Altered Scenes

[Soulfire]

Okay, here's how it works. I will check the replies on this site and all the other sites that I post this on. I encourage everyone to suggest more scenes for me to change into funny parts or whatever. Please remember to leave the episode number, and how far through the episode it is, though!

Anyway, I'll begin with one I thought up earlier today. Episode 3, where Sakura is about to kiss 'Sasuke'...

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'He's become accustomed to interfering with my love. He's having fun looking at me having trouble. Naruto knows nothing about me. He's just annoying. I just want you to accept me, Sasuke-kun.'

'Just for me to accept you?'

'I'll do anything...' Sakura said as she leaned in to kiss Naruto with her eyes closed. Naruto could feel his heart pounding madly as he stared at the beautiful girl in front of him.

'I'm desperate.'

'I finally know why... I like Sakura-chan so much,' Naruto thought to himself. As he leaned in as well, the gap between them was slowly closing... and then their lips connected.

A surge of adrenaline flowed through Naruto's body, seconds before he felt a pain in his gut. Not wanting to break the kiss, Naruto opened his mouth and allowed Sakura's playful tongue to wander inside his mouth, teased by his own tongue.

A soft 'poof' sound later, and Naruto was back in his own body, still busy kissing Sakura. He hoped she would keep her eyes closed...

Sakura was being adventurous with her tongue when she felt a distinct change in Sasuke. He started tasting of ramen... RAMEN?

Sakura opened her eyes wide, realising she had locked lips with a sweating Naruto. But for some reason, the pleasure she felt still remained. Still in shock, all she could do was speak, her speech slightly muffled.

'Naruto...'

His eyes snapped open, now as wide as hers. His sweat trickled down his face as he awaited his doom at Sakura's hands.

'Use more tongue next time.'

THE END

[Soulfire]

As he trudged along the dirt path that led through the forest, Naruto came upon a familiar sight... the area where he became a Genin. But someone else was there with him. Hinata was there. He had vowed to avenge her defeat, and planned to do so. He did not know what made him make that foolish proclamation a month ago. Hell, he hardly even knew the girl. But something inside told him that she knew him, more than he thought she did. Hinata appeared to be in contemplation, and seemed shocked when he called her name.

'Hinata?'

Hinata bolted behind the nearest training stump, apparently trying to hide from Naruto.

'Naruto-kun...! Why did you come here? Isn't today the main matches?'

Naruto lowered his head slightly before speaking.

'I, uh... you know. I just came to see this training area. Since this is where I became a Genin.'

'Really? But why?'

'We all have places that are special to us, Hinata. This is one of mine.'

'Mine too, Naruto-kun...'

'Hinata... Neji is your relative, right?'

'Yes.'

'Is he strong?'

'Yes.'

'I see. Then I'll beat him... for you.'

'Naruto-kun? For me?'

It was at this point that both Naruto and Hinata turned so red that they appeared to glow crimson. Naruto gulped and took a step towards Hinata, who did nothing.

'But I have a favour to ask of you, Hinata-chan...'

If possible, Hinata's blush deepened.

'Will you... will you cheer for me?'

Another step. Another increase in the blushing.

'Y-yes, Naruto-kun!'

Naruto was now directly in front of Hinata, and they stared at each other. Naruto grabbed Hinata's hands, causing her to freeze for a second before smiling at him.

'Promise me?'

'P-promise, Naruto-kun.'

Neither of them knew just who started it, but somehow they found themselves kissing slowly, Naruto still clasping Hinata's hands together. They broke the kiss when fireworks started going off.

'Damn... I have to go now Hinata. Be sure to come and watch me beat Neji...'

As he ran towards the arena, Hinata whispered quietly.

'I'll cheer for you, Naruto-kun... I promise.'

THE END

[bonkers]

Wooopoopoopopopo , that's so cool , hehe , loving it

I wished those 2 got together

[Soulfire]

I wished those 2 got together

Yay! Me glad! But, um... which two? Naruto & Sakura or Naruto & Hinata? I'm guessing the latter, since everyone seems to hate NaruSaku... :(

naw i dont hate sakura, i just wish she was more useful, and the first one was somewhat funny i can actually imagine that one.

[Soulfire]

i just wish she was more useful, and the first one was somewhat funny i can actually imagine that one.

I was torn between that and having Naruto get the crap kicked out of him. But the shippie within won the internal battle against the angst fan within.

[Richard0]

I LIKE BEGINNING OF SASUSAKU AND THEN NARUSAKU . for ex Sakura spends the day with Sasuke and then bit by bit sasuke realizes his likes her then as naruto follows her around bugging her about who her new bf was she thinks he's kind of cute and then theres a luv triangle...i dont care how yu continue it after that.

anyway i liked the narusaku but not much about the naruhina