where is Naruto?” he asked. Sakura flinched at Naruto name. She knew what had happened when she tried to visit him at his house.
“Why do you want to see him?”
“Because, I need to ask him something. There’s something he’s hiding form us that he won’t tell us.” Sakura then remembered about a seal that Naruto and Kakashi were talking about.
“Well I know a little.” She said. Sasuke then looked at her with curiously.
“What do you mean?”
“Well the only thing that I’ve really heard was that Kakashi was talking about a seal of some kind.” She said. Sasuke then turned away form Sakura for a moment.
‘Just what are you and the other jounins hiding Naruto?’ he thought. He then turned to Sakura. “Thanks Sakura.”
“If you want I can help you look for him.” She said.
“Okay come on.” He said. Sakura smiled.
‘Now is my chance!’ she thought. “Hey Sasuke, if you want to don’t you wanna to have dinner with me sometime.” Sasuke looked at her. He remembered what she told him before he tried to leave konoha.
“Sure,” he said. Sakura seemed to brighten up as they went to find Naruto.
*In the forest*
Masami was walking around and spotted a sapphire haired sitting behind a tree. “Hey are you form this village?” she asked. The girl turned around to see Masami walking towards her. Masami then saw the konoha insignia on the head band. “Oh I’m sorry. You are from this village. Hey what’s your name?” She then sat next to the girl.
“My………..my name is Hinata. A…..and may ask who you are?”
“Uzumaki Masami.” She answered. Hinata mouth dropped.
“So are you related to Naruto?” Hinata asked.
“No I’m not. But I have met him. Say, do you know him?” she asked. Hinata blushed a bit.
“Well………I……….I……yes I do know him.” She stuttered. Masami looked at the bluish haired girl with curiosity.
“Well what are you, his friend or something?” She asked. Then she noticed Hinata’s blush and grinned. “Or his he like your boyfriend.” Hinata face turned pure crimson.
“N………….no……….I meant that…….well I,” was all that Hinata could say. Masami grinned even further.
“That a relief.” Masami said. Hinata looked down to the ground.
“What do you mean?”
“Well I am glad to see that he has someone like you in this damn village. At least he has someone who cares about him. Speaking of which you wanna go find him” Masami said giving Hinata her best smile.
“B…….bu….but he may be busy with something right now. I don’t think that we should disturb him. Besides I don’t really know you and……. “Hinata said as fast a she could.
“Please, you talked with me all this time why not now. Besides Naruto won’t mind and I need to talk with him anyway.”
“I guess that we can see him. B…..but how are we going to find him?” Hinata asked. Masami smiled at Hinata.
“Simple, him and me share the same blood even thought were not related. Now come on!” She said as she pulled Hinata up. One she was up they both ran to where Naruto was.
*Back with Naruto*
Naruto found Jiraiya and was training with him. During the training Jiraiya spotted something or rather someone coming this way.
“Hey Naruto; looks like we have some visitors.” He said pointing at a tree. Naruto looked to see Masami coming form behind.
“Oh hey Masami how are you doing?” he asked.
“Were doing fine and you?” she asked. Naruto looked confused.
“What do you mean we? Who there’s with you?” He asked. Masami looked to find that she was by herself. She walked behind the tree on to pull Hinata out from behind there.
“Like I said we,” Masami said.
“Oh, hi Hinata-chan what are you doing here?”
“Well I……….I was just following her to you and……..I thought that I……” Hinata stuttered.
“Man you’re quite the nervous one aren’t you?” Masami said. Hinata just looked down at her feet. Naruto then walked over to them. “So hey Naruto can I talk to you about something?” Naruto looked at Jiraiya who just nodded his head.
“Okay, what do you want?” Naruto asked with a little smile on his face.
“I have to ask you about you wanting to come with us.” Masami said. Hinata got curious.
“What do you mean? Naruto-kun are you going somewhere?” Hinata asked. Naruto looked down to the floor and thought for a while.
“Well I don’t know the whole story myself but my sister wants me to permanently leave konoha. With the way it looks she already asked the old hag hokage to have permission to do so.” He said.
‘Why would she do something like that?” Hinata asked worried. She really didn’t want him to leave for it was like having a part of herself leaving. Her total inspiration and the reason why she kept going were going to be gone.
“I don’t know but the way she said it was to bring me to a real family.” He said. “But I must admit that some of what they said was true. I really wasn’t cared for or loved for that matter. I have really nothing to live for. Well maybe except you and Iruka. Also with all the hatred that I have been receiving here all my life maybe it was time that I leave out of this village and start a new life. Sure I will still be a part of this village and I will always be a part of this village but I don’t have to live here. If I do decide to leave then I would want to be like that old hag.” Hinata looked down. Naruto then looked up at the sky. ‘Okay Hinata-chan’ he thought. ‘Please don’t hate me for what I am about to tell you.’
“Hinata-chan I need to tell you something.” Naruto said while turning to Jiraiya. Jiraiya looked at him and knew what he was going to say.
“Are you sure that you want to tell her Naruto?” Jiraiya asked. “The third wanted you to protect you form the kind of pain that you’re already receiving.” Naruto nodded.
“Ero-Sennin I know that I can trust her. She won’t tell,” He looked at Hinata. “Will you?” Hinata nodded. She knew that she had his full trust and she was determined not to let that trust falter.
“Okay then sit down and I will tell you.” He said. Hinata took a seat on the ground with her back against tree. Meanwhile Masami looked at the both of them as she was sitting on the floor. She already knew Naruto’s little secret.
‘Okay Hinata,’ Masami thought. ‘Now we’ll see if you are truly worth something to Naruto.’
“Hinata I want you to look at my stomach.” Naruto said as he was taking off his shirt and vest. Hinata blushed for a moment. Naruto then started to gather charka in the area in his stomach to make a seal appear on there.
“W………..what……..what’s that? “ Hinata stammered a little nervous.
“This is why the fourth hokage is dead, because of me.”
“B……but I thought that the fourth died by protection the village.”
“Well that was the reason but this is the part that you don’t hear in the history books. He died because of me.” Jiraiya overheard what Naruto said.
“Hey Naruto,” the Sennin said. “I was not because of you it was because of the demon. You don’t need to blame yourself. If you going to tell a story tell it right okay?” Naruto nodded.
“Demon,” Hinata stuttered “what demon are you talking about? Is that what that mark on your stomach is all about?”
“Yea it is,” Naruto said. “There was a demon long ago that nearly destroyed the village. The fourth hokage stopped it though but died in the process.” Then he looked at Hinata. “This was the reason why I tried to kill myself that day.” Hinata didn’t know what to think at this point. Her mind was on overload. She desperately wanted to run if it wasn’t for Naruto. He was the only thing that kept here there. But then she looked at the seal and did something that neither Naruto nor Masami expected. She put her hand on his stomach.
“So this is the reason why everyone hates you?” She said. Naruto nodded. She then hugged him. Masami mouth nearly dropped.
‘Damn it,’ she thought ‘I was hoping that you freak out or something.’ Masami then looked up at the sky. ‘It looks like getting him out of this hell hatred of a village will be harder that it looks Reimi’
“Hinata aren’t you afraid? Aren’t you scared even a little?” Hinata shook her head.
“Not at all Naruto-kun,” she said.
“Why?” he asked.
“Because Naruto-kun did you ever try to hurt me?”
“No.”
‘Will you ever try to hurt me?” Naruto shook his head.
“No, of course not! I could never…….” Hinata then hugged him.
“Then I don’t see what the problem is.” She said. Naruto started to cry. After telling someone that should have hated him or become terrified of him instead she embraced him like a true friend if not more,
“Naruto-kun thank-you for everything,” Hinata said letting go of Naruto but still holing on to his shoulders.
“What did I do?” Naruto asked curious. Hinata shook her head smiling.
‘Well they were right,’ she thought. ‘He is dense but a least he is very kind and caring even after what he went through.” “It’s nothing Naruto-kun. Anyway I have to go.” Hinata got up and started to walk off. “Oh and Naruto-kun,” Hinata said nervously.
“Yea,”
“You………..you still going to take me to…………..” Naruto instantly figured out what she was going to say.
“Of course! Do you want some ice-cream after ramen?” Hinata smiled.
“Sure I would love that Naruto-kun. Well then see you later Naruto-kun.” She said with a deep blush on her cheeks. As she ran off Masami looked at the whole thing.
“So,” Masami said when are you going to come with us?”
“Why do I want to come with you?” Naruto asked.
“So you won’t feel loneliness any more.” Naruto looked at Masami.
“But Masami I am not alone anymore. Before I would have gladly gone with you but now I’m not so sure.” Masami looked down.
“Well okay I guess I have you a little more time to think about it.” She then hugged him. “Please think about it Naruto-kun.” With that she walked away. Meanwhile Jiraiya looked at the whole thing and when Masami went away he approached Naruto.
“So that what she wants you to do.?” Jiraiya asked. He knew about Reimi’s plans but he figure that he’ll just play dumb for now. Naruto just nodded his head.
“Yea, but I’m not so sure on what to do.” Naruto said. Jiraiya just put his hand on his shoulder.
“Well don’t worry about it. Just go home and get ready for that little date of yours.” Naruto blushed. “Oh and hey you might wanna read this.” He added while handing a book to Naruto. Naruto simply read the cover that said “Come Come Paradise Vol. 12: Love all over” and shove the book back into Jiraiya’s hands blushing even more.
“No thanks Ero-Sennin.” He said as he walked away. Jiraiya just shrugged.
“Oh well suit yourself.” He said.
*In a hotel*
Well the heck is Masami?” Reimi asked. Zolli just shrugged.
“Well I don’t know but do you think that Naruto will come with us?” He asked.
“Of course we will. We have to make him come with us for the sake of the Sun village. Besides he is the only one compatible with me and Masami. If we want the sun village to survive we have to get him to come with us. I thought that I explained everything to you when we left. You know the curse that was placed on us…………” She was about to say more but she heard a knock at the door. “Who is it?” Reimi asked.
“It’s me, Masami.” Reimi opened the door in a rage and looked at Reimi hard.
“Where in the world have you been? I was starting to get worried about you.” She said. Masami walked in and sat on the bed.
“I was talking to Naruto-kun.” Masami said simply. Reimi and Zolli’s mouth dropped.
“Why did you talk to him!? You know that you could’ve have ruin the whole plan because of that!”
“Because I wanted to see if you were right and you’re not” Masami said.
“What do you mean that were not right?” Zolli asked. Masami sighed and looked at the table. She saw some fruit sitting there. She got up form the bed and went to the table to get an apple.
“What I mean,” she said while taking a bite out of the apple. “Is that Naruto-kun does have someone. He feels that he has family here.” Reimi looked skeptical.
“Yea and who is…………” Reimi was cut off when Masami started to speak again.
“Her name is Hinata.” She said while still eating the apple. Reimi then remembered a bluish haired girl walking out of Naruto’s apartment a few days ago.
‘So that is Hinata.’ Reimi thought. “Well I think its time to make another move. We have to get Naruto-kun to come with us.”
“Well how in the world are we going to do that?” Zolli asked.
“Simple,” Reimi said. “Who are his two teammates?”
“Well one is names Sakura and the other is named Uchiha Sasuke. But why do you need to know their names?” Zolli asked.
“Well,” Reimi said. “I really hate to do this but, I think its time we Naruto’s little secret out.” Masami finished her apple and threw it in the trash.
“Well I don’t think I will have that much of an effect.” Masami said.
“Oh and why is that?” Reimi said now turning her attention towards Masami.
“Because sis; Naruto-kun has already told that Hinata girl about it.” Zolli and Reimi eyes widened and mouth dropped. “He really trusts that girl.” Masami added. Reimi regained her composure and laid on one of the beds.
“Well now I guess that we have to make Naruto-kun realize that there is more to have with us than here in konoha.” Reimi said.
AN: Okay that was another chapter. The next chapter hopefully will be just as long. Like a said above BETA READER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So besides that tell me what you think.
really good!
sry can´t beta read for you cos i´m not that good at english and would overlook the mistakes
Anbu Dr J
05-13-2004, 09:49 PM
heyy umm what about ur other fics? i thought...what was that called...i think i was the bet? that one really rocked!! continue it plz! o and this one is good too!!
temjinxzarron
05-14-2004, 12:49 AM
*gasps* Anbu how did you know about that fic!!!
Anbu Dr J
05-14-2004, 11:29 AM
i read it! its really good!!
Anbu Dr J
05-14-2004, 11:38 AM
o and i guess i can try to be the beta reader for that fic? I sent u a review already...so yeah
Anbu Dr J
05-18-2004, 09:12 PM
umm hello?
temjinxzarron
05-19-2004, 11:20 PM
yea i sent you an pm so yea.
Anbu Dr J
05-20-2004, 12:29 AM
ok cool
temjinxzarron
05-23-2004, 06:18 AM
okay here is next chapter *jumps away form harm*
Ending My Destiny Act 7: Blissful Suffocation
For Naruto Chaos Readers: Sorry I didn’t put this up earlier. I promise that I will be quicker.
AN: Well here is the next chapter. I even postponed my other fan fics so I could write this chapter. Also…………….
IMPORTANT-IMPORTANT-IMPROTANT-IMPORTANT: Also when you read this fan fic I want you readers to vote on what happens. There will be two options that I will give and you readers (hopefully please) vote on which option you want. I will be doing this in my other two fics also. I guess it my way to get the readers more involved. Anyway thanx and II hope that you enjoy. ^_____^
*coming around*
‘Huh where the hell am I? Am I dead? I mean I should have died.’ Gaara thought to himself. As he looked around he found that he was lying on a bed. As the looked up, he saw his sister looking back down on him. “Temari why am I still alive?”
“Idiot you should be thanking me that you’re alive. Especially since that a hospital still has many people that still fear and hate you and they probably would’ve treated you. If it wasn’t for me you would have……….” Temari said with a hint of sadness in her voice. Gaara looked at his wrist only to see it bandaged up.
“Did you do this? He asked. Temari only nodded her head. Gaara looked puzzled as of why. “Temari why did you save me?”
“Simple, because you’re family.” She said.
“After all I have done. After all that I did to you. I put fear in you and gave you pain and yet you saved me.” Gaara said almost wanting to cry for the first time since he was a child. Temari heard all of this and still simply nodded her head.
“Yes, I did. You’re family no matter what.” Temari then looked down at the bandage on Gaara’s arm. “Actually at first I didn’t think you could ever change but………..”
“But what?” Gaara asked.
“But after you’re fight with that blonde kid you started to. Me and your brother were really surprised when you started to act nicer and I just thought that well maybe………………just maybe we can become closer like a real family should.” Gaara looked at her and let her words soak in for awhile.
“Temari,” he said. Temari looked back at Gaara.
“Yes what is it?”
“Thank you and I’m sorry.” He said. Temari simply got up and started to walk out the door.
“Sure, no problem.” She said while walking out the door. Gaara looked up at the ceiling.
‘Uzumaki Naruto,’ Gaara thought. ‘I wonder if I would ever get to see you again.”
******In Konoha********
Naruto went home to take a shower and to get ready to treat Hinata to some ramen. After the shower he looked and noticed his bed or rather the picture that was on his bed. It was the picture that Kakashi took with him when he first became a genin. Naruto walked over to pick up the picture and stared at it for a while.
‘Man I don’t need them. They weren’t family anyway. They never cared anything about me. All they cared about was just that I don’t become a burden for them. If I stayed out the way they were fine.’ He looked and each individual person. ‘Sasuke only cared about revenge. I still can’t believe that I was trying to go toe to toe with him. In the end he was nothing. I bet that he would probably would’ve kiss that snake bastards ass literally if it would meant more power. Sakura………….I can’t believe that I liked her! Now thinking about her is starting to make me sick. The only thing that she cared about was Sasuke and nobody else. She would probably sell out her that old hag Tsunade or ever her own mother for her to be with Sasuke.’ Then he looked at the final picture and almost wanted to vomit right then and there. ‘Kakashi you Sasuke loving freak! You were supposed to help all of us!! Instead you just………..just,’ Just then Naruto threw the picture in the trash hard. So hard that he glass broke. ‘Old hag, Hinata, Jiraiya, Iruka, I owe you a lot.’ Naruto then started to get ready and walk out the door. When he was walking out the door the saw the two people that made him feel even more discussed. He tried to walk past them but one of the people blocked his way. “Damn, what do you want Sasuke? I am kinda busy right now.” Sasuke looked at Naruto hard.
“Naruto tell me,” He said calm as he can. “What was that power that you used to bring me back here?” Naruto rolled his eyes.
“It was my own okay. Listen I have to be somewhere so leave me alone.” Naruto said as he tried to walk around Sasuke. Sasuke just stepped to the side not allowing Naruto through.
“Bull I know that Kakashi and all of the other jounin are hiding something about you. I know that you have a seal of some kind. I asked them but I know that they won’t tell me. So Naruto what are you? What are you hiding!?” Sasuke said in anger. Such anger that his sharingan was activated. Naruto looked at started to grow angry.
“Why in the hell do you wanna know anything about me!? It has no business with you! I don’t need to tell you anything about me.” He said in anger.
“Naruto please,” the other person said. Naruto turned over to look to see Sakura standing there. This angered Naruto even more.
“Please! Yea right! I don’t need to tell you nothing! I can’t believe I could ever like a person like you. You can never understand! You are just like all the rest of the cold hearted bastards.” Naruto then started to walk the other way past Sakura. “You know, you are an evil and vile person. You’re like all the rest of these bastards out there. You’re only looking out for yourself and Sasuke. What interest you and you alone and you wanna to get mad at someone that gets in your way even if it was the simplest of things. Realizing it now I should not have save you. I wished that I would have let Gaara kill you.” Sakura was lost for words. She really didn’t know what to say and the stare that Naruto was giving her was scaring her. It was the same cold stare that she received when she tried to punch him.
“Na…..Naruto come on.” She said nervously. “We only wanna know. Besides if it’s a seal like Sasuke-kun’s then maybe we can help you somehow. I mean I told you some of me and Sasuke secrets but you won’t tell us yours? Why?” Naruto was getting infuriated. It was like Sakura’s every single word was making sick, tired and angry all at the same time. Naruto then walked to his apartment and made sure that the door was locked. Afterwards he walked past Sakura.
“Naruto, you idiot where in the hell are you going!? You’re going to answer me damn it!” Sasuke then charged at Naruto who was still walking away. Just then Sasuke stopped to see a woman standing in Sasuke’s way.
“I suggest that you let him be.” The woman said. Naruto turned around surprised to see who it was.
“Who are you?” Sasuke asked.
“Sis what are you doing here?” Naruto asked. Sasuke and Sakura’s mouth dropped.
“Sis, you have a sister!?” Sakura said surprised.
“Yes he does. My name is Uzumaki Reimi.” She said bluntly.
“Naruto how come we didn’t know that you had a sister all this time?” Sakura asked still a little afraid. Sasuke was getting upset. He already is trying to find out who Naruto is now something like this comes into the picture.
“It was one of the secrets that you were never meant to know.” He said coldly. Then Reimi turned around and walk over to Naruto.
“Naruto,” she said while grabbing his shoulder. “After you finish whatever you are doing, could you please meet me back here? I want to talk to you about something.” Naruto thought for awhile. Then he reached into his pocked and grabbed his house key and handed it to Reimi. After handed it to Reimi, Naruto chuckled to himself. “What’s wrong Naruto?” Reimi asked.
“You know sis, I never locked my door. I guess I was really to trusting. Especially to people who I thought were my friends. But not anymore, I have learned to trust only true friends and love ones.” He said. Reimi wanted to cry at that moment. Even thought they just met only a day ago, he a least trusted her. With that Naruto started to walk away.
“Damn it Naruto!” Sasuke shouted as he ran past Sakura. As he approaches Reimi, he tried to dodge her. Reimi quickly got in his way. “Get out of my way!” he said. Before he could say anything else, Reimi struck Sasuke on the back of the neck knocking him out.
“All that, really you should relax.” Reimi started to walk away when sakura spoke up.
“Why!? What did you do to Sasuke-kun!? “Reimi started to chuckle. “What so damn funny!?” Sakura yelled.
“Naruto-kun was right. Now I see the reason why he lost faith in you guys.” Then in a flash she left. After she left Sakura started to wonder.
‘What did we do to make Naruto act like that?’ She thought as she was approaching Sasuke.
**********At Hokage’s office***********
Tsunade was sitting on the chair in her room looking at a crystal ball. She has seen the conflict between Naruto and Sasuke. ‘Damn,’ she thought. ‘How in the hell am I gonna sort this?’ then she heard a knock at the door. “Come in” she yelled.
“Hey Tsunade, I need to talk to you about something.”
“What is it Jiraiya? Don’t tell me it’s about Naruto because I just don’t have the time to deal with it right now.”
“Well maybe you should hear this.” Jiraiya said. “Naruto just told about the demon inside him to a girl.” Tsunade mouth almost hit the floor.
“What the hell!” Why would he do something like that!?” She said almost yelling.
“Well it seems that he has a deep trust in this girl. Also I overheard them talking about Naruto being saved by this girl.” He continued. Tsunade almost turned pale. “Well it seems though that the girl had saved him form his mental state.”
“Well who is this girl that knows about it?” Tsunade asked.
“I believe that her name is Hyuga Hinata. Based on what I have seen. She was taken back of course but still accepted Naruto. Also she definably doesn’t seem like the type that would betray trust.” Tsunade calmed herself down and started to rub her forehead.
“Okay, listen up Jiraiya. I still need you to keep an eye on him. Also later on tonight I need you to show up at his house to check up on him okay?” she said.
“What do I need to do that for?” Jiraiya asked.
“I have a feeling that Naruto will not tell us about his encounters if he were to meet with his sister. Also Sasuke and Sakura are already suspicious about him. I fear that soon they will find out. So now I am going to have Kakashi watch them more and give them more missions that would require more time completing.”
“Okay I you say so.” He said. As he was leaving Tsunade spoke up.
“So Jiraiya, what is Hinata to Naruto?” She asked.
“Well,” he said. “I know that he really trust her a lot. A true friendship,” With that he left out the door. Tsunade sighed and then called in two anbu in the room.
“Yes Hokage-sama.” The first anbu said.
“I need you two to go and find Sasuke and Sakura and bring them here. There are not to know why but the fact that I want to see them. Also if they ask any questions you are not to answer understand?” both anbu nodded and left to get Sakura and Sasuke.
*******In the busy part of konoha*******
Hinata was sitting on a bench on the side walk. Just then she felt something on her shoulder. She turned surprised to see Naruto chin resting on her shoulder.
“Naruto-kun,” Hinata said as she was jumping off the bench in fright Naruto laugh.
“Man Hinata you are easy to scare sometimes.” He said. Hinata just blushed and looked down.
“Well wh…………………..where should we go first?” she asked. Naruto thought for a second.
“Hey Hinata are you really hungry?” he asked. “If so we could always go get some ramen for you since I am not really hungry.”
“No not really.” She said timidly.
“Well how bout we just grabbed some ice-cream then.” He said. Hinata just nodded her head in agreement. Both then went to an ice-cream stand to buy some. Naruto paid much to Hinata’s shy protest. After they gotten their ice-cream Naruto thought of something.
“Hey Hinata follow me.” He said. Hinata started to walk with him.
‘Where is he leading me?’ she wondered. She was already happy that she was with Naruto. In fact she could almost feel herself changing in front of him. Then she thought about Naruto’s secret. ‘Wow, I still can believe that he told me his secret. He must really trust me then.’ Then she smiled to herself. ‘This is truly the most fun I ever had.’
“Something wrong Hinata?” he said curiously. Hinata quickly shook her head.
“It’s nothing Naruto-kun. Where are you taking me anyway?” she asked. Naruto looked at her and smiled.
“Where already here.” He said. Hinata looked around and saw three logs stuck in the ground pointing up. She remembered where this place was. “This is the place where you help me again. You helped me find the strength I needed to beat Neji in the exams. Speaking of which you have help me out a lot without me realizing it.” He then turned to look at Hinata any smiled. Hinata just froze in place after hearing what Naruto said. Naruto then had a weird look on his face. “Hey Hinata, you’re ice-cream.” Hinata look down to see that her ice-cream started to melt on her hand.
“Oh,” she said as she was trying to eat the rest of her ice cream. Naruto then sat near the center log and motioned Hinata to sit next to her. They both sat there for awhile lost in their own thoughts.
“Hey Naruto-kun, will you go with Masami somewhere?” Hinata asked looking at Naruto. Naruto looked at the ground.
“You know I would really want to visit sometime. I mean that there are my family and all. I should at least visit where they live.” He said still thinking.
‘W………..will you be coming back then?” she asked nervously.
“Well yea I will come back after this is my home.” Hinata looked at the ground. Naruto then turned his head to look at her. “Listen I will come back every now and then and visit if I do decide to go out.”
“Okay Naruto-kun,” she said. Naruto then scooted closer to Hinata and put his arm around her. Hinata almost fainted on the spot.
“Hey Hinata, don’t worry about me okay.” He said. Hinata just nodded her head still nervous but happy at the same time. Both sat there in silence enjoying the rest of the day.
**********In Tsunade’s office**********
Tsunade was sitting on her desk sleeping when she heard a knock at the door. “Huh, come in.” then she saw a young woman enter the door. “Oh it’s you. What to you want now Reimi?”
“Hokage-sama I need to talk to you.” Reimi said.
“Well sit down and start talking.” Tsunade said a little annoyed that she was woken up form her nap. Reimi took her seat and looked at Tsunade.
“Well today I had to attack one of your fellow ninjas today. I believe his name was Sasuke Uchiha.” Reimi said. Tsunade then remembered what she saw on the crystal ball.
“May I ask why?” Tsunade said already partly knowing the answer.
“Because he was trying to find out Naruto’s secret and was very persistent about it too. I wanted to have Naruto tell that himself. Also Sasuke was going to try to attack Naruto. Fearing that it would get out of hand I decided to knock out Sasuke before things got really out of hand.”
Tsunade listened to her explanation and sighed. “Well what else do you want?”
“I want you to bring Naruto here and any people that he feels like family to his house. I want to have one final talk before you make your decision.” Reimi said. Tsunade started to get angry.
“Listen, Naruto belongs to konoha and this is his home. There is nothing that will change that you understand?” Tsunade said.
“I know Hokage-sama but I at least want to show him where we are form and show him our history.” Reimi said. “Besides if Sasuke is still going to be persistent about finding out Naruto has inside him. Things are going to be trouble for my brother. I really want to take him away from all that.”
Tsunade then sighed and rubbed her forehead. She knew that it was true that if Sasuke and Sakura ever found out about Naruto secret then there would be exposed to the younger generation. ‘Damn this is bad,’ she thought. ‘If the younger generation ever found out about what happened then they could blame Orochimaru attack on konoha to be Naruto’s fault. Also the adults could easily manipulate the children into thinking even worse of Naruto.’ She then looked at Reimi and started to speak. “Listen Reimi I will invite the trusted people to Naruto to his place later on tonight. There we will discuss terms. Know that this is Naruto decision to go or not. But know this even if he goes it won’t be forever. He will have to return here to his home understand?”
Reimi thought for awhile. “Okay I understand.” Reimi said as she was getting up. She then left out of the hokage’s quarters. A few minuets later Tsunade got up a walked out the door. As she was walking out of her office the two anbu spotted her coming their way.
“Hokage-sama I am sorry but I have to ask where you are going.” The anbu said. Tsunade just walked past them. “Hokage-sama”
“I am going to see a certain brat,” then she turned over to look at the anbu. “Tell the anbu that is bringing Sasuke and Sakura to bring them here and tell them to wait here until I get back. Since Iruka is still on a mission I can’t have him here yet, but if he comes tell him to meet me here tomorrow. Also I need you to send other anbu to find the other two guests that woman has with her and send them to Naruto’s place. Also if Jiraiya comes by tell him where I am going okay?” Both anbu nodded. “Good,” Tsunade said as she walked off.
*******Back with Naruto*******
Hinata and Naruto were still sitting there looking at the sunset until Naruto stood up. “Well I gotta meet my sis.” He said. Then he started to think for a moment. “Hey Hinata, would you mind coming to my place for awhile?” Hinata looked up a little shocked.
“Why?” she asked.
“Well, my sister is going to be there. I would want you to meet her real fast before you go home if that okay. I mean if you don’t want to………..”
“Sure I would Naruto-kun.” Hinata said as she was quickly standing up. Naruto smiled, ran up and grabbed her hand which made Hinata blush.
“Well come on let’s go!” he said. With that both Naruto and Hinata started to run to his house. When they were walking up the stairs to his house he saw Jiraiya sitting in front of his house. “Hey pervert what you are doing here?” Naruto said still walking up the stairs.
“Well I was waiting for you kid.” He said. Then he noticed the girl behind Naruto. “Oh I see you brought your friend.”
“Yea I wanted her to meet my sister.” Naruto said. Naruto then dug in his pocket for his keys and realized one thing. “Umm Hinata, do you still have that key that I gave you?” Hinata dug in her pockets for the key. By the time she got it out though, Naruto door opened to show a dark black haired girl.
“Hello Naruto,” Reimi said.
“Hello sis. See Hinata this is my sister.” Hinata looked up and saw Reimi.
“Ah so you are Hinata.” Reimi said with a little smile on her face. “Well my name is Uzumaki Reimi, nice to meet you.”
“Nice to meet you too,” Hinata said nervously. Naruto walked past Reimi only to find Tsunade, Masami and Zolli sitting there.
“Wow so everyone’s here.” Naruto said.
“Well of course what do you expect? You can’t be talking to them all by yourself.” Tsunade said. Naruto just shrugged. After Jiraiya and Hinata entered the house Reimi closed the door. Once they were all comfortable, Naruto spoke up.
“Hey Tsunade-chan,” Naruto said. “I think I know what I want to do.”
AN. Okay here’s is the vote on what you want. (And I give a lot of options!!!!)
A. Naruto will go to the hidden village with Jiraiya (extended stay)
B. Naruto will go to the hidden village with Jiraiya. Also they will take Hinata along. (extended stay)
C. Same as option A but shorter stay.
D. Same as option B but shorter stay.
E. Same as B but will take another Naruto character along.
F. They will stay in konoha. (Reimi will have to think of another way.)
(C and D storyline will be different than A and B.)
Okay those are the options now it’s your chance to vote! So please pick one of the options that you want and I will write that option in the next chapter. So thank-you and R&R. Bye ^______^
temjinxzarron
05-23-2004, 05:27 PM
Man it's like everyone choose B!
you do realized what i mean by extended stay.
extended stay is 12 years while shorter stay is only 6.
temjinxzarron
05-28-2004, 04:00 AM
You know sometimes it'd Astounding to what makes me write this. Even i don't know why i write this sometimes. (well with my friend that has a knife to my neck telling me to keep writing.) Well i guess that's one of the reasons. Anyway here is the next chapter.
Ending My Destiny Act 8: Farewell Hatred
AN: Finally I have finished another chapter and guess what! We have a winner! It was a very “close” race but here are the scores:
A-1
B-16
C-0 (man you all must really not like C)
D-5
E-2
F-1 (sorry man. I do feel for you)
So of course the winner is B with the extended stay. So here is the chapter that the majority of you wanted. Also I got a question about how long this fic is going to be. To tell you the truth it will be quite long (although I’m not sure how long) I am thinking about twenty chapters or so. Also if you’re choice was not chosen don’t worry! I will have votes like this in future chapters so look forward to it!!
“Hey Tsunade-chan,” Naruto said. “I think I know what I want to do.” Tsunade just listened. “I would like to go with my sister to visit her village.” Tsunade’s mouth dropped.
“Why Naruto,” she asked.
“Well I really have nothing here.” Naruto replied. ‘Well I do have you all with me and Iruka. But I have to see why.”’
“Why what?” Hinata asked nervous and scared that someone who had treated her has one of her best friends were going to leave her. Naruto then turned to Hinata.
“Well Hinata-chan, I know now that I have family, I want to see where there from. How do they live, and what am I really. For once I would like to find out the truth about myself and see things in a new light for once. All this time I have been shunned upon my most of the people in this village and there were only a few people to help me. Now I feel like I can finally see things on the other side.” Naruto said. “Besides that bastard Sasuke will keep trying to find out about the demon inside me when I really don’t want him to, and if he ever found out he could probably try to run away form the village again.” Tsunade just thought for a second.
“Naruto seriously is this what you really want?” Tsunade asked. Naruto nodded his head. Reimi smiled.
“Well if that is settled then we can leave tomorrow.” Reimi said. Tsunade glared at Reimi.
“Not so fast Reimi-san.” Tsunade said. “Yes he can leave tomorrow, but not without someone.” Reimi then looked at Tsunade hard.
“Well who are you going to make us take with us?” Reimi asked. Tsunade grinned at Reimi.
“Simple,” Tsunade said. “First you are going to take Naruto teacher Jiraiya.” Jiraiya mouth dropped.
“Me! Why me!? Jiraiya asked.
“Because you are his teacher are you not? It’s your responsibly to watch over him and train him. Also I want you to take in another student to come with you.” Tsunade said.
“You don’t really mean…..” Reimi said.
“Oh yes I do.” Tsunade said.
“Excuse me hokage-sama,” Masami asked. “But who will be the second person that will come with us?” Tsunade just pointed and Hinata.
“She will be accompanying Naruto and Jiraiya.” Tsunade said. Everyone’s mouth then dropped.
“Hokage-sama are you…….” Hinata said. Before she could finish Tsunade started to speak.
“Yes I am Hinata. In fact Hinata, Naruto I am going to give you more than enough visiting time to spend there. I just have some conditions. If they are not met then Naruto will not be coming with you Reimi.” Reimi didn’t like the fact that Naruto’s teacher and his friend were coming with them. But she knew that Tsunade was serious. So she calmed down from the anger build up that Tsunade was making the demands and not her.
“Okay hokage-sama what are your terms?” Reimi asked. Zolli and Masami just looked on.
“First I want to say that Naruto and Hinata will spend approximately twelve years away from this village. It will be three years that they will spend living in your village. During those three years they will come back konoha once every year for a private meeting with me and the other jounins elites of this village. After that they will spend the rest of the nine years traveling the world seeing all they can and getting a true view of the world outside of this village. Jiraiya will train them for those years until it’s time to come back. Hopefully by then Naruto can take my place as hokage and Hinata can become strong enough for her family.” She then turned to Hinata. “Don’t worry Hinata, none of the other Hyuga will have a say in the matter. Not even your father. Your father has a lot of power and influence in this village but not nearly enough as me.”
“But the council could say something.” Jiraiya said.
“And what in the hell would they do? Remove me from being hokage. Yea right! Right now konoha as gained some of its power that it has lost since Orochimaru but the council knows that if they get rid of me then they will lose a major power.” Tsunade said. Jiraiya just nodded his head.
“You have a point but how are we going to do this?” Jiraiya asked.
“Okay,” Tsunade said while pointing to Hinata. “You start to get packing for tomorrow and pack light. And make sure you take your most treasured possessions. You will have a twelve year leave from konoha but that doesn’t mean that I wont be giving you field missions during this time. You still will be a konoha ninja and will still act like one. The same goes for you Naruto understand?” Hinata and Naruto just nodded their heads. Tsunade then pulled a scroll out of her pocked and gave it to Hinata. “Here Hinata take this.” Tsunade said while handing over the scroll.” Hinata took the scroll.
“What this for hokage-sama?” Hinata asked nervously.
“If your family asks any questions then you can show them this scroll. It should tell them to come straight to me. Also if anyone of your friends ask along the way then tell them that your going on a simple training mission, got it?”
“Yes hokage-sama.” Hinata said as she put the scroll in her pocket.
“Good,” Tsunade said. “Now go home a get packed.” With that Hinata just nodded and walked out of Naruto’s apartment. “Okay now that we have the first part settled Naruto you’re next. I need you to get packed also okay?”
“Wait a minute,” Zolli said. “Is there a point to all of this? I mean that I understand the reason why Jiraiya is coming but I can’t understand why the girl is coming also.”
“Well I have my reasons for everything alright. If you like to argue then Naruto won’t be leaving the village.” Tsunade said. “Also Naruto, since Iruka wont be coming to konoha in the next few days I will have to inform him of the situation. I am sorry Naruto but you won’t be able to see him until next year okay?” Naruto was kinda saddened to hear that but still just nodded his head as he went to go around the room and back his things.
“Okay Reimi there are some rules for you to follow before you take him understood?’ Tsunade said. Reimi didn’t like it but if she wanted Naruto she had to listen.
“What is it?” Reimi said with a little irritation.
“Okay the first thing I would want is for you to tell the exact location where Naruto is to me and only me. Second is that on the time that I would have Naruto to come back he comes back with Hinata and Jiraiya not you got it?” Tsunade said.
“Okay hokage-sama,” Reimi said. “Is there anything else?”
“No that will be all. They will leave with you tomorrow.” Tsunade said.
“Right we will be ready then.” Reimi said as she got up and started to head out the door. Following Reimi, Zolli and Masami were heading for the door. Just then they heard a knock at the door.
“Who is it?” Tsunade said.
“It’s me and Sasuke-kun.” Sakura said.
“Oh come in.” Tsunade said. When the door opened Sakura and Sasuke saw Reimi, Zolli and Masami leave. Neither of them ever said a word to each other as the three walked off to head back to their room in the hotel.
“What are they doing here?” Sasuke asked. “And where is Naruto?” Sasuke glanced around the room and saw Naruto packing.
“Why do you want to know?” Tsunade said.
“Well I do know this. That the power that he used was not his own. Something about it felt alive. I even thought that I saw tails coming out of him during the fight. I can’t explain it but I know he can!” Sasuke then turned to face Naruto. “What in the world are you?”
“You don’t need to know. You never wanted to know anything about me before, why now? Why are you asking me a million questions that you want to know about me? The only reason why you want to know is so you can try to obtain what I have.” Naruto said calmly. Sasuke started to get angry. But before Sasuke could say another word
“Enough! Sasuke you are hear by forbidden to ever talk about that incident. If Naruto wants to tell you then he will tell you. Other than that he has the right to hold his secrets just like you.” Tsunade said to Sasuke. She then turned to Naruto. “As far as you Naruto, you need to get finished packing.”
“Yes Tsunade.” Naruto said as he got back to packing.
“Packing, Naruto where are you going?” Sakura asked.
“Away from you.” Naruto replied coldly.
“He is going away from the village for awhile.” Tsunade said. Sakura looked at Tsunade then looked at Naruto. She really didn’t understand but she knew one thing. That was that Naruto held hatred towards her. She had to at least try to figure out why.
“Naruto,” Sakura asked. “Why are you so mean to us? I can understand why you are mad a Sasuke for him trying to leave. I was angry and sad at the same time. You had to fight for me and I thank you for that but whatever it is I am sorry okay?” Naruto stopped packing and looked at Sakura. He saw in her eyes that she was serious and compassionate but he just simply shook his head.
“Listen Sakura,” Naruto said. “Even thought I may not look like it, I am a very complicated person. The reason why I am mad is not that you didn’t pay enough attention to me or anything like that. The reason why is because I truly considered you my friend and you betrayed that.” Sakura and Sasuke just listened unable to say anything. “Listen Sakura, every time I truly try to be friends with you, you are always ignore me and for the times that I had to be with you, you were fine with it until you felt like it was not convenient for you. In truth as long as you were with Sasuke nothing else mattered to you. That why you were crying to me when Sasuke ran away. But the moment that I brought him back you acted like I never existed. That is what I call selfishness.” He then pointed to Sasuke who was still listening. “As far as you Sasuke, I really thought that end the end we could have been great friends and got to know each other really well but I guess that our worlds are very different. It’s not that I wanted to be friends with you. It’s rather that you didn’t wanna be friends with me. If that’s the case then what can I do? Besides you never wanted anything from me but not you wanna to know everything about me. I call that procrastination.”
“Naruto,” Sasuke said. Before either of them could say anything more Tsunade spoke up.
“Naruto have you got all of you things?” Tsunade asked. Naruto turned to face her.
“Yes hokage-sama.” Naruto said.
“Good then you are to meet Hinata in front of my office in an hour. You will sleep there for tonight understood?” she said. Naruto just nodded his head.
“Okay I am done. I will meet you and Ero-Sennin there.” Naruto said carefully not to let Hinata’s name slip form his mouth. With that Naruto walked out the door and started to head to the hokage quarters.
“As for you two,” Tsunade said while pointing at Sasuke and Sakura. “You are to meet up with Kakashi-sensei tomorrow and start training.” Sasuke looked at Tsunade. He knew at that point that there was nothing that he could do. In the end Sasuke simply nodded his head and walked out the door to go back home. Sakura soon followed. Jiraiya then spoke up.
“Hey are you sure about this? I know that Naruto will be hard to teach and train but Hinata as well? Also what about...”
“Don’t worry about it,” Tsunade said. “You are already a great teacher to Naruto. The rasengan proved that to me already. As far as Hinata is concerned, after talking to Kurenai sending her with Naruto will be the best thing not only for her abilities but for her to get over the psychological problems that she has as well.” She then put her hands together and thought for awhile remembering the past talk with Kurenai.
*****A few hours prior (flashback) *****
Tsunade was sleeping on the couch after reading so many scroll about rules and regulations about being the hokage. Then she heard a knock at the door that woke her up. “Yea, yea, yea, come in.” Tsunade said while wiping her face. Kurenai stepped in the room. “Oh it’s you come here I got important news about a certain student.”
“I’m sorry if it is Kiba’s pranks I will put an end to them.” Kurenai said. Tsunade shook her head.
“No Kurenai it’s about you student Hinata.” She said. Kurenai looked at Tsunade curiously.
“Well what about her?” Kurenai asked.
“Well,” said Tsunade. “To put it plain and simple, Uzumaki Naruto has told Hinata about the demon.” Kurenai mouth dropped. She honestly didn’t know what to say. “Needlessly to say that I am surprised that Hinata took it very well and still accepted him.” Tsunade added.
“But why,” Kurenai asked.
“Simple, because he trust her.” Tsunade said. “They have gained a really strong friendship.” Kurenai was really getting confused but at the same time starting to understand why.
“Let me guess Hinata also likes him.” Kurenai said. Tsunade shrugged.
“I don’t know about that but there is another thing that I have to tell you.” Tsunade said.
“What is that hokage-sama?” Kurenai asked.
“As you know Naruto has as sister and I think that he may want to visit where she lives. If that’s the case then I would want Hinata to accompany him.” Tsunade said. Kurenai mouth dropped.
“Why hokage-sama!? I don’t mean to be any disrespect but are you sure about this?” She said.
“Yes I am Kurenai that is why I will have Jiraiya take over her training instead. I know that you feel for your student but I think that this will be the best for her. She will finally have some breathing room for once.” Kurenai just thought about everything Hinata had to deal with. “Besides Kurenai she will training with Jiraiya. She will be okay.” Kurenai sighed.
“Well okay hokage-sama I trust you.” Kurenai said.
“Good then you are dismissed.” Tsunade said. Kurenai bowed and left the room.
******Flashback Ending*******
‘I just hope that I am doing the right thing.’ Tsunade thought as she was getting up. “Come on Jiraiya, we have to meet them at the office.” Jiraiya just followed Tsunade out the door.
***In the Hotel****
“Damn it!” Reimi yelled as she punched a wall. “It was not supposed to be like this! Naruto was supposed to come alone with us!”
“Well at least we got him to come in the first place Reimi.” Masami said while looking at the huge hole in the wall from the punch that Reimi made.
“Yea we were lucky in that aspect but this kinda puts a little damper on the whole plan.” Zolli said. Masami looked confused.
“What plan,” she asked. Masami then looked at Reimi. “I thought that the initial plan was to get Naruto to come with us and hopefully get him to stay. You mean to tell me that there was another plan?” Masami said. Reimi looked at Masami.
“Hey Masami could me and Zolli talk for a second?” Reimi asked. Masami knew that there was something up but didn’t want to say anything at the moment.
“Okay, I am starting to get hungry anyway.” Masami said while she was walking out the door. Reimi stared that Zolli hard.
“Do you want her to know the plan!?” Reimi whispered. “The way you’re talking you could easily given it away!” You know the main reason why we had to wait until Naruto was thirteen to do anything now. If Masami ever found out why we are doing this the whole plan will be ruined!”
“Sorry Reimi-sama. I didn’t mean to say it.” Zolli said. “But about the plan are you sure that the borrowed blood won’t go away with the cursed blood?” Reimi thought for a while.
“No I am pretty sure that it won’t after all with the second result. I don’t think that will happen. Sure the first result died but the second and third result still lives.” Reimi said.
“Well what about……………” Zolli couldn’t finish because Reimi covered his mouth.
“Come in,” Reimi said. Masami then walked in the door.
“Oh finished eating.” Reimi asked.
“Yea,” Masami said. “Anyway I need to pack my things for tomorrow.” Masami went to grab her things.
“Good idea.” Reimi said as she was grabbing her things. Soon Zolli followed as he packed his things to head back home.
******hokage office*******
Tsunade didn’t have to wait long until she saw Naruto and Hinata waiting at the front door of her office.
“Good right on time.” Tsunade said. She looked at Naruto then to Hinata which she noticed the dried tears on her face. Tsunade sighed.
“Let me guess bad time with your family huh?” Tsunade asked. The started to see Hinata’s eyes started to water again. “Hey it’s okay. Soon you would be away form all that.” Tsunade said. It really didn’t make Hinata feel any better but at least she stopped form almost crying again. All three then went inside and Tsunade showed Naruto and Hinata where they will be sleeping. It took awhile but soon both Naruto and Hinata were soon lying down in their own little bed across the room from each other.
“Hey Hinata, why exactly were you crying? I was because of you family wasn’t it?” Naruto asked. Hinata didn’t say anything. “That’s okay Hinata you don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to I guess. But just know that no matter what the problem is you can tell me anything. I will always be here to help you.” Hinata just lied there. She knew that she could tell Naruto and cursed herself for not doing so. Then she thought about living with Naruto for twelve years. She was scared of the fact that it would be so long. She was surprised when she did started to think about it because the only thing that she was thinking was that she would finally be away from her father. Then she started to think about her father harsh and cruel words and started to cry again. So much so that she softly cried herself to sleep.
AN: Sorry if that was a little boring but I am starting to start the true adventure (which is in next chapter of course). Also if you have any questions about what exactly happened between Hinata and her family well I am kinda saving that for later and all other question will be covered in later chapters. So what did you think of the chapter that YOU (yes YOU READERS) voted on!? Please be nice and R&R.
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05-28-2004, 05:29 AM
Ending My Destiny Act 9: Traveling and Searching for Home
AN: Okay here is the latest chapter but first I want to clear some things first. One yes I have a beta reader! Anbu Dr J will beta read this fic so most of the problems should dealing with grammatical errors shall be taken care of. Also as far as the story goes, Reimi, Masami and Zolli are coming from the hidden village of star/stars (however you want to say it) NOT sun. I wrote that by mistake and I will correct that as soon as possible. In fact the village of sun does not even exist in my fic (since I was confusing Heaven, Star and Moon I could easily mistaken it for Sun). Also a really appreciate the reviews that you are giving me. I will try my best to fix all the problems that are in my fic and improve it the best I can!! So much that I am officially postponing my other fic “One of a Family” for awhile until I can get either this fic or my other one finished. Okay here is the fic. (Still have that Knife to my neck)
Hinata woke up the next day still a little tired. She looked around only to find that Naruto was still sleeping. She smiled and the thought that she was going away from konoha for awhile but then thought of the outcome. ‘I am going to be gone from everyone I know for twelve years.’ She thought. She just sat there thinking, lost in her own thoughts.
“Oi, Hinata-chan you’re awake.” Naruto said. Hinata turned surprised to see Naruto-kun awake.
“Naruto-kun you are awake.” Hinata said quickly. Naruto then gave Hinata a serious look.
“Hey Hinata, you were thinking about something. What exactly where you thinking about,” Naruto asked. Hinata put her hands together and just twirled her thumbs.
“Well…………well I was thinking about what it would be like when we leave here Naruto-kun. I was thinking about Kurenai-sensei and my team, my friends.” She said while getting quieter and quieter. Naruto then got up from his bed and started to get his finalized before the journey to the hidden village of star.
“Well I am sure that they will do fine.” Naruto said. Hinata slowly got up from her bed.
“Well what about your friends Naruto-kun?” she asked. Naruto finished with his stuff and turned to Hinata.
“Well to tell you the truth besides you, Iruka, Ero-Sennin and the old had I really don’t have many friends.” Naruto said. Hinata went to her things and started to make sure that she had everything that she needed and wanted to get ready to make her trip.
“Well what about you team?” She asked silently not expecting Naruto to answer. Naruto did hear her thought he flinched at those words.
“Well sadly Hinata-chan. My team wouldn’t care if I was alive of dead. Kakashi only cared about Sasuke. Sakura was too busy following Sasuke like a little sick love puppy to give any attention or notice to me. Sasuke was only looking after himself. So in overall my team doesn’t need nor care about me.” Naruto said as he began to sit back on his bed. Hinata was a little shocked but then she realized what Naruto had told her a few days ago. About the demon, about everything, she didn’t want to nor did she feel like asking questions. She simply was making sure she had everything she wanted.
“Oh yea, Hinata-chan. I don’t think that you should see you team.” Naruto said. Hinata turned around to look at Naruto.
“W…….why not Naruto-kun,” she asked. Naruto just shrugged.
“Well I figured that seeing them would for one break the secret of the trip because Kiba would ask all kinds of questions. Also I think that even thought it’s mean, departures like will only make you sadder and having you wanting to stay. After hearing you crying last night I………….” Naruto trailed off. Hinata looked down. She almost wanted to cry again. Sure she was happy that she was leaving her family and get stronger but her friends………the little that she had. She had to leave them in the dark about what she was doing and where she was going. Then Hinata felt Naruto put his hand on her shoulder. Well don’t worry about it. Besides if anything you sensei would know where you are going. If there ever any trouble on the way I will be there for you no matter what.” Naruto said smiling. This took a whole a lot off Hinata’s mind.
“Okay Naruto-kun,” She said sharing a small smile to him. Just then they both heard a knock at the door.
“Hey brat and brats friend, we are going to go to the north village gate get ready okay.” Tsunade said. Naruto open the door to show Tsunade that they were already ready.
“Well we are ready to go.” Naruto said. Tsunade looked on surprised. She figured that Naruto would still be sleep.
“Well okay then follow me then.” Tsunade said. Naruto and Hinata just nodded. They followed Tsunade out the office building and were heading toward the north gate. Hinata was the one to notice that they were taking the back way to the gate.
“Umm Hokage-sama, why are we going the back way through the woods to get to the gate,” Hinata asked.
“Well since this is a class S type mission, it is highly classified. That why we are taking the back way. Besides it would be a controversy waiting to happen if we walked to the north gate regular path.” Tsunade explained. She then turned around to look at the two. “Also there is something that I want to tell you guys. Instead of coming back every year, you won’t be making a visit here until after the three years have passed.” Naruto and Hinata just stared in surprise.
“Why not,” Hinata asked.
“Well because there are some people after Naruto. If he were to keep going back and fourth, it has a higher chance that you will be found. Not only is this a danger to Naruto but a danger to you as well since you are a holder of the byakuagan. If they wanted to they could take you also. So as of now you will be making a one way trip there.” Tsunade explained. “Now come on let’s keep on.” They then continued walking. Neither of them said a word after that. When they arrived at the gate Naruto saw Jiraiya, Reimi, Masami and Zolli all standing there waiting for them.
“Well kid, are you ready to go.” Jiraiya asked. Naruto nodded. “Well what about you Hinata are you ready.”
“Y…….yes I am.” Hinata stuttered out.
“Okay then let’s go!” Reimi almost shouted.
“Hold it,” Tsunade said. She then walked over to Naruto and Hinata and gave them both one huge group hug. “Here Hinata take this.” Tsunade said as she gave a small scroll to her. “Promise me you won’t read it until you get to the hidden village of star okay.” Hinata nodded.
“I will Tsunade-sama.” Hinata said. Tsunade then looked at Naruto.
“Be careful, I expect you and Hinata to get a whole lot stronger.” She said.
“Don’t worry we will.” Naruto said. “Also could you give Iruka something for me?” Naruto then handed Tsunade a letter.
“Sure I will.” Tsunade said. Naruto smiled at her.
“Well then goodbye and farewell. I will see you in three years.” With that Naruto and Hinata walked off to Reimi and the others.
“Okay are we ready now?” Masami asked. Naruto and Hinata nodded. “Good then lets go.” With that all of them began their journey to the hidden village of star. For the journey it was long and there were days where they didn’t go with a safe place to stay for awhile. But over all Naruto kept his promise to Hinata for protection. He made sure that she was okay with everything. Through all kinds of transportation, it took them a month to get to the hidden village of star. Once they finally got there, they saw nothing but old buildings that were worn down. But instead of seeing the horror of a war and destruction that they had expected, instead they saw nothing but beauty as the moss and other flora covered the old and destroyed buildings and streets. It was like mountains and hills covered in nothing but flowers.
“Whoa,” was all that Naruto and Jiraiya could say.
“It’s beautiful.” Hinata said. “Also yet…..”
“Sad.” Masami finished. “This is what happened and this is the result of war. Even after all these hundreds of years. Even now there is nothing that can stop the pain and suffering that has plagued out village. There is nothing to stop people from fighting. I guess that it just a way of life. It’s a way of the world.” Hinata looked down.
“I’m sorry if I have brought bad memories for you.” Hinata said. Masami turned her head and smiled.
“Don’t worry about that. It’s okay really.” Masami said. Jiraiya looked around and noticed something.
“Reimi I know that you’re village was destroyed and I am sorry for that but are their anymore people than you guys?” Reimi laughed.
“Well yes there is.” Reimi said. “There inside there,” Reimi then pointed to a large seemingly abandon building that was covered with flora and fauna. Jiraiya looked at the building. It was a massive coliseum like place shining in the sunlight. The beautiful colors of the rainbow displayed all over the place through the shinning sun. Vines grown around the coliseums pillars just added to the over beauty of the building.
“You mean to tell me that all your people live in that building?” Jiraiya asked.
“For the most part yes,” Reimi said. “Something the matter Jiraiya,” she asked.
“Well I figured that after a war some people would start rebuilding and starting over.” Jiraiya said. Reimi sighed.
“Well the problem is that it is very hard to. Even after these hundreds of years we still have problems rebuilding.” Reimi said.
“Well the problem is the children.” Zolli said.
“What about the children,” Jiraiya asked.
“You see, the people for some reason can only have one child in their life time and some women can’t even have children. At least form the other people form this village anyway.” Reimi said.
“Well why is that,” Naruto asked.
“Not sure bro.” Reimi said. “Even if the women could have children with the other villagers form the star, it still really difficult to do. Even so that woman will still probably have only one child. Also it’s extremely rare that we get any visitors here since it is very hard for us to leave here.”
“Umm…why is that Reimi-san.” Hinata asked.
“Simple it was a curse.” Zolli said.
“What kind of curse?” Jiraiya asked.
“We don’t know but we think that it was the Moon and Heaven villages doing for casting a curse like that on us. Even thought those villages died, it is no different than us. Sadly we are slowly dieing as well.” Reimi said. Eventually they all made it inside the building. Naruto and Hinata looked around. There were people playing, shops open, everyone living their lives the best they can.
“How many people are in this place?” Hinata ask.
“There are about three thousand people.” Zolli said. “Also there is another one thousand, five hundred living in the building next to this one.”
“That’s a lot of people living in one place!” Naruto shouted.
“Not really,” Reimi said. “You have to understand that while your village may not have that many people living in one area. Your village probably has hundreds of thousands of people living in that village while we only have four thousand, five hindered. Then even twenty years ago the population was around six thousand but because of Natural causes and because of the curse that the Moon and Heaven villages cast on us, we are at the number that we are now.” Naruto looked at all the people who were walking up and down the mini like streets tending to their normal business. Hinata also watched until Zolli spoke up.
“Well let me show you where you will be staying.” Zolli said. Zolli lead Jiraiya, Naruto and Hinata down the stairs into the residential area. Once they were in that area they went to the back where they were three rooms. “Jiraiya-sama here is your room.” Zolli said. Jiraiya took a quick look in his room. I was a normal place, normal bed, dresser and closet. There was a bath room in the room also. It was like a regular hotel room. He turned around and looked at Zolli.
“Okay, thanks Zolli-san.” Jiraiya said. Zolli then turned to Naruto.
“Naruto this will be your room.” Zolli said. Naruto took a step in his room. It was a little bit more decorated than Jiraiya’s. It was a blue room with some blue curtains. He also saw that Naruto room was much larger where it had a small kitchen and a small eating area. One thing that Jiraiya also noticed was that Naruto’s room had some plants. Reimi walked up behind Naruto.
“Well when I saw your room you had a lot of plants and a feeding and water schedule. When we got here I asked someone to put some plants in here for you. You know, to keep the hobby going.” Reimi said. Naruto smiled.
“Thanks sis.” Naruto said. Zolli again spoke up.
“Hinata-san I will show you your room.” Zolli said as he started to walk off. Before he could take two steps Jiraiya stopped him.
“This is her room also.” Jiraiya said pointing at Naruto’s room. Everyone was shocked at was the sennin said. At least not as shocked as Naruto and Hinata were.
“What do you mean by that!?” Naruto said. Jiraiya sighed.
“Listen kid, it was an order by Tsunade. She wanted to make sure that you two looked after one another. This is just one of her ways of making sure that happens.” The sennin said.
“But what if I……………accidentally……………………and she…………………..and………” Naruto gulped out as the blush was rising on his cheeks. Hinata was not escaping her own blush either.
“Umm………I……….don’t……………I mean that maybe…………” Was all Hinata could stutter out.
“Well don’t worry,” Jiraiya said. “Just be careful