DarkFoxNaruto
03-25-2004, 12:29 AM
My first fanfic...and i wana be a writer, so tell me how to improve it, tell me anything I wont mind
this is mostlikly going to be a group of short stories, most not having to do with eathothe
The man looked over, as he quickly treaded throught the grass in the forest, to spot the other man inbetween the trees. He quickly adujusted his speed, so that his speed was faster than the other man. The man quickly took a glance backward to make sure he was not too far ahead.
"Im in position, anyone else" the man whispered into a ear peice on the side of his face.
As the man waited for a responce, he darted infront of the other man.
"I'm ready Sho" Came a voice from the ear peice
Sho, looked back once more, to notice a woman behind the man. Sho then spun his body around, do dig his feet into the ground. The man infront of Sho now, quickly changed his grounding, adn quickly leaped intot eh trees above. With little time for action, Sho pushed off a tree right behind him, into the branched above.
Once in the branches, Sho knelt down, and looked around. If he got too far away, this mission was going to be a pain. Not only was a Seinin trying to escape, but he was one who was said to have to kill him. Sho knew if he gave him too much time, The man would get away, and fast, so he got up, and jumped off in the direction of the strongest chakra.
The woman that was once following him, was quick on his tail, after hopping into the trees a second after he had gone of into the direction of choice. She as well knew that she would have to get going, because Sho was not going ot be enough to handel him on his own.
Sho emerged from the trees in a matter of seconds. He looked around in every direction, unable to see anything at all. A few Miles ahead was forest, but he couldn't have gotten that far away from him that quick. Sho turned to head back into the forest, as he felt a Kunai Thrust into his body. The blood trickled down the Kunai like water down the street, as Sho felt a face next to his own.
"Never try and stop me, I will have my way, Konoha will burn to the ground" The man said, as he ripped the kunai out of Sho's back, and dashed off.
In a matter of seconds, Sho's body fell to the ground. He we bleeding profusely now, as blood was starting to gather around his body. This was it he realized, his life was about to end, and before ever getting anything he wanted, as a foot stepped down infront of his face, he closed his eyes. [/i]
this is mostlikly going to be a group of short stories, most not having to do with eathothe
The man looked over, as he quickly treaded throught the grass in the forest, to spot the other man inbetween the trees. He quickly adujusted his speed, so that his speed was faster than the other man. The man quickly took a glance backward to make sure he was not too far ahead.
"Im in position, anyone else" the man whispered into a ear peice on the side of his face.
As the man waited for a responce, he darted infront of the other man.
"I'm ready Sho" Came a voice from the ear peice
Sho, looked back once more, to notice a woman behind the man. Sho then spun his body around, do dig his feet into the ground. The man infront of Sho now, quickly changed his grounding, adn quickly leaped intot eh trees above. With little time for action, Sho pushed off a tree right behind him, into the branched above.
Once in the branches, Sho knelt down, and looked around. If he got too far away, this mission was going to be a pain. Not only was a Seinin trying to escape, but he was one who was said to have to kill him. Sho knew if he gave him too much time, The man would get away, and fast, so he got up, and jumped off in the direction of the strongest chakra.
The woman that was once following him, was quick on his tail, after hopping into the trees a second after he had gone of into the direction of choice. She as well knew that she would have to get going, because Sho was not going ot be enough to handel him on his own.
Sho emerged from the trees in a matter of seconds. He looked around in every direction, unable to see anything at all. A few Miles ahead was forest, but he couldn't have gotten that far away from him that quick. Sho turned to head back into the forest, as he felt a Kunai Thrust into his body. The blood trickled down the Kunai like water down the street, as Sho felt a face next to his own.
"Never try and stop me, I will have my way, Konoha will burn to the ground" The man said, as he ripped the kunai out of Sho's back, and dashed off.
In a matter of seconds, Sho's body fell to the ground. He we bleeding profusely now, as blood was starting to gather around his body. This was it he realized, his life was about to end, and before ever getting anything he wanted, as a foot stepped down infront of his face, he closed his eyes. [/i]