C- rank mission: Taking what other has taken before you.

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Okay Just made up this thread and wil hopefully begin rping this mission tommorrow. :banana:

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““Shun stood outside the gates of the town were his first mission would enfold he was wet down to his bones and the wind who had send wave after wave with fresh wind hadn’t done the situation better. The guard who has escorted him to the gates because he was seen as a newbie was now gone.””

Shun: well here I am.

“”The main road in to the town was muddy and it looked dirty a lot garbage was just thrown outside the houses and rats ran in the shadows between the houses. There wasn’t a living soul to see as he went down the town felt like it was abandoned many years ago.””

Shun: Now what was the name of the shop I should work on? Lets see here.

“”Shun took up a scroll who also was dripping water.””

Shun: damn rain, lets see hmmmm…………………………
Ahhh here Arnolds store this guy cant be much of a creative person.

“”Shun went down the road through the city to the location he was described. In the scroll he had gotten some days after the mission was given to him. As he went in he noticed that the only place which was clean where around the shop.””

Shun: Well he know how to get customers.

SFX: kling kling

Old Man: Welcome customer what can I get you.

Shun: ehhm I am not a customer I am the help you searched.

Old Man: Ohhh yeah I forgot you know how old people are a little senile you know. Well nice to meet you. My name is Arnold.

Shun: I would never have guessed.

“”As he said hey to his client for the next days or maybe weeks, he saw that the old man had followed the clean stylefrom outside everything was in perfect order. The store in itself was small, but as he looked the old man had really done a neat job with putting everything so it used available space without using a lot of space in the middle.””

Shun: Nice shop do you have a lot of customers?

Arnold: Hmm these days are pretty hard to get business around, but I am one of the lucky I have built up a loyal customer base, but at the summer I get a lot more customers. So I can handle hard times.

Shun: Yeah the store is nice, but do you have a place I can dry my clothes, and get a nice bed to sleep I am exhausted.

Arnold: Of course I will make it ready didn’t think you would get here because of the rain.
End of day 1 in the mission.


OOC: sorry for not posting, but I havent got my lazy ass to open word.

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OOC: because I dont like my story and have found a better one more my usual storys that I never ends I will have more assassins revenge story.

""Shun woke up he had a terribly feeling that something was wrong the feeling had been with him the day he found the inn, but then he had just blowed it away. This day he had dreamt that his homevillage up in the village hidden by the big valley was in fire he had heard the screams and all thoose who got torned up by the fire. As he moved closer he saw people run for their life they felled down dead as he saw up masked men used uknown jutsus or other things to kill the civilians the guards were setting up a heavy resistance. But with no real commander they fell fast as the black masked guys moved into the citadel shun woke up.""

Arnold: you got a good night sleep

Shun: I have to go something has happened I know it.

Arnold: So you felt it to?

Shun: what do you mean?

Arnold: you had the same dream as me I suppose a village burning down by unkown attackers.

Shun: Yes I have to see if everything is okay with my family

Arnold: I have been in the village many times I know of the fastest way.

Shun: Lets go then you believe you can follow me.

Arnold: Of course I may seem old, but inside I am still a youngster.

Shun: what about your leg and injury?

Arnold: That was just an excuse come lets go with this tunel I have here we will get up in the mountains by 12.

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""Shun Climbed up from the hole he had been in for an hour the tunnel had been muddy and rats all over the place the air hadnt been much to brag about either. He was now standing near the edge of a mountain and he watched up as the old man crawled his way up. Shun looked up and from where he stood he could see the smoke coming from the valley.""

Arnold: So it was true then.

Shun: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arnold: Relax boy you can never get up that mountain without exhausting you and me we will take this carved tunel to the other side you will nearly be whats left of the gates.

""They walked to a steep mountain side as they came closer they saw that the gate who had been hided was breaked up by something. Shun walked to the door he sat down watching the ground.""

Shun: Arnold this seems to be explosives note, but I hav enever seen anything like it. In our training at the academy we learnt how to use them to bomb make way into another room and catching guards victims. But its one of ours that I am sure take a look.

Arnold: This is a silenced explosive note it was made by some of this village scientists it was a prototype as I see it know this explosive will never reach the masses. As a seconf thought someone must have made way for your citys attackers so there is some who has betrayed your village.

Shun: I wanna see it for myself.

""Again they went inot a tunnel, but in this tunnel there where dead bodys everywhere some was of the unknown attackers some where of the royal army and others where merely guards blood was still in dams. Some guards was blown in pieces Shun crouched down and looked at the blown up guards. As he did he saw the pieces of paper the same paper that was at the exit.""

Shun: Silenced exploisve notes here to.

""They reached the exit and what they could see was a great city burnt to ashes in one singel night, the wood was still burning. Shun turned around""

Shun: I wanna find my family and atleast give them a last goodbye. I believe my dad would be at the palace I will see to him first.

""They walked true the ruins watching every step they took and always holding their senses at high alert in case some forces was left. They came to the palace that was still the only place who still stood up. (OOC: will be short here here I am just to tired) He found his father lying with sevreal wounds some bigger then others it seemed he was dreaming a nice dream. They carried him to he graveyard for especially made for the elite assassins that was the place the sun first striked the bottom of the valley. They then went to their house where both his grandparents where and his mother trying to defend them. After a touching funeral and a handmade grave whith a rock over where it stood.""

My Family Taiki
Your son is honoring you!
Rest in peace
Your dearest Shun

Arnold: There isnt much more to be done here then make some flowers on the grave. I will get some for you.

""When Shun and the old man walked away a beam of sun shined upon the now destroyed village of Fujiwara. As the two went inside the tunnel also the birds began singing.""

Arnold: Do you hear it they are singing for this citys rebirth.

Shun: Your mad. I dont wanna be here anylonger.


Mission failed, but a new story reveals.

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4/10

Since it was a failure 0 pay.

Since you actually wrote some stuff and it wasn't horribly done I'll give you 2XP, also since it had value for story.

[zimmer]

yey thanks now I will let this thread sink to the endless bottom of missions and thanks I had actually thougt of making it longer as said, but I felt the story wasnt to motivating enough for me to write about it.