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09-20-2004, 01:32 AM
His name is Codrea. A human-like alien from the planet Crotan,also the main character. After escaping from his exploding planet, he and his older brother, Gallack, are forced to inhabit a new world. A world called Earth. On this new planet, he will face betrayal, death, new allies, and one hell of an adventure. Join Codrea on his quest to be the strongest.
Prologue: His name is Codrea........
the story begins.........
A planet is at the brink of destruction. Black winged creatures are destroying it. As meteors fall upon the hopeless blue planet, spacecrafts ship off into space. We then see a man shoving two boys onto a ship.
Older Boy: Father no! Don't leave us!
Man: Goodbye.....my sons.
The spacecraft then sped off into space. Unfortunatly it is hit by a meteor soon after departure and explodes. Luckily for the two boys, they escaped death on an escape ship. The young boy could only look in horror as his planet explodes.
Older Boy: Dammit! The explosion from the planet is gonna kill us!
He then went to then controls of the ship. Sweat went down his head as he struggled to control the ship.
Older Boy: Comon you piece of shit! Work!
The explosion was going to obliterate them when he had a stroke of genius.
Older Boy: Aha! The warp button!
He then slammed the button with his fist and the ship sped off at light speed. He could see the stars fly passed him at amazing speeds. The ship rumbled as the flew through demensions. A few moments later they were in another galaxy. Inside the ship, the boy pushed the auto pilot button and slowly took his hands off the controls. He was shaking with fear.
Older Boy: They're.....They're gone. Father....Mother...they're dead.
The younger boy, who was knocked unconscious from fighting the black, demonic creatures , had began to awaken.
Younger Boy: What......What happened? I was in a battle.
The Older Boy just stood there.
Younger Boy: Gallack where are Mom and Dad?
Gallack: They are fine. We are just gonna be on our own for awhile.
Young Boy: How long?
Gallack: Could be months, could be years. But before we do anything there is something I want you to know Codrea.
Gallack then turned around with an angry face and began to yell.
Gallack: There is'nt going to be any crying are whining! You got that runt?!
Codrea nodded with a scared look in his eyes.
Gallack: Good cuz we are continuing your training as soon as we find a planet to stay. You still can't control energy blasts.
Codrea: What do I need to train for?! I'm already know how to control energy blasts!
Gallack: Don't give me that crap. You may be able to control energy blasts for awhile. Until you lose all focus and waste all your enregy completely!
Codrea crossed his arms and tuned his head. He knew his brother was right. He could'nt control energy blasts, but his arrogance would not let him admit it.
Gallack Thinking to himself) I think its best not to tell him about Mom and Dad until he is a little older.
The lights in the ship suddenly began to flash red.
Gallack: What the hell is going on? I have to land on a nearby planet.
He then noticed a red planet on his left.
Gallack: We'll land here.
Gallack then flew the ship down to the mysterious red planet. He and Codrea exited the ship and looked around. Gallack did'nt see any buildings or any kind of life. All he saw was a forest of red, spiky rocks.
Gallack: This is the perfect place to train. You ready runt?
Codrea tried to remember his training on his old planet, Crotan.
Codrea: Ugh what am I supposed to do again???
Gallack: I'm assuming your pretty drained of your energy, correct??
Codrea then punched a rock on his left. Normally, he would be able to crush the rock to pieces. Instead his knuckles were sore and red. He began to groan in pain.
Codrea: Owwwww! Apparently so!
Gallack: Good. Being able to release large amounts of energy, even when your tired, is an important trait on the battlefeild. You see where I'm going with this??
Codrea: Yeah. Lets do it.
Codrea then stretched out his legs and squeezed his right hand.
Gallack: Remember just concentrate your energy into your palm.
Codrea sqeezed tighter as his viens popped out of his head and sweat dropped down his face. The winds started to pick up and dust flew around Codrea. He was'nt moving at all, he was focusing only on his hand. It was like nature was responding to him. A few moments later a small spark lit up in his palm. It fazed out after a few seconds. He then collapsed to his knees, breathing heavily.
Codrea: Darn it! I still cant do it!
Gallack groaned in disappiontment.
Gallack: This is the last time I'll show you.
He the extended his arm and concentrated on a large rock rock. About 5 seconds later, a ball of energy launched out his palm and blew the rock into pieces. Chunks of motar flew everywhere.
Gallack: It works better if you focus on a target.
This was the 15th time he had seen his brother do this but he could'nt help being amazed.
Gallack: Now you try.
Codrea then turned to his left to see another large rock. He then began to pose in a weird stance.
Gallack: ( Thinking to himself) What the hell does he think he is doing?
An energy ball began to take shape in his hands.
Codrea: Peeelllettt.....
The force from the energy attack was causing lightning to strike the ground.
Codrea: Gunnnnnn!!!!
The energy ball seemed like it would destroy the rock along with half of the plain that they were standing on. But before it hit the rock it shrunk to the size of a tennis ball. It barely even scathed the rock.
Gallack: Thats it! You pathetic weakling! You will never master it because youre nothing but a piece of trash!
Codrea then clunched his his fist. Red energy surged around it
Codrea: Shut up....Someday......
He then rushed at his brother with amazing speed. He was raising his fist.
Codrea: I will be the strongest!!!!!!!!
He then punched at his brother, aiming for his head.
Gallack dogded to the left before Codrea's attack connected with his face.
Codrea's attack instead went straight into a giant rock pillar, causing it to crumble to pieces. Codrea was now breathing heavily.
Codrea: Did I....Did I do that?
Gallack: ( Thinking to himself) Looks like he can only tap his power when he is really pissed. I have never seen him with such power. What a strange enrgy channel.
Gallack: Good job you passed the 1st test. Now lets go back to the ship and rest for awhile.
Codrea then collasped on the ground. Gallack picked up Codrea and returned to the ship, where they rested for 30 minutes.
Galick: Computer scan for any life on this planet.
The computer had a green line scan up and down the screen but gave no answer.
Codrea then came out of a room wearing silver armor padding. He had just awakened from his nap.
Codrea: Ah. I feel great!! Nothing like a good nap.
Gallack: Thats strange. There is no life at all on this planet. Codrea go scout this planet and see if you find anyone or anything.
Codrea did'nt really want to do it but he knew what would happen if he pissed his brother off.
Codrea: Alright.
Codrea pressed a button and the metallic door slid open. He stepped outside and jumped 500 ft. in the air and started to fly at sonic speed.
I know what your thinking. WTF? Well on Codrea's former planet, Kruton, the people there are born with superhuman strength, speed, and senses. When they are around 5 years old they learn how to control their ki, or inner energy, inabling them to fly or create energy blasts. So there you have it. Now back to our story......
Codrea grinned as the wind blew in his brown, black, and spiky hair. He loved to fly. It gave him a sense of freedom. But what he saw below mystified him. He saw a large city but no one was there. Codrea then landed on the ground.
Codrea: This place is creepy. I see buildings, but there is no one here.
Codrea then walked slowly down the deserted streets. What he did'nt know was that someone or something was staring at him with glowing red eyes. He quickly glanced behind him, but nothing was there. He then continued walking down the street when suddenly a huge creature flew out of the ground leavind a giant hole. Codrea stood in place wide eyed.
Codrea: What...What the heck is that?!
Prologue: His name is Codrea........
the story begins.........
A planet is at the brink of destruction. Black winged creatures are destroying it. As meteors fall upon the hopeless blue planet, spacecrafts ship off into space. We then see a man shoving two boys onto a ship.
Older Boy: Father no! Don't leave us!
Man: Goodbye.....my sons.
The spacecraft then sped off into space. Unfortunatly it is hit by a meteor soon after departure and explodes. Luckily for the two boys, they escaped death on an escape ship. The young boy could only look in horror as his planet explodes.
Older Boy: Dammit! The explosion from the planet is gonna kill us!
He then went to then controls of the ship. Sweat went down his head as he struggled to control the ship.
Older Boy: Comon you piece of shit! Work!
The explosion was going to obliterate them when he had a stroke of genius.
Older Boy: Aha! The warp button!
He then slammed the button with his fist and the ship sped off at light speed. He could see the stars fly passed him at amazing speeds. The ship rumbled as the flew through demensions. A few moments later they were in another galaxy. Inside the ship, the boy pushed the auto pilot button and slowly took his hands off the controls. He was shaking with fear.
Older Boy: They're.....They're gone. Father....Mother...they're dead.
The younger boy, who was knocked unconscious from fighting the black, demonic creatures , had began to awaken.
Younger Boy: What......What happened? I was in a battle.
The Older Boy just stood there.
Younger Boy: Gallack where are Mom and Dad?
Gallack: They are fine. We are just gonna be on our own for awhile.
Young Boy: How long?
Gallack: Could be months, could be years. But before we do anything there is something I want you to know Codrea.
Gallack then turned around with an angry face and began to yell.
Gallack: There is'nt going to be any crying are whining! You got that runt?!
Codrea nodded with a scared look in his eyes.
Gallack: Good cuz we are continuing your training as soon as we find a planet to stay. You still can't control energy blasts.
Codrea: What do I need to train for?! I'm already know how to control energy blasts!
Gallack: Don't give me that crap. You may be able to control energy blasts for awhile. Until you lose all focus and waste all your enregy completely!
Codrea crossed his arms and tuned his head. He knew his brother was right. He could'nt control energy blasts, but his arrogance would not let him admit it.
Gallack Thinking to himself) I think its best not to tell him about Mom and Dad until he is a little older.
The lights in the ship suddenly began to flash red.
Gallack: What the hell is going on? I have to land on a nearby planet.
He then noticed a red planet on his left.
Gallack: We'll land here.
Gallack then flew the ship down to the mysterious red planet. He and Codrea exited the ship and looked around. Gallack did'nt see any buildings or any kind of life. All he saw was a forest of red, spiky rocks.
Gallack: This is the perfect place to train. You ready runt?
Codrea tried to remember his training on his old planet, Crotan.
Codrea: Ugh what am I supposed to do again???
Gallack: I'm assuming your pretty drained of your energy, correct??
Codrea then punched a rock on his left. Normally, he would be able to crush the rock to pieces. Instead his knuckles were sore and red. He began to groan in pain.
Codrea: Owwwww! Apparently so!
Gallack: Good. Being able to release large amounts of energy, even when your tired, is an important trait on the battlefeild. You see where I'm going with this??
Codrea: Yeah. Lets do it.
Codrea then stretched out his legs and squeezed his right hand.
Gallack: Remember just concentrate your energy into your palm.
Codrea sqeezed tighter as his viens popped out of his head and sweat dropped down his face. The winds started to pick up and dust flew around Codrea. He was'nt moving at all, he was focusing only on his hand. It was like nature was responding to him. A few moments later a small spark lit up in his palm. It fazed out after a few seconds. He then collapsed to his knees, breathing heavily.
Codrea: Darn it! I still cant do it!
Gallack groaned in disappiontment.
Gallack: This is the last time I'll show you.
He the extended his arm and concentrated on a large rock rock. About 5 seconds later, a ball of energy launched out his palm and blew the rock into pieces. Chunks of motar flew everywhere.
Gallack: It works better if you focus on a target.
This was the 15th time he had seen his brother do this but he could'nt help being amazed.
Gallack: Now you try.
Codrea then turned to his left to see another large rock. He then began to pose in a weird stance.
Gallack: ( Thinking to himself) What the hell does he think he is doing?
An energy ball began to take shape in his hands.
Codrea: Peeelllettt.....
The force from the energy attack was causing lightning to strike the ground.
Codrea: Gunnnnnn!!!!
The energy ball seemed like it would destroy the rock along with half of the plain that they were standing on. But before it hit the rock it shrunk to the size of a tennis ball. It barely even scathed the rock.
Gallack: Thats it! You pathetic weakling! You will never master it because youre nothing but a piece of trash!
Codrea then clunched his his fist. Red energy surged around it
Codrea: Shut up....Someday......
He then rushed at his brother with amazing speed. He was raising his fist.
Codrea: I will be the strongest!!!!!!!!
He then punched at his brother, aiming for his head.
Gallack dogded to the left before Codrea's attack connected with his face.
Codrea's attack instead went straight into a giant rock pillar, causing it to crumble to pieces. Codrea was now breathing heavily.
Codrea: Did I....Did I do that?
Gallack: ( Thinking to himself) Looks like he can only tap his power when he is really pissed. I have never seen him with such power. What a strange enrgy channel.
Gallack: Good job you passed the 1st test. Now lets go back to the ship and rest for awhile.
Codrea then collasped on the ground. Gallack picked up Codrea and returned to the ship, where they rested for 30 minutes.
Galick: Computer scan for any life on this planet.
The computer had a green line scan up and down the screen but gave no answer.
Codrea then came out of a room wearing silver armor padding. He had just awakened from his nap.
Codrea: Ah. I feel great!! Nothing like a good nap.
Gallack: Thats strange. There is no life at all on this planet. Codrea go scout this planet and see if you find anyone or anything.
Codrea did'nt really want to do it but he knew what would happen if he pissed his brother off.
Codrea: Alright.
Codrea pressed a button and the metallic door slid open. He stepped outside and jumped 500 ft. in the air and started to fly at sonic speed.
I know what your thinking. WTF? Well on Codrea's former planet, Kruton, the people there are born with superhuman strength, speed, and senses. When they are around 5 years old they learn how to control their ki, or inner energy, inabling them to fly or create energy blasts. So there you have it. Now back to our story......
Codrea grinned as the wind blew in his brown, black, and spiky hair. He loved to fly. It gave him a sense of freedom. But what he saw below mystified him. He saw a large city but no one was there. Codrea then landed on the ground.
Codrea: This place is creepy. I see buildings, but there is no one here.
Codrea then walked slowly down the deserted streets. What he did'nt know was that someone or something was staring at him with glowing red eyes. He quickly glanced behind him, but nothing was there. He then continued walking down the street when suddenly a huge creature flew out of the ground leavind a giant hole. Codrea stood in place wide eyed.
Codrea: What...What the heck is that?!