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Erosannin
02-04-2008, 07:36 PM
From Your Husband

I remember that moment, a long time ago.
Expecting not a single hope, too ready to say, “No.”
Yet there I was thinking myself “why should I let it go?”
“Take a chance,” was what I heard. My brother told me so.
I prepped myself yet pondered, “Will this be end in woe?”
For I had scarred too many, my confidence was low.
Tender heart I once had, replaced by the sorrow.
Always missed chances, for I was too slow.
But as I gambled my heart, a little did I
Know. As quickly as I met her,
We soon made our
Vow.

I managed to get it rymed but failed at creating a stupid heart-shape... Anyhow enjoy... and be sure to remember:

Love is in the air...
So make sure you prepare,
Or you'll face the wrath of your loved ones, this I swear!!

ihc
02-05-2008, 06:28 PM
lol very 'different'

but its sweet you wrote it for your wife ^0^

Thistle
02-05-2008, 06:31 PM
Wow Ero i am impressed. How did i overlook that little gem until now...it rivals the epic Iliad or the beauty of poetry from Chaucer, Yeats or the Vogons (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vogon_poetry) :p

Chidongan
02-05-2008, 06:33 PM
Damn! Thats really good. I like it. ^_^