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Anbu Dr J
07-03-2004, 09:26 PM
well i thought this was a really good fic and i wanted to post it up but i gotta get temjinxzarron's permission so if i get it ill post it up
ayamexzarron
07-06-2004, 03:30 AM
Yea why dont you temjin?
temjinxzarron
07-06-2004, 03:44 AM
Ayame!!? what in the world are you doing here!? Also do you really think that i shoud put this fic here?
Anbu Dr J
07-06-2004, 03:47 AM
yes!!! its such a great fic and it needs to be read!
EDIT:wait a sec...are xzarron like a clan or something? or are you just friends that want similar user names?
temjinxzarron
07-06-2004, 03:56 AM
yes!!! its such a great fic and it needs to be read!
EDIT:wait a sec...are xzarron like a clan or something? or are you just friends that want similar user names?
Yep! She is a friend of mine. In fact she was the one who convince me to start writting the bet in the first place! Without her i would have never have wrote it. I know that she is using the x zarron name to promote some of her other works that she is working on.
Anbu Dr J
07-06-2004, 03:57 AM
ahhh i see i was about to say..."MORE XZARRONS?!? A CLAN!?!?! AUGHHHH SO MANY FANFICS SO LITTLE TIME!"
temjinxzarron
07-06-2004, 04:16 AM
You know...
but as far as the fan fic goes let me think for a bit...
because i am very nervious about putting this fic on this forum.
Anbu Dr J
07-09-2004, 01:13 AM
WELL GOOD NEWS! temjin has finally decided to put the fic here at narutochaos forums!! YAY!! so ill be posting it up a bit by bit!!
The Bet
AN: The characters are 17 in my story.
Disclaimer: NO I DON’T OWN NARUTO
Summary: Naruto and Hinata are finally together. Hinata makes a two week bet with Naruto that could end Naruto’s life. NO RAMEN FOR 2 WEEKS!
Hinata and Naruto have been dating for about 6 months now. Ever since they figured out that they truly had feelings for one another they are never seen apart. Both ninjas have improved dramatically because of it. That’s the main reason why their jounins never questioned their relationship. Hinata has become a lot more confident and her abilities skyrocketed. Naruto on the other hand has become a lot quieter. More composed and balanced because of her. Also adding the fact that Naruto taught Hinata the kage bunshin was a plus. One day after seeing a movie, Naruto wanted to get some ramen, made an idea pop into Hinata’s head.
“Naruto-kun, I bet you couldn’t possibility stand living without ramen could you?”
Naruto smiled “Well it’s my favorite food and yes I could go with out it for a while.”
“No you can’t.” Hinata said bluntly.
“Yes I can!” Naruto replied back.
“Perfect, just where I want you.” Hinata thought. “Well then prove it Naruto-kun. I bet you that you couldn’t go without ramen for two whole weeks.”
“What do I get if I win?” Naruto asked thinking of all the things Hinata could do if he won the bet. Some of the things that he thought of were quite naughty but he quickly shook those thoughts out of his mind.
“Simple,” she said. “I will do one favor, anything you want. As long as it’s not too over the top.”
“...And if I loose?” Naruto said still confident. Hinata then smiled and looked at Naruto with an almost evil grin. Naruto’s confident smile quickly went away.
“Simple, I will pick out a dress that you will have to wear. After a picture of you in a dress, you will get formally dressed and take me to that restaurant over there.” Hinata pointed at the restaurant that she was talking about.
“HOLY CRAP!!!” Naruto thought as he saw the restaurant. Then he turned to Hinata who was still smiling. “But that’s the most expensive place in the village!” Naruto almost yelled.
“Exactly,” Hinata said.
As they were walking, Hinata spotted Sakura walking along. Hinata walked up to her. “Hi Sakura, how are you doing.”
“Fine I guess.” Sakura replied back. Hinata smiled.
“Listen,” She said slyly to Sakura. “Naruto and I have made a bet. He is not allowed to eat ramen for two whole weeks.” Sakura eyes widened.
“Whoa, are you sure you won’t kill him by doing that?” Sakura asked.
“Nah, but I need you to spread the word about it. Got it?” Hinata smiled and winked.
Hinata told all the rest of the details of the bet to Sakura who laugh at it all.
“Okay Hinata; I will be sure to tell everyone.” Sakura said while turning to Naruto. “Good luck, you’re gonna need it.” She said to Naruto while running to spread the news. Naruto sighed and walked the rest to the way with Hinata, to her house.
“Man, not only do I get totally embarrassment by having to wear a dress, but also a huge hole drilled in my wallet for that restaurant.” Naruto thought. He knew he could afford to loose this bet. And he knew he would want that “special favor” from Hinata by winning the bet.
“Well the bet officially starts now.” Hinata said at that they stopped by her house. She gave Naruto a quick kiss and ran inside.
“This is going to be the longest two weeks of my life.” Naruto thought as he started to head back to his own apartment.
Anbu Dr J
07-09-2004, 01:14 AM
The Bet by TemjinxZarron
Disclaimer: No own Naruto
AN: Sorry that this chapter took so long but I did a retarded thing of starting 3 freaking fics at once. So I am going to do a chapter a piece for each one. So after this chapter there won’t be another one until I finished the next chapters for my other two stories.
Act 2: first strike.
“No please don’t.” Naruto screamed. “Stop it, I’ll do anything! Just please don’t; NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY RAMEN!” Naruto woke up drenched in sweat from a nightmare. In it Hinata had burnt down all the ramen and ramen shops in the village.
“Man I gotta get over this.” He thought. “And besides; it is only for two weeks. I could last that long.” Naruto got up from bed and got showered and dressed. When he opened the cupboard in his kitchen he saw nothing but ramen. Out of instinct he reached for a cup, opened it, and starting to cook it. When he was about to take that first bite he remembered he bet. Well it was more like he saw himself in a dress in front of a laughing Hinata.
“HOLY CRAP,” Naruto shouted as he quickly threw the ramen away. Just then he heard a knock at the door. “Who is it?” Naruto said while walking towards the door.
“Me, open up, I got something for you.” Hinata said on the other side. Naruto opened the door to find Hinata standing there with a large lunch pack.
“Here,” she said while giving him a quick peck on the cheek. “I know that you will be training with Jiraiya-sama today so I thought that I would bring you something to eat while you train.”
“Thanks Hinata-chan.” Naruto smiled returning her previous kiss. That’s when he realized something. “Okay Hinata-chan, spill it.”
“What ever so do you mean?” Hinata asked sweetly with a small yet evil smile on her face.
“I know what you’re trying to do and you will not break me.” He said bluntly.
“No I’m not.” She said sweetly. “Because one; I know that you will eventually crack and two if you want you could look inside the box.” Naruto opened the box and looked inside. There was everything you could think of except for ramen. There was even a thermos for drinking. Naruto then closed the box and looked at her.
“Well Thanks Hinata-chan.” He said smiling. He kissed her on the cheek again and ran to go see Jiraiya.
“You’re going to fail this bet faster that you realize Naruto-kun. I will see you in that dress!” She thought evilly smiling to herself as she ran off to meet her team.
*During the course of the day*
“Man I am hungry!” Naruto shouted as he sat down behind a tree. Naruto pulled out the lunch that Hinata made for him earlier which caught Jiraiya eye.
“Lunch made by the one you love huh?” Jiraiya said jeeringly. Naruto had a deep blush on his cheeks.
“Well.........ah....if.... if you would stop peeking at women all the time maybe you would have someone by now.” Naruto quickly said. Jiraiya just snorted and looked away.
“Well for me being single is the way to live.” Jiraiya said as he opened a notebook with all of his next ideas for writing his next novel.
As Naruto was eating; he ate some very hot peppers too fast and started to pant. “Awww man *pant* need something *pant* to drink. As Naruto was panting the saw the thermos Hinata also packed for him. As he opened it up, he noticed that there was something very hot inside. “Oh well,” he thought still panting. “As long as it takes care of my mouth” As he went to take a sip he noticed the smell coming form the thermos. It was a hot and addicting smell.
“Hinata-chan sweetheart, you’re so very cold and heartless for this.” Naruto thought as he closed the thermos back and walked toward Jiraiya with it. “Hey Jiraiya I’m full and I really don’t want this to go to waste.” He said as he tossed the thermos to Jiraiya. Jiraiya opened it and looked inside.
“Miso ramen,” Jiraiya said looking towards Naruto.
“Well Ero-Sennin I have to go.” Naruto said as he was walking back to his house. At his house he took a shower and walked into the kitchen. He remembered this morning and decided that he would have to lock up the ramen so he couldn’t get it until after the two weeks. He packed all the ramen in a suitcase and put it in a closet. Then he literally chained and locked the closet door. “Well now I got to figure out whom to give this key to.” Then he thought of the one person who would never give the key away. “Shikamaru,” he thought. “Surely he can keep this from me until the bet is over.” He put the key into his pocket and ran out the door.
“Where are you going so fast,” Asked a voice on the side of him.
“Oh Sakura hi,” He said while walking over to her still fidgeting with the key in his pocket. Then he looked over her, to the left and right of her. “I am going to see Shikamaru since I haven’t talked to him in awhile. Say you haven’t seen Hinata-chan around her have you?”
“Why no I can’t say that I have.” She said. “Well anyway I have to be on my way; I gotta go see Sasuke.” With that she and Naruto left on their separate ways.
“So he is trying to give that key to Shikamaru huh?” Hinata said with a small but strange blush on her cheeks.
“Yea,” Sakura simply replied. “Why am I even helping you with this?” Sakura also commented a little annoyed. Hinata looked and smiled.
“Four words Sakura-chan,” Hinata said still smiling and still blushing. “Naruto in a dress.” Sakura grinned.
“I would love to see that but are you sure we should be spying on him like this? I mean I know you can easily with the byakuagan and all but,”
“Don’t worry about it.” Hinata said. “Even if he knows he will just only tell us to stop.”
“Well okay,” Sakura said as she was leaving. “I guess if you don’t see him naked in the shower or anything I guess its okay. Well anyway I gotta go see Sasuke, Bye.” As Sakura left she didn’t see that the small blush on Hinata face grew into a HUGE crimson blush.
AN: Well that another chapter. You probably won’t see another chapter for the next day or two but hey things can happen. Until then Bye ^___^.
Lukasz
07-09-2004, 06:51 AM
hehe wanting more :)
very good.
byakugan is cool ;)
Anbu Dr J
07-12-2004, 10:55 PM
Disclaimer: Still don’t own Naruto.
The Bet Act 3: Joining sides
Naruto was jogging over to Shikamaru house determined to get the key over to him. He was also careful to dodge all ramen stands and stores on the way. When he finally got here he saw Ino sitting there in front of his house.
“Oh hey Ino, how are you doing?” Naruto asked.
“It’s fine. I just wish that Shikamaru would hurry the hell up. I mean, were already late with the meting with Asuma-sensei.” Ino said sounding irritated. Then both Nartuo and Ino saw Shikamaru walk outside his house and towards them.
“Hey Ino,” Naruto said. Ino looked at him. “Could Shikamaru and I have a private word alone please?” Ino thought for awhile.
“Okay but hurry up; we don’t have much time.” Ino said as she was walking away. Shikamaru was really surprised at that comment.
“Ino would never leave a private conversation like that. She loves to listen in to everything and spread gossip like wildfire.” Shikamaru thought. Meanwhile not seen by Naruto and Shikamaru Ino had an evil grin on her face.
“Hinata told me about that key Naruto. I know everything about the bet and I going to make sure that Hinata wins!” Ino thought evilly.
“Hey Shikamaru, I need you to hold on to something for me.” Naruto said as he handed the key over to him.
“Why should I do such a troublesome thing?” Shikamaru asked with a bored expression on his face.
“Just do it. Please man I really need your help.” Naruto pleaded. Shikamaru thought about it and took the key.
“How troublesome,” he said as he was putting the key in his pocket.
“Hey! Are you ready yet?” Ino shouted.
“Yea, yea I’m coming.” Shikamaru said as he was approaching Ino. As Naruto was starting to walk home he saw Hinata walking towards him.
“Oi, Hinata-chan,” Naruto called out. Hinata looked up and looked up at him.
“Naruto-kun,” she called out as he ran over to him. She gave him a quick peck on the cheek and smiled. “So did you enjoy my “special thermos”.” Hinata smile turned into a grin within a blink of an eye.
“You packed so much food for me; I got full before I could drink what was in the thermos. And since I didn’t want your delicious food to go to waste I gave it to Ero-Sennin.” Naruto simply replied. Hinata frowned because she knew that he wasn’t lying.
“That’s okay Naruto-kun sweetie.” Hinata thought. “I KNOW I can break you.”
“Well what are you doing out here alone?” Naruto asked.
“Well training with my team kinda made me late. Anyways wanna walk me home?” Naruto looked at her and gave her another kiss this time making her blush.
“Of course I will!” Naruto almost shouted. The two started to walk to Hinata house. Where they got there they shared one more passionate kiss before departing. When Naruto got home he just plopped on this bed and went to sleep.
For the next few days Naruto was slowly starting to succumb to not having ramen. He needed it. But that was not the thing that scared him the most. What scared him was the fact that it seemed that Hinata forgot all about the bet. Hinata made both their lunches at times and when he looked in them he saw that there was no ramen in any of them.
Well one extremely hot and humid day. Naruto was in a training session with Jiraiya. As Jiraiya was walking away form the training ground he noticed Naruto. I looked like Naruto was shaking like he was cold. He also noticed that Naruto was looking all over the place. Like he was scanning something with his eyes hoping to find what he was looking for.
“Um, Naruto are you okay?” Jiraiya asked. Naruto looked up at him and stared at him.
“Ra..........ra................RAMEN,” was all Naruto could get out. With that flash Naruto leaped onto Jiraiya and bit his hair trying to eat it.
“Naruto, get the hell off me!” Jiraiya yelled trying to get Naruto off him.
“This ramen is so good!” Came Naruto muffled voice as he continued to eat Jiraiya hair. Jiraiya looked around and saw a small creek near by. With a strong pull he managed to pull off Naruto and throw him into the stream.
“Naruto what’s wrong with you!” Jiraiya shouted while tending to his hair. Naruto climbed out of the stream coughing up water.
“Sorry Ero-Sennin; it’s just that................well I don’t know.” Naruto said still coughing. Naruto then told Jiraiya about the bet he made with Hinata. Jiraiya laughed at the whole thing.
“See I told you being single was the way to live!” Said a still laughing Jiraiya.
“Well I gotta figure out how to last somehow.” Naruto said.
“Well that’s okay I help you a little. As long as you’re around me you have nothing to worry about.” Jiraiya said as he was walking away.
“Where are you going?” Naruto asked.
“Where else to the bath house; I need more materials for my next novel.” Jiraiya proudly said. Naruto sighed at that comment and started to head home. Once Naruto got home he showered and had anything he could think of except ramen.
“Its not that all other foods are bad,” Naruto thought. “It just that I wished I could have ramen with all this.” Naruto was going to get some rest when he heard a knock at the door. Naruto opened the door to find an anbu standing there. “What is it?” Naruto asked a little puzzled. This was the first time something like this has happened to him.
“Hokage-sama would like to see you.” The anbu said bluntly.
“Okay whatever.” Naruto replied back. As both that anbu and Naruto head to the Hokage office Naruto suddenly thought of something. “Why would that old hag wanna see me?” When he arrived at the hokage office he saw Tsunade sitting there with some papers and some kinda of aroma candles burning. “Hey, I heard you wanted to see me. And what is with the candles?” Naruto asked. Tsunade looked up and saw Naruto.
“Oi, yes I wanted to see you. Have a seat,” Tsunade said pointing toward a seat. Naruto took a seat and looked at her. “Okay now then, since I know you want Konohamaru and his little friends on you’re team I just want to warn you that the Jonnin exams are going to start in 2 months so you better get ready.” Tsunade said rather bluntly as she was pouting something into two cups and handed one over to Naruto. “It’s not sake but its still pretty good.” Naruto took the cup and was about to drink when he thought of the thermos incident. Then everything came together for Naruto. He put the cup down and looked at Tsunade.
“Tsunade you’re lying about the reason why I am here.” Naruto said. Tsunade gave him a hard look.
“Oh, and what makes you say that?” Tsunade asked.
“Well even thought the Jonnin exam is coming in two months, the real reason is because you wanted me to drink this ramen broth. The aroma candles are for hiding the smell so I can’t smell it as well like last time.” Naruto then sat up and stared at the “young” Hokage. “H.........how.......................did she......................AND YOU......team up......just................just.................. HOW!?” was all Naruto could stutter.
“Hinata told me about the bet and I was trying to make you loose.” Tsunade said bluntly. “Not that you would’ve cracked anyway. Besides I placed money against you. With this bet there’s no way I could loose.” Naruto then sighed and turned around to walk out the door.
“I will win this bet!” Naruto shouted as he walked out the room and headed for home. Once home the only thing he could do is to go to bed and pray that Shikamaru and Jiraiya would come to his aid.
“Hey I should probably get Iruka to help also.” Naruto thought as he drifted to sleep.
Anbu Dr J
07-12-2004, 10:56 PM
The Bet Act 4: Extension
Naruto woke up still dreaming about delicious ramen. Ramen so good he could taste it. He looked around only to find a cold room of nothing. This was nothing new to him since he always stayed in that same apartment. But at least he had some sort of friends now. At least he had someone who loves him now. He had Hinata and that was all he needed. He took a quick shower and locked up. He didn’t feel like eating breakfast that morning since it only made him think of ramen. ‘Okay just one more week I could last at least that long.’ He thought to himself as he was walking out the door. Once he was out he decided to spend the day outside on the hills outside the busy parts of the village and relax for awhile since he didn’t have training with Jiraiya today. He laid down on his back and closed his eyes to listen to the sounds of nature.
‘This is very nice,’ he thought. The sun setting softly on his face; the gentle breeze of the wind blowing across him. It was truly wonderful. Then he felt someone who was lying beside him. He opened his eyes and turned his head only to see that Hinata was lying next to him. “Didn’t expect you to be here” he said.
“Well I got the day off the hospital today so I decided to find you.” She said. Both of them laid there not saying any words because for they didn’t need to. They could just tell what the other just by looks alone. When they both looked at each other thought; Hinata could tell instantly what Naruto was thinking. “You’re thinking about ramen aren’t you?” Hinata ginned at him and all Naruto could do was deny it.
“No I’m not. I’m thinking about this weather and you.” Hinata giggled.
“Yea, but you are still thinking about ramen. But hey how bout we up the ante a little. But if you’re scared that you are going to loose, which you are by the way, you could decline.” Naruto then sat up curious as in what Hinata was talking about.
‘Okay Hinata now you’ve done it! Of course I will take this bet and win it too!’ he thought to himself. “You mean double or nothing right.” He said. Hinata just nodded.
“Okay, a week has already passed since the bet has been made. If you could last at least two more days after the two weeks you get double the favor form me.” She said. Just then some extreme naughty thought entered Naruto mind. He tried to shake them out but couldn’t. Then he took a quick glance at Hinata and almost started drooling.
‘Oh crap!!’ he thought. ‘Please tell me I didn’t look at her with those thoughts in mind. If she just knew, I’m done for! Damn you Ero-Sennin, Damn you!!!!’ he nervously turned to see if Hinata was looking. Luckily she was looking away. ‘Saved,’ he thought totally unaware that Hinata face was bright red. She knew what Naruto had been thinking.
“A...a...any...anyway,” Hinata stuttered. “If I win you will have to take me to that restaurant twice instead of once. Also the dress thing is still on.” Naruto gulped. He knew that if he lost this then is wallet was going to be killed. He could picture the whole thing. Kakashi, Jiraiya, Iruka and all of his male friends dressed in all black for the funeral and burial of his soon to be deceased wallet.
“Deal only on one condition. No one can force feed me ramen. I don’t want somebody like that old hag Tsunade jumping me in the middle of the night just so she can force feed me ramen.” He said. Hinata giggled again but at the same time a little disappointed because asking Tsunade to do something like that would be a good idea. Then all of a sudden, an idea popped into her mind.
“What about me? Can’t I feed you?” she asked seductively. Naruto smiled.
“Well you can try but only after the two weeks were up okay.” He said still smiling. Hinata nodded.
“Why until after the two weeks?” She asked.
“Well I know that I can last two weeks then two more days wouldn’t be a problem. Also there is nothing you can do to convince me to eat ramen in that time anyway. Also if you try to before hand I win the bet okay?” Naruto said suddenly boosting with confidence. Hinata agreed.
‘Fine Naruto-kun’ she thought. ‘I already have an idea on how to get you to eat ramen.’ “Now I think we have more important things to do. Don’t you agree?” Hinata said having the smile turn into a grin.
“What do you........” Naruto said. Before he could get the rest of that sentence out Hinata gave him a kiss. Both laid there alone, sharing each others embrace and enjoying the day.
meanwhile
Ino and Shikamaru and Choji were busing training under the supervision of Asuma. Shikamaru and Choji were training while Ino was taking a little break.
‘Damn it how am I supposed to get that key!?’ Ino thought. She knew that Shikamaru was smart and getting that key was going to be difficult. ‘Wait a minute! I can use my jutsu and since he doesn’t know that I am after the key he wouldn’t know what or why I did it. Yea that would work! Besides, I could just tell him that I was practicing my jutsu, that’s all!’ Ino then turned to Shikamaru who was paying attention to Choji’s attacks. ‘Perfect,’ she thought as she was forming the seal for her mind switch jutsu. She activated the jutsu and perfectly hit him. ‘Alright perfect’ she thought as she looked around his chuunin vest to find the key. ‘Thank god he put it here.’ she thought. Meanwhile Asuma was looking at the whole thing and sighed.
‘I still can’t believe that she convince me to let her do this.’ He thought as he burned out the blunt end of the cigarette and started to light another. ‘And I am doing this all for cigarette money! Well at least with this bet I could get some of the money that Choji took form me form all the times I treated him at the restaurant.’ Then with another cigarette lighted, he put it in his mouth and started to enjoy the taste. ‘Man I really need to quit.’
After Ino got the key, she quickly ran over to her body and put the key in her pocket. She ran back and cancelled the jutsu.
“What huh,” Shikamaru said a little dizzy after the effect of the jutsu. But then he realized what had happened. “Ino, why did you do that?” He asked annoyed. Before Ino could say anything Asuma stepped in.
“Well this is training right? She was just practicing her jutsu on you since Choji was busing training with his multi-size.” He said. Shikamaru looked at Asuma annoyed. “Don’t worry though I made sure she didn’t do anything to embarrass you.”
“Well whatever.” Shikamaru said still annoyed. “Just warn me when you are going to do stuff like that again. It’s just so troublesome.” Shikamaru then walked off to find somewhere to sit and take a break. Ino looked at her sensei without a word and winked. Asuma nodded and knew that the deal between him and her was final.
Back with Naruto and Hinata
‘Oh man I need to ask Iruka will he help me with the bet.’ Naruto thought. He was still laying there with Hinata enjoying the weather since you rarely get off days like this. “Hey Hinata I need to go visit Iruka sensei for a little bit. See you around my place about 8?”
“Okay Naruto-kun,” Hinata said. He gave her one last kiss before leaving to Iuka’s place. Hinata kind, cute and innocent smile turned into an evil, devilish grin.
‘My dearest sweetheart Naruto-kun,’ she thought. ‘You think that Iruka is going to save you! ‘There is no way you he can because me, Sakura, Ino and my newly acquired member of my betting force Tenten will crush you!’ The she thought on how she Tenten to agree with her.
How Tenten agreed with Hinata
Tenten was hard to find but eventually Ino, Sakura and Hinata found her. Once they got her in a remote location, they told her about the bet and pop the question.
“So are you with us on this, huh Tenten?” Ino said. Tenten was still unsure. She didn’t want to be in other peoples business but the fact that seeing Naruto in a dress could be funny.
“So what’s in it for me?” Tenten asked.
“Simple,” Hinata said. “How bout we pay you. Also we could talk to Neji for you.” Tenten blushed.
“We just have a partner relationship, that’s all.” Tenten said. Hinata grinned.
“Oh I’m not so sure about that,” Ino said evilly. “We know.”
“We seen the way you look at him.” Sakura said evilly.
“We know what you want.” Hinata said.
“We know all!” All three girls said to Tenten.
“You want Neji and besides if we win maybe we could bet him and see Neji in a dress.” Hinata said while looking deeply into Tenten’s eyes. Tenten tried to resist the thought but couldn’t. The urge was too great.
“Okay, you win. What do I have to do?” Tenten sighed in defeat.
“Now that we got you all we need to do is to get the one man that can get to Naruto-kun most.” Hinata said. The other three girls looked at her. “We need to get Iruka sensei, since he is probably the only one besides me of course; to be so convincing to Naruto-kun.” With that all four girls left to find Iruka sensei.
Back with Hinata
‘Yea, Naruto-kun you WILL lose!’ Hinata thought as she was in the business side of the village doing some window shopping of the tuxedo that he will wear on their little date to that romantic restaurant. ‘And after the restaurant I have other plans for you Naruto-kun sweetheart.’
AN: Okay that was that chapter. Don’t worry about the Iruka part (I cut that out for the next chapter.) The next one will be longer thought. But tell me what you think. Also I have some really HUGE (and by that I mean BIG.) plans for the readers of my little fic. So like I always say please be nice and R&R. See ya
Anbu Dr J
07-12-2004, 10:56 PM
AN: Before I start with the story I want to say a big THANK YOU for all the reviews that you are giving me. If it wasn't for you I would probably stop writing this fic. Once again THANKS
The Bet: Act 5: Betrayal
Naruto knocked on Irukas' door. "Naruto, what are you doing here?" he asked. Iruka already knew why Naruto was there. He knew all about the bet and what it was about. He was just a little frightened about a little threat that he had received earlier.
Iruka little threat
It was a normal day for Iruka. He got up like usual, showered, made breakfast, sat down and ate. While he was eating he heard a knock at the door. 'Now I wonder who that could be.' He thought. As he opened the door, four girls stood there and forcedly made their way into his house. It was probably going to be the worst day ever in his life. One of the girls shut the door behind them and stood there while the other two surrounded Iruka. The one who seemed to be the leader just simply sat down on a chair and looked at him.
"You remember us?" One of the girls asked. Iruka nodded his head in curiously as in what they were doing.
"Yea, of course I do. Tenten, Sakura, Ino, and Hinata; how are you guys doing? And what do you need form me?" Hinata smirked as she got up from the chair.
"Nice of you to remember us." She said. "Well as far as what we want. It's not a want. It is a demand of what we want to do out for you." Iruka then looked a little irritated.
"Okay I would understand if this was an emergency but all you guys just bust in my house. Any you're demanding something out of me. There is nothing that you can say that..........."
"Rayila" Hinata said calmly. Iruka started to look scared.
'How in the world did they know her? I mean some of the other teachers and jounin know that we been dating for awhile. Besides that I thought she wanted to keep are relationship a little private until later on.'
"I know about her." Ino said. "You think that you could get away form me and all my gossip spreading knowledge! For one I know that you were buying flowers for her this afternoon and you that have been buying flowers for her occasionally. Trust me when I say there's nothing that I don't know when it comes to these things in konoha." Iruka just stood there with his mouth dropped. Then he just thought of something.
"Well so what if you know. What about it?" He said thinking he had the upper hand.
"Simple, I am having a little wager with Naruto." Hinata said.
"And what kind of bet are we talking about?" Iruka asked. Hinata grinned.
"He is not allowed to eat ramen for two weeks." Iruka eyes winded.
"Oh, my god! Are you trying to kill him!? And here I was thinking that you really loved him too! You're an evil person for making him go through that!" Iruka shouted. Hinata laughed.
"Well of course I love him! I always have. But I also love to have a little class also. I mean that ramen bars, walks through parks and movies and everything else are all lovely and I truly cherish all those times, but for once, just once I would like to go to a place like that restaurant and have a perfect romantic night with the one I love. You know like a princess to a prince. I mean come on! A girl has to have and deserves to have everything." Hinata said. All the other girls just nodded in her response. Iruka just looked down shaked his head.
"Hinata, you were always the quiet and shy type. What in the world made you change?" he asked. Hinata then tilt her head sideways and looked out the window. The put her finger on her lip and started to think.
"Let's see," Hinata said still thinking. "First really were Naruto-kun then Kurenai and Anko. In fact it was Kurenai and Anko who gave me my first advice about boys. In fact it was Kurenai who gave me the idea for this bet in the first place! Add the fact that I have been truly hanging out with Naruto-kun for 3 months and dating him for around 6 is enough to make one change even if one really doesn't want to." Hinata then turned back to Iruka and smiled. "Well this is where you come in. I need you to.........well.........persuade Naruto-kun to eat ramen. We know if anyone could do it you can."
"Yea and besides you would not want us to tell about Rayila would you." Sakura added. Tenten had an annoyed look like she wished Hinata and the others would hurry this up.
"So what if I don't?" Iruka asked. Hinata grinned.
"Hey Ino, Sakura, who do you think would really be a good person to tell Irukas little secret?" Hinata said still grinning. Sakura and Ino both smiled.
"Why how bout we tell Naruto. "Sakura said. Ino happily agreed which was a very rare thing. After looking at the four girls Iruka just nodded is head and agreed.
"Okay you guys win. Just please don't tell Naruto. I don't want him to know yet."
"Well why not?" asked a now curious Tenten.
"Because she is a very kind and shy woman and she really dislikes the spotlight a lot at least for now. She's the type that likes to keep things private." Iruka said.
"Well if that the case fine we won't tell. But you better let him know soon. He is going to get mad at you if you don't." Hinata said. Iruka agreed and all the girls walked out his door.
back with Naruto
"Iruka man I need you help. May I come inside?" Naruto asked. Iruka let Naruto in and both of them took a seat at the table. "
"So Naruto what can I help you with?" Iruka asked. Naruto looked at him and sighed.
"Well Hinata-chan and I have made this bet that I can't eat ramen for two weeks. So far I been doing okay but I don't think that I can last much longer. I need you to help me. So can you help?"
"Well why don't you try this." Iruka said while tossing a cup toward Naruto. Naruto looked at the cup and saw that it was some type of soy ramen like substitute. "I just got that myself. I only bought one cup just because; but you should try it." Naruto grinned. He just found a way to get around the bet.
'Man even if this stuff is really nasty, at least I would have something to last me for the rest of the two weeks' he thought. "Hey thanks." Naruto said. Before Naruto walked out, Iruka warned him about something.
"Hey before you eat that you should read the indigents and directions on the back first okay." Iruka said being as clear as possible. Naruto nodded his head and walked home. When Naruto got home he took off his jacket and walked over to his stove. He started to cook the ramen when he remembered the directions that Iruka was talking about. He turned over the cup to read the instructions only to find that they were not instructions. It was a warning. A warning form Iruka no less. It read:
'Listen Naruto, there is no substitute for ramen. This was a plan set up by me. Before you came to my house Hinata, Tenten, Ino, Sakura all visit my house today and made me do this. Listen I am going to help you out since they think that I am with them now. The four people that I mentioned before are all the ones I know that are trying to get you to eat ramen. Just be careful and hey, if you make it out of this there is something I will need to tell you. See ya and good luck'
Naruto then threw the cup in the trash. 'Okay Hinata-chan sweetheart.' He thought. 'Now it's war!' But then Naruto thought of something that truly scared him. 'Wait a minute if Ino is on Hinata side that means...' Naruto eyes suddenly widened, he knew exactly what could happen.
'Damn, if Ino knows about the bet then she will most likely try to take that key away from Shikamaru!' Then another thing pop into his mind 'just how in the hell did Hinata managed to get Tenten! Well anyway that doesn't matter. Well what matters is who exactly was going to help in a time of need like this.' Naruto now needed to think of someone who could help him. He thought of Choji and Lee but then thought that Ino and Sakura could easily manipulate them into giving them what they want. Then he thought of Kakashi but also turned that down because the thought that if he was like Jiraiya; Hinata would probably get Anko or even Kurenai to come to her. He need to find somebody who could get at least one of them off his back. He thought of someone but it made his stomach cringe. He felt sick. Out of all people he would have to ask him to help.
'Well I wont like it but it's the only way out.' He thought. As he left, he was determined to check on two things before he had to visit Hinata at eight. One was to find out if Ino took that key form Shikamaru and second was to go see the one person who could probably give him the most help. He was going to visit Sasuke.
AN: Well thats another chapter. I hope you like it. So please tell me what you think and R&R. See ya
temjinxzarron
07-13-2004, 12:34 AM
lol i see you posted more of it..
Anbu Dr J
07-13-2004, 12:40 AM
lol hahaha...yeah i got kinda lazy...^^
temjinxzarron
07-13-2004, 01:54 AM
lol
Anbu Dr J
07-15-2004, 08:57 PM
The Bet Act 6: Compromising
Naruto knocked on Sasuke house later that day. “Hey Sasuke, hey I need your help with something.” Sasuke walked out of the house annoyed. Sasuke really didn’t like Naruto. Especially after the retrieval mission but in time he learned to at least give Naruto respect because whatever he says he do, he is going to do it.
“Idiot what do you want?” he asked. Naruto felt something in his stomach. He could almost hear himself regretting what he was about to do now.
“I need to ask you of a favor.” Sasuke looked at Naruto like he was a freak of nature.
“Yea right when pigs fly.” He said as he was turning around to head back inside his house. Then Naruto thought of an idea.
“Well then I can see a whole flock of pigs coming this way.” Naruto said. “Hey would you like it if I were leading those fan girls to you?” Sasuke stopped, turned around and glared at Naruto.
“Are you threatening me?”
“Not at all, besides it just some fan girls. It’s not like you’re used to it already. I’m sure that Sakura would just LOVE fifty or so fan girls at you’re house all screaming and yelling your name.” He said sarcastically.
“You wouldn’t,” Sasuke said. He really didn’t want to have a bunch of annoying girls screaming and he especially didn’t want sakura there to see that. Naruto on the other hand just shrugged his shoulders.
“Oh yes I would. Would you like me to prove it?” He asked. Just the way Sasuke looked at him told Naruto that he would have to prove his point. Naruto started to quickly look around only to see a girl in her teens walking down the street. Naruto quickly started to walk towards her. “Hey, how are you doing?” He asked the girl trying to bring up a conversation. The girl looked over to see Sasuke standing there.
“Oh hello Sasuke-kun!” the girl screamed completely ignoring Naruto.
‘She’s perfect.’ Naruto thought. “Hey girl, wanna know Sasuke better than you already do?” he said like he was some kind of salesman. The girl looked at him curiously but then nodded her head. “Well then follow me my friend because today is you’re lucky day!” Naruto started to lead the girl to Sasuke’s house. Sasuke just quickly locked up and ran away. He ran as far as he could and eventually winded up in the middle of the forest. He made sure to take every single step to try to lose Naruto.
‘Good I lost them.’ He thought.
“Where are you going Sasuke?” Sasuke quickly turned around only to find Naruto sitting there on a tree. “How did you? But I..........you..........were gone..............lost you..........” All Naruto was able to do at that moment was gasp at the unbelievable. Sasuke lost for words. After the gasp, Naruto looked at Sasuke and grinned.
“Yea I know that kage bunshin is a pain in the ass isn’t it?” he said smiling. Sasuke knew that he could get away from the fan girls but getting away from Naruto was a different story.
‘Damn as long as he had that kage bunshin activate he could lead all those stupid girls to me.’ He thought. “Okay what do I have to do?” he asked.
“Simple, you have to make sure that I don’t eat ramen or get tricked into eating ramen for the rest of this week.” Naruto said. Sasuke looked at Naruto like he was a freak of nature.
“Are you out of you’re mind!? Do you know what you’re asking me to help you with!? Even I know that it’s impossible! I won’t do it!” Sasuke shouted. Naruto just pointed behind Sasuke. To Sasuke’s horror he saw another doppelganger of Naruto leading a group of girls towards them.
“Soon we will be approaching Sasuke himself.” The clone said. “And remember after the tour of his house which will be later on. I will be giving out forums for you to fill out if you want the Sasuke t-shirts and mugs. It twill be twenty-five bucks for the tee and ten for the mug. I am on limited supply so get them while you can!” Sasuke looked and Naruto still sitting in the tree.
“What will you do Sasuke-kun? Either way it’s in my favor. ” Naruto asked in a evil voice. Sasuke knew right then that if he didn’t help it wasn’t going to be a pretty sight.
“Okay I...............I.......I will.....”
“Will you what?” Naruto said still grinning. “Be quick or the Sasuke crazy fan girls will be on top of you.” Sasuke gulped. He knew that he was going to say the words that will probably haunt him for the rest of his life.
“I will help you.” Sasuke said feeling like throwing up.
“Good,” said Naruto. “I will need your help. Come to Shikamaru place around 11 okay?” Sasuke nodded his head. With that Naruto left and the doppelganger that was leading the fan girls disappeared.
“What happened to the guide?” one girl asked. A single piece of paper then landed on the girls head. She took the piece of paper off her head and read it. The girl immediately ran off.
“Hey where are you going?” Asked another fan girl.
“Sasuke is at the park outside the training academy!” she said. All the other fan girls immediately ran towards the park.
Naruto was walking down the business sections of konoha and saw Shino sitting by himself reading a paper and drinking tea in front a café. Naruto walked up and sat in a table directly behind him making sure that they wasn’t seen talking to each other.
“Do you know?” Naruto asked.
“There’s not much I don’t know.” Shino replied. The café clerk went to Naruto and took his order. When she left Naruto started to speak again.
“So how big has it gotten?” he asked. Shino took a sip of his tea while Naruto grabbed a paper and pretended to act like he was reading.
“It’s bigger than you think. If I were you I wouldn’t trust any body for now. Just keep your head low for now.”
“Do you know if “she” has acquired anything else?”
“No I don’t think so. If she has I will inform you.” Naruto then sat up and paid his bill. He walked over to Shino table a laid the paper that he was “reading” on his table and walked off. Shino opened the paper that Naruto was reading and pulled out around ten bucks and a note. The note saying:
Hey man; thank Iruka for him convincing you to help me later. And don’t let anyone catch you helping me okay? Shino simply put the money and the note in his pocket and continued to sip his tea.
Naruto then made his way home. He knew that Hinata was going to be there at eight o’clock. Once Hinata got there he gave her a long passionate kiss.
“Well what do you want to do today?” he asked. Hinata then pulled out some measuring tape and started measuring him. “Umm, Hinata exactly what are you doing?”
“Well I am trying to get your measurements so I can get a custom suit for you.” Naruto then snatched the measurement tape from Hinata and started to measure her.
“Now what are you doing?” she asked.
“I am measuring you to see if you will fit this maid uniform I saw at a store.” He said.
“Now why would I want a maid uniform?” she asked.
“Well when I win the bet the first favor you will do is to me my maid. And make me ramen of course.” He said. Hinata smirked. “As far as the second favor................” Hinata cut him off.
“Yea you wish! You can’t last much longer. I know that...........” before she could finish she was cut off by Naruto’s lips in a kiss. After that neither of them said anything else. They just enjoyed each others embrace, compassion.
Afterwards
“Where in the hell is Naruto!?” Sasuke muttered to Shikamaru. Shikamaru looked at the watch.
“Well he thirty minuets late so far.” He said a little annoyed. As soon as he said that Naruto showed up.
“Sorry I was late. I...........was kinda in an unexpected situation.” He said. The others just groaned. “Well he said let talk about that key.”
AN: Well that chapter was a little shorter that some but the next on will be longer. I am planning to have at least between 3-5 more chapters to this fic. So what do you think? R&R.
Anbu Dr J
07-15-2004, 08:57 PM
The bet Act 7: Dangerous Realization
AN: Wow I have finally updated. Sorry for taking so long. It's just that I had to tend to my other two fics. (I'm so stupid for trying to write three fics at once.) Well here's the next chapter. Hope you enjoy it .
"So you have the key right Shikamaru?" Naruto asked.
"Yea, yea I have.......................Oh crap!" Shikamaru realized something.
"Well what the hell is it?" Sasuke asked.
"Ino took the key." Shikamaru said. Naruto then grabbed Shikamaru by the collar of his chuunin vest.
"What in the hell do you mean that Ino has the key!? I gave the key to you to take of!" Naruto said as he was shaking Shikamaru silly.
"Stop shaking me!" Shikamaru yelled. Naruto calmly let go of his vest.
"Okay Shikamaru just tell me how in the world did she get that key?"
"Her mind/body switch jutsu. She used it on me while we were training. I wonder why Asuma-sensei was acting strange. Ino must have convinced him to help her." Shikamaru said bored. "Now can I go home now?"
"No!" Naruto yelled. "Okay when did she take the key?"
"Around yesterday," Shikamaru replied. "Then she has probably given it to Hinata already."
"Well when I was with her she didn't do anything today." Naruto said thinking.
"Well she is probably waiting for the right time." Sasuke said. "After all, what better way for you to lose until the very end." Naruto sighed.
"Well here's what we do. I think that we should sit and wait for now. Let them pull the next move." Naruto said.
"Well stay low for now okay. We'll wait to see what they will do tomorrow." Shikamaru said as he started to walk toward his house. Sasuke and Naruto just nodded their heads.
"Hey besides the bet. Aren't people from other villages coming to konoha for the chuunin exam in the next two days?" Naruto asked.
"Yea they are." Sasuke said. "Well at least this time we get to watch since were already chuunins." Naruto and Shikamaru just nodded their heads in agreement.
"Okay then talk to you tomorrow." Naruto said as he walked back to his apartment.
Over the phone
"Wow! So are you really going to start playing dirty?" Ino asked
"Yea, I am. Besides after today I only have five more days until the two day extension." Hinata said.
"So that's only another week." Sakura added in from her line.
"Yes that why I have to start being a little more aggressive." Hinata said. Then she thought of an idea. "Hey, I know just one more person who we can add on our "buddy list"." Ino and Sakura were starting to wonder who Hinata was talking about.
"What are you talking about? Who can we get to join us like this?" Sakura said.
"Well I know one thing it's not Choji. He will do almost anything for Shikamaru for them being best friends and all. And since Shikamaru is on Naruto side......."
"No, no, no I am talking about Kiba." Hinata said. Hinata could tell that Ino and Sakura were grinning over the phone.
"Well how do we get Kiba in this bet?" Sakura asked.
"Well I have a plan but I'll tell you tomorrow." Hinata said.
"Well besides that, how was you little date with Naruto huh?" Ino asked. Not hearing Hinata voice over the phone was all Ino needed to know. "So how does he kiss?" she added. Sakura giggled.
"Wow I must have been good. I can feel Hinata hot blush over the phone!" Sakura said.
"I'm not blushing!" Hinata said as her face was completely red. The three girls talked over the phone about where they planned to meet up for the plan.
The next day
Tsunade was finishing a meeting with the other jonnin. "Okay you all are dismissed." She said. All the jonnin were leaving. That's when she saw Kakashi. "Kakashi I want you to stay here for a moment. I have something to discuss with you." Kakashi stepped back in the room.
"Yes hokage-sama what is it?" Kakashi asked.
"Kakashi why are you an hour late to this meeting?" Tsunade asked. Kakashi scratched the back of his head.
"Well I walking down the street on my way here when there was.........." Before Kakashi could finish, Tsunade spoke up.
"Kakashi you know I don't tolerate excuses like that. I don't know what the third was doing but you can show up late all the time. For that you will be punished." Tsunade then pull out a huge sign that says: "Come to Ichiriku Ramen! Discount fifty percent off!! Come today!!!" Kakashi looked at the sign.
"Hokage-sama you can't be serious." Tsunade gave a death glare at him. "Okay, okay I'll do it." Tsunade then showed a light smile.
"Okay then, now you won't be late all the time. They need help to advertising. That's were you come in and you better not be late there or I'll know." She said. Kakashi just sighed and started to walk out the door with the sign when Tsunade spoke up. "Oh and one more thing I need to tell you Kakashi." Kakashi turned around.
"Yes hokage-sama," he said.
"If you see Naruto tell him that Ichiriku will give him ramen for free for this week only. But don't tell him that it was me that told you that understood?"
"Well why don't you want me to tell him?" Kakashi asked.
"Because I don't want him to know alright." Tsunade said.
"Okay, whatever you say." Kakashi said as he walked out the door with the sign.
Back to Naruto
Naruto was walking casually to the café. He sat in his usual seat behind a certain guy with glasses. Naruto then asked one of the waitresses for a newspaper and some tea. Once he got his order he sipped the tea and picked up the newspaper and started to read it.
"So anything new with the news?" he said.
"Why yes there is something new." Shino said. "Right now I got the wire tapped."
"And the news is?" Naruto said.
"Right now the four are going to meet up at Ichiriku Ramen to talk about their plans. I don't know fully about the plans but I know that they seem very anxious about something."
"Why in the world would they be a Ichiriku?" Naruto asked.
"Simple, because they know that you won't be there." Shino replied back. "Wait there talking now."
At the Ichiriku ramen
"Well how are we going to get Kiba to join us?" Ten-ten said just being told about the phone call last night.
"Well since he is a teammate and friend of mine it shouldn't be too hard to convince him to join us. Besides he would probably" Hinata said.
"Do you think that we could use Iruka some more?" Sakura asked.
"Well we could but I would like to have him put on the backburner for other plans." Hinata answered back.
"Well what about that key me and Asuma-sensei stole form Shikamaru?" Ino asked.
"I will save that for my final attack. If all else fails then I will have a last stand using that key." Hinata replied. Hinata had the feeling that she was being watched some how. It was like a strange and unnerving feeling. She felt like this ever since she went inside the Ichiriku ramen. She then turned to look around she saw no one who could be listening or even wanting to listen to their conversation. Then she saw one thing that made it all come together. She saw bugs. 'Shino,' she thought. 'I would never have thought that Naruto would get to you.'
"Hey is there something wrong Hinata?" Ten-ten asked. Hinata turned to her and smiled.
"No nothing wrong." Hinata said. "Well why don't we eat something and have some fun for the day."
Back with Naruto
"They caught me." Shino said calmly.
"How? What are we going to do?" Naruto asked a little nervously.
"Listen, they are trying to get Kiba you need to get to him first." Naruto turned almost pale.
"But that's past the Ichiriku! I Come on there have to be another way." Naruto almost shouted.
"From here there isn't." Shino said. "And you better hurry because you don't have much time." Naruto just simply put some money inside the newspaper and left it on Shino's table. After that he made a run for Kiba's house.
At the Ichiriku ramen
Hinata and the others were walking out of the ramen stand when they saw a flash of yellow past them by.
"Who in the world was that?" Sakura asked.
'Good I got past them.' Naruto thought. Just then he bumped into Kakashi.
"Sorry I wasn't looking I.....................Kakashi-sensei? What are you doing here?" Kakashi just scratched the back of his head.
"Well it's a punishment from hokage-sama for being late." Kakashi said while pointing to the sign. Then to Naruto's horror he saw the sign. Naruto scrambled to his feet to run when someone wrapped their arms around him.
"Hi Naruto-kun! What brings you here?" Hinata asked trying to sound dumb.
"Oh yea I almost forgot. Naruto if you go now you can get free ramen at Ichiriku!" Kakashi said. Hinata seemed to brighten up.
"Oh really!" Hinata said. "Well Naruto-come on and eat! We all KNOW how much you love ramen!" Then Hinata went down to whisper in his ear. "Come on honey, you know you want it." She said in his ear. Meanwhile Naruto was having a mental break down.
'Don't think about ramen. Don't think about ramen. Don't think about ramen. Don't think about ramen. Don't think about ramen.' Was all Naruto could think about. Then he realized something. 'If I am not supposed to be thinking about ramen then WHY AM I WALKING TOWARDS THE RAMEN STAND!!!!' Soon Naruto found himself sitting down and being surrounded by four girls.
"Oh Naruto I thought you have forgotten about us. Well here is your free bowl courteously for our dear hokage-sama." The old man behind the counter said while passing the bowl to him.
'Okay old hag,' Naruto thought. 'You will pay for this!' Naruto then found himself instantly scoop up some ramen and was bringing it to his lips. 'No I can't do this! I must resist!' he then glanced at Hinata who was covering her mouth with her hands. He could tell that she was grinning. Then Naruto took a quick glance at the other three girls. All of them were starting in anticipation.
'Come on Naruto-kun. I know you can resist.' Hinata thought. The ramen was already in Naruto face. So close that he could smell it.
'Sooooo good,' he thought as he started to open his mouth to eat. Just then out of nowhere Naruto found the ramen to be slapped out of his hand. Naruto and all four girls turned to see who it was.
"Come on Naruto let go." Sasuke said as he grabbed Naruto's arm and ran out the ramen stand dragging Naruto along.
"Sasuke-kun!" Ino and Sakura shouted at the same time as they started to run after Sasuke leaving Hinata and Ten-ten by themselves.
"Well what do we do now?" Ten-ten asked. Both Hinata and Ten-ten walked out the Ichiriku ramen and were walking down the street.
"Well right now there is nothing we can do except........" Hinata said.
"Except what," Ten-ten asked.
"Ten-ten go and relax," Hinata said. "We only have a few more days until we have to get back to work with missions. Besides I need to talk with Anko and Kurenai-sensei." Ten-ten was getting a little confused.
"What do they have to do with this? Aren't you going to talk with Kiba?" she asked.
"No it's too late for that." Hinata said. "Right now I more concerned about catching a "certain" bug that's in our way. Don't worry though Naruto-kun will lose this bet by the end of the two weeks." With that Hinata walked off. Meanwhile Kakashi was still standing there holding the sign. He had heard everything and added up everything in his mind.
'Hokage-sama wanted me..........for this.................man this is bull!'
AN: Well that's another chapter I hope that you like it. Like I said before sorry for the wait but I was tending to my other two fics. Like always please be nice and R&R.
Anbu Dr J
07-15-2004, 08:58 PM
The Bet Act 8: Tricks with Tea
An: Okay this is another chapter. IMPORTANT-IMPORTANT-IMPORTANT- Okay reader this is the first vote time on the fanfic The Bet! It's up to you reader to decide what Naruto does. I will explain the situation at the end of the chapter. Now on to the fic!!!
Naruto was sitting under a tree in the woods scared and nervous. 'Man she almost got me!' he thought. He looked around to see Sasuke standing right next to him.
"So stupid that you almost lost. I still don't see why I am helping you." Sasuke said.
"Man shut up. You're helping me for two reasons." Naruto said.
"Yea I already know one of the reasons." Sasuke said thinking about the fan girls that were following him. "What's the other one?" Naruto then grinned.
"Well how would you like it if Sakura or Ino..........no make that every single fan girl in konoha trying to bet you into a date? If I lose and Sakura spreads the word, how would that be for you? And you KNOW how fast something like rumors spread in this village, especially if Sakura and Ino were the ones spreading the rumors." Sasuke sighed. He really didn't want to believe that, he knew that it was true.
"Okay idiot. I understand." Sasuke said rudely. "Well what do you want to do about Kiba?"
"Nothing for now. In fact I think that he would probably betray me and help out Hinata-chan." Naruto said. "Well I am going home for now I probably won't be coming back out until the chuunin exam finals. I'll see you later Sasuke." With that Naruto started his way home. Sasuke then started to make his way home. Once he got home, made himself a sandwich and after he ate he went to take a shower. After he had a shower he heard a knock at the door.
"Whose there," Naruto asked.
"Your great eternal savior for the great evil. The proud azure........" Naruto then opened the door.
"Lee what do you want?' he asked simply.
"I have received word from Iruka that you need help not eating ramen so I came to drop by this. Lee handed a basked over to Naruto." Naruto looked at the basked strangely.
"What the heck is this for?" Naruto asked.
"It was given to me by Iruka. He said that there is all you need to survive." Naruto looked in the basked and saw almost every type of food except for any kind of ramen.
"Thanks man, I really need this!" Naruto said with a grin on his face. Then lee handed him an extra smaller basket. "What is this?" Naruto asked.
"It is some special bread that Gai-sensei made!" Lee said with pride. "Gai said that if you eat that then you will extra energy to go through the day! I must say that it really works!"
'Note to self,' Naruto thought. 'Give bread to Choji and Kiba to test out before eating it.' "Thanks again man," Naruto said. Lee then gave his nice guy pose.
"Okay then, I'm off! Good luck!" With that Lee ran off. Naruto pretty much stayed inside the whole day that day and he would have spend the next day inside also. That is, until he heard a knock at the door.
"Yea who is it?" Naruto asked.
"It's me Naruto-kun sweetheart open up." Hinata said. Naruto then ran beside the door but didn't open it.
"Okay, is there anyone else with you?" Naruto asked the slowest and calmest he could.
"No Naruto-kun." She said softly.
"Okay then, do you have ramen or know that there is ramen within a twenty foot radius form where you are standing. Be honest with me!" Naruto said. Hinata just giggled.
"No there isn't any." She said still giggling. Naruto sighed and then he slowly opened the door to see Hinata there smiling cheerfully.
"How are you doing Naruto-kun." She said. She then walked towards him to wrap her arms around for a kiss. Naruto then lead her inside. As much as he didn't want to the broke the kiss and started to speak.
"What brings you here Hinata-chan?" he asked.
"What I can't be with someone I love without a reason." Hinata said. It was like a whole truck full of guilt slammed into him.
"Okay, I'm sorry Hinata-chan but first...." Naruto then started to pat Hinata down.
"Naruto-kun what are you doing?" she asked.
"Well you don't have any ramen on you." Naruto said. Then Naruto poked Hinata sides which almost made her jump across the room.
"Don't do that!" She yelled while giggling.
"Umm let me think....................................no." With that Naruto then poke at Hinata sides again making her laugh. They both stayed like that for awhile playing games or having make-out sessions. After some time has passed Naruto looked at the clock and saw that it was around eight. "Hinata-chan I have to go okay." He said.
"Are you sure?" she asked. Naruto just nodded.
"Yea I really need to go it's eight already." He said. Hinata looked at the clock and then looked at her watch and giggled.
"Naruto-kun you didn't set you clock for daylight savings did you? It's only seven." She said. Naruto then looked at his watch. He knew that it was wrong by thirty minuets but now he knew that his whole set of time was wrong.
"Oh yea that right. No wonder why I am always thinking that the Ero-Sennin was late. Well anyway I still gotta go, sorry Hinata-chan."
"Okay Naruto-kun." She said as she was sitting on the couch at the time with Naruto's head resting on her lap. Naruto then got up and Hinata did the same. They shared on last kiss before leaving out.
"You need me to walk you home." He asked. Hinata shook her head.
"No I will be fine." She said.
"Okay then I'll see you tomorrow." He said. Naruto ran off while Hinata dug in her pocket to pull out a small radio.
"He should be heading towards you." Hinata said into the radio. Then Hinata ran in the opposite direction form her house.
Naruto arrived to the café just in time to see Shino sitting there. Naruto then took his original seat in the spot behind Shino and picked up a newspaper, found a waitress and made his order. "So what up, did you get caught?" Naruto asked.
"No it was a false alarm." Shino said. "But I do have some news. It seems that they are going to force Iruka to help them again."
"Really, when did this happen?" Naruto asked.
"Not to long ago." Shino said. The waitress then gave Naruto his order. "Naruto was starting to take a sip when he noticed that the tea looked funny. Almost cloudy.........almost like it was a.............
'Genjutsu,' Naruto thought. He quickly brought his hands together and dispelled the genjutsu. To his horror there was really ramen in the cup. "What is this!?" Naruto asked startled.
"Wow I can believe you gotten that much better. I knew that it wasn't my best genjutsu but I thought it was at least enough to get you." A woman said. Naruto then turned around to see that it wasn't a waitress who gave him that ramen but Anko.
"Yes it seems that he's gotten better than both of us expected." Shino said. Naruto turned to Shino.
"Shino you dirty little betrayer! You are so low for this! After all you've....................and I thought that..................WHY SHINO WHY!?" Naruto said. Shino simply just grinned and shook his finger.
"Naruto-kun Shino didn't betray you more like I did." Shino said as his voice turned more womanly. Naruto was terrified that the whole time he was sitting there he was really talking to..........
"K.........Kur................................Kuren ai-sensei!?" Naruto shouted. Kurenai smirked at the young blonde.
"Shino is....................well I will say it like this. He is taking a little vacation right now." Kurenai said.
"Yea he won't be in our hair anymore," Said a voice in the distance. Naruto turned to see that Hinata, Sakura and Ino were standing in font of him. "Face it Naruto-kun sweetheart you are surrounded and here is where you will lose." Hinata said. Naruto was desperately looking for a way out only to find that he was truly surrounded. "Naruto-kun save us all the trouble and eat the ramen." Hinata said. Naruto felt like Hinata eyes were peering into him.
'Man it feels like Neji is looking at me.' Naruto thought. They all started to move closer to Naruto. Naruto was starting to find it hard to breathe. Then once it felt like that all those women were on Naruto they stopped.
"Hey I can't move." Complained Anko as she looked to the floor and saw her shadow was lengthened. "Damn it! That little brat Shikamaru!" Naruto looked up behind the group of women to see that it was indeed Shikamaru sitting there with his shadow bind in full effect.
"Hurry and run Naruto! I can keep Hinata, Sakura and Ino blinded but Anko and Kurenai will get out of it soon!" Shikamaru said.
"What about you?' Naruto said.
"Man just go," Shikamaru said. Without even thinking, Naruto then got up and ran as fast as he could. 'Damn this is so troublesome,' he thought. 'But if Naruto loses this bet then it will be hell for me.' He looked around to see Anko and Kurenai slowly start to break the shadow bind.
"Sorry kid but you're not yet skilled enough to keep me in this." Anko said. She then broke out of the shadow bind by having a snake wrap around Shikamaru neck from behind. The shadow bind then cancelled because Shikamaru was then more worried about that snake rather than the bind. Anko then made the snake disappear but not before blowing some sleeping power in his face. Since Shikamaru was worried about the need to breathe he was easily put to sleep by the powder. "Okay what do we do now?' Anko said.
"Let's find him," Hinata said. "He couldn't have gone too far." All the other females nodded. Just before they leave the owner of the café came out.
"So did you get him?" The female café owner said.
"No not yet, but thanks for letting us use you café for this." Hinata said. The café owner laughed.
"Well no problem. In fact I know most of the store owners in konoha I could ask them to help you out. Once they hear the story I am sure that will help you out." The owner said with a grin on her face. Hinata smiled.
"Well call them up for me please. I have a plan for all of them." Hinata said as she turned to Kurenai and Anko. "Well let's go," she said. With that all the woman except the café owner left.
Naruto was still running in the woods. 'If they got Shino then they probably know about Iruka helping me. I have to get to his house right away!' He thought. Just when he was lost in his thoughts he bumped into someone and fell on his back.
"Owww I am sorry I didn't............." Then Naruto saw what he bumped into. 'It's a wall.' he thought while felling stupid. Then he noticed something. 'Wait a minute this wall is made out of................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................... .................................................. ..............................sand!' Naruto then looked up to see that that when the wall retreated, Gaara and Temari were standing before him. Gaara...Temari what are you doing here!?" Naruto asked.
"The chuunin exams are being held again this year. Were here to watch our genin pass, okay, but we just came here a little early that's all." Temari said.
"Umm where is your other brother?" Naruto asked.
"He is trying to find us a place to stay until tomorrow." Gaara answered.
"Oh right! All the other villages will be coming tomorrow! All the representatives from the other villages," Naruto then heard some footsteps. Naruto then turned to face Gaara and Temari in horror. "Listen guys I know I shouldn't ask but can you hide me?"
"Hide you from what?" Gaara said. "If it is an enemy, why not just fight them?"
"No there my friends and because this is a different type of enemy, besides I can do that, I can't! And don't you hurt them either." Naruto said.
"Well I guess..." Temari said.
"Oh thank you! Thank you so much!" Naruto said as he grabbed Temari hand. He kissed her hand and she took it back.
"Okay, okay," Temari said a little annoyed. "I have a plan."
Hinata and the others eventually arrived there. Anko was the first to spot Gaara and Temari. "Gaara I believe," said Anko. "Why are you here?" Gaara and Temari then pulled out their passes and passports. "Okay then, everything checks out." Anko said. Then she noticed the gourd. "Wow you really must have been training hard. That gourd looks like it's twice the size of when I last saw you."
"Yes I have been training." Gaara asked. Hinata approached Temari.
"Hello Temari-san. I was wondering have you seen Naruto-kun." Hinata asked.
"Nope can't say that I have." Temari said. "Why are you looking for him?" She asked.
"Well it's kinda silly really." Hinata said.
"No really I want to hear." Temari said. Hinata then told Temari about the whole bet. Temari almost pee herself form laughing.
"Man that's funny! Tell you what I will help the next time I see him." Temari said. Hinata nodded and looked at the path sign. There were five different trails that he could have taken.
"Kurenai-sensei about we send two down each path. You and Anko go down one. Sakura and Ino go down another one and I will pick a third one okay?" Hinata said.
"Well how would you handle him if he goes down your trail?" Sakura asked. Hinata grinned.
"Oh I have my ways." Hinata said. Anko and Kurenai smiled.
"Okay sound like a plan lets go!" Anko said. All the women split in two and took their own paths. Once Gaara could no longer detect his presence, Gaara then let the sand pour outside the gourd. Eventually the whole gourd broke letting Naruto fall out.
'I can believe that he...................for that.......................................man that is bull!' Gaara thought. Naruto was coughing from the sand that got caught in his mouth. But then got up and thanked Gaara and Temari.
"Thanks for everything" Naruto said as he thought of something. "Listen Temari, could you please tell me which paths that they went. If I know that then I can avoid them as I make my way to Iruka. "
"No," Temari said simply. Naruto mouth dropped.
"Well why not!" Naruto said.
"I heard the bet and I it's funny to me." Temari said. "Plus I told them that I would help them.It's like a pact between us women. So now if you want to choose a path you figure it out." Naruto then turned to Gaara.
"Come on Gaara, can you at least tell me where they went?" Naruto pleaded. Gaara annoyed with the whole thing simply vanished in a whirlwind of sand.
"Well I guess that your answer." Temari said as she jumped off leaving Naruto by himself. Naruto then turned around and look at the different colored paths. 'Okay,' he thought. 'I know that the split into twos and went down a path so three paths have to covered which leaves me two paths. But which one do I choose...............................'
AN: IMPORTANT VOTE-Okay readers! Naruto is stuck in a pretty difficult situation. There are five paths to choose form. Hinata, Anko/Kurenai and Sakura/Ino split up down three of the paths. The trick is that I AM NOT TELLING YOU WHERE THE GIRLS WENT TO!!! This is all based on luck. Each path is different and will alter the story accordingly. I have already written down what path the girls took and the path that is to Iruka's house. So if you wanted Naruto to make it you must choose the right path. He the odds are against him but this is Naruto. He is always beating the odds. You have at least a 2 out of 5 chance of having Naruto make it. Here are the paths! Good Luck!
Red path
Blue path
Green path
Yellow path
And finally the White path.
Well that's all the roads that Naruto can take. It's up to you to guide him to the right one. Good luck!!!!
Also thanks to my beta reader Anbu Dr J of doing his thing and looking over my fic!!
ShinobiRyu
07-17-2004, 07:55 PM
AH! I love the fic! It's so cool ^^
Anbu Dr J
07-18-2004, 07:39 PM
SEE I TOLD YOU TEMJIN!!
Anbu Dr J
07-19-2004, 03:08 AM
The Bet Act 9: Wrong way
AN: Well readers guess what!!! We have a winner! Here are the results.
Red-7
Green-8
Blue-5
Yellow-5
White-5
Okay my readers. As you all know you didn't know which of the girls that went down each path. AS SOON AS I had finished writing the last chapter I sent Anbu Dr J the results and they went like this.
Red- Kurenai/Anko
Blue- Naruto's House
Green- Hinata
Yellow- Sakura/Ino
White- Iruka's House
So comparing those results with the vote... just take a wild guess where Naruto is going to meet up with... (Damn... you all just sent poor Naruto into THE WORST situation possible. Maybe you guys want Naruto to lose.) Oh well............it wasn't my choice. Here is the fic!
Naruto ran down the green path as fast as he could. 'Okay I can dodge them if they come to this path but why? I haven't seen them yet and besides I bet that they haven't taken this path! Man I am sooo good!' Naruto snickered to himself thinking.
Meanwhile
"Darn it! Where is he?" Hinata said to herself. Then she thought of an idea. 'Naruto-kun sweetheart, thank you for teaching this to me.' She said while smiling to herself. "Kage-bunshin no jutsu!" suddenly, instead of one Hinata there were ten. All of them activated their byakuagan. She had them all search about a half of a mile in different directions until.....
"Hey! I found him!" One of the clones said. Hinata then activated her own byakuagan to look in the direction where the clone was looking.
'Wow! He coming right towards me'" she thought as she licked her lips. 'Well then it's about time I finished this little bet once and for all!' She then dispersed all the doppelgangers and hid waiting for Naruto to come by. Naruto ran so much he decided to stop and walk since he didn't see anyone else.
'Man I must have lost them! I really am good!' the thought. "Yea I am the best! Nobody can catch me!" he said aloud. Just then a pair of hands covered his face.
"Well guess what Naruto-kun...........you just been caught." Hinata said. Naruto instantly froze. It was like he was dipped in water and immediately transported to the polar ice caps. No matter how much he wanted to move, he just couldn't. It was impossible. "What you can say anything?" Hinata said while giggling. "Well don't worry I'll start making you move in a minute." Hinata then started walking and surprisingly Naruto started to move as well.
'How in the world does she do that?' Naruto wondered. 'How!? Out of all the paths I could've taken......I had to take the one she was on!! I mean was there like a vote or something that made me take this way!? And if there was..........WHO in the world could've voted to make it happen like this!?' he thought to himself. He was following Hinata like if some kind of trance was put over him. He couldn't control himself. 'Come on Naruto! Get a hold of yourself.' He then screamed in his mind. He then looked at Hinata who was smiling and as happy as she could be.
"Oh yea, I almost forgot." Hinata said as she let a small amount of charka in her hand. She then threw held it over her head. The charka then exploded making a bright blue light and a small popping sound. Naruto was almost going to fall over.
'Oh god! She just caste a flare!' Naruto thought. 'If I don't get out of here, Sakura, Kurenai and the others will be her any moment! Come on Naruto you have to think of something!' Naruto then forced his body to move. He did the only thing that came to his mind at that moment since he was thinking of Hinata. He moved to kiss her. Hinata surprised by the sudden action was startled for the moment, but soon wrapped her arms around him, closed her eyes and accepted the kiss. 'Okay Naruto man, I have to do this now while her eyes are closed.' He thought as he was making seals. Hinata then pulled him deeper into the kiss almost making Naruto stop doing what he was doing right then and there. 'Man this is sooo nice and...........NO! I can't! Hinata favors! The whole maid thing! You can't let her win man! You just can...................................kiss........ ................................NO!!!! Come on! Do this!!! Break away from the evil!!' Naruto then finished the seals and had a kage bunshin appear right behind her. Before Hinata could do anything, Naruto not only broke the kiss but had the kage bunshin roll around tackle him causing him and the doppelganger and Naruto to roll around. Hinata smirked at the whole thing.
"So you think you can get away?" Hinata asked. The two Narutos' then got up and did another kage-bunshin making a hundred Naruto's. Hinata was amazed at all the replicas.
"Umm....don't you think that you're going a little overboard sweetie?" Hinata asked.
'Well I am REALLY desperate." All hundred Narutos' replied at once as they all dispersed. Hinata didn't even try to find which out was the real one and after hearing Naruto talk about Neji and his fight four years ago told her that trying to find him through the byakuagan was completely useless. So she just stood there and let all the Narutos' run off in the forest. After they left Kurenai and Anko ran up to Hinata soon followed by Sakura and Ino.
"What happened? Did you find him?" Sakura asked. Hinata nodded.
"Yes but he got away. By the way, Ino do you still have that key?" Hinata asked. Ino then pulled out the key that she was holding for Hinata.
"Well thank you." Hinata said.
"Hey Hinata are you going to use that key now?" Anko asked. Hinata shook her head.
"No I won't use it until the end of the week. Right now I'll let him go. He has about two days before he had to go through the two day extension. I make my final move by the end of this week and we'll see Naruto in that dress by the end of the two day extension." Hinata said as she then turned to Kurenai.
"Kurenai-sensei, Anko-sensei, could you call that café owner and tell her that the executing of the final plan will began the afternoon of the day after tomorrow." She said. Kurenai and Anko grinned.
"Okay Hinata, this is your bet and I want to see you win!" Anko said as both Anko and Kurenai disappeared. Hinata then turned to Sakura and Ino.
"And could you call Ten-ten and tell her to meet us in say.............Ino house tomorrow okay?" Sakura and Ino nodded.
"Sure thing girl. Just be sure that you kick his ass in this bet alright! Now come on, let's all go home." Ino said. Sakura and Hinata nodded.
"Come the day after tomorrow, Naruto will be forced in that dress!" Sakura said as they walked home.
Meanwhile
Naruto just barely made it to his house without the temptation of ramen or Hinata. 'I've finally made it. Sure I wasn't able to see Iruka but at least I am home free.' He thought. As he went to the door, he saw a note.
To Naruto: I know that you need help and I will offer you help. Being a guy myself I understand how it is. Well if you want the help come to the level seven training grounds understood?
Naruto was puzzled as in who could be wanting to see him. He then started to walk towards the training grounds. He didn't know why he decided to go. He just knew that he needed all the help that he could get and if worse comes to worse he could use the kage-bunshin to run.
AN: Well that's another chapter! Aren't you glad that your vote won! (For the ones who voted green anyway!) To all the other people that voted. Thanx for your vote and don't worry. You WILL get a chance to vote at least once more in this fic so be prepared for it! Also sorry for the shortness of the fic, I promise that the next fic will be longer and better!! So what do you think? R&R please to tell me!
Anbu Dr J
07-19-2004, 03:09 AM
The Bet: Act 10: Scene One: Revolutionary Revolt (Male Version)
AN: Sorry it took so long for the next chapter but for the first time in a long time since I have been writing and posting my fanfics I encountered the one disease that every writer faces every now and then. THE WRITERS BLOCK!!! But luckily I have recovered and I have the next act for you to read.
Naruto was sitting waiting in the team seven training grounds. ‘Man this letter told me to be here and no one’s here.’ Naruto thought. He took a deep breath and leaned against one of the logs. He looked at his watch to see that it was 11 o’clock. ‘Man I really need to adjust this watch an hour ahead.’ He thought. He knew that it was strange that he would show up a meetings and important events an hour early. He did this so much that people started to think that being taught by Kakashi who was always late that Naruto was a godsend. ‘Man I am getting so sleepy’ he thought. Naruto was about to go to sleep right there when a voice spoke up.
“Yo Naruto,” a man said. Naruto turned around. His eyes almost popped out his head and his mouth dropped.
“Kakashi-sensei, you mean that you are the one that is going to help me!” Naruto almost yelled. ‘Well this would explain why he was late coming here.’ Naruto thought.
“Well not just me Naruto. In fact I wasn’t the one who wrote the letter. I was just getting everyone else here.” Kakashi said. To Naruto surprise he saw almost every single guy in konoha. If they weren’t on guard duty for the village then they were at the training grounds. Ebisu, Jiraiya, Asuma, Gemma, even Gai! Every man was standing around Naruto.
“Naruto you know the troubles that you have caused konoha village don’t you?” One man said still in his anbu mask. Naruto just shook his head.
“Anyway it was me who wrote that letter.” Another man said. Naruto turned around and saw that it was Hiashi who said that ((AN: I think that is Hinata fathers name. if not please hurry and tell me his name so I can correct it!))
“You mean you were the one who wrote the letter!?” Naruto said to Hinata’s father.
“Yes it was. Honestly I still can’t see why my daughter sees in you.” Hiashi said. Naruto was starting to get angry. Before Naruto could say anything, Kakashi spoke up.
“Well for one thing you caused a lot of trouble for us guys.” Kakashi said.
“Well how is this bet causing trouble for you guys?” Naruto asked. All the other guys groaned.
“Listen Naruto,” Kakashi said. “Women of konoha already have a lot of influence in this village and they are all starting to talk about this bet. If they win this bet then it will be all over for us, understand?”
“Well not really...I mean Sasuke would probably be in trouble. Maybe Shikamaru because he would have to hear constant nagging of Ino, but besides that no.” Naruto said.
“What he means is that if your girlfriend wins and the word truly gets out more than it already has then our girlfriends, wife’s, you name it. They all may do the same thing. This could be a serious manner.” Gemma said.
“Cause bets with all of you?” Naruto asked.
“Of course,” Jiraiya said. Naruto then looked at Jiraiya. “Kid I know what you are thinking and yes it is possible for even me to be betted on. If in fact Tsunade could force me into a bet as friends. Even thought I know that she sucks in gambling she could still win if she tricks me in the right bet.”
“Well I still don’t see how it affects all of you guys?” Naruto said.
“It affects us if you lose because then all the women of this village could be trying to get what they want.” Kakashi said.
“So what do you want me to do? I am barely making it as it is. I’ve got not only Hinata to worry about but Sakura, Ino, Kurenai-sensei, the woman with the purple hair and most of all, Tsunade! So if you got a plan you better tell me now or forever hold your peace.
“Well right now we will do the best we can to keep you from eating ramen. For our sake as well as yours Naruto, we just called you here to tell you that we will be supporting you.” Jiraiya said.
“Supporting me! Hell I even locked up my ramen inside my closet. I gave the key to Shikamaru but Ino stole it.” Naruto said. Asuma just looked up to the sky, not saying a word. Naruto gave Asuma a stare.
‘Something tells me that you know something.’ Naruto thought. “Asuma-san, do you happen to know how Ino got that key?” Naruto asked.
“Wow the new cigs sure are good. Great taste, great flavor. Naruto do you want one?” Asuma said quickly as he tried to offer Naruto a cigarette.
“No thanks I don’t smoke.” Naruto said. Just then about every single man was looking at Asuma.
‘Yep...He must know something.’ They all thought. Naruto got up and yawned.
“Well thanks guys,” Naruto said while he was yawning. “But right now I need some sleep so I will see you guys later.”
“Okay Naruto go home.” Jiraiya said. “Kakashi and I will meet up with you tomorrow.” Naruto was walking when the thought of something. He turned and walked towards Hiashi.
“Hey man just what did your wife betted you on?” Naruto asked.
“None of your business.” Hiashi said coldly.
“Damn you are always mean aren’t you?” Naruto replied back. Before Hiashi could say anything else Naruto ran off for home.
As he was running he bumped into someone. Both Naruto and the person fell down. “Oh sorry about that I wasn’t looking.” Naruto looked up to see a woman rubbing her head. He offered his hand to her which she had accepted. “I am so sorry.” He added as he got the woman up. The woman looked at Naruto.
“Are you Naruto, Uzumaki Naruto?” She asked. Naruto nodded.
‘I swear this woman better NOT offer me ramen or I am gonna lose it!’ Naruto thought. “Yes it is and what your name?”
‘So this is the kid that he told me about. He seems really nice.’ The woman thought. “My name is Rayila, pleased to meet you.”
AN: Well that’s another act. I hope you remembered Rayila. If not then probably want to read act 5. About Hiashi being in the fic...well my take on it is that ever since Naruto and Hinata started to date, Hinata confidence started to build to where it is now. With the confidence came strength, which in turn gained a lot more respect with her father. Next act called (Revolutionary Revolt: Women’s version) which is already about 65% complete.
Anbu Dr J
07-19-2004, 03:10 AM
The Bet Act 12: Revolutionary Revolt: Women’s version
AN: Well as you know all the men in konoha have teamed up to help Naruto with his little problems called ramen and Hinata. But while the men were talking so were the women...
All the women were looking gathering around the hokage’s quarters. Housewives, girlfriends, fiancées, fan girls, female anbu, you name it in leading them all were the main four. There was quite a chatter between the women when they heard a taping on a desk. All of the women turned to see Tsunade trying to get their attention.
“Well ladies I believe that you all know the reason why we are here for this meeting. Tsunade said.
“Yea, Naruto must go down!” One woman said. All the other women started to shout about Naruto until they heard the tapping again. This time Hinata was tapping on the desk.
“Please calm down, we all know that Naruto will lose but the only problem that I have is that every time that I have him in a corner someone comes to help him. The thing that I ask of you, the women of konoha is to stop any and all men that try to help him. Now I have a little idea that will seriously drive him nuts.” Hinata said.
Meanwhile
“So you are not really a ninja.” Naruto asked while yawning.
“No, not really,” Rayila said. “I just work as a secretary for the school. I know a few tricks but I am probably equal to a genin.”
“Well that’s cool. Anyway where are you going?” Naruto asked.
“I am supposed to go to the hokage’s quarters but...” Rayila said nervously and a little embarrassed.
“But yawn what?” Naruto asked.
“I kinda don’t know where it is.” Rayila asked. “Would you mind showing me where it is please?” Naruto was tired but by his nature, he had to help.
“Well I can show you.” Naruto said.
“Are you sure? You seem kinda tired and I would want to be to much of a bother.” She said.
“Well it is no problem.” He said yawning. That’s when he thought of something. “Hey do you happen to know a man name Iruka by chance.” Rayila blushed a bit.
“Yes I do. He is a very kind and gentle person.” She said. Naruto smiled still sleepy.
“That’s nice that you know him and all.” Naruto said. The he yawned out loud. “Well let me hurry up and show you where it is.” Naruto then started to lead Rayila to the hokages quarters.
Meanwhile
“Well that is the plan alright? It will be called “Operation Open” got it.” Hinata said. All the other women nodded. “Well after today, Naruto-kun has one more day until the two day extension. He needs to lose to me before then.”
“Don’t worry, he wouldn’t last tomorrow.” Sakura said. Hinata grinned at her.
‘Yea you’re right but just in case I have a little something special for him in case he does.’ Hinata thought. Suddenly they heard a knock at the door.
“Okay it is in here.” Naruto said.
“Thank you so much Naruto. I really appreciated.” Rayila said bowing to him. “Hello everyone, I am so sorry that I am so late but I didn’t know how to get here. Thanks to this young man. If it wasn’t for him I swear I probably would have never have made it.” All the women instantly looked at the young man who helped her. There mouths were on the floor. They could not believe who was there.
“Okay so here it is okay.” Naruto said still sleepy. “Oh hello what are you guys doing here.”
“You know what we were just talking about you.” Ino said.
“Yea, we were. I still can not believe that you just came here by yourself. Man you must really be an idiot.” Tsunade said.
“Umm my I ask what are you talking about?” Rayila asked.
“Yea, what in the............................................... .world............................................ .................................................a re................................................ ...... ...........” Just then Naruto realized the situation that he was in. it was like he instantly drank a thousand cups of coffee. His eyes snapped open. Hearing literally got as good if not better than Kiba’s.
“You care to finish your sentence Naruto.” Anko asked sweetly. Naruto turned to see Anko and Kurenai sitting right next to him.
‘Okay Naruto man,’ Naruto said to himself. ‘You are so...............................................s o very...........................................wha t that word that I am thinking of again.........the one word in situations like this......................................oh yea I know.............................SCREWED!!’
“Naruto-kun why did you just screw yourself like this? You know what we could have done to you?” Hinata asked sweetly.
“I.................................I ..................I am going...to .............run..” Naruto said as he tired to run but ended up fainting on the floor.
“Wow...even he has a weakness.” Tsunade said. “Well you know that we can make him eat ramen now.” Hinata shook her head.
“No let me take him home so he can get his rest.” Hinata said. “Sakura- chan, can you please help me?” Sakura nodded.
“Okay Hinata-chan.” She replied. Both girls went towards a now sleeping Naruto. They both picked up the sleeping blonde and started to walk out the door.
“Okay as soon as he wakes up we will start with the operation okay?” Hinata said. All the other women agreed.
“Hey Hinata can I talk to you for a second,” a woman asked. Hinata turned to see that it was her mother who said that.
“Okay mother but can we talk and walk?” Hinata asked.
“Sure,” her mother replied as she, Hinata, and Sakura left with Naruto. Rayila was puzzled by the whole thing.
‘What in the world was that all about?’ Rayila wondered.
“Well what did you wanted to talk to me about mother.” Hinata asked.
“Nothing except that I had something like this happened to me.” Hinata mother said.
“What, you mean that you betted father?” Hinata asked.
“Yes I did.” She said.
“Just what exactly did you betted him on?” Sakura asked out of curiously. Hinata’s mother smiled.
“Well I betted him on this.” Hinata’s mother said as she showed a ring on her finger.
“Wow that is a beautiful ring.” Sakura said. Hinata then whispered in Sakura ear.
“Sakura-chan, that is her wedding ring.” Hinata said. Sakura’s mouth dropped to the floor. Hinata’s mother smiled.
“Yes it is a wedding ring and it has been on my finger for the past twenty five years.” She said.
“Wow talk about high stakes!” Sakura said surprised. Hinata looked at Naruto.
“Well he’s just lucky that I did betted him on something like that. Not the he would do it anyway. I just think that seventeen is a little young to get married. Besides I don’t know how father would take it.” Hinata said.
“He would take it fine. In fact I wouldn’t have let him take it any other way.” Hinata mother said. The she leaned over to Hinata’s ear. “So Hinata- chan sweetie, when are you getting married?”
“Not now. I am not ready yet.” Hinata said quickly.
“Okay, okay, I was just asking.” Hinata mother said. “But I hope that you get married soon alright?”
“I will just give me a year or two.” Hinata said. “Well we are at Naruto’s house. Sakura, mother I will see you later okay?” Sakura and Hinata mother nodded.
“Okay I will see you in the morning.” Sakura said. With that both women were gone leaving Naruto and Hinata by themselves.
‘Well I was coming here anyway to check up on you because I had to watch over you anyway.’ Hinata thought as she laid Naruto in bed. She took off his clothes leaving him in a shirt and his boxers. ‘Wow when you sleep you sleep hard!’ She thought as she then took a good look at Naruto as he was sleeping. ‘So cute!’ She thought she quickly ran to one of his drawers to pull out a large t-shirt. ‘Perfect for a sleepover!’ She thought as she quickly got dressed. Once that was done she got in the bed with Naruto, kissed him on the forehead, pulled up the sheets over them and went to sleep.
AN: Well that is another act. Tell me what you think about that? For all the reviewers’ thanks for all your ideas and support and constructive criticism, you have been really helpful to me. So for next act- Act 13: Dawn of War should be ready in the next couple of days. So until then see ya!
Anbu Dr J
07-19-2004, 03:10 AM
The Bet Act 13: Dawn of War
AN: Okay here is the next act and it will probably be a two to three part act so I hope you all like it. And for the people who have reviewed. Thanx yous!!! I will try to fix some of the problems that you all have requested. One of the problems being length, so with that I will try to make this fic longer. Also with that I will try my best to make this fic harder............better..................faster.. ...........stronger (Daft punk song)
PS: Also I want to tell you the reason why I decided to come up with this fic. Well for one I am a guy, (Temjinxzarron or aka the nonexistent, romantic dreamer.) And mainly...............FOR SOME REASON UNKOWN TO ME my family consists mostly of girls! It’s like for every boy born there are at least two to three girls. Add the fact that I went to school, lived in a place and hang around in places that consist mostly of women related and non related to me, you can easily understand why Naruto it on the verge of impending doom. Also another reason why I came up with this fic is because my other fic “Ending my Destiny”. That fic was a drama fic and for me I can’t just write drama all the time (although there is some comedy in that fic but it is few and far in between.) So that was also one of the reasons why I came up with the bet. As sort of a counter act of Ending My Destiny, also the fic One of a Family (I will update it okay) Well enough of my blabbering time for the next act!!
Act 13: Dawn of War.
Naruto woke up only to find himself in his bed. ‘Awww man, what in the world happened?’ he thought. He tried to get up only to be tugged back down. ‘What in the world!?’ he thought surprised. He turned to look to see that it was Hinata still tugging on him. Upon closer look he saw that she was still asleep. ‘Okay it is official...it really don’t know what happened last night to cause Hinata-chan sleeping with me. But all I have to do is twist my body this way and...’ Naruto found his way free. He sat up only to be pulled back down by Hinata. She then put her head on his shoulder and her leg on across his. “Okay Hinata-chan this is the reason why I don’t let you sleep over at my house as much as you want to. I can’t get up until you get up.” He whispered to himself.
“But I’m awake now.” Hinata whispered to his ear. Naruto froze. “Also...I just wanted to say that it was great last night. You were wonderful.” Hinata said with an evil grin.
“Won...............wonderful at what?” Naruto asked nervously. ‘Oh please tell me that I...I have least should have remembered it!’ he thought. Hinata kissed him on the cheek.
“And you also agreed with me about having a child so we well... Oh, and wedding preparations are already starting. So we got a couple of months to get ready.” Hinata added. Naruto didn’t know what to say. It was complete gibberish until the fainted again. Hinata waved her hand over his face. ‘Wow...he’s out cold!’ she thought smiling. ‘I was only joking with you. But I must admit messing with you like this is really fun.’ She thought as she got up form the bed and went to go get dressed. As she was getting dressed she saw a pillow. She grabbed the pillow and put it under her shirt so that she looked like she was pregnant. ‘This will definably scare him’ she thought. She could picture it now. When Naruto wakes up he would see Hinata and probably have a heart attack. Then she looked at herself in a mirror and quickly took the pillow out form under her shirt. ‘In fact it kinda scares me! I love Naruto-kun and all but there is NO WAY that I want to have a child now.’ She thought.
Meanwhile (Central Command Quarters: Women version)
Three women were sitting in a room. There were files every where. “Okay we have everything set?” Sakura asked.
“Yep all the stores, restaurants and shop agreed to the operation.” Ino said.
“Well in a hour, the operation will began.” Tsunade said.
“I can’t wait to see Naruto in a dress.” Sakura said. ‘Thought seeing Sasuke in a dress would be more fun.’ She thought. Then they herd a knock at the door. “Come in,” Tsunade said. A woman walked in to look at them all.
“I was wondering if I could help in anyway?” the woman asked. They all smiled.
“Why yes Temari, you can help us. We know the perfect thing that you can help us with.” Tsunade said.
Meanwhile (Central Command Quarters: Male version)
Jiraiya, Kakashi and Gemma were sitting in a room across the other side of the village. “Where is Naruto?” Jiraiya asked.
“He still in his house but I have a feeling that he would be driven out.” Kakashi said.
“Well hopefully he won’t do something stupid.” Gemma said.
“Well the only thing that we can do is stop these crazy women.” Jiraiya said. “Speaking of which why am I the one here and not out there helping Naruto?” Kakashi and Gemma looked at him like the was a freak of nature.
“Because you have no self control when it comes to women,” Kakashi said simply. Jiraiya snorted.
“Oh well, I still need to help Naruto out so that I won’t have to pay up.” Jiraiya said.
“You mean that you betted money on this.” Kakashi asked.
“Yes I have betted Tsunade as well as some other women.” He replied back. Both of the other men sighted.
“Oh well, just pray that we will win.” Kakashi said.
Back with Naruto
Naruto woke up again only to see a Hinata sitting finishing eating her breakfast and reading a book. “Umm Hinata about what you said earlier did we...” Hinata laughed at him.
“No of course not, well...at least not yet, but you should have seen the look on your face! It was so funny!” Hinata said. That’s when her face got serious. “Naruto you do plan on marriage right?”
“Of course, just not right now.” Naruto said. Hinata then smiled.
“Good but don’t keep me waiting for long.” She said smiling.
“Don’t worry it might be sooner that you think.” He said. Hinata smiled as she looked at the table.
“Oh, Naruto-kun sorry that I ate before you but I have some for you,” She said. Naruto got up form bed and looked at what Hinata made. There was toast, eggs, rice, but no ramen.
‘Whoa she didn’t make any ramen!’ Naruto thought. ‘Now what is she up to?’
“No I didn’t make any ramen and I am up to nothing. Now come on and eat.” Hinata said. Naruto sat down.
‘You know it kinda freaky how she reads my mind like that.’ Naruto thought to himself.
“No it isn’t. You’re just that predictable to me.” Hinata said. Naruto mouth dropped. The number one unpredictable ninja being predictable, it can’t be.
‘Okay she can read my mind.’ Naruto thought. He looked to see that he was missing milk. ‘Okay where is the milk?’ he thought to himself.
“In the top shelf in the fridge,” Hinata replied simply.
“Stop doing that!” Naruto said as he walked to the refrigerator to get the milk.
“I am doing what?” Hinata asked while still reading her book.
“You know what you are doing and you need to stop.” Naruto replied as he got the milk. ‘I wonder how Kakashi and the others will help me. Maybe they will keep me locked up somewhere until after the bet.’ He thought. ‘Oh crap! Did she hear me!?’ He went over to take his seat again. ‘I guess she didn’t read that.’ Naruto then looked across the table and notice Hinata. Rather it was that he noticed her breast. ‘Man she has grown since we were kids.’ He thought while he was eating.
“Yes and you have grown also.” Hinata said. Naruto stopped eating.
“Okay that’s it. I’m leaving.” With that Naruto grabbed his clothes and got dressed in the bathroom. Once he came out the turned to Hinata who was still sitting in the same spot.
“I have to go meet up with Jiraiya-sensei so take care okay.” He said as he went over to give Hinata a kiss. As he was leaving Hinata said...
“Oh...don’t rely on Kakashi because he can’t save you from me. Also even if they try to lock you up somewhere, Tsunade-sama, Ino and Sakura and I will break you out of there. There is no one who can save you.” She said still reading. Naruto just sighed. He knew better that to try and argue since he knew that he couldn’t win. He just simply walked out of the apartment and closed the door. Once Hinata was done reading her chapter of her book, she got up and went over to the phone. She dialed a number and waited for someone to answer.
“Yes, who is it.” Ino said over the phone.
“It’s me Hinata. Start the operation now.” She said.
“Roger...Hinata-chan.” Ino said as she hung up. Hinata hung the phone up and pulled out the key that was to Naruto’s closet.
‘Well I should get the place ready for Naruto-kun to come back. If operation open doesn’t get him then by own personal plan will!’ She thought with a grin.
Meanwhile Location: Battlefield Central
Naruto was jogging down the busy business streets of konoha when he saw Temari. ‘Woman must dodge.’ He thought as he quickly turned down the street. As he was walking down that street he saw Ino. ‘Okay another woman.’ He thought as he turned down another corner. During the course of meeting more females and turning corners he eventually found himself in front of the main business section of konoha.
“Wow that worked better than expected.” Said a voice. Naruto turned to see Anko.
“Hello chick with the purple hair. How are you doing? Oh and in case you want to know I didn’t bring any money on me so there is nothing that you can do. I am sure that all these lovely business would not be happy if I ate something and not have any money on me.” Naruto said feeling a little triumphant.
“Well that okay because operation open has begun.” Sakura said behind him. “Just look at the stores.” Naruto turned in horror to see that every single store in the district was now displaying free ramen. “No need for money if the food is free right?” Temari said while eating a bowl of ramen. “Hey you want some it really good.” Temari offered the bowl to Naruto.
‘Don’t let them break you. Don’t let them break you. Don’t let them break you. Don’t let them break you. Don’t let them break you. Don’t let them break you. DON’T LET THEM BREAK YOU!!’ Was all Naruto could repeat in his mind. Using the last of his willpower he broke away forms the women and started to run down the street. As he was running he saw almost every store offering ramen to him. Eventually he saw one store and stopped to see a man putting up the “Uzumaki Naruto come up for a free bowl of ramen.” Sign she stopped to look at the guy. “Okay, two things.” Naruto said. “One why are you trying to give ramen to me when you run a electronics store!! And two you are a guy! Aren’t you supposed to be helping me or something.” The guy just sighed in defeat.
“I’m sorry Naruto but my wife made me do it. If I don’t I won’t receive any “red velvet cake” (AN: Insider joke) if you know what I mean.” Naruto just sighed in defeat as he ran off. As he was running he bumped into someone.
“Oh sorry about that I..........YOU! What in the world are you doing here and where have you been?” He said.
“I was trying to help you but I was well....a little preoccupied.” Iruka said.
“With what?” Naruto asked.
“Iruka-kun are you okay?” Rayila asked coming form a store that was selling ramen. Naruto then added everything together.
“Umm Iruka are you two dating?” Naruto asked. Iruka rubbed the back of his head a bit.
“Yes we are.” Iruka said.
“How long have you two been dating and how come you didn’t tell me anything?” Naruto asked.
“We have been dating for about two months now and I am sorry I didn’t tell you.” Iruka said apologetically. “How bout if I treat you to some.....” Naruto face darkened. “Well I will treat you to something after this bet is over okay.”
“You better.” Naruto said. “Or else I am coming after you.”
“Umm I got us something to eat.” Rayila said. “Oh Naruto how are you doing today?” Naruto noticed her or notice the ramen bowl that she was carrying.
“Umm can you please keep that away form me?” Naruto said.
“Oh I am so sorry about this but here.” She said offering the bowl to him.
“Ir...........Ir..........Iruka! Are just going to let her do that!?” Naruto said. Iruka looked up at Rayila who smiled at him. Naruto found that his hands were slowly moving towards the bowl.
‘What am I doing!?’ he thought. “Iruka help!” Naruto shouted but Iruka didn’t budge. ‘Please don’t tell me you crossover man please!’ Iruka then looked at him.
“Naruto...............................EAT THE RAMEN!” Iruka said.
“Come on Naruto eat it.” Sakura said coming from behind her. “Listen I have known you for a long time and I know that you want it. And you so very want it.” Naruto took the bowl and started at it.
“It looks..............so good.” Naruto said trying to keep every ounce of willpower that he had to keep himself form eating the ramen.
“And how does is smell Naruto-kun.” Sakura asked.
“It smells...........it.............it smells.............so delicious.” Naruto answered.
“And are you hungry?” Ino said coming up from behind her.
“Y...................yea.........................Y ES!” Naruto shouted as he quickly unwrapped the ramen and was about to eat it until he it was snatched away. “What in the world?” he said aloud. As they all looked they saw a whole bunch of dogs eating the ramen. The main one who snatched it being a white dog.
“Man you owe me big time for this.” Kiba said. All of them were surprised to see him.
“So besides the white dog (AN: I know his name I just can’t spell it so if you could send it to me though and e-mail thanx) the other dogs must be.” Naruto said.
“Yo....Did I make it in time.” Kakashi said.
“Kakashi!” All the others said in unison. But before girls could even think about what happened, they ended up seeing Naruto being carried away by none other than Lee.
“Come on let’s go!” Lee shouted.
“Iruka I will never forget this you betrayer. I WILL hunt you down after this!!” Naruto said. With that Naruto, Kakashi, Kiba and Lee were gone from the scene.
“Well what are we going to do now?” Ino asked.
“Don’t worry it’s covered.” Sakura said.
Meanwhile
“Well they got away.” Temari said.
“We’ll don’t worry about it. You, Hokage-sama and I will intercept them.” Kurenai said.
“By the way where is Hinata?” Temari asked curious.
“She is at Naruto’s house. She went to her house to get to things before hand and she told me that if we couldn’t get Naruto to eat ramen, and then lead him back to his house.” Kurenai said.
Meanwhile
Hinata was rearranging some of Naruto’s stuff. She was cleaning up and making sure that everything was perfect. Moving things everywhere, there were candles that she put up. Flowers, literally everything that she thought that she would need for a romantic night. ‘Okay that is most of it except two things.’ She thought as she went over to Naruto locked up closet. She then pulled out the key that Ino gave her. ‘Thing number one.’ She thought to herself as she begun to unlock all the locks.
AN: Well that is another act. IMPORTANT-thought Naruto and Hinata love each other they definably don’t want to have a child yet. Also the whole baby and sexual thing was a joke Hinata did to Naruto. A cruel joke but a joke none the less. Well tell me what you think about the chapter. Like always please be nice and R&R!
Next Act Dawn of War Scene 2: Male’s Retaliation
temjinxzarron
07-19-2004, 02:24 PM
I just can't believe that anyone is reading this on thsi site. Oh well. lol
Anbu Dr J
07-20-2004, 02:52 AM
temjin your too shy! and dont be a party pooper
ShinobiRyu
07-20-2004, 11:38 PM
I think it's a great story! It's very entertaining :D
Anbu Dr J
07-22-2004, 10:52 PM
SEE!!! even ShinobiRyu thinks so too! ill get some more chaps up soon
Lixie
07-22-2004, 11:18 PM
PRETTY DAMN GOOD. Goddamn you write more than I do. NICE.
temjinxzarron
07-23-2004, 12:52 AM
I'm suprised that you like it lixie. Personaly i thought that compared to my other stuff that in the end it was kinda avg.
Hmm the length is nice. I'm greatly impressed by the length of it (now there's a quote :wink: ) The writing could be improved, but that's cuz he's new!!
Anbu Dr J
07-27-2004, 01:37 AM
what!?!?! average!?!? this is funny as hell!!!
well heres another chap
The Bet Act 14: Revenge
AN: Okay thanks for all the reviews that you have given me. For that most of the characters that I have placed in here were because of your suggestions. (Some of which I never even thought of..) But there was on reviewer that really made me think about the story and how I am writing it so far. It was from Xoni Newcomer and he wrote: “I think this is a little one-sided. I mean, Hinata and the girls are the only ones planning and attacking, and everything is going very smoothly for them (the same complain I made some time ago), whereas the boys only run away in the last second. It's getting a bit repetitive.” And you know what I think about what he said. I TOTALLY AGREE!! So that means only one thing. Time for a change!! So with out further adieu, here is the next act.
Naruto found himself cornered with on way out. “Come on Naruto sweetie eat the ramen.” One of the women said. Naruto looked around to see that a sewer lid in on the ground was moving a little. He slowly moved toward to hole careful to not alerting any of the women. Then with quickness he pulled off the lid and jumped down the hole. Naruto then ran down the narrow hallways and found himself in a four way intersection.
‘Thank god! I lost them!’ Naruto thought.
“So you finally made it here.” A voice said. Naruto turned around to see that it was Konohamaru who said that.
“Konohamaru what are you doing here?” Naruto asked.
“Well duh, It was me who moved the lid for you to notice.” He said.
“Hey what about us we helped too!” Mogei said bringing Udon (AN: I think that is his name. If not please tell me the correction.) behind her. Naruto mouth dropped when he saw Mogei.
“Mogei, you’re a girl! And you are helping me!” Naruto said in disbelief.
“Yea and why not?” she replied. Naruto quickly grabbed her in a hug and kissed her on the cheek.
“Thanks for the help. You’re a lifesaver! Man I love you guys!” Naruto said barely able to contain the fact that a girl was helping him in all this.
‘Yea take that Hinata-san! I am already a step of taken him away from you!’ Mogei thought enjoying Naruto’s hug.
“Well come on we have to get out of here.” Konohamaru said. Naruto looked around and noticed that the place that they were in was definitely not a sewer.
“Hey Konohamaru, where are we anyway?” Naruto asked.
“Right now we are in the evacuation tunnels. The only other time I know that we had to use these were with the war with the sound village. Since you are a strong ninja of course you would probably not know about them since you would be fighting. Also I noticed that they are fresh tunnels that are around. I am guessing that was Hokage-sama doing.” Konohamaru said.
“Let me guess. You had been running around the tunnels a lot so you know the area really well.” Naruto said.
“Exactly,” Konohamaru said proudly. Naruto then started to think for a