Jey
01-22-2008, 09:30 PM
In here I will just post my story one segment at a time, please post while in between chapters. Next chapter expect in Febuary.
The GateWay
Prologue
My name is Edward Asyuf, I'm one of the worst criminals in the past world, untill I get the turn around I actually needed.
"I'll get ya this time eddy!" The bounty hunter yelled leaning on his gun on top of his truck.
"Hehehe, what is this 14 or 15?" I joked
"Bastard!" He yelled pointing his gun at me and firing.
Jumping to the side I ran at him jumping on top of the truck kicking him twice in the head throwing his gun away as he fell off the truck, jumping down I kick him as he's getting up throwing him a little. "I don't think today's your day."
I turn to his truck and rip the door off, reach inside and rip the stearing will out, tossed it at him and walked away.
"Well then now that he's done with-"
"Edward Asyuf?" Someone said from the bushes, "Please I just want to talk"
"What is it?" I demanded
"I need your help getting my brother back, I'll give you 100 pieces." She pleaded.
"Keep your pocket change, Show me where he is." I ordered.
She stood and pointed at a path and started walking, I followed watching her. "You're actually considered a hero to our country, I thank you."
"Why would you think that?"
"You have ended all the country bullying to us, and we have more to say for ourselfs now." She said.
Reaching a building in the distance all she knew was that he was in there and his name. I go up there alone reaching the door, standing there looking around. Making sure the camera saw me. Then I knocked on the door. I heard someone talking and then someone opened the door, I kicked them in the chest throwing them into a table, I enter and around the corner someone swings a staff, ducking under it I swing my foot up kicking him in the head bouncing his head off the wall. I turn around and look at their charts to find him, a few seconds pass and right as I find it, the security comes running from both sides and get a look at me grinning. Someone from behind them came through the crowd of uniforms, and old man in a robe, "Edward Asyuf? I didn't expect to see you here, well maybe we can use you to test something." He aimed a gun at me and fired as I struggled to get to him petrifying me into a frozed stone.
The GateWay
Prologue
My name is Edward Asyuf, I'm one of the worst criminals in the past world, untill I get the turn around I actually needed.
"I'll get ya this time eddy!" The bounty hunter yelled leaning on his gun on top of his truck.
"Hehehe, what is this 14 or 15?" I joked
"Bastard!" He yelled pointing his gun at me and firing.
Jumping to the side I ran at him jumping on top of the truck kicking him twice in the head throwing his gun away as he fell off the truck, jumping down I kick him as he's getting up throwing him a little. "I don't think today's your day."
I turn to his truck and rip the door off, reach inside and rip the stearing will out, tossed it at him and walked away.
"Well then now that he's done with-"
"Edward Asyuf?" Someone said from the bushes, "Please I just want to talk"
"What is it?" I demanded
"I need your help getting my brother back, I'll give you 100 pieces." She pleaded.
"Keep your pocket change, Show me where he is." I ordered.
She stood and pointed at a path and started walking, I followed watching her. "You're actually considered a hero to our country, I thank you."
"Why would you think that?"
"You have ended all the country bullying to us, and we have more to say for ourselfs now." She said.
Reaching a building in the distance all she knew was that he was in there and his name. I go up there alone reaching the door, standing there looking around. Making sure the camera saw me. Then I knocked on the door. I heard someone talking and then someone opened the door, I kicked them in the chest throwing them into a table, I enter and around the corner someone swings a staff, ducking under it I swing my foot up kicking him in the head bouncing his head off the wall. I turn around and look at their charts to find him, a few seconds pass and right as I find it, the security comes running from both sides and get a look at me grinning. Someone from behind them came through the crowd of uniforms, and old man in a robe, "Edward Asyuf? I didn't expect to see you here, well maybe we can use you to test something." He aimed a gun at me and fired as I struggled to get to him petrifying me into a frozed stone.